BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷15（共9套）（共18題）BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第1套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、Yourcompany’sSalesDepartmenthasaskedyoutogiveatalknextFridayonyourmostrecentproject.WriteanemailtoMrs.JayintheSalesDepartment:agreeingtogivethetalkandsuggestingatimesayingwhatequipmentyouwillneedrequestinginformationabouttheparticipants.Write40-50words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：To:AnnaJayFrom:Sicky<sicky@126.com>Date:lMay,2011Subject:TalkNextFridayIwouldliketogivethetalksuggestedbyyouandIthink9:30am.,afterthebreakwouldbetheperfecttime.Requiredequipment:-OverheadProject-FlipchartwithPensPleasegivemesomeinformationaboutthepeopleparticipating.Renate知識點解析：本文是對商務(wù)電子郵件的考查，是對公司銷售部門主管回復(fù)答應(yīng)做報告的回復(fù)，內(nèi)容要求是答應(yīng)作報告并建議作報告的時間、所需要的設(shè)備，提供參與者的有關(guān)信息。文章語氣要謙遜、措辭要得體。二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、Yourdepartmentneedstorecruitmorestaff,yourlinemanagerwantsyoutowriteareportexplainingyourrequirementsandcommentingonrecruitmentmethods.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：ReportonstaffrecruitmentAsourcompanyisdevelopingseveralnewproducts,thedepartmentofR&Dneedsnewstaffurgentlytohelpdesignandmonitorourproducts.Thusweneedtorecruit35newstaff,includingelectricalengineersandproductdevelopers.Allofthemshouldhaveatleasttwoyears’experienceinrelevantfield.Morespecificrequirementswillfinallybedecidedinafewdays.Astorecruitmentmethods,thedisadvantageofrelyingonrecruitmentagencyisthatweneedmoretimeandprocedurethanwecanafford.SoIsuggestweturntoamoredirectwayofNewspaperadvertisement,whichhasbeenusedmanytimesandprovedeffective.Comparingthetwonewspapers,EchoandChronicle,weprefertheformerbecausethoughitcharges￡500morethanthelatter,thegeneralreadersare400,000more,mostofwhomarehighly-educated.Wearesuretogetreplysoonafterwelaunchtherecruitmentcampaign.知識點解析：本題是對商務(wù)報告的考查，內(nèi)容要求是因部門需要招聘更多的員工，你的經(jīng)理要求你寫一份報告以解釋招聘要求，并討論一下招聘的方式。內(nèi)容方面，根據(jù)題目所給出的信息，首先介紹報告的目的，其他內(nèi)容包括解釋為什么需要新的員工，說出需要什么類型的員工，解釋通過招聘機構(gòu)來招聘存在的缺點，闡述報紙廣告的優(yōu)點，最后總結(jié)寫此報告的結(jié)論。要按照商務(wù)報告的格式和內(nèi)容要求來完成文章的寫作，語言必須簡潔，信息不能遺漏，選詞要準(zhǔn)確，因是寫給上級的報告，故用語要正式嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第2套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、Youarethefactorymanagerofacarcompany.Youarewaitingforurgentlyneededcomponentsfromyourpurchasingdepartment.WriteanotetoMrGrayson,theAssistantPurchasingManager:enquiringaboutthereasonforthedelaystatingwhenthecomponentsareneededsuggestingameetingtodiscussfuturedeliveries.Write40-50words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：IamwritingtoenquireaboutthereasonforthelatedeliveryofthecomponentIordered,needbynextMonday.Inordertowhichare,Isuggestthatwehaveameetingtodiscussfuturedeliveries.知識點解析：本文是對商務(wù)便條的考查，是汽車公司工廠經(jīng)理寫給采購經(jīng)理的便條。內(nèi)容要求是詢問訂購的元件拖延的原因，說明什么時間需要元件，建議組織一個討論將來交付的會議。寫作時按照商務(wù)便條的寫作形式，將所給信息闡述詳細(xì)即可，因是兩經(jīng)理之間的留言，措辭及語氣要謙虛得體。二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、Youaretheownerofaclothingfactory.Acustomerhassentyoualettersummarizingarecentnegotiation.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Thenusingallyourhandwritennoteswritea120-140wordsreplytothebuyerusingtheletterandyournotes.Write120-140words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：DearStephanie,Thankyouforyourletterof1March.WearedelightedthattheShebarangewillbeinyourcatalogue.Thereare,however,somesmallpointswhichneedclarifying.TheShebarangecomesinsixcolours.Pleaselookatthesamplesandconfirmwhichthreecoloursyouwouldlike.Youreferredtothefurtheroptionof3,000pieces.Ithoughtwehadagreedon4,000.Pleaseconfirmthecorrectfigure.Icanconfirmtheoptionalpieceswillcost$5.25each.Unfortunately,duetoafullorderbook,weareunabletodeliverbyAug.1,1999.TheearliestdatewouldbeAug.15,1999.Ihopethiswillbeacceptable.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,ParveenMirza知識點解析：本文是對商務(wù)信函的考查，要求以一家服裝廠的老板的口吻，針對客戶在談判后關(guān)于談判內(nèi)容的來信，寫信給予回復(fù)。內(nèi)容方面，題目所給出的信息是你對談判也比較滿意，進一步確認(rèn)對方所需要的衣服是哪三種顏色，確認(rèn)進一步選擇的數(shù)量，確認(rèn)已商定的每件衣服的價格和衣服出廠交付訂單的時間。按照商務(wù)信函的格式要求，完成文章的寫作，因是雙方的協(xié)商與確認(rèn)，所以用詞要婉轉(zhuǎn)準(zhǔn)確，語氣要和藹，語言組織要簡潔明了。BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第3套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、?YouaretheChiefAccountantforanImport-ExportAgency.Youhaveseenanadvertisementforashorttrainingcourseaboutanewfinancialmanagementprogram.?Writeamemoofwordstoyourbosstoinclude:?arequesttogoonthecourse?somedetailsaboutthecourse(e,g.date,cost)?whyyouthinkthecoursewiltbeuseful.?Write40—50wordsonaseparatesheet.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：To:TheManagingDirector(orsimilartitle)From:ChiefAccountantDate:14April,2005Subject:ASmartFinancetrainingcourseIshouldliketoattendthiscourseaboutanewfinancialmanagementprogram.Thecourseison23SeptemberandcostsUS$500.Ithinkthatattendingthiscoursewillhelpmetodomyjobbetterinfuture.知識點解析：暫無解析二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、WHEREPEOPLESPENDTHEIRHOLIDAYSYouareaclerkinLuckyTourismCompany.Youareresponsibleforarrangingtravellinglines.Oneday,youreceivedthedataasfollows:Readthefollowingtablewhichshowsthechangesinthewaypeoplespendtheirholidays.Thetabledividesthetourismbusinessintofourparts,tellingthedifferentpercentagesin1990andin2000,fromwhichyouwillnoticethetrendofcurrenttourismbusiness.Usetheinformationinthetabletowriteashortreport(about100~120words)emphasizingchangesofthemainbusinessforyourcompany.WriteonyourAnswerSheet.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：TheChinesepeasants’personalincomerosesteadilyfrom1978to1986.Attheendofthe1980’sthepeasants’incomewasratherlow.Theiraverageannualincomewasaround134yuan.Butgreatchangestookplaceandin1980,theaveragepersonalincomeincreasedapproximately18%reaching160yuan.Theirincomedoubledin1983.Afterthatthereappearedanevenmoreconsistenttendencyforincometorise.In1984,apeasantearnedanaverageof309.77yuan.In1986,hisearningsalmosttripled.Duringtheeightyears,thepeasants’incomehadbeenrisingatarateof25%eachyear.ItisevidentthatthelifeoftheChinesepeasantshasbeenandwillbeimproving.知識點解析：暫無解析BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第4套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、?YouworkforacompanywhichisgoingtobuyasetofequipmentfromChina.Youareaskedtotranslatealotofspecificationsandinstructionswithinfourmonths,whichisimpossible.Thereforeyoudecidetoadvertisefortwoexperiencedtranslatorsassoonaspossible.?WriteashortnotetoMr.MaxRemington,thePublicRelationsManager.Askforanadvertisementfortwotranslators.?Explainthereason?Mentionyoururgency?Write30--40wordsonyourAnswerSheet.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：DearMr.MaxRemington,Asourcompanyispurchasingasetofequipment,alotofmaterialshavetobetranslated,whichisimpossibletodowithinfourmonths.Couldyouadvertisefortwoexperiencedtranslatorsinthenewspapers?Itisurgent.知識點解析：暫無解析二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、?Thediagrambelowshowstheaveragehoursofunpaidworkperweekdonebypeopleindifferentcategories.(Unpaidworkreferstochildcare,housework,etc.)?Describetheinformationpresentedbelow,comparingresultsformenandwomeninthecategoriesshown.?Write120--140wordsonaseparatesheet.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：ReportonWeeklyHoursofUnpaidLaborThischartshowstheweeklyhoursofunpaidlaborformarriedmenandwomenwithandwithoutchildren.Marriedwomenwithnochildrenworkalmosttwiceasmanyunpaidhoursathomethantheirhusbandsdo.Accordingtothechart,thisdisproportiononlyincreaseswiththenumberofchildrenamarriedcouplehas.Marriedwomenwithonetotwochildrenworkalmosttwotimesmoreunpaidhoursperweekthantheirhusbandsdo,whilemarriedwomenwiththreeormorechildrenworkfourtimesmoreunpaidhoursofworkperweekthantheirhusbandsdo.Asseenhereandinmastsocieties,womencontributetremendouslytowardstherunningoftheirhouseholds,allintheabsenceofmonetarybenefit.知識點解析：暫無解析BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第5套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、YouworkforacompanywhichisgoingtobuyasetofequipmentfromChina.Youareaskedtotranslatealotofspecificationsandinstructionswithinfourmonths,whichisimpossible.Thereforeyoudecidetoadvertisefortwoexperiencedtranslatorsassoonaspossible.WriteashortnotetoMr.MaxRemington,thePublicRelation’sManager.Askforanadvertisementfortwotranslators.Explainthereason.Mentionyoururgency.Write40—50wordsonaseparatesheet.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：DearMr.MaxRemington:AsourcompanyispurchasingasetofequipmentfromChina,alotofmaterialshavetobetranslated,whichisimpossibletodowithinfourmonths.Couldyouadvertisefortwoexperiencedtranslatorsinthenewspapers?Itisurgent.知識點解析：暫無解析二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、?Youaretheownerofaclothingfactory.Acustomerhassentyoualettersummarizingarecentnegotiation.Youhavewrittensomenotesontheletter.?Usetheinformationinthelettertowriteareplytothebuyer.?Write120--140wordsonaseparatesheet.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：DearStephanie,IamwritingtothankyouforyourletterofJan.11,2005WearedelightedtohearthattheShebarangewillbeincludedinyourcatalogue.Thereare,however,somesmallpointswhichIwouldliketoclarify:?TheShebarangeisavailableinsixcolors.Pleaselookatthesamplesandconfirmwhichthreecolorsyouwouldlike.?Youreferredtothefurtheroptionof3,000pieces.Iunderstandthatwehadagreedon4,000.Couldyoupleaseconfirmthecorrectfigure??Iamabletoconfirmthattheoptionalpieceswillcost$4.30each.Unfortunately,duetoafullorderbook,wewiltbeunabletodeliverbyAng.1,2005.TheearliestdatewouldbeAug.15,2005.Ihopethiswillbeacceptable.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Regards知識點解析：暫無解析BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第6套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、Yourecentlyattendedanexhibitionandsawsomeequipmentyouthinkyourcompanyshouldbuy.Writeanemailtoyourcompany’sPurchasingManager:sayingwhattheequipmentissuggestinghowtheequipmentcouldbenefitthecompanyexplainingwhyitisimportanttoplaceanordersoon.Write40-50words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：SampleAIhaveapieceofgoodnewstoinformyou.Isawanewmodeloflaser-printerontheexhibitionoflastweek.Itisbeautifulandofgoodquality.Becausemanycompaniesareveryinterestedinit,Ithinkwe’dbettermakeanordersoontoreplacetheoldoneinouroffice.Band3Allcontentpointsarecovered,andtherangeoflanguageissatisfactory.Boththeformatandregisterareappropriate,andalthoughtherearesomeerrors,thesedonotobscurecommunicationofthemessage.SampleBIamwritingtosuggestthatwecouldbuyanoverheadprojectorIsawinanexhibition.Itwouldbeusefultodothepresentationsofthenewproducts.TheXP3modelhasthelatesttechnologyand,ifweorderitsoon,thesupplierwillgrantusa20%discount.Regards.Band5Allpointsarecovered,andlanguageiscontrolledandconcise,anddemonstratesawidelexicalrange.Theregisterisconsistentlyappropriate,asistheformat.知識點解析：暫無解析二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、ThenumberofstaffleavingParkside,oneofyourcompany’sretailstores,ishighcomparedtoanotherofitsstores.Yourlinemanagerhasaskedyoutowriteareportaboutthesituation.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：SampleCFornumberofParksidestaffleavingstoresproblem,Imadeareportasfollows:Atfirst,lookatdraw,fromthisoneyoucansee,Year2007.Highgatelost4person.Parksidelost5.Until2008,Highgate’srateisreduced,butParkside’srateisgrewsohighmorestaffleavingwillmakethestorepaymoretime&moneyemployanotheroneinsteadofthisone.Thisiswastetothemanualresource&money.ThroughcommunicatewiththeParksidestaff,Iknowtherearethreepointveryimportant.Firstly,trainingwanted.Thestaffwanttomoretrainingtoimprovethemselves’level,everydaytheirmakethesamejob,longandlong,theirwillhatethisjob.Ithinkthecompanyneedtoprovidethisbenefittothestaff.Secondly.Morepaidholiday.Ithinkthisisthefirst,butthestaffisnotpayattentionit,sothatisnotpossible.Thirdly.BonusScheme,ifthecompanycanpaymoremoneyemploythenewstaffwhycannotpaymoresalarytothecurrentstaff?SoIsuggestthecompanyprovidethedouble-salaryasthebonuspayforthecurrentstaffendoftheyears.That’sall.Sincerely,Lucy.Band2Thereportisconsiderablylongerthantherecommendedwordlengthanddoesnotcoverallthecontentpoints.Althoughthereportisadequatelyparagraphed,cohesionisweak.Theregisterandformatofthereportarenotalwaysappropriate;errorsarenumerousandimpedeclearcommunicationofthemessage.SampleDReportonstaffturnoverIntroductionThisreportaimstoexplainthehighstaffturnover2008inParksideandtoproposemeasurestoimprovestaffloyalty.FindingsThefiguresclearlyshowthatthehighnumberofstaffleavingthestoresisaproblemthatonlyaffectstheParksidestorein2008.WhilestaffturnoverintheHighgatestoreremainedonalowlevelthenumberofstaffleavingParksideshootupfrom5to20.Thisunfortunatelyhasabadimpactoncustomerservice.Researchamongststaffrevealedtheirrequirements.Firstlystaffrequiresmoretrainingwhatwouldalsobenefitthecompanyastheserviceislikelytoimprove.Anothergoodideaistheintroductionofabonusschemeforvaluedstaffthatwouldimprovestaffloyalty.Unlikethementionedproposalstherequestforalongerannuallavecouldnotbemet.RecommendationsItisrecommendedtoofferboththerequestedtrainingopportunitiesandabonusschemeforvaluedstaff.Band5Allcontentpointsareclearlycovered,andthereportiswellorganisedwithgoodcohesion.Boththeregisterandformatareconsistentlyappropriate.Generally,thelanguageusedisaccurate,andagoodrangeofstructuresandvocabularyisdemonstrated.知識點解析：暫無解析BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第7套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、Youareamanagerinthemagazinedepartmentofaninternationalpublishingcompany.Yourcompanyisaskedtoholdthe11thBookFairtogetherwithsomerelatedagencies.Writeanemailtothemanagerofdespatchdepartment:sayingwhentheBookFairstartsandhowlongitwilllastexplainingtheimportanceofholdingtheBookFairtellinghimwhatheshoulddotopreparefortheBookFair.Write40-50words.To:JimGreenFrom:WilliamKingDate:December11th,2012Subject:the11thBookFairPreparations標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：To:JimGreenFrom:WilliamKingDate:December11th,2012Subject:the11thBookFairPreparationsMr.Green,Asisplanned,the11thBookFairwillbeheldfromDecember18thto24th.Thefairisvitalforthepromotionofournewlypublishedbooks.Pleasebepreparedforthefairbymakingafulllistofourbooksshownduringthefair,aswellasthenamesoftheagenciestobeinvited.Thankyou.William知識點解析：暫無解析二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、Thecompanyyouworkforisplanningtoundertakesomeinitiativestoreducethestaffturnoverandimprovetheworkingefficiency.Yourlinemanagerisinterestedinbenefitsandincentives,andhasaskedyoutowriteareportsummarisingthestaff’sopinions.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：Reportonbenefits—levelofstaffmembersIntroductionThisreportaimstoshowwhetherourstaffmembersaresatisfiedwiththecompany’sbenefitsystemornot.FindingsTherecentmeetingshowsthatthestaffissatisfiedwithemployeebenefits.Especially,manyofthemthinkhighlyofourinsurancerelatedbenefitsandpaidvacations.Nevertheless,somecomplainedaboutmealallowance,astheyworkfarawayfromhomeandtherisingpriceoffoodinsuchdowntownareasisaheavyburden.Besides,thepoorhousingallowancewasmentioned.Manyofthemaredissatisfiedwithourincentivesystem:theysuggestthatthechanceofeconomicincentivegivespeoplethegreatestmotivation.Finally,Iwouldsuggesttoincreasethenumberofmealandhousingallowanceandsupplyvariousformsofincentivestokeepthestaffmotivated.ConclusionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoimprovetheconditionsofbenefitsandincentivesforthiswillenableourcompanytohavealowstaffturnoverandwillalsoimprovetheworkefficiency.知識點解析：暫無解析BEC商務(wù)英語（中級）寫作模擬試卷第8套一、小作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)1、Youarethepublicrelationsmanagerofalargeexportcompany.PeterJames,animportantclient,isgoingtovisityourcompanyforhalfamonthfromApril15th.Writeamemotoyoursecretary:askinghertobookahotelroomtellinghertheexactdatesayingwherethehotelshouldbe.Write40-50words.MEMOTo:From:Date:Subject:標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：To:MaryGellerFrom:JohnBrownDate:1stAprilDearMary,I’mreallysorrytohavetointeruptyou,butPeterJames,areallyimportantclient,isgoingtovisitourcompanyforhalfamonthfromApril15th,todiscusstheimportofournewly-developedproduct.WillyoupleasebookahotelroomforMr.Jamesnearourcompanyassoonaspossible?Thanksalot.知識點解析：暫無解析二、大作文(本題共1題，每題1.0分，共1分。)2、YouworkintheCustomerServicesDepartmentofaninductioncookercompany.Youhavebeenaskedtoprepareareportforyourdepartmentmanageraboutcustomers’complaints.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：ReportonCustomerComplaintsINTRODUCTIONThisreportaimstopresentthereasonsforcustomercomplaintsaboutinductioncookersofourcompanyfromApriltoJunein2012.FINDINGSThenumberofcustomercomplaintswereceivedinAprilwas260.Thenitincreasedto370inMaybecauseoftheplugleakageofsomeproducts.InJune,thisnumberreducedbecauseoftherecallofthosedefectiveproducts.ThereasonsforcomplaintsfromApriltoJunewereanalysedasfollows:Firstly,thecompanyreceivedcomplaintsfordefectiveproducts.ThissituationbecamebetterinJune.Secondly,somestaffhaspoormaintenancetechniques:consideringit,ourcompanyhasplannedtotrainemployeesnextmonth.Finally,customerscomplainforbadmannersofCustomerHotlinestaff.Inordertosolvethisproblem,regularperformanceevaluationshouldbecarriedoutassoonaspossible.CONCLUSIONSAfteranalysingthereasonsfordifferentcustomercomplaints,manymeasureshav