專(zhuān)題14應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作(新高考)

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【新課標(biāo)口&口口卷】假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋

友Chris寫(xiě)一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你完成的作品；

(2)你的感想。

注意：

(1)寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearChris,

I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearChris,

I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantastic

scenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,

surroundedbybloomingflowers.

Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonly

sparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleof

schoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.

Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItruly

cherished.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。要求考生給Chris寫(xiě)一封信，分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷。

【詳解】L詞匯積累

決定：decide—determine

整個(gè)的：entire—>whole

提供：offer一provide

總之：inaword一inshort

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmall

bridgeoverthepark'spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.

拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpainting

ofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.（that引

導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.（as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）

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Writing1

（2024?重慶榮昌?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter以?xún)?yōu)異的成績(jī)通過(guò)考試，

取得了到中國(guó)某大學(xué)留學(xué)的資格。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示祝賀；

2.請(qǐng)教學(xué)習(xí)方法；

3.期待在中國(guó)見(jiàn)面。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearPeter.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearPeter,

I'mrathergladtolearnthatyouhavepassedtheexaminationandobtainedthequalification

tostudyinChina.Tdliketoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonyoursuccess.

I'mdeeplyencouragedbywhatyou'veachieved.AlthoughIworkhardeverydayto

preparefortheupcomingcollegeentranceexamination,Ifeelmylearningefficiencyisn't

satisfactory.Couldyoubekindenoughtoshareyourlearningexperiencewithme?Meanwhile,

I'msomuchinspiredbywhatyouhaveachievedand,youknow,tostudyinakeyuniversityisa

dreamdeep-rootedinmymind.HowcanImakeastepforwardfromwhereIam?

LookingforwardtoyourcomingtoChina.IhopewecanmeetinChinaduringthesummer

vacation.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文?？忌挠?guó)筆友Peter以?xún)?yōu)異的成績(jī)通過(guò)考試，取得了

到中國(guó)某大學(xué)留學(xué)的資格。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

快樂(lè)的：glad一pleased

獲得：obtain—?gain

鼓勵(lì)：encourage—>motivate

表達(dá)：express^extend

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：AlthoughIworkhardeverydaytopreparefortheupcomingcollegeentranceexamination,

Ifeelmylearningefficiencyisn'tsatisfactory.

拓展句：Workinghardeverydaytopreparefortheupcomingcollegeentranceexamination,Ifeel

mylearningefficiencyisn'tsatisfactory.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I'mdeeplyencouragedbywhatyou'veachieved.（運(yùn)用了what弓|導(dǎo)的

賓語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2】I'mrathergladtolearnthatyouhavepassedtheexaminationandobtainedthe

qualificationtostudyinChina.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

Writing2

（2024?廣東肇慶?三模）假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，英國(guó)某中學(xué)的部分師生即將訪(fǎng)問(wèn)你校，

并體驗(yàn)校園傳統(tǒng)文化節(jié)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎辭，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示歡迎；2.活動(dòng)介紹；3.表達(dá)祝愿。

注意：L寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Dearvisitingguests,

Thankyou!

【答案】Dearvisitingguests,

Onbehalfofallthestudentsinourschool,I'dliketoexpressourwarmestwelcometoyou.

It'sreallyagreathonorforusthatyoucancomeandjoinusintheCampusTraditionalCultural

Festival.

ThepurposeofthefestivalistoenrichourschoollifeandcarryforwardChinesetraditional

culture.Wewillorganizeaseriesofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinese

musicalinstruments,folkdancesandChinesemartialarts.Withoutdoubt,ifllbeagoodchance

foryoutogettounderstandChineseculturebetter.

Now,welcomeagain,ourdistinguishedquests!Isincerelyhopethatyouwillhavegreatfun

hereandgetfamiliarwithChinesecultureaswell.

Thankyou!

Dearvisitingguests,

It'smyhonortostandhereonbehalfofallthestudents,andI'dliketoextendourwarmest

welcometoyourcomingandjoiningusintheCampusTraditionalCultureFestival.

Aimedatenrichingourextra-curricularlifeandcarryingforwardtraditionalChinese

culture,awiderangeofactivitiesaredue/arranged/expected,whicharedividedinto3categories.

OnecontainsaudiovisualperformancesontraditionalChinesemusicalinstruments,folkdances

andChinesemartialarts.Anotherinvolvespaper-cutting,makingteaandotherintriguing

hands-onprojects.Whatcomesthelastistheinteractiveclass-workshopswhereindividuals

shareinsightsintogivencustomsandtraditions,makingforthecollisionandblendofdistinct

minds.Withtheserefreshingandspellbindingactivities,theremustbeonetoyourtasteandyou'll

betotallyimmersedinthecharmandvitality/vigourofChinesecultureandthusgainmore

insightsintoitaswell.

Welcomeagain,ourdistinguishedguests!Wesincerelyhopeeveryonewillhaveapleasant

andmemorabletime.

Thankyou!

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎辭，歡迎英國(guó)某中學(xué)的部分

師生來(lái)校訪(fǎng)問(wèn)，并體驗(yàn)校園傳統(tǒng)文化節(jié)活動(dòng)。解析以范文一為例。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)：express—^convey

機(jī)會(huì)：chance—>opportunity

真誠(chéng)地：sincerely一genuinely

玩得很開(kāi)心：havegreatfun—?haveawonderfultime

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Withoutdoubt,ifllbeagoodchanceforyoutogettounderstandChineseculturebetter.

拓展句：ThereisnodoubtthatifllbeagoodchanceforyoutogettounderstandChineseculture

better.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]IfsreallyagreathonorforusthatyoucancomeandjoinusintheCampus

TraditionalCulturalFestival.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，it作形式主語(yǔ)）

【高分句型2】IsincerelyhopethatyouwillhavegreatfunhereandgetfamiliarwithChinese

cultureaswell.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

Writing3

（2024?湖北?三模）假定你是李華，給你班交換生Frank發(fā)郵件，想邀請(qǐng)F(tuán)rank一起晨跑。

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表明來(lái)意；

2.晨跑的重要性；

3.注意事項(xiàng)。

注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。

DearFrank,

Bestregards,

LiHua

【答案】DearFrank,

Howareyoudoing?I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogoforamorningrunwithme,whichmay

benefitbothofusinanamazingway.

WhenIwasinjuniorhighschool,Ioftengotsickduetolackofexercise.SoIpickedup

runninginthemorning.Sincethen,runninghasplayedanimportantroleinmylife,without

whichIwouldn'thavebuiltstrongbody.Ithinkitisagoodwaytokeepfit.ThafswhyIwantto

inviteyoutojoinme.Beforerunning,itisnecessarytohavesomepreparationexercises,suchas

pressinglegsandswingingarms.Whafsmore,makesureappropriateshoesandclothingare

worn.

Ihopeyoucanjoinmeinexercising.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Bestregards,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生按照提示給交換生Frank發(fā)郵件，邀請(qǐng)F(tuán)rank

一起晨跑。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

重要的：important一significant

健康的：行t-healthy

必要的：necessary-essential

另夕卜：whafsmore—>inaddition

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Beforerunning,itisnecessarytohavesomepreparationexercises,suchaspressinglegsand

swingingarms.

拓展句：Beforerunning,itisnecessarythatwehavesomepreparationexercises,suchaspressing

legsandswingingarms.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogoforamorningrunwithme,whichmay

benefitbothofusinanamazingway.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Sincethen,runninghasplayedanimportantroleinmylife,withoutwhichI

wouldn'thavebuiltstrongbody.（運(yùn)用了“介詞+which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

Writing4

（2024?浙江溫州?三模）你校英文報(bào)就最近舉辦的“當(dāng)英語(yǔ)遇上藝術(shù)”（WhenEnglishMeets

TheArts）系列活動(dòng)開(kāi)展征文，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文，分享其中讓你印象深刻的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包

括：

1.活動(dòng)介紹2你的感想

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts

【答案】WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts

Recently,ourschoolorganizedaseriesofactivitiestitled“WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts".

Amongthem,theactivitythatleftadeepimpressiononmewastheEnglishdramaperformance.

Duringtheactivity,studentsfromdifferentgradescooperatedtoproduceandperformshort

Englishdramas.Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,providinga

platformforstudentstoshowcasetheirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.Personally,Iwas

deeplyimpressedbythededicationandteamworkdisplayedbythestudents.Despitethe

challengesoflanguagelearningandstagefright,theydemonstratedconfidenceandenthusiasmon

stage.Moreover,thedramasnotonlyentertainedtheaudiencebutalsoencouragedlanguage

learninginafunandinteractiveway.

Overall,theEnglishdramaperformancewasamemorableandinspiringexperience,

highlightingthesynergybetweenlanguagelearningandartisticexpression.Itreinforcedthe

importanceofcreativeapproachesinlanguageeducationandprovidedvaluableopportunitiesfor

studentstoshineonstage.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)一篇征文，分享學(xué)校英文報(bào)最近舉辦的“當(dāng)

英語(yǔ)遇上藝術(shù)''系列活動(dòng)中讓你印象深刻的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

一系列：aseriesof一asuiteof

合作：cooperate^collaborate

展示：showcase^display

提供：provide—>offer

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,providingaplatformfor

studentstoshowcasetheirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.

拓展句：Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,whichprovideda

platformforstudentstoshowcasetheirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.

【點(diǎn)睛X高分句型11Amongthem,theactivitythatleftadeepimpressiononmewastheEnglish

dramaperfbrmance.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型21Overall,theEnglishdramaperformancewasamemorableandinspiringexperience,

highlightingthesynergybetweenlanguagelearningandartisticexpression.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀

語(yǔ)）

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（2024?四川?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你校即將舉行一場(chǎng)以“環(huán)境保護(hù)''為主題的英語(yǔ)演講

比賽。請(qǐng)你代表班級(jí)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.闡述環(huán)境保護(hù)的重要性；

2.分享班級(jí)在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的做法和成果;

3.呼吁全校師生參與環(huán)境保護(hù)行動(dòng)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dearteachers,boysandgirls,

Thankyou!

【答案】Dearteachers,boysandgirls,

Today,Iamtalkingaboutamatterofutmosturgency-environmentalconservation.The

healthofourplanetisvitalforoursurvival.Pollution,deforestation,andwastefulhabitsthreaten

thedelicatebalanceofnature.Wemustactnowtopreserveourenvironmentforfuture

generations.

Ourclasshastakensignificantstepstowardsthisgoal.We'veinitiatedarecyclingprogram,

reducedplasticuse,andorganizedtree-plantingactivities.Theseeffortshaveledtoanoticeable

declineinwasteandanincreaseingreeneryaroundourschool.

Smallactionssuchasusingeco-friendlyproductscanmakeahugedifference.Lefscome

togetherandcontributetotheprotectionofourEarth.

Thankyou!

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，參加以“環(huán)境保護(hù)''為主題的英

語(yǔ)演講比賽。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

目標(biāo)：goal—>target

活動(dòng)：activity—>event

顯然的：noticeable一apparent

重要的：significant^vital

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Wemustactnowtopreserveourenvironmentforfuturegenerations.

拓展句：Ifwewanttopreserveourenvironmentforfuturegenerations,wemustactnow.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]LefscometogetherandcontributetotheprotectionofourEarth.（運(yùn)用了

肯定祈使句）

[高分句型2]Smallactionssuchasusingeco-friendlyproductscanmakeahugedifference.（運(yùn)用

了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）

Writing6

（2024?遼寧錦州?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，今天早上去找來(lái)自美國(guó)的好友John,想邀請(qǐng)他

這周末一起去觀(guān)看京?。≒ekingOpera）表演，但John不在家，請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封郵件。內(nèi)容包

括

1.你到John家的目的；

2.簡(jiǎn)要介紹京??；

3.請(qǐng)求告知是否有空。

DearJohn

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJohn

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.LearningyouareinterestedinChineseculture,Ivisited

yourhomeearlierthismorning,butunfortunately,youwerenotthere.SoIamwritingtoinvite

youtowatchPekingOperathisweekend.

Ibelievethisisagoodchanceforyoutogaininsightintoit.Regardedasoneofthecultural

treasuresofChina,PekingOperaismorethanjustmusicandsinging;italsocombinesdrama,

dancing,andmartialarts,whichmakesitoneofthemostvariedartformsintheworld.Icantell

youmoreaboutitwhenwemeet.

PleaseletmeknowifyouareavailableandIwillbuytheticketsinadvance.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給來(lái)自美國(guó)的好友John寫(xiě)封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他這

周末一起去觀(guān)看京劇表演。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity—chance

結(jié)合：associate—combine

多樣的：various—>varied

被看作：beregardedas—>beconsideredas

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：LearningyouareinterestedinChineseculture,IamwritingtoinviteyoutowatchPeking

Operathisweekend.

拓展句：SinceyouareinterestedinChineseculture,IamwritingtoinviteyoutowatchPeking

Operathisweekend.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]LearningyouareinterestedinChineseculture,Iamwritingtoinviteyouto

watchPekingOperathisweekend.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

[高分句型2]RegardedasoneoftheculturaltreasuresofChina,PekingOperaismorethanjust

musicandsinging;italsocombinesdrama,dancing,andmartialarts,whichmakesitoneofthe

mostvariedartformsintheworld.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

Writing7

（2024?寧夏銀川?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，最近參加了學(xué)校舉辦的“新時(shí)代好少年”（"Model

StudentsinNewEra"）主題網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻制作大賽活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹該活

動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)設(shè)置目的；

2.你的參與情況和感受。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：新時(shí)代好少年ModelStudentsinNewEra

AnUnforgettableVideo-clipStory

【答案】

AnUnforgettableVideo-clip

Story

Aimedatinspiringstudentstofosterasenseofsocialresponsibility,thevideoproduction

competitionthemed“ModelStudentsinNewEra”,washeldbyourschool.

Collaboratingwithateamoflike-mindedpeers,Ibrainstormedideasthatencapsulatedthe

spiritofa"ModelStudent”.Myvideocenteredaroundadayinthelifeofastudentwhobalanced

academicpursuitswithenvironmentalactivism,demonstratinghowsmallactscouldcreate

significantimpact.Fromscriptingtofilmingandediting,everystepwasalearningexperiencethat

honedmytechnicalabilitiesandfosteredteamwork.

NotonlydidIfeelchallenginginthiscompetition,butalsoIgainedalot.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹學(xué)校最近舉辦

的“新時(shí)代好少年TModelStudentsinNewEra”）主題網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻制作大賽活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

激勵(lì)：inspire—>motivate

競(jìng)賽：competition一contest

合作：collaborate一cooperate

獲得：gain—>obtain

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Aimedatinspiringstudentstofosterasenseofsocialresponsibility,thevideoproduction

competitionthemed"ModelStudentsinNewEra”,washeldbyourschool.

拓展句：Aimedatinspiringstudentstofosterasenseofsocialresponsibility,thevideoproduction

competition,whosethemeis"ModelStudentsinNewEra”,washeldbyourschool.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】NotonlydidIfeelchallenginginthiscompetition,butalsoIgained

alot.（運(yùn)用了notonly放句首的部分倒裝句）

【高分句型2]Myvideocenteredaroundadayinthelifeofastudentwhobalancedacademic

pursuitswithenvironmentalactivism,demonstratinghowsmallactscouldcreatesignificant

impact.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句，how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

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（2024?河北衡水?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華,你校將于下周末舉辦英語(yǔ)朗誦比賽（recitation

competition）,請(qǐng)給你的外教Mr.Wesley寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)他給你指導(dǎo)一下英語(yǔ)發(fā)音。內(nèi)

容包括：

1.朗誦比賽情況介紹；

2.請(qǐng)求老師幫助；

3.附帶你的朗讀錄音。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearMr.Wesley,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearMr.Wesley,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?AnEnglishrecitationcompetitionaimedtoraise

students,interestinlearningEnglishistobeheldnextweekend.Thiscompetitionisanexcellent

opportunityforusstudentstoshowcaseourlanguageskillsandbuildconfidenceinpublic

speaking.

IamwritingtokindlyrequestyourassistanceinimprovingmyEnglishpronunciationfor

thecompetition.Ibelieveyourguidancewillgreatlybenefitmyperformance.Yourexpertisein

Englishphoneticswouldbeinvaluableinhelpingmerefinemypronunciationanddelivery.

Ihavealsoattachedarecordingofmyrecitationforyourreference.Iwouldgreatly

appreciateanyfeedhackoradviceyoucouldprovide.Thankyouinadvanceforyourassistance.

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【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Mr.Wesley寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)他給

你指導(dǎo)一下英語(yǔ)發(fā)音，參加學(xué)校于下周末舉辦的英語(yǔ)朗誦比賽。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity—chance

請(qǐng)求：request—>askfor

建議：competition一match

幫助：assistance一help/aid

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：AnEnglishrecitationcompetitionaimedtoraisestudents9interestinlearningEnglishisto

beheldnextweekend.

拓展句：AnEnglishrecitationcompetitionwhichisaimedtoraisestudents5interestinlearning

Englishistobeheldnextweekend.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thiscompetitionisanexcellentopportunityforusstudentstoshowcase

ourlanguageskillsandbuildconfidenceinpublicspeaking.（運(yùn)用了不定式短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)修飾名詞

opportunity）

【高分句型2】Iwouldgreatlyappreciateanyfeedhackoradviceyoucouldprovide.（運(yùn)用了省

略關(guān)系代詞的定語(yǔ)從句）

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（2024?廣東深圳?三模）假定你是李華，你校交換生Mike準(zhǔn)備參加“厲害了，中國(guó)”（Amazing

China）短視頻大賽，特發(fā)郵件向你征詢(xún)視頻創(chuàng)意。請(qǐng)給他回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.提出建議；2.闡明理由。

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。

DearMike,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearMike,

Learningyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazing

China,Fmwritingtosharemyideaswithyou.

IfIwereyou,IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina'ssmartagriculture.

Nowadays,youcanseemodemfarmersusingcutting-edgetechnologiesanddevicesfor

agriculturalproduction,monitoringandmanagement.Thankstothis,theefficiencyisgreatly

improvedandthecountry'sgrainsecurityisguaranteed.Therefore,I'mconvincedthatshowing

theenormouschangesinChineseagriculturewillholdmuchappealfortheviewers.

Mayyourentrystandoutinthecompetition!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給準(zhǔn)備參加“厲害了，中國(guó)”（AmazingChina）短

視頻大賽的交換生Mike回一封郵件，就視頻創(chuàng)意提出建議并闡明理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

想法：idea—>opinion

安全：security-^-safety

因此：therefore一thus

確信：convinced一sure

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Learningyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazing

China,I'mwritingtosharemyideaswithyou.

拓展句：BecauseIlearnyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeof

AmazingChina,I'mwritingtosharemyideaswithyou.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11IfIwereyou,IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina's

smartagriculture.（運(yùn)用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣）

【高分句型2]Therefore,I'mconvincedthatshowingtheenormouschangesinChinese

agriculturewillholdmuchappealfortheviewers.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作

主語(yǔ)）

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（2024?重慶?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，現(xiàn)就讀于一所國(guó)際學(xué)校，打算向校學(xué)生會(huì)申請(qǐng)成立

一個(gè)社團(tuán)。請(qǐng)給學(xué)生會(huì)主席寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.社團(tuán)的類(lèi)型；

2.社團(tuán)的活動(dòng)計(jì)劃和目的；

3.