外研安徽八年級(jí)上Module6Animalsindanger模塊主題寫作一、話題分析本模塊以“瀕危動(dòng)物”為話題,介紹瀕危動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀,倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生積極思考保護(hù)它們的措施。二、寫作方法“三步法”寫“保護(hù)動(dòng)物類”作文1.第一步——開篇點(diǎn)題,提出問題;2.第二步——展開描述,分析原因;3.第三步——得出結(jié)論,提出措施。三、素材積累(一)“保護(hù)動(dòng)物類”作文的常用詞匯:lovely//strong//fewerandfewer//indanger//endangered//takeaway//kill//hunt//protecttheenvironment//save//raise//takeaction//makelaws//stop...from...(二)“保護(hù)動(dòng)物類”作文的常用句型:開頭句1.Therearefewerandfewer...intheworld.2.Doyoulike...?Nowthereisafactthat...中間句1.It’smostlybecauseofhumanactivities.Forexample...2.Pollutiondestroystheenvironmentwheretheanimalslive.結(jié)尾句1.It’snecessarytotakeactiontosaveanimals.2.Let’stryourbesttomaketheenvironmentbetterfortheanimals.名言警句1.Loveanimals,andloveourcommonworld.關(guān)愛動(dòng)物,關(guān)愛我們共同的世界。2.Protectanimals,youandI.保護(hù)動(dòng)物,你我的職責(zé)。句子升格(簡(jiǎn)單句變成復(fù)合句)Peopletookawaytheirland.Theydon’thaveenoughroomtolivein.→Peopletookawaytheirlandsotheydon’thaveenoughroomtolivein.四、寫作任務(wù)世界自然保護(hù)聯(lián)盟(IUCN)宣布白鱘滅絕,長(zhǎng)江鱘野外滅絕。自然界中很多動(dòng)物處于“瀕危”甚至“極?！睜顟B(tài)。請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)動(dòng)物的看法和建議。提示:1.瀕危的現(xiàn)狀;2.瀕危的原因(污染,捕殺);3.保護(hù)動(dòng)物的措施。要求:詞數(shù)80-100?！緦懽髂０濉刻岢鰡栴}Whyaresomeanimalsindanger?分析原因Itismostlybecauseof...Naturehasitsownrules.Onceonespeciesdisappears,otheranimalswillbe...提出措施...thegovernmentcanmakestricterlaws....animalprotectionorganizationscanraisetheawareness(意識(shí))of......wecanrefusetoeat...【高分作文】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheChinesepaddlefishwasrecentlyreportedtohavebeenmissing.Whyaresomeanimalsindanger?Itismostlybecauseofhumanactivities,pollutionandhuntingandsoon.Naturehasitsownrules.Onceonespeciesdisappears,otheranimalswillbeaffected._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It’stimetotakeactiontoprotectanimals.Firstly,thegovernmentcanmakestricterlaws.Secondly,animalprotectionorganizationscanraisetheawarenessoftheimportanceofprotectingwil