ReadingforWriting建議信課程目標：1、幫助學生掌握建議信的常見結(jié)構(gòu)和語言特征；2、通過讀寫結(jié)合，學習寫一封語意連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的建議信學習目標：1、通過task1，通過閱讀和回答相關(guān)問題，了解建議信寫作主體結(jié)構(gòu)2、通過task2，掌握具體寫作重點詞匯、短語和句式3、通過task3，小組討論為相關(guān)問題提出建議4、通過task4，形成初稿并潤色文章Lead-In

Whatisthepurposeofanadviceletter?WhatkindofaspectsshouldbeincludedinsuchkindofletterSusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Readherreplyandanswerthefollowingquestions:Task11.WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?2.DoyouthinkMs.Luo’sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?3.Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?Theproblemishis/herfriendChenLeiplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.IthinkMs.Luo’sadviceisusefulbecauseit’salwaysgoodtotalktoafriendabouthisorherproblemsandofferadvice.Also,totryanewhobbymayhelphis/herfriendtospendlesstimeonline.Ithinkhecanspendsometimeplayingsportsoutdoorswithfriends.Hecanalsolearnsomethingaboutprogramminginsteadofjustplayinggames.OrIwillencouragehimtotrynewhobbies.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Youwrotethatyouareveryworiedaboutyourfiend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrild.Youthinkthatyoufriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyoufriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonothertingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyoufiendtotynewhobies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.10September2018DearWorriedFriend,TheoutlineofthepassageParagraph1：the____________oftheletterParagraph2：the____________thatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’s____________purposesuggestionshope建議信基本結(jié)構(gòu)Preparationforwriting:

Listthewords,phrasesandsentencesTask2①____________vt.建議

②____________adj.不健康的③____________vt.鼓勵

④____________adj.有用的⑤____________vt.忠告，建議

⑥________________閑暇⑦____________盼望，期望

⑧________________對……

擔心⑨____________喜愛

⑩____________對……上癮?____________集中精力于

?___________________對……有益處

?____________交朋友

?____________收到……的來信?___________________玩得愉快

recommendencourageadvicelookforwardtobeattractedtoconcentrateonmakefriendsenjoyoneself/havefununhealthyusefulinone’ssparetimebeworriedaboutbeaddictedtobegoodfor/dogoodtohearfromWordsandphrasesWordsandphrases①_____________________________n.建議②_____________________________n.情況③_____________________________交朋友④_____________________________做……有困難⑤_____________________________接受某人的建議⑥_____________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_____________________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意

tip/advice/suggestionsituationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartintoSentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)________________________________________________________________________②如果你采納我的建議，改變這種情況是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)________________________________________________________________________③要交朋友為什么不先做一個朋友呢？(whynot)________________________________________________________________________④你和朋友同甘共苦難道不是一個好主意嗎？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)________________________________________________________________________⑤正如一句諺語說的，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)________________________________________________________________________Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Workingroups:Chooseoneofyourclassmatesanddiscusshis/herproblem.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.Task3SituationSuggestionReasonExpressionusedMyparentswon'tlistenwhenItellthemthings.Ialwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemparentsworkinanothercity.ThereisagirlIlikeinmyclass,butI'mtooshytotalktoher.添加過渡詞和銜接詞，突出文章的層次感和邏輯性一、表邏輯上的先后順序①

首先first，firstly，inthefirstplace，tobeginwith②其次secondly，inthesecondplace③最后，最重要的是atlast，finally，last，lastly，mostimportantly二、表遞進關(guān)系①

也;而且;還also，too，besides②

而且and③

此外inadditionto，apartfrom④此外furthermore，what’smore⑤

不僅……而且……notonly…butalso…Task4DraftyourletteraccordingtotheoutlinebelowandexchangedrafswithyourpartnerandpolishitDear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建議).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議，如下)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Allthebest,(表達愿望).Yours,/Sincerely,LiHuaPost-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?亮點表達補充1.建議信開頭常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人交流方面有些麻煩，你也可能經(jīng)常感到孤獨。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。

2.表達建議常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參加一個俱樂部？如果你這樣做的話，就會交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalk