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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AnemergencyroomdoctornamedShaneNaidooparticipatedintheNewJerseyHalfMarathononSeptember28th.Despitehisprofessionalcommitmentsandjobdemands,Naidoohasalwaysfoundtimetolace(系)hisrunningshoesupandhitthepavement.Asanamateurathletewhohadnotbeenengaginginstricttraininginrecentweeks,hehadsetrelativelylowexpectationsforhimself,Hehadplannedtosimplyenjoytheraceandmaintainaleisurelypacethroughout,Itturnedoutthatalthoughhefinishedlastintherace,itwasundoubtedlythemostmeaningfulandunforgettableone.ShaneNaidoowasapproachingthehalfwaymarkoftheNewJerseyHalfMarathonatNewportwhenChrystalRinehold,afemalerunnerinhermid-thirtieswhowasrunningjustaheadofhim.unexpectedlycollapsed.Theentiresceneunfoldedsuddenly.Onemoment,shewasmaintainingherpacealongsidetheotherrunners;thenextmoment,shefoundherselfontheground,givingintoanunseenandmysteriousforce,Naidoo,whoworksatJFKUniversityMedicalCenterinEdison,NewJersey,immediatelyrushedtohersidealongwithfourotherrunnerswhohadwitnessedthisincidentHismedicalinstincts(本能)kickedinasheswiftlybeganassessingthesituation.Uponconductingathoroughexaminationofher,hediscoveredthatshewasstrugglingtobreatheandbarelyabletospeak.Shewhisperedinaweakvoice,“IthinkI’mdying.”Naidoostronglysuspectedthatshemightbesufferingfromdehydration(脫水
)orlowbloodsugarlevels.Suchconditionscouldprovedeadlyforrunners,especiallyduringlong-distanceeventslikethisoneMoreover,healsonoticedthatshewasexperiencingchestpainandinadisturbedmentalcondition
Thesesymptomswerehighlyalarmingandindicatedapotentialriskofcardiacarrest(心臟驟停).Thissituationdemandedimmediateanddecisiveaction.注意:1.
續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150
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請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Naidoocalledformedicalassistancewhilegivinginstructionstopeoplearound.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenheleftthehospital,Naidoonoticedthatthehalfmarathonwasstillunderway.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:身為急診室醫(yī)生的ShaneNaidoo參加新澤西半程馬拉松,雖近期訓(xùn)練不足且對(duì)成績期望不高,但比賽途中ChrystalRinehold突然暈倒。Naidoo與其他四位目擊者立刻上前,經(jīng)檢查他懷疑女子有脫水、低血糖癥狀,還伴有胸痛與精神異常,情況危急可能心臟驟停,需要立即采取行動(dòng)。伏筆及回應(yīng):伏筆:Naidoo是急診室醫(yī)生。回應(yīng):續(xù)寫中他憑借專業(yè)知識(shí)冷靜施救并準(zhǔn)確判斷病情,指揮周圍人協(xié)助。伏筆:女子突然暈倒且有多種危險(xiǎn)癥狀?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中Naidoo針對(duì)這些癥狀采取相應(yīng)急救措施,如補(bǔ)水、補(bǔ)充糖分、密切監(jiān)控心臟狀況等。伏筆:Naidoo原本計(jì)劃輕松參賽?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中他為救女子放棄比賽,事后看到仍在進(jìn)行的比賽內(nèi)心坦然。伏筆:有其他四位跑步者一同見證女子暈倒。回應(yīng):續(xù)寫中他們?cè)贜aidoo指揮下幫忙,有的找水,有的協(xié)助聯(lián)系醫(yī)院等。伏筆:比賽在進(jìn)行中?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中Naidoo結(jié)束救助離開醫(yī)院時(shí)看到比賽還在繼續(xù),感慨自己雖未完成比賽卻有更重要的收獲。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):
第一段:Naidoo一邊呼叫醫(yī)療援助,一邊向周圍人下達(dá)指令。他讓一位跑步者去找水,試圖先為Chrystal補(bǔ)充水分緩解脫水癥狀,同時(shí)讓另一位跑步者聯(lián)系賽事醫(yī)療團(tuán)隊(duì)告知具體位置和患者情況。他自己則持續(xù)密切監(jiān)控Chrystal的生命體征,尤其是心臟狀況,準(zhǔn)備隨時(shí)進(jìn)行心肺復(fù)蘇,在等待醫(yī)療團(tuán)隊(duì)到來的過程中,他不斷輕聲安慰Chrystal,讓她保持清醒。
第二段:當(dāng)他離開醫(yī)院時(shí),Naidoo注意到半程馬拉松仍在進(jìn)行。他望著賽道上奔跑的選手,心中沒有絲毫遺憾。盡管他未能完成比賽,但他知道自己做出了更重要的選擇。他相信在這種緊急情況下,拯救生命遠(yuǎn)比個(gè)人的比賽成績重要,他為自己能運(yùn)用專業(yè)知識(shí)幫助他人而感到欣慰和自豪,這次經(jīng)歷也讓他更加深刻地體會(huì)到醫(yī)生的職責(zé)與使命。情感線:開始Naidoo輕松參賽,女子暈倒后他轉(zhuǎn)為緊張專注地施救,在救助過程中充滿擔(dān)憂與責(zé)任感,離開醫(yī)院看到比賽未結(jié)束時(shí),他內(nèi)心平靜且有欣慰、自豪之感,對(duì)自己放棄比賽救助他人的行為無悔。故事線:ShaneNaidoo參加半程馬拉松,途中ChrystalRinehold暈倒,Naidoo憑借醫(yī)生本能施救,呼叫援助并指揮他人協(xié)助,在醫(yī)院確保Chrystal脫離危險(xiǎn)后離開,看到仍在進(jìn)行的比賽有所感悟。主旨升華句:Intheraceoflife,helpingotherscrossthefinishlineofdangerisagreatervictorythanpersonalachievement.(在人生的賽跑中,幫助他人跨越危險(xiǎn)的終點(diǎn)線比個(gè)人成就更偉大。)Trueheroesarethosewhopausetheirownjourneytosavealifeinneed.(真正的英雄是那些停下自己的旅程去拯救瀕危生命的人。)Thevalueofalife-savingactfaroutweighsthepursuitofpersonalgloryonanytrack.(拯救生命的行為價(jià)值遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超過在任何賽道上對(duì)個(gè)人榮耀的追求。)Whenfacedwithachoicebetweenpersonalgoalandanother'slife,humanityshouldalwaysprevail.(當(dāng)面臨個(gè)人目標(biāo)與他人生命的抉擇時(shí),人性應(yīng)始終占上風(fēng)。)Inthemarathonofexistence,theactofsavingafellowrunneristhemostnoblesprint.(在生存的馬拉松中,拯救同伴的行為是最崇高的沖刺。)寫作示范一:Naidoocalledformedicalassistancewhilegivinginstructionstopeoplearound.HeaskedarunnertofetchsomewaterandstartedhydratingChrystaltocombatdehydration.Anotherrunnerwasdirectedtocontacttheevent'smedicalteamwithdetails.Naidoocloselymonitoredhervitalsigns,especiallyherheart,readytoperformCPRifneeded.Hemurmuredsoothingwordstokeepherconscious,hisfocusentirelyonsavingherlife.Whenheleftthehospital,Naidoonoticedthatthehalfmarathonwasstillunderway.Hewatchedtherunnersonthecoursewithoutashredofregret.Althoughhedidn'tfinishtherace,heknewhehadmadeamorecrucialchoice.Hebelievedthatsavingalifeoutweighedpersonalraceresults.Hefeltasenseofsatisfactionandprideforusinghisexpertisetohelp.Thisexperiencedeepenedhisunderstandingofadoctor'sdutyandmission.寫作示范二:Naidoocalledformedicalassistancewhilegivinginstructionstopeoplearound.Hedispatchedonerunnertosearchforwaterandinstructedanothertocallthemedicalteam.HehimselfremainedbyChrystal'sside,checkingherbreathingandpulseregularly.Hemanagedtofindsomesugarpacketsfromabystanderandgavethemtohertocounterlowbloodsugar.Hekepthercalmandreassureduntilthemedicalteamarrived.Whenheleftthehospital,Naidoonoticedthatthehalfmarathonwasstillunderway.Helookedattheongoingracewithapeacefulheart.Hehadnoregretsaboutabandoninghisownrun.Forhim,ensuringChrystal'swell-beingwasfarmoresignificant.Hewasproudtohavebeenabletoactasadoctorinthisemergency.Thisincidentmadehimrealizethattheessenceofhisprofessionwastobethereforthoseinneed,regardlessofthecircumstances.Onepossibleversion:Naidoocalledformedicalassistancewhilegiving
instructionstothecrowd.
Underhisguidance,agroupofrunnersformedacirclearoundthem,shieldingChrystalfromthecrowdandgivingNaidoothespaceheneededtowork.Hethenquicklygaveherfirstaidandensuringthatshewasbreathingproperly.Asheworked,healsokepttalkingtoChrystal,monitoringherresponsestomakesurethatsheremainedconscious.Themedical
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