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閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasafinesummermorning,perfecttobeoutdoors.Twosistershadbeenoutmushroompicking,andwereontheirwayhomewithheavybasketsfullofmushrooms.Theysangsongsontheway,andplayedwitheachother.Soontheyreachedapointwheretheyhadtocrossarailwaytrack.Theydidnotthinktwiceaboutcrossingitsincetherewasnotraincoming,andtheycouldnothearanywhistle.Theyslowlyclimbedthesteeprailwayembankment,takingcarenottodropthebaskets.TheywereverynearthetrackandthelittlesisterMarywasabouttocrossitfirstwhenatrainwhistledinthedistance.Hearingthetraincoming,Rosetheeldersisterquicklyrandown.Shethoughtthattheyoungonewasfollowingher.Butassheturnedback,shewasshockedtoseeherlittlesisterstilluptherecrossingthetrack.“Comebackhere!Runbackfast!”sheshouted.Maryseemednottohearthewhistlenorhersister’scryasshewasconcentratingonsteppingoverthetrackwithherlittlefeet,andholdingontothebasket.Thenshetrippedandfellonthetrack,scatteringhermushroomsaround.Theenginedriverpanickedonseeingagirlbetweenthetrackswhowasonherhandsandkneesandheblewthehornwithallhisstrength.PoorMary,whowasfrightenedbythecomingdanger,frozeanddidn’tknowwhattodo.WhenRosesawthescene,shescreamedatthetopofhervoiceforMary’sattention.Marynoticedthathersisterwasnotaroundandcriedforhelp.Withthetraindrawingnear,theenginedrivergrewextremelyanxious.Ashardashecould,hekeptblowingthewhistleandstartedreducingspeed.Yetitwasnotpossibleforhimtostoptheheavytrainwithinsuchashortdistance.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:在一個(gè)美好的夏日清晨,兩姐妹采完蘑菇回家途中要穿過鐵路軌道。她們起初未發(fā)現(xiàn)火車駛來(lái),當(dāng)聽到火車?guó)Q笛時(shí),姐姐Rose迅速跑下鐵路堤岸,以為妹妹Mary會(huì)跟上,然而Mary卻在跨越軌道時(shí)摔倒。火車司機(jī)看到Mary后驚慌失措,盡力鳴笛減速但無(wú)法在短距離內(nèi)停車,情況十分危急。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng):伏筆:姐妹倆未仔細(xì)確認(rèn)有無(wú)火車便準(zhǔn)備穿越鐵路。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):導(dǎo)致她們?cè)庥龌疖囻倎?lái)的危險(xiǎn)情況,使得故事進(jìn)入緊張的危機(jī)情節(jié),凸顯了她們的大意帶來(lái)的嚴(yán)重后果。伏筆:Rose以為Mary會(huì)跟著自己跑下鐵路堤岸。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):當(dāng)發(fā)現(xiàn)Mary仍在鐵軌上時(shí),引發(fā)了Rose后續(xù)的焦急呼喊與救援行動(dòng),推動(dòng)情節(jié)進(jìn)一步發(fā)展,也體現(xiàn)出姐妹間的牽掛。伏筆:Mary因?qū)W⒂诳缭杰壍篮湍梅€(wěn)籃子而未聽到火車?guó)Q笛和姐姐呼喊。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):所以她摔倒在鐵軌上并在危險(xiǎn)面前不知所措,增加了故事的緊張感和戲劇性,為后續(xù)救援營(yíng)造了緊迫氛圍。伏筆:火車司機(jī)在遠(yuǎn)處看到Mary后驚慌并全力鳴笛。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):這引起了Rose的注意并促使她采取更激烈的行動(dòng)去救Mary,同時(shí)也讓Mary意識(shí)到危險(xiǎn),使人物間的互動(dòng)和情節(jié)發(fā)展更加緊密。伏筆:火車無(wú)法在短距離內(nèi)停下。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):強(qiáng)調(diào)了危險(xiǎn)的緊迫性,讓Rose必須在極短時(shí)間內(nèi)做出拯救Mary的行動(dòng),否則悲劇將不可避免,從而引出Rose在絕境中的勇敢表現(xiàn)。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):
第一段:描述Rose為阻止悲劇發(fā)生所采取的行動(dòng),比如她如何不顧危險(xiǎn)沖向Mary,試圖將其拉離鐵軌等。體現(xiàn)Rose在緊急時(shí)刻的勇敢和對(duì)妹妹的深切關(guān)愛。第二段:講述火車停下后的場(chǎng)景,如Mary的狀況、人們的反應(yīng)等。表達(dá)姐妹倆劫后余生的心情以及從這次經(jīng)歷中得到的感悟。情感線:
姐妹倆開始時(shí)是輕松愉悅的,在采蘑菇后回家途中充滿歡樂。當(dāng)火車出現(xiàn)危險(xiǎn)時(shí),Rose轉(zhuǎn)為極度焦急和擔(dān)憂,Mary則是驚恐萬(wàn)分。在Rose實(shí)施救援行動(dòng)過程中,她的勇敢與堅(jiān)定占據(jù)主導(dǎo),而Mary充滿對(duì)姐姐救助的期待與依賴。火車停下后,姐妹倆先是心有余悸,而后對(duì)彼此的感情更加深厚,也意識(shí)到安全的重要性,情感從輕松到緊張?jiān)俚綉c幸與感悟,經(jīng)歷了巨大的起伏變化。故事線:
Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.Withoutamoment’shesitation,shesprintedbackuptheembankmenttowardsMary.Thetrainwasthunderingcloser,butRose’sonlythoughtwastosavehersister.ShereachedMary,grabbedherarmwithallhermight,andpulledheroffthetrackjustinthenickoftime.Thetwosisterstumbleddownthesideoftheembankment,thebasketsofmushroomsflyingeverywhere.Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.Thedriverrushedout,paleandshaken.Marywascryinghysterically,whileRoseheldhertightly,tearsstreamingdownherfaceaswell.Theywerebothinastateofshockbutincrediblygratefultobealive.Thepeoplenearbywhohadwitnessedthescenewerealsorelieved.Thesistersrealizedhowpreciouslifewasandvowednevertobesocarelessagain.主旨升華句:“Inthefaceofimminentdanger,thebondofsisterhoodcanbecomeanunbreakableshield,defyingeventhemightiestofthreats.”(在迫在眉睫的危險(xiǎn)面前,姐妹情誼能成為堅(jiān)不可摧的盾牌,抵御最強(qiáng)大的威脅。)“Asinglemomentofcarelessnesscanleadtothebrinkofdisaster,butloveandcouragecanpullusbackfromtheabyss.”(片刻的疏忽可能導(dǎo)致災(zāi)難邊緣,但愛與勇氣能將我們從深淵拉回。)“Life'spreciousnessisoftenmostvividlyrevealedintheshadowofnear-tragedy,teachingustocherisheveryheartbeatandeverylovedone.”(生命的珍貴常常在近乎悲劇的陰影中最生動(dòng)地展現(xiàn),教導(dǎo)我們珍惜每一次心跳和每一位親人。)“Whenthetracksoffateseemtoleadtodoom,thestepsofloveandsacrificecandivertthecourseandrewritetheending.”(當(dāng)命運(yùn)的軌道似乎通向厄運(yùn)時(shí),愛與犧牲的腳步可以改變方向并改寫結(jié)局。)“Thewhistleofdangerisacalltoaction,awakeningwithinusthedormantheroismthatliesbeneaththesurfaceofordinarylife.”(危險(xiǎn)的汽笛聲是行動(dòng)的召喚,喚醒我們?cè)谄椒采畋硐笙鲁了挠⑿壑髁x。)寫作示范一:Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.ShemusteredallhercourageanddashedtowardsMarylikeaboltoflightning.Ignoringthedeafeningsoundoftheapproachingtrain,shetuggedMaryupfromthetrackswithastrengthshedidn’tknowshehad.Thetwosistersclungtoeachotherastheyrolledawayfromthetracks.Thetrainroaredpast,thewindfromitnearlyknockingthemover.Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.Theconductorandpassengerscamerunningtocheckonthem.Marywastrembling,herfaceashen.Rosecomfortedhersoftly.Theythankedthepeoplearoundthemandthedriver,whowasstillvisiblyshaken.Thesistersknewthattheyhadbeengivenasecondchance.Theypromisedtoalwaysbemorecautiousandtovaluetheirlivesandeachotherevenmore.Thisterrifyingincidenthadstrengthenedtheirbondandmadethemmoreawareofthefragilityoflife.寫作示范二:Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.Inasplitsecond,shemadeadecisionandracedbacktoMary.ShethrewherselfontopofMary,shieldingherfromtheoncomingtrain.Thetrainscreechedandrumbledoverhead,butRoseheldontight.Miraculously,thetrainpassedwithoutharmingthem.Thetrainrolledoverandfinallystopped.Thesisterslayontheground,gaspingforbreath.MarylookedatRosewithtearfuleyesandsaid,“Yousavedme.”Rosejusthuggedhertighter.Peoplegatheredaround,marvelingattheirnarrowescape.Thesistersfeltamixtureofemotions-relief,gratitude,andanewfoundrespectforthepoweroflifeanddeath.Theyknewthattheirsisterlylovehadtriumphedoverthegreatestdangerandthattheywouldneverforgetthislessonabouttheimportanceofsafetyandthedepthoftheirbond.【答案】Para1:Rosewouldn’twatchthetragedyhappenbeforehereyes.
Sherusheduptheembankmentstaircase,repeatingatthetopofhervoice“Stayoffthetracks!”Mary,atthesightofRose’scomingtoherrescue,burstintotearsofjoy.Th
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