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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ApowerfulstormeruptedinNorthCarolina,causingmanyroadstobeseverelydamagedandsomehousestocollapse.Intheaftermathoftheterriblestorm,ananimalprotectionsocietydiscoveredasurpriseattheirboosterthatbothbrokeandwarmedtheirhearts.Thesurprisewasthatagroupofbabydogswereleftwithasadnote,revealingataleofsympathyinthehardship.Thenote,writtenbyahomelessman,explainedthattheheartbreakingcircumstancesledhimtoadoptthebabydogs.Heregularlyfedtheirmotherdog,buthediscoveredthatshehadunfortunatelybeenhitbyacar.Despitehisownhomelessness,hehadprovidedthebabydogswithachancetohaveabetterlife.However,thestormdestroyedhistemporaryresidence,andhehadtoleavethemattheanimalprotectionsociety’sdoorstepwithaheartfeltrequestforhelp.Thenoteread,“Pleasehelp!IwassadtofindalocalhomelessdogthatIusedtofeedwhenIcould,deadbytheroad.Whatmademesadderwasthatherbabieswerelefthomeless.I’msorryforleavingthemlikethis,butIamalsohomelessandcannotaffordtolookafterthem.Myheartbreaksforthemandtheirmother.Ijustwantthemtobetakengoodcareof.Iknowthatit’swrongtoabandonthem.Butpleasedon’tthinkpoorlyofme.Ireallydonthaveanyotherchoice.Sincerely,ahomelessman,George.”David,whowasinchargeoftheanimalprotectionsociety,postedthestory,onthesocialmediapages,expressinggratitudetothehomelessmanandadmirationforhisselflessact.Davidassurednimthathiskindness,hadnotgoneunnoticedandpromisedtohonorhisgesturebyofferingthebabydogstheloveandcaretheywoulddeserve.Davidalsogaveaninvitationtohimwhichread,“Ifyouwouldlike,pleasecometotheanimalprotectionsocietytoseehowthebabydogswilllive,andIthinkthattheywillbegladtoseeyouagain!”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewdayslater,George,thehomelessman,walkedintotheanimalprotectionsociety.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenGeorgeandDavidstartedlookingfornewhomesforthebabydogs._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:北卡羅來納州的一場風(fēng)暴后,動物保護(hù)協(xié)會收到一個無家可歸的人喬治留下的一窩小狗和一張令人心碎的紙條。紙條講述了喬治雖自身處境艱難,但在狗媽媽被車撞死后收養(yǎng)了小狗,后因風(fēng)暴失去住所才無奈將小狗送來求助。動物保護(hù)協(xié)會的負(fù)責(zé)人大衛(wèi)在社交媒體上發(fā)布了這個故事,表達(dá)了對喬治的感謝和敬意,并邀請他來看望小狗。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:喬治留下小狗時的愧疚與無奈。回應(yīng):喬治走進(jìn)動物保護(hù)協(xié)會時,依然帶著歉意,但看到小狗被照顧得很好,內(nèi)心稍感寬慰,同時也為自己當(dāng)初的決定感到慶幸,回應(yīng)了他之前的復(fù)雜心情和艱難抉擇。伏筆:大衛(wèi)對喬治的感激與承諾?;貞?yīng):喬治到來后,大衛(wèi)熱情接待,向他詳細(xì)介紹小狗的情況,讓喬治感受到自己的善舉得到了尊重和重視,踐行了大衛(wèi)之前在社交媒體上表達(dá)的感恩和照顧小狗的承諾。伏筆:喬治對小狗的不舍。回應(yīng):在為小狗找新家的過程中,喬治積極參與,認(rèn)真篩選合適的領(lǐng)養(yǎng)人,他對小狗的這份不舍轉(zhuǎn)化為對它們未來生活的關(guān)心,確保小狗能找到真正愛它們的家,延續(xù)了他對小狗的情感。伏筆:小狗的悲慘身世。回應(yīng):新的領(lǐng)養(yǎng)家庭在了解小狗的故事后,更加珍惜和疼愛它們,給予小狗溫暖、安全的生活環(huán)境,使小狗從不幸的開端走向幸福的未來,改變了小狗的命運(yùn)軌跡,與之前的悲慘身世形成對比。伏筆:大衛(wèi)邀請喬治來看望小狗?;貞?yīng):喬治不僅來看望小狗,還與大衛(wèi)一起為小狗的未來努力,這一情節(jié)推動了故事的發(fā)展,使兩人因小狗結(jié)緣,共同完成一件充滿愛心的事情,升華了故事中人與人、人與動物之間的情感聯(lián)系。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)情感線:第一段:喬治起初帶著忐忑與愧疚走進(jìn)動物保護(hù)協(xié)會,看到小狗健康活潑后,內(nèi)心滿是欣慰與感動,同時對大衛(wèi)和工作人員充滿感激。大衛(wèi)則熱情友好地接待喬治,兩人之間彌漫著溫暖與善意,之前因小狗產(chǎn)生的情感紐帶更加牢固。第二段:喬治和大衛(wèi)懷著對小狗的關(guān)愛和責(zé)任感,積極投入到為小狗尋找新家的工作中。他們認(rèn)真對待每一個潛在的領(lǐng)養(yǎng)家庭,希望小狗能得到最好的照顧,情感專注且堅定,充滿了對小狗未來幸福生活的期待。故事線:第一段:喬治懷著復(fù)雜的心情走進(jìn)動物保護(hù)協(xié)會,大衛(wèi)熱情地迎接他,并帶他去看小狗。小狗們看到喬治后興奮地跑過來,喬治眼中泛起淚花,他為小狗們現(xiàn)在的良好狀態(tài)向大衛(wèi)道謝。大衛(wèi)邀請喬治參與照顧小狗一段時間,喬治欣然答應(yīng)。第二段:喬治和大衛(wèi)通過各種渠道發(fā)布小狗的領(lǐng)養(yǎng)信息,仔細(xì)篩選領(lǐng)養(yǎng)家庭。他們面試了許多有意愿的人,詢問他們的生活環(huán)境、養(yǎng)寵經(jīng)驗(yàn)和對寵物的態(tài)度等。最終,為每只小狗都找到了合適的新家。在送小狗離開時,喬治雖然不舍,但也為它們的未來感到高興,他與大衛(wèi)約定以后會常來看望這些小狗。主旨升華句Inthedarkestoftimes,aglimmerofkindnesscanlightthewayforthoseinneed,andwhenwecometogethertocare,wecreateatapestryoflovethatmendseventhemostbrokenhearts.(在最黑暗的時刻,一絲善意能為需要的人照亮道路,當(dāng)我們共同關(guān)愛時,我們編織出的愛之錦緞能撫慰最破碎的心。)Truehumanityshinesnotintheabsenceofstruggle,butinthechoicetoshowcompassiondespiteourownhardships.Letusbethebeaconsofhopeinaworldthatoftenseemscoldandunforgiving.(真正的人性不是在沒有掙扎時閃耀,而是在盡管自身艱難仍選擇展現(xiàn)同情之時。讓我們在這個常??此评淠疅o情的世界中成為希望的燈塔。)Thejourneyofthesepuppiesfromabandonmenttoalovinghomeisatestamenttothepowerofkindnessandtheunbreakablebondthatcanformbetweenalllivingbeings,regardlessofcircumstance.(這些小狗從被遺棄到擁有充滿愛的家的旅程,證明了善良的力量以及所有生物之間無論何種情況都能形成的牢不可破的紐帶。)Sometimes,themostunexpectedactsofkindnesscansetinmotionachainofeventsthatrestoresfaithinhumanityandshowsusthateveninthefaceofdespair,thereisalwaysroomforloveandhopetogrow.(有時,最意想不到的善舉能引發(fā)一系列事件,恢復(fù)人們對人性的信心,并向我們表明,即使在絕望面前,愛與希望也總有生長的空間。)Noactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,iseverwasted.Ithasthepowertotransformlives,healwounds,andcreatearippleeffectofgoodnessthatspreadsfarbeyondwhatwecanimagine.(任何善舉,無論多么微小,都不會白費(fèi)。它有改變生活、治愈創(chuàng)傷的力量,并產(chǎn)生遠(yuǎn)超我們想象的善的漣漪效應(yīng)。)寫作示范第一篇Afewdayslater,George,thehomelessman,walkedintotheanimalprotectionsociety.Hiseyeswerefilledwithamixtureofapprehensionandhope.Davidimmediatelywenttogreethimwithawarmsmileandahandshake.Georgewasledtotheareawherethepuppieswereplaying.Assoonasthepuppiessawhim,theywaggedtheirtailsfuriouslyandboundedover,lickinghishands.TearswelledupinGeorge'seyesashesawhowhealthyandhappytheywere.HeturnedtoDavidandsaid,"Thankyou.I'vebeenworriedsickaboutthem."Davidpattedhisshoulderandsaid,"Youdidtherightthingbybringingthemhere.Youshowedgreatkindness."ThenGeorgeandDavidstartedlookingfornewhomesforthebabydogs.Theypostedpicturesandstoriesofthepuppiesonsocialmediaandlocalbulletinboards.Soon,therewasanoutpouringofinterest.Georgewasactivelyinvolvedintheselectionprocess,askingpotentialadoptersquestionsabouttheirlifestyleandtheirplansforthepuppies.Aftercarefulconsideration,theyfoundlovingfamiliesforeachofthepuppies.Onthedayoftheadoptions,Georgewastheretoseethepuppiesoff.Althoughitwasbittersweet,heknewtheyweregoingtoabetterlife.HelookedatDavidandsaid,"Thisisallbecauseofyouandthekindnessofthesepeople.I'llneverforgetit."第二篇Afewdayslater,George,thehomelessman,walkedintotheanimalprotectionsociety.Helookedaroundnervously,unsureofwhattoexpect.Davidrecognizedhiminstantlyandwalkedoverwithopenarms."Welcome,George!Thepuppiesaredoinggreat,"hesaid.Georgewastakentoseethepuppies,andhisfacelitupwhenhesawthem.Hecroucheddown,andthepuppiesclimbedalloverhim,yappingwithjoy.Georgefeltasenseofpeacewashoverhim.HethankedDavidagainandagainfortakingcareofthem.ThenGeorgeandDavidstartedlookingfornewhomesforthebabydogs.Theyworkedtogethertirelessly,makingphonecallsandarrangingmeetingswithpotentialadopters.Georgesharedhisownexperienceswiththepuppies,whichhelpedtheadoptersunderstandtheiruniquepersonalities.Finally,theyfoundsuitablehomesforallthepuppies.Georgewatchedaseachpuppyleftwiththeirnewfamilies,asmileonhisface.Herealizedthateveninhisdifficultsituation,hehadbeenabletomakeapositiveimpact.Ashelefttheanimalprotectionsociety,heknewthathehadmadetherightchoice,andthatkindnesstrulydoeshavethepowertochangelives.參考范文:Afewdayslater,George,thehomelessman,walkedintotheanimalprotectionsociety.Heintroducedhimselfastheguywhohadleftbehindthebabydogs.Thestaffwelcomedhimwar

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