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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ihavebeenblessedbymanyactsofkindnessthroughoutmylife.Buttheonethatstandsoutthemostwastheonethathappenedattheblacksmith(鐵匠)shopatOldSturbridgeVillage.Whenmysonwaslittle,itwasverycleartomethattherewassomethingdifferentabouthim.Aftercountlesstripstodifferentspecialistsandthepletionofextensivetesting,adiagnosisofaparticularchromosomal(染色體的)disorderwasmade.Hewasconstantlyinmotionandhadnosenseofdanger,requiringhiscaregiverswatchhiseverymovetopreventhimfromrunningawayorheadingintotraffic.Healsolovedstrangers,thinkingthateveryonewashispotentialbestfriend.Hegreetedeveryonewithahug.However,noonewaswillingtoacceptmyson’swellintendedembrace,especiallygiventhathelookedmucholderthanhisactualageyetactedmuchyounger.Althoughmysonwasstilltooyoungtorecognizewhenhewasbeingrejected,everyhurtfulword,unkindrefusal,orlookofpitybrokemyheart.Ihadstartedtobeafraidoftakinghimoutinpublic.Oneday,atthevillage,Iwalkedaroundholdingmyson’shand,readytoprotecthimfrombeinghurt.Aswestrolledalong,wepassedbyablacksmithshop.Therhythmicpoundingofthehammerandthesparksthatflewinalldirectionscaughtmyson’sattention.Theprocessofturningseeminglyworthlessmaterialsintovaluableandvisuallystunningpiecesthroughheating,hammering,andforging(鍛造)seemedlikemagictohim.Astheblacksmithpausedhisworkandwipedthesweatfromhisbrow,mysoncouldn’tcontainhiscuriosityanymore.Heranstraightovertotheblacksmith,wrappedhisarmsaroundtheman’slegs,andaskedifhecouldhaveatry.Myheartstoppedatthatmoment.Iexpectedthathe,likealmosteveryoneelsethatwehadencountered,wouldpushhimaway,mutteringsomethingaboutthisnotbeingpossible.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Whathedidnext,though,broughtmetotears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Whenthathourwasup,mysonproudlywalkedaway,withthepieceofironmedal.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:作者的兒子患有染色體疾病,行為舉止異于常人,喜愛擁抱陌生人卻總是遭拒,這讓作者內(nèi)心飽受煎熬,甚至害怕帶兒子外出。一次在村莊游玩,兒子被鐵匠鋪的打鐵場景吸引,徑直跑向鐵匠并請求嘗試打鐵,而作者已習(xí)慣他人對兒子的拒絕,滿心擔(dān)憂鐵匠會如他人一般。伏筆與回應(yīng):伏筆:兒子的特殊病癥使他愛擁抱陌生人卻常被拒。回應(yīng):鐵匠欣然接受兒子擁抱并給予溫暖互動,給予兒子難得的友好體驗。伏筆:兒子對鐵匠工作充滿好奇。回應(yīng):鐵匠讓兒子親身體驗打鐵過程,滿足其好奇心,使兒子收獲獨特經(jīng)歷。伏筆:作者因兒子常被拒而不愿帶他外出。回應(yīng):鐵匠的善意舉動讓作者看到希望,改變了她對兒子融入外界的態(tài)度。伏筆:鐵匠鋪打鐵場景吸引兒子?;貞?yīng):由此引發(fā)兒子與鐵匠后續(xù)的友好互動及打鐵體驗情節(jié)。伏筆:作者描述兒子需要時刻看護以防危險?;貞?yīng):鐵匠在兒子打鐵時給予適當(dāng)照看,保障其安全并使其順利參與。續(xù)寫要點:第一段:鐵匠滿臉笑容,輕輕抱起兒子,耐心地為他講解打鐵步驟,手把手地教他如何揮舞小錘子,兒子眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒,咯咯直笑。周圍游客看到這一幕,紛紛投來贊許的目光,作者感動得熱淚盈眶,心中滿是對鐵匠的感激。第二段:兒子高舉著鐵匠為他特制的鐵制獎?wù)?,像個小英雄般走在前面。此后的日子里,他常常興奮地向人講述這次打鐵經(jīng)歷。而作者也不再像以前那樣害怕帶兒子出門,因為這次經(jīng)歷讓她堅信,世界上總有善良之人,能給予特殊孩子包容與愛,讓他們也能擁有美好的回憶與成長機會。情感線:起初作者因兒子可能被拒而滿心憂慮,鐵匠接納兒子時轉(zhuǎn)為感動與驚喜,兒子體驗過程中作者心懷感恩,最后因兒子的收獲而欣慰并對未來充滿希望。故事線:兒子因患病在社交中受挫,于鐵匠鋪主動請求打鐵,鐵匠善意回應(yīng)并給予體驗機會,兒子結(jié)束后帶著獎?wù)码x開,此次經(jīng)歷給母子帶來積極影響。主旨升華句:Kindnessisthebridgethatconnectstheheartsofthedifferentandtheordinary.(善良是連接特殊與平凡心靈的橋梁。)Inaworldofindifference,asingleactofkindnesscanbethewarmestshelterforthevulnerable.(在冷漠的世界里,一個善舉可能是弱勢群體最溫暖的庇護所。)Truekindnessknowsnoboundaries,embracingthespecialoneswithopenarms.(真正的善良無界限,張開雙臂接納特殊群體。)Thelightofkindnessshinesbrightestwhenitilluminatesthepathofthelessfortunate.(當(dāng)善良之光照亮不幸者的道路時,它最為閃耀。)Akindheartisakeythatunlocksthedoorofacceptanceforthedifferentlyabled.(一顆善良的心是為殘障人士開啟接納之門的鑰匙。)寫作示范一:Whathedidnext,though,broughtmetotears.Theblacksmithchuckled,scoopedupmysoninhisstrongarms,andsaid,“Sure,littlebuddy.Letmeshowyou.”Hethenpatientlydemonstratedtheartofforging,guidingmyson'ssmallhandstoholdthehammerandstriketheirongently.Mysonwasoverjoyed,hislaughterfillingtheair.Theonlookerswerealsocharmedbythisheartwarmingscene.Istoodthere,tearsstreamingdownmyface,deeplytouchedbytheblacksmith'skindness.Whenthathourwasup,mysonproudlywalkedaway,withthepieceofironmedal.Fordaysafterthat,hecouldn'tstoptalkingabouthisamazingadventureattheblacksmithshop.Andforme,thisexperiencebecameaturningpoint.Inolongerdreadedtakinghimout,knowingthattherewerekindsoulsliketheblacksmithwhocouldmakemyson'sworldalittlebrighterandmoreinclusive.寫作示范二:Whathedidnext,though,broughtmetotears.Theblacksmithgrinned,pickedupmysonandsaid,“Ofcourseyoucan,pal.”Hespentthenextwhileexplainingandlettingmysontakepartintheforgingprocess.Myson'sfacewaslitupwithpuredelightashemadehisownlittlemarksontheiron.Thepeoplearoundusallsmiled,andIwassomovedthatIcouldhardlyspeak.ThiswasamomentofpurekindnessthatIwouldneverforget.Whenthathourwasup,mysonproudlywalkedaway,withthepieceofironmedal.Hecarriediteverywhere,showingitofftoanyonewhowouldlook.Thisencountergavehimanewfoundconfidenceandjoy.Forme,itwasareminderthatkindnesscanbreakdownbarriersandcreatebeautifulmemoriesevenforthosewhoaredifferent.Itmademebelievethatwithmoresuchkindnessintheworld,mysoncouldhaveafulfillinglifefilledwithloveandacceptance.【答案】范文Whathedidnext,though,broughtmetotears.Insteadofpushingmysonawaylikealmosteveryoneelse,hekneltdownandgentlyreturnedahug.Thatsweetmanthenlookedatmewithakindexpression,andaskedifitwouldbeokayformysontohelphimwithhiswork.Inoddedthroughmytears.Theblacksmithsmiledwarmlyandhandedmysonasmallhammer.Heremainedpatient,answeringmyson’sincessantquestionsandspendingthenexthourallowingmysonto“help”himasheworkedtheforge.Iwatchedastheyhammeredandforgedtogether,witnessing
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