高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)男孩與愛犬：失而復(fù)得的溫暖1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Tomisaspecialchild.Eversincehewaslittle,dogshavebeenhisgreatestpassion.Heoftengrowled(低吼)andbarkedandsometimesmovedaroundthehouseonallfours.HisparentsbroughtinalittlebrownfemaledognamedLynn.Tomwasoncloudnine.Oneday,thislittleboy,togetherwithLynn,wassittingquietlydownbythesideofthestreetwhensuddenlyagiantdogwalkedacrosshim.Hewasalittlesurprisedandstartedscreamingasloudlyashecould!AllofthisfrightenedLynnawayimmediately.Tom’sparentstriedtoseewhatthechanceswereofLynncominghomeonherown.Butfivedayslater,therewasstillnosignofLynn.Theboydidn’tjusthavetearsstreamingdownhischeeks—hisparentsweresaddenedtoo.4續(xù)寫原文Thewoodsbehindtheirhomestretchedforover50miles!Togetherwiththeirneighbors,theysearchedforoveramonth.ButLynnwasgone.Tom’sparentswantedtochooseanewpuppyforhim.ButnodogcouldreplaceLynnforhim.Tomwasnotthesameboy.Helockedhimselfinhisroom.Heseemedtohavelosthislovefordogs.Hecouldnotfocushisattentiononhisclassessohedidn’twanttogotoschool.Hewouldeasilygetangrywithpeoplearoundhim.Tomchangedfromahappy,smilingboytoanupsetandannoyingkid.5續(xù)寫原文Tom’sparentswantedhimtostayhomeandhehadbeenstudyingathomeeversince.Hisparentsaccompaniedhimalmosteveryday,butstayinghomedidn’thelpmuch.Theboy’smotherworriedalot.Onerainyafternoon,shesawhimstaringoutthewindow.“ImissLynnsomuch.Iwonderifeverythingisokaywithher?”Ithadbeenalongtimesincehisbeloveddogranaway,butTom’sdespairwasasgreatasthedayithappened.Dayslater,Tomwalkedoutthefrontdoorwithhisheaddownandsatbythesideofthestreet.6段首句Paragraph1：Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.Paragraph2：Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了湯姆從小愛狗，父母給他帶回小狗林恩，他欣喜若狂。一次外出，巨型犬驚走林恩，此后五天毫無蹤跡，眾人苦尋一月無果。湯姆大受打擊，把自己鎖在房里，厭學(xué)且易怒，父母讓他居家學(xué)習(xí)也無濟(jì)于事。一個(gè)雨天，湯姆思念林恩，幾天后他低落出門，意外的是，一只大狗出現(xiàn)，竟是林恩，它還帶湯姆走進(jìn)樹林里的小窩，湯姆重拾快樂，重返校園。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.一只巨大的棕色狗穿過街道，停在了哭泣的男孩面前。湯姆淚眼朦朧中，恍惚以為是幻覺，可那狗眼中熟悉的親昵讓他瞬間清醒，真的是林恩！湯姆激動(dòng)得撲上前，雙手緊緊抱住林恩，泣不成聲：“林恩，你終于回來了，我好想你！”林恩也不停地蹭著他，喉嚨里發(fā)出嗚嗚聲，似在訴說著這些日子的思念與漂泊。湯姆仔細(xì)端詳，發(fā)現(xiàn)林恩身形壯實(shí)了些，身上雖有些許傷痕，卻無損此刻重逢的喜悅。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.林恩舔了舔湯姆的臉頰，接著緩緩走向樹林邊緣。湯姆滿心疑惑，趕忙跟上。走進(jìn)樹林，只見一處隱蔽角落有個(gè)簡易小窩，旁邊散落著些小動(dòng)物骨頭，湯姆瞬間明白，林恩這些日子獨(dú)自在野外求生?？粗矍皥鼍?，湯姆眼眶濕潤，他抱緊林恩，心中滿是心疼與慶幸。此后，湯姆仿若重生，笑容重回臉上，他重返校園，學(xué)習(xí)勁頭十足，對(duì)狗狗的愛也愈發(fā)深沉。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.Throughhistearyeyes,Tomthoughtitwasahallucinationatfirst.Butthefamiliaraffectioninthedog’seyeswokehimupinstantly.ItwasLynn!Tomrushedforwardexcitedlyandhuggedhertightly,cryingbitterly.“Lynn,you’rebackatlast.Imissedyousomuch!”Lynnkeptrubbingagainsthim,whiningasiftellingherlongingandwanderingthesedays.TomobservedcarefullyandfoundLynnhadgrownstronger.Althoughthereweresomescratchesonherbody,itdidn’tlessenthejoyofreunion.14范文呈現(xiàn)Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.Tom,fullofdoubts,hurriedtofollow.Enteringthewoods,hesawasimpledeninahiddencorner,withsomesmallanimalbonesscatteredbesideit.TomunderstoodimmediatelythatLynnhadbeensurvivinginthewildalone.Lookingatthescene,Tom’seyesbecamemoist.HehuggedLynntightly,hisheartfullofheartacheandrelief.Afterthat,Tomwaslikeareborn.Hissmilereturned,hewentbacktoschoolwithfullenthusiasm,andhislovefordogsgrewevendeeper.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.Tom,hisvisionblurredbytears,initiallymistookitforamirage.However,theunmistakableglimmeroffamiliarityinthedog’seyesjoltedhimbacktoreality.ItwasLynn!Withasurgeofemotion,Tomflunghimselfforward,enfoldingthedoginatightembrace,hissobsechoingintheair.“Lynn,you’vereturned!I’vemissedyoudreadfully.”Lynnnuzzledagainsthim,hersoftwhinesseeminglyrecountingthetalesofherabsence.Despiteafewscratchesmarringhercoat,thesheerelationoftheirreunioneclipsedall.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.Tom,consumedbycuriosity,hastenedtofollow.Deepwithinthesylvandepths,arudimentarydencameintoview,accompaniedbyremnantsofsmallprey.Instantly,TomgraspedLynn’ssolitarystruggleforsurvival.Overwhelmed,heclutchedhercloser,hisheartamelangeofanguishandgratitude.Fromthatmomenton,Tom’sformerselfreemerged.His