書面表達一經(jīng)典精講（下）主講老師：林斌北京八十中學英語高級老師開篇語人物傳記Lifeofaperson題一：HenryNormanBethune__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LifeofBethune…bebornin/on……bebornin/on……enteruniversity……receivemedicaldegree……give…tohelp……setup……work…as…save……diefrom……beburied……beconsideredto…PersonalinformationHardworkandsuccessEvaluation/OpinionsLifeofBethuneNormanBethunewasaCanadiandoctor.HewasbornonMarch3rd,1890,inasmalltownofCanada.HeenteredUniversityofTorontoandPerPersonalinformationAftergraduationBethunemovedtoMontrealandgavefreemedicalcaretohelppoorpeoplethere.Bethunealsosetupafreeartschoolforchildren.BethuneleftforChinain1938.HeworkedselflesslyasadoctorandsavedmanyChinesesoldiers.Dr.Bethunediedfrombloodpoisoningin1939andwasburiedinShijiazhuang.HardworkandsuccessHardworkandsuccessDr.Bethuneisconsideredtobeadevotedandselflessinternationaldoctor.Evaluation/OpinionsEvaluation/OpinionsLayoutLayoutParagraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph1:Paragraph2:Paragraph3:PersonalinformationHardworkandsuccessEvaluation/Opinionsbebornin/onenteruniversityreceive…degreegive…tohelp….setup………He/Sheisconsideredtobe…題二：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________題三：依據(jù)提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。1.楊利偉，38歲，遼寧人，中國空軍飛行員。2.他于2003年10月15日乘神舟5號載人宇宙飛船進入太空，成為我國的第一位宇航員。他在太空飛行了21個小時，繞(orbit)地球14圈后順當返回地面。3.中國是繼美國和俄羅斯之后第三個能夠成功地放射(launchn.&v.)和回收飛船的國家。標志著我國空間載人工程的巨大成功。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________題四：基本信息：★1960年12月誕生在香港；有音樂天賦；★1984年出第一張專輯，在后來的二十幾年的歌壇生涯中，出版很多專輯并在國內(nèi)外舉辦多場演唱會?！鞍閭H”成了家喻戶曉的歌。演唱會狀況：★首都體育館theCapitalStadium★座無虛席；觀眾齊唱；整場氣氛吵鬧個人感受：自擬DearJim,Howarethingsgoing?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lihua題五：Justguessthemandescribedinthefollowingsentences！Bornonthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,hewasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.Showinginterestinmusic,hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3.Whenhisfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000,hegottheworld’sattention.Hispopularitysky-rocketed(急速上升),andhehasreceivedmanyawardsforhissongs.HisownuniqueChineseR&Bstyleisunparalleledbyothersandhecontinuestomakebreakthroughsashetakesrisksinattemptingnewthings.①①Bornonthe18thofJanuary,1979inTaiwan,JayChou,afamoussinger,wasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood.分詞結構同位語盡量用分詞短語、同位語結構，使文章簡潔，通順.省略結構省略結構②Showinginterestinmusic,hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3.留意盡量用非謂語動詞,使文章精煉。狀語從句狀語從句③WhenJay’sfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000,hegottheworld’sattention.④Hispopularitysky-rocketed(急速上升),whichallowedhimtoreceivemanyawardsforhissongs.定語從句定語從句盡量用復合句,倒裝,非限性定語從句等，潤色文章。⑤HisownuniqueChineseR&Bstyleisunparalleledbyothersandhecontinuestomakebreakthroughsashetakesrisksinattemptingnewthings.留意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組。名師寄語書面表達一經(jīng)典精講（下）講義參考答案人物傳記題一：LifeofapersonNormanBethunewasaCanadiandoctor.HewasbornonMarch3rd,1890,inasmalltownofCanada.HeenteredUniversityofAftergraduationBethunemovedtoMontrealandgavefreemedicalcaretohelppoorpeoplethere.Bethunealsosetupafreeartschoolforchildren.BethuneleftforChinain1938.HeworkedselflesslyasadoctorandsavedmanyChinesesoldiers.Dr.Bethunediedfrombloodpoisoningin1939andwasburiedinShijiazhuang.Dr.Bethuneisconsideredtobeadevotedandselflessinternationaldoctor.題二：TheChinesewillneverforgettheday,August28,2004,whenLiuXianggotthegoldmedalof110mhurdlesin28thOlympicGames.Notmerelydidhebeatallthewell-knownopponentsathomeandabroad,buthewasthefirstonewhofinishedthematchaswell,especiallyheonlyspent12.91secondswhichwas0.03secondsfasterthantheformerworldrecord.LiuXiangwasbornonJune13,1983inaworker’sfamily.Whenhewasjustalittleboy,hewassenttothechildren’ssportsschoolbyhisparents.Therewasnodenyingthathewasaluckyboy,becausehewasfoundbyCoachSunHaiping.Heisagoodboythathealwaystakesagreatmanypresentstorespecthisparentswheneverhecomesbackhome.Famousasheis,heisalwaysfriendlytohisneighborsasusual.SogreatisLiuXiangthatheiscalledasournationalhero.ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatChinahasagreatathletecalledLiuXiang.LiuXiangsaidthathewoulddohisutmosttoachievehisanothergoalinlife---thechampionintheBeijing2008Olympics.SuchisLiuXiang,amanwithstrongmindandapromisingfuture.題三：YangLiwei,borninLiaoningOneOctober15ChinalauncheditsShenzhouVmannedspacecraft,withastronautYangLiweiaboardandYanghasbecomeChina’sfirstastronaut.Yangandhisspacecraftorbitedtheearth14timesduringabout21hoursbeforehesafelylandedinnorthChinathenextday.ThesuccessfullaunchandreturnofthespacecraftmadeChinathethirdcountryinspaceafterRussiaandtheUnitedStates,andthismarkedthegreatsuccessofthemannedspaceprogramofChina.題四：DearJim,Howarethingsgoing?OnNovember21st,2008I