Unit1TeenagelifeReadingforWritingALetterofAdvice1.WhatisWorriedFriend'sproblem?2.WhatareSusan'ssuggestions?1.Readingforcontent1.WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?2.WhatsuggestionsdoesSusanLuogivetoWorriedFriend?WorriedFriendisworriedthathisorherfriend,ChenLei,playscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.1)Talktoher/hisfriendabouthisbehaviour.2)Encouragehis/herfriendtotrynewhobbies.3.Besidessuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherletter?Shealsotalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddiction.SuggestionReasonTrylisteningtoyourparents.Invitethemoutforsomethingtoeat.Maybetheyaren’tlisteningtoyoubecauseyoudon’tlistentothem.Thiswillgiveyouachancetospeaktothemwithoutdistractions.

______

feels________,

because______________________________.

Hi,Easy！Afterenteringtheseniorhighschool,IhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish,I'msoworriedthatIcan'tfallasleepatnight.Pleasehelpme!TomTomworriedhehasdifficultyinlearningEnglishAnalyse(審題)

昨天收到我的學(xué)生Tom的一條語音信息，信息中他提到進入高中后，在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他感到很苦惱。請幫我給他回一封建議信，幫其解決困難,促進學(xué)習(xí)。內(nèi)容：1.表示理解關(guān)心；

2.提出具體建議及理由；

3.表達希望。注意：詞數(shù)80左右。審題1.Receiver(收信人)：______.2.Style(題材)：______________.3.Person(人稱)：_____________.4.Tense(時態(tài))：_______________.5.Content(內(nèi)容)

：____________.TomAletterofadvicethefirstpersonsimplepresenttenseunderstanding,adviceandreasons,hopeBuildthestructureandoutlineBeginningBodyEndingShowyour

.Giveyour

ontheproblem.Finishtheletterwithyour

.understandingadvice＆reasonshope1.DoyouthinkMsLuo’sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?Perhapstheadviceisuseful,becauseitisalwaysgoodtotalktoafriendabouthisorherproblemsandofferadvice.2.Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?IwouldtellChenLeithatheshouldspendhistimemoreproductivelywithaneyeonhisfuture.Forexample,insteadofplayingcomputergames,hecouldlearncomputerprogramming.Whoknows?Hemightbecomeagreatfigureinthatfieldwhenhe’solder.2.Readingforstructureandlanguagefeatures1.Whatpartsareincludedintheletterofadvice?2.Besidessuggestions,whatelsedoesSusansayinherletter?3.Readingforlanguagefeature.AIknowwhattheproblemis.BIunderstandhowyoufeel.CThisismyadviceandreason(s).DIthinkmyadvicewillhelp.WhatexpressionsdoesSuanLuousetomakesuggestions?Irecommendthat...Ithinkyoushould...Whynot...ReadforlanguagerEadtogether!

Whatexpressionsdoestheadviserusetoshowherunderstanding?Iunderstandquitewellthat...Para1Para2Para3I`mlookingforwardtoyourreply.FindoutwhatexpressionsMs.Luousetodescribetheproblem,makesuggestionsandexpresshope.Andthinkofmoreexpressionstoexpressunderstandingandmakesuggestions.1)Usefulexpressionsusedintheletter:Iunderstandquitewellthat…Irecommendthat…Ithinkyoushould…Whynot…?Iamsure…2)Moreexpressionstoexpressunderstanding:I’msorrytohear/know/learnthat…Iknowhowitfeelsto…Iknowyoudidn’tmeanto…Ithappenstoeveryone.Everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong.3)Moreexpressionstomakesuggestions:

You’dbetter…Whydon’tyou…?Howabout…?I’dliketosuggest…Whatdoyouthink…?Myadviceis/wouldbe…Itmightbeagoodideato…Reading10September2018DearXuTing,Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Itiscommonforteenagerstofeellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparents.Ithinkyoucantryjoiningavolunteergroupthathelpsotherpeople.Thiswillgiveyouachancetomeetandbearoundothers.Itwillalsohelpyourealisethatyouarenotaloneinhavingproblemsandthatmanyotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.Helpingotherpeoplealsomakesusfeelbetter.Youcanalsoconnectwithyourparentsonline.Justbecauseyourparentsarefaraway,itdoesn’tmeanyoucan’ttalktothem.I’msurethatyou’llmakenewfriendsandgetachancetospeaktoyourparentsmoreoften.Thiswillhelpdriveawayyourloneliness.Bestwishes,SusanLuoAnalyse(審題)structurelanguagecontentoutlinedraftpolishHowtowritealetterofadvice?SummaryC.

提出建議及原因

（Give

adviceandreason(s)）

Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatsbdo…Ithinkyoushoud/hadbetterdosthWhynotdo…?/Whydon’tyoudo…?/Whataboutdoing…?Itisuseful/helpful/important/necessary…foryoutodo…Itwillcertainlyhelpalottodosth.IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...常用句式usefulexpressionsD.表達信心/祝愿（Expressconfidence/wishes）

I'msurethat...Ihopeyouwillfindmyadvicehelpful.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Thiswillhelpyou....常用句式usefulexpressionsDiscussionReadingforWriting練一練15September2020DearEric,Youwrotethatyourparentswon'tlistenwhenyoutellthemthings.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouarealittledisappointedand

upsetandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourparentscan'tunderstandyou.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyour