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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。UndoubtedlyMotherNatureisalwaysattractivetokids.Inourchildhood,howoftendidweturnadeafeartoourparents’advice?Veryoften!Thus,welandedourselvesinasituationwherewegreatlyregrettedouractofnothavinglistenedtotheadviceofthewise.SuchanunforgettableexperienceIhadattheageof7gavemeaninvaluablelesson,afterwhichIdeeplyunderstoodwhymygentlemotherwasrepeatingtheboringsuggestionsandIwouldtrytotakehersuggestionsseriously.Inmychildhood,Iwassocrazyaboutnaturethatevenplayingamongthecolorfulflowersinourgardencouldmakemyday.Ourhousewasnexttothewoodswhichhadalwaysstirredup(激起)greatcuriosityinmeinwantingtofindoutwhatwaswithin.EverytimeIsawfascinatingbutterfliesdancingfromthewoods,mycuriositygrew.Butmymotherdidn’tlikemewanderingoffonmyownandalwaysensuredthatIwaswithinhersight.Evenifsheallowedmetoexplorethesurroundingareaonmyown,itwasonlytobesomewherenearthehouse.Beingascuriousasthecat,Ialwaysdesiredtoexplorethewoods.Itseemedasifmymotherhadunderstoodmydesire,soshehadwarmedmeonlotsofoccasionsnevertoenterthewoodsalone.“Mom,canIgooutandplayinthegarden?”Iasked.“Sure,”shewouldreplyeachtime.“Kate,youcanplayinthegardenbutyoumustpromisemeonething—onlywhenI’mwithyoucanyougointothewoods.Therearenocasesofanimalattacksonhumans,butit’sstilldangerousforalittlekidlikeyou.It’stooeasytogetlostinthewoods.”“Sure,you’vesaidthatmanytimes!”Iansweredwithoutpatienceatherrepeatedreminders.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了作者小時(shí)候?qū)Υ笞匀怀錆M(mǎn)熱愛(ài),尤其對(duì)家旁邊的樹(shù)林充滿(mǎn)好奇。母親擔(dān)心孩子安全,多次告誡孩子不能獨(dú)自進(jìn)入樹(shù)林,盡管孩子每次都不耐煩地回應(yīng),但母親仍不斷提醒。故事山分析目標(biāo):“我”渴望探索樹(shù)林。阻礙:母親不允許“我”獨(dú)自進(jìn)入樹(shù)林,多次提醒樹(shù)林危險(xiǎn)。努力:“我”試圖說(shuō)服母親讓“我”進(jìn)樹(shù)林,無(wú)果后決定獨(dú)自前往。結(jié)果:“我”在樹(shù)林中迷路,陷入恐慌。意外:母親及時(shí)出現(xiàn),找到了“我”。轉(zhuǎn)折:“我”從這次經(jīng)歷中認(rèn)識(shí)到母親的話(huà)是正確的,不再對(duì)母親的提醒不耐煩。結(jié)局:“我”理解了母親的苦心,以后會(huì)認(rèn)真聽(tīng)母親的建議。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)伏筆:母親多次提醒不能獨(dú)自進(jìn)入樹(shù)林,有危險(xiǎn)且容易迷路?;貞?yīng):“我”獨(dú)自進(jìn)入樹(shù)林后迷路,驗(yàn)證了母親的話(huà)。伏筆:“我”對(duì)樹(shù)林充滿(mǎn)好奇,每次看到蝴蝶從樹(shù)林飛出,好奇心就增長(zhǎng)?;貞?yīng):好奇心驅(qū)使“我”在一個(gè)早晨獨(dú)自走進(jìn)樹(shù)林。伏筆:母親不喜歡“我”獨(dú)自亂逛,總是確?!拔摇痹谒囊暰€(xiàn)范圍內(nèi)。回應(yīng):母親發(fā)現(xiàn)“我”不在視線(xiàn)范圍內(nèi),開(kāi)始尋找“我”,最終在樹(shù)林里找到。伏筆:“我”對(duì)母親的反復(fù)提醒沒(méi)有耐心。回應(yīng):迷路后“我”后悔沒(méi)有聽(tīng)母親的話(huà),意識(shí)到母親的提醒是重要的。伏筆:母親說(shuō)雖然沒(méi)有動(dòng)物攻擊人類(lèi)的案例,但對(duì)小孩仍危險(xiǎn)。回應(yīng):“我”在樹(shù)林里不僅因迷路感到恐懼,還擔(dān)心可能遇到危險(xiǎn)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)(兩段)第一段:著重描寫(xiě)“我”獨(dú)自進(jìn)入樹(shù)林后的情景,如看到的景色、內(nèi)心的想法和感受,以及發(fā)現(xiàn)自己迷路后的驚慌失措。第二段:描寫(xiě)母親找到“我”時(shí)的場(chǎng)景,“我”的反應(yīng),以及母親的安慰和教導(dǎo),最后表達(dá)“我”的感悟和改變。情感線(xiàn)起初,“我”對(duì)母親的提醒不耐煩,充滿(mǎn)好奇想要探索樹(shù)林。進(jìn)入樹(shù)林后,“我”興奮又好奇,隨著迷路,恐懼和后悔逐漸占據(jù)內(nèi)心。母親出現(xiàn)時(shí),“我”感到驚喜和安心,最后對(duì)母親充滿(mǎn)感激,理解了母親的苦心,決定以后認(rèn)真聽(tīng)母親的建議。故事線(xiàn)“我”因好奇獨(dú)自進(jìn)入樹(shù)林?!拔摇痹跇?shù)林里欣賞景色,沉浸在探索的快樂(lè)中?!拔摇卑l(fā)現(xiàn)自己迷路,開(kāi)始驚慌失措。母親在樹(shù)林中尋找“我”。母親找到“我”,對(duì)“我”進(jìn)行安慰和教導(dǎo)?!拔摇崩斫饬四赣H的苦心,有了深刻的感悟。主旨升華句Fromthisexperience,Itrulyrealizedthatparents'adviceisalwaysfullofloveandcare,andweshouldcherishandfollowit.Thisunforgettableincidenttaughtmethatbehindparents'repeatedremindersliestheirdeep-seatedconcernforourwell-being.Icametounderstandthattheseeminglyboringwordsfromourparentsareactuallyprecioustreasuresthatguideusawayfrompotentialdangers.Throughthisadventure,Ilearnedthatlisteningtoourparentsisnotonlyasignofrespectbutalsoawaytoprotectourselves.Thiseventmademeawarethatparents'wisdomislikealighthouseinthedark,leadingustotherightpathoflife.寫(xiě)作示范一However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Whenmymotherwasbusywithhousework,Iquietlyslippedoutofthehouseandmademywaytowardsthewoods.AsIsteppedintothewoods,Iwasimmediatelyattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Thetalltrees,thecolorfulwildflowers,andthesingingbirdsmademefeellikeIhadenteredafairy-taleworld.Iwalkeddeeperanddeeper,forgettingallaboutmymother'swarnings.Butsoon,IrealizedwithhorrorthatIcouldn'tfindthewayback.PanicseizedmeasIranaround,tryingtofindafamiliarpath,butallinvain.“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.Iburstintotearsandrushedtowardsher.“Mom,I'msosorry.Ishouldhavelistenedtoyou.”Mymotherhuggedmetightlyandsaidsoftly,“It'sokay,honey.I'mjustgladIfoundyou.Remember,Ialwayswanttokeepyousafe.”Inodded,promisingmyselfthatIwouldneverignoreheradviceagain.Fromthatdayon,Itrulyunderstoodtheloveandcarehiddeninmymother'swords.寫(xiě)作示范二However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Takingadvantageofthemomentwhenmymotherwasoccupied,Isneakedintothewoods.Thefreshairandthemysteriousatmospheremademeextremelyexcited.Ichasedthebutterflies,pickedupthefallenleaves,andenjoyedmyselftothefullest.Butastimepassed,Ifoundmyselfsurroundedbystrangetreesandcouldn'tfigureoutthedirection.FearcreptintomyheartasIrealizedIwaslost.Ishoutedforhelp,butonlytheechoofmyownvoicereplied.“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.IwasoverjoyedandrantowardsherasfastasIcould.“Mom,I'msoscared.Iwon'tdothisagain.”Mymotherstrokedmyhairgentlyandsaid,“Dear,Iwassoworriedaboutyou.Yousee,it'sreallydangeroustobeherealone.”Ilookedatmymotherwithtearsinmyeyes,knowingthatherwarningswereformyowngood.Sincethen,Ihavealwayslistenedattentivelytomymother'swords,understandingthattheyarefilledwithherdeeplove.參考范文However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Isummonedupmycourageanddecidedtotakeachance.HardlyhadIenteredthewoodswhenIwastotallyattractedbythesight.Thewanderingclouds,thebloomingflowersandthevigoroustreesallkeptmespellbound.Atthesightofabeautifulbutterfly,Itiptoedalongthepath,bentover,cuppedmyhandsgentlyanddancedwithitdownthetrack.Timeflewan
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