高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)跨越時(shí)光的溫暖：愛的禮物1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Hudsonis8yearsoldnow.Hehasafavoritelittletoy,acrochetedlittleghostnamedCasper.Thetoywasgiventohimbyhisgrandmotheronhis5thbirthday,andhehastreasurediteversince,HudsonlovesCaspersomuchthatheoftenbringsitwithhimwhereverhegoes.HeeventalkstoCasperasifit’shisbestfriend.Oneday,whileplayingwithCasper,HudsonturnedtohismotherRuthiewithaworriedlookonhisface.“Mommy,ifIshouldgetCasperlost,Iwouldcrysomuchandbesadforever,”heconfessed,tearswellingupinhiseyes.Ruthiecouldn’thelpbutsmileatherson’sinnocenceandaffectionforhislittletoy.Shegentlyreassuredhim,“Youhaven’tlostCasperyet,sweetheart.Youtakegoodcareofit,andI’msureyouwon’tloseit.Butevenifyoudo,rememberthatI’llalwaysbeheretocomfortyou.”4續(xù)寫原文CuriositysparkedinHudson’seyesashelistenedtohismother’swords.Helookedupatherwithaseriousexpressionandasked,“Mommy,haveyoueverlostatoy?”Lookingatherlovelykid,Ruthiesharedherstorywithherson.Whenshewassixyearsold,herworldturnedupsidedownwhenherfathertragicallypassedaway.Theirfamilywasintrouble,andtheyfacedfinancialstruggles.Ruthie’smotherhadtotakeupoddjobstomakeendsmeet,andtheyhadtomovefrequentlytosavemoney.Duringoneofhermoves,shefoundthateveryoneofherfavoritegirltoyswasmissingincludingMolly,anAmericanGirldoll.Everywhereshewent,shewouldbringthedollandshewasobsessedwithit,Afterhearinghismother’sstory,theboyhuggedhismothertightly,withoutsayinganything.5段首句Paragraph1:Daysturnedintoweeks,andsoonitwasNewYear’sDay.Paragraph2:Ruthiecarefullyunwrappedthegiftbox.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析88歲的哈德森有一個(gè)心愛的小玩具，是奶奶在他5歲生日時(shí)送給他的鉤織小幽靈，名叫卡斯珀。他非常珍惜這個(gè)玩具，無論去哪里都帶著它，還常常和它說話，把它當(dāng)作最好的朋友。有一天，哈德森一臉擔(dān)憂地向媽媽露絲吐露心聲，害怕自己會弄丟卡斯珀，要是真丟了，他會傷心哭泣很久。露絲被兒子的天真和對玩具的喜愛打動，溫柔地安慰他，還表示即便真丟了，自己也會一直陪伴他、安慰他。哈德森好奇地問媽媽是否丟過玩具，露絲便向兒子講述了自己的故事。她6歲時(shí)，父親突然去世，家庭陷入困境，經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù)。母親為了維持生計(jì)，不得不打零工，一家人也為了省錢頻繁搬家。在一次搬家過程中，她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己所有心愛的玩具都不見了，其中包括她癡迷的美國女孩玩偶莫莉。哈德森聽完后，緊緊地抱住了媽媽，沒有說話。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Daysturnedintoweeks,andsoonitwasNewYear’sDay.日子一天天過去，很快就到了元旦。哈德森一直惦記著媽媽丟失玩偶的事情，他想為媽媽做點(diǎn)什么。于是，他偷偷地把自己積攢了很久的零花錢拿了出來，還利用課余時(shí)間幫鄰居們做一些力所能及的小事情，比如幫忙遛狗、打掃院子，賺了一些額外的報(bào)酬。經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的努力，他終于攢夠了錢，去商店挑選了一個(gè)和媽媽描述的莫莉非常相似的美國女孩玩偶。元旦那天，哈德森懷著激動又緊張的心情，把包裝精美的禮物盒遞給了媽媽。他的眼睛里閃爍著期待的光芒，對媽媽說：“媽媽，新年快樂！這是給您的禮物，希望您會喜歡?！?0續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Ruthiecarefullyunwrappedthegiftbox.露絲小心翼翼地拆開禮物盒。當(dāng)她看到里面那個(gè)漂亮的美國女孩玩偶時(shí)，淚水瞬間涌上了眼眶。她簡直不敢相信自己的眼睛，這個(gè)玩偶和她小時(shí)候丟失的莫莉太像了。她抬起頭，看著兒子充滿期待的眼神，一把將他抱進(jìn)懷里，緊緊地?fù)肀е?。露絲哽咽著說：“寶貝，這是我收到過的最珍貴的禮物，謝謝你，你真的太貼心了?！惫律_心地笑了，他說：“媽媽，我不想讓您再因?yàn)閬G失莫莉而難過，希望這個(gè)玩偶能讓您開心起來。”從那以后，這個(gè)玩偶成為了露絲最寶貴的珍藏，每當(dāng)看到它，她就會想起兒子對自己深深的愛，而這份愛也讓他們的母子關(guān)系更加親密無間。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Daysturnedintoweeks,andsoonitwasNewYear’sDay.Hudsonhadbeenconstantlythinkingabouthismother'slostdoll.Hewasdeterminedtodosomethingforher.So,hesecretlytookoutallthepocketmoneyhehadsavedforalongtime.Inaddition,hespenthissparetimedoingsomesmallandhelpfulthingsfortheneighbors,suchaswalkingthedogsandcleaningtheyards,toearnsomeextramoney.Afteraperiodofhardwork,hefinallysavedenoughmoneyandwenttothestoretopickoutanAmericanGirldollthatwasverysimilartotheMollyhismotherhaddescribed.OnNewYear'sDay,withaheartfullofexcitementandnervousness,Hudsonhandedthebeautifullywrappedgiftboxtohismother.Hiseyeswereshiningwithanticipationashesaid,"Mom,HappyNewYear!Thisisagiftforyou.Ihopeyou'lllikeit."13范文呈現(xiàn)Ruthiecarefullyunwrappedthegiftbox.WhenshesawthebeautifulAmericanGirldollinside,tearswelledupinhereyesinaninstant.Shecouldhardlybelievehereyes.ThisdollwassomuchliketheMollyshehadlostwhenshewasachild.Shelookedupatherson'sexpectanteyesandpulledhimintoherarms,hugginghimtightly.Ruthiechokedbackhertearsandsaid,"Honey,thisisthemostpreciousgiftI'veeverreceived.Thankyousomuch.You'resothoughtful."Hudsonsmiledhappilyandsaid,"Mom,Idon'twantyoutobesadaboutlosingMollyanymore.Ihopethisdollcanmakeyouhappy."Fromthenon,thisdollbecameRuthie'smostprecioustreasure.Whenevershesawit,shewouldthinkofherson'sdeeploveforher,andthislovemadetheirmother-sonrelationshipevencloser.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Daysrolledintoweeks,andbeforetheyknewit,NewYear'sDayhadarrived.Hudsonhadbeenpreoccupiedwithhismother'sstoryofthelostdolleversincesheshareditwithhim.Hewasdeterminedtobringaglimmerofjoybackintoherlifeandmakeupforthesadnessshehadfeltallthoseyearsago.So,hedugdeepintohispiggybank,retrievingeverylastcentofhislong-savedpocketmoney.Additionally,hespenthisafter-schoolhoursdoingoddjobsfortheneighbors.Hewalkedtheirdogs,swepttheirdriveways,andevenhelpedwithsomelightgardening.Witheachsmalltaskcompleted,hissavingsgrew.Finally,afterweeksofhardworkanddedication,hehadamassedenoughmoneytomakehisdreamareality.Hemadehiswaytothetoystore,hiseyesscanningtheshelvesuntilhefoundtheperfectdoll.ItwasanAmericanGirldollthatboreastrikingresemblancetotheMollyhismotherhaddescribed.OnNewYear'sDay,hisheartpoundingwithamixofexcitementandnervousness,Hudsonpresentedtheexquisitelywrappedgiftboxtohismother.Hiseyessparkledwithanticipationashesaid,"Mom,HappyNewYear!Thisisforyou.Ihopeyouloveit."15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Ruthietookthegiftboxfromherson'shands,herfingerstremblingslightlywithamixofcuriosityandexcitement.Shebegantocarefullyunwrapthepaper,hermovementsdeliberateandslow.Asthelastpieceofwrappingfellaway,shecaughtsightofthedollinside.Herbreathcaughtinherthroat,andhereyesfilledwithtearsofdisbeliefandjoy.Itwasasifthepasthadcomefullcircle,andthelostMollyhadfinallyfoundherwaybackhome.ShelookedupatHudson,hervisionblurredbytears,andpulledhimintoatightembrace."Honey,"shechokedout,hervoic