?第25講書面表達之提綱作文（講義）目錄一復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)掌握目標(biāo)及備考方向二考情分析提綱作文中考考情分析三提綱作文的考向1.精選寫作話題，緊扣核心目標(biāo)。2.提升語言質(zhì)量。3.強化高效訓(xùn)練。4.提升必考題型歸納四真題感悟中考提綱作文經(jīng)典考題精選【復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)】1.精選寫作話題，緊扣核心目標(biāo)。2.提升語言質(zhì)量。3.強化高效訓(xùn)練。【網(wǎng)絡(luò)構(gòu)建】【考情分析】提綱作文命題規(guī)律提綱作文是中考英語書面表達中最常見的一種命題形式，它要求考生根據(jù)題目所給的提綱進行寫作，具有題型靈活、內(nèi)容易受控制、簡單易寫等特征。提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給出的提示性內(nèi)容，首先確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開論述，表達主旨。它的特點既體現(xiàn)了文章的層次，又規(guī)定了各段的大致內(nèi)容，為考生提供了寫作思路。其本身就決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，考生一般不會出現(xiàn)審題障礙。提綱作文是中考英語書面表達中最常見的一種命題形式，它要求考生根據(jù)題目所給的提綱進行寫作，具有題型靈活、內(nèi)容易受控制、簡單易寫等特征。提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給出的提示性內(nèi)容，首先確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開論述，表達主旨。它的特點既體現(xiàn)了文章的層次，又規(guī)定了各段的大致內(nèi)容，為考生提供了寫作思路。其本身就決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，考生一般不會出現(xiàn)審題障礙。但其局限性也相對較大，如果考生不理解提綱所提示的內(nèi)容，下筆就比較困難。常見的作文提綱有中文提綱、英文提綱、思維導(dǎo)圖式提綱等。在回復(fù)書信或郵件類題目中，提綱往往出現(xiàn)在所給的信或郵件中。【名師解難】1.認真審題，找準(zhǔn)思路認真閱讀題目所列出的提綱，分析、揣摩出題者的用意，確立文章的要點，找準(zhǔn)寫作的思路，即找到作文的突破點，圍繞提綱內(nèi)容盡量發(fā)散思維補充更多的內(nèi)容。2.初步構(gòu)思，擬定提綱整理、歸納能想到的信息，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并確定使用哪種體裁來進行寫作，確定人稱、時態(tài)等細節(jié)。3.連詞成句，連句成文根據(jù)題目所列提綱，用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語表達信息，再把詞語組成句子，最后使用適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z把句子串聯(lián)成文章。要注意連接順暢，適度使用過渡詞和過渡句。提綱作文必備亮點詞匯disadvantagen.不利，劣勢advantagen.優(yōu)勢，益處strongpoint優(yōu)點weaknessn.弱點，缺點favorableadj.有利的beneficialadj.有利的，有益的properlyadu.適當(dāng)?shù)?，恰?dāng)?shù)豬nmyeyes在我看來asforme對于我來說frommypointofview從我的觀點來看Imaintainthat我認為itseemstomethat我認為asfarasIamconcerned在我看來fromwhereIstand站在我的立場上經(jīng)典套用句型閃亮篇首句Inmyopinion,I...我認為，我······Nowadays,there'sawide-spreadconcernabout/that...如今，······引起了廣泛的關(guān)注。圖解···play(s)animportantrole/placeamong...especially...······在······尤其是···.··中占有很重要的地位?！ぁぁasbecomeafashioninourdailylife.······已成為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊环N時尚。It'softensaidthat...我們常說······Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...不言而喻，······Asweallknow/Asisknowntoall...眾所周知，·········isahottopicinsociety.Enoughonithasbeensaidabout...······是當(dāng)今社會的一個熱門話題。有關(guān)它的······已經(jīng)談得很多了。Aboutthis,viewsdifferamongdifferentpeople.關(guān)于這點不同的人有著不同的看法。Asweallknow,everybodycan'tlivewithoutsmartphones.眾所周知，任何人沒有智能手機都是不能生活的。Nowadays,thereexistsanincreasinglyseriousproblemabout...現(xiàn)如今，存在著日益嚴重的關(guān)于······的問題。出彩篇中句Everycoinhastwosides.凡事都有兩面性。圖解First,weshouldknow...首先，我們要知道······Firstofall,wehavetoadmitthat...hasbroughtus...首先，我們不得不承認······給我們帶來···.··Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...很容易證明···.··Thereasonwhy...isthat...之所以······的原因是······Ithinkitisimportanttobepolitetoothers.我認為對他人有禮貌是重要的。Therearetworeasonswhy...為什么······,有兩個原因。Foronething,itonlytakesmetwohourstoflytoCityA,whichwillmakemelesstiredduringthe.journey.一個原因是，乘飛機去A城只需要兩個小時，旅途中我不會太累。Thereareseveralreasonsasfollows.有如下幾條原因。。精彩篇尾句Weighinguptheprosandcons,Ithink...isconvenient.權(quán)衡利弊，我認為······很方便。Therefore,studentsshould...所以學(xué)生們應(yīng)該·········setsagoodexampleforme......為我樹立了良好的榜樣。Onaccountofthis,wecanfindthat...據(jù)此，我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)······AsfarasIamconcerned,...在我看來，······典型模板模板1觀點看法型 闡述一種現(xiàn)象并具體說現(xiàn)狀I(lǐng)nrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem:thatis_____________（問題）.Forexample,some_____________（例一）;some_____________（例二）;some_____________（例三）andstillsome_____________（例四）.闡述一種現(xiàn)象并具體說現(xiàn)狀提出解決方案Facedwiththis,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestodealwithit.Foronething,weshould_____________（解決方法一）.Foranotherthing,we'dbetter_____________（解決方法二).Because,weshould_____________（解決方法三）.提出解決方案“我”的觀點以及對未來的憧憬Inmyopinion,if_____________,wewill_____________.“我”的觀點以及對未來的憧憬【模板范文】Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem:thatismanystudentshavebadeatinghabits.Forexample,somegotoschoolwithoutbreakfast;someliketoeatsnacks;somealwaysliketoeatthesamefood;andstillsomeeatordrinktoomuch.Allthesehabitsarebadforourhealth.Facedwiththis,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestodealwithit.Foronething,weshouldeatallkindsofhealthyfoods,suchasrice,fish,meat,vegetablesandfruit.Foranotherthing,we'dbetterhavemealsattherighttime.Besides,weshouldnoteattoomuchespeciallybeforewegotobed.Inmyopinion,ifwehavegodeatinghabits,wewillhavegoodhealth.Andwecanstudybeer.點明時間、人物、地點等信息模板2經(jīng)歷感受型點明時間、人物、地點等信息 ______________(時間)，____________(人物)hadagreattimein/at說明感受、表達期望具體說明各個活動發(fā)生的時間、感受等。____________(地點).Wearrivedat/in____________(地點)early._____________(活動一的時間)，we_____________(活動一)._____________(活動二的時間)，we_____________(活動二)._____________(活動三的時間)，we_____________(活動三)._____________(回家的時間)，westartedtogobackhome.說明感受、表達期望具體說明各個活動發(fā)生的時間、感受等。 WeenjoyedourselvesandI’mlookingforwardtogoingtherenexttime.【模板范文】 LastSaturday，PeterandIhadagreattimeinCentralPark. Wearrivedattheparkearly.Inthemorning，weclimbedthemountains.Wesawmanybeautifulflowersandmonkeysalongtheway.Whenwereachedthetop,wefoundtheairwasmuchfresher.Atnoon,wehadapicnicunderabigtree.Intheafternoon,wewentboatingonthelake.Thewaterofthelakewasveryclear.At5p.m.,westartedtogobackhome. WeenjoyedourselvesandI’mlookingforwardtogoingtherenexttime.引出話題模板3做法建議型引出話題 Asisknowntoallofus，____________should____________.Butdoyouknowhow？總結(jié)全文，提出建議闡述具體做法 Firstofall，weshould___________(建議一).Besides，itisalsoimportantforusto____________(建議二).What’smore，weshould________________(建議三).總結(jié)全文，提出建議闡述具體做法 Inmyopinion，weshould____________(總結(jié)、點題).Onlyinthesewayscanwe_____________.【模板范文】HowtogetonwellwithothersAsisknowntoallofus，studentsshouldlearnhowtogetonwellwithothers.Butdoyouknowhow？Firstofall，weshouldrespectothers.Everyonehashisorherownwaytodothings，soweshouldunderstandeachother.Besides，itisalsoimportantforustotalkwitheachotherandsharehappinessandsadness.Wecanbeclosertooneanotherbycommunicating.What’smore，weshouldbekindtoothersandalwaysgiveahandtothosewhoareinneed.Inmyopinion，weshouldtreatothersinanhonestway.Onlyinthesewayscanwegetonwellwithothers.模板4事物介紹型引出話題How’severythinggoing?I’dliketotellyousomethingabout/I’mgladtobeheretotalkabout________________________.(要介紹的內(nèi)容)引出話題按照提綱具體介紹_______________（提綱一）_______________（提綱二）_______________（提綱三）按照提綱具體介紹總結(jié)全文，升華主題Allinall,Ilike_________________verymuch.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Lookforwardtohearingfromyou!總結(jié)全文，升華主題【模板范文】DearDavid,How’severythinggoing?I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutthesongMyMotherland.ThissongwascomposedbyQiaoYuandbyLiuChi.Itslyricsaremajesticanditsmelodyisexciting.ItwasfirstsungonthefilmBattleOnShangganlingMountain.WhenIwastenyearsold,Iwatchedthemovie.Thesongbroughthopeandstrengthtothewoundedsoldiers.Atthatmoment,Iwasdeeplymoved.WheneverIhearthissong,Iamproudofmymotherland.Itinspiresmetostudyhard.Inthefuture,Iwilltrymybesttocontributetoourcountryandwishourcountrybetterandbetter.Allinall,Ilikethesongverymuch.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Lookforwardtohearingfromyou!LiHua模板5活動打算型引出話題,表明來意Howiseverythinggoing?I’引出話題,表明來意具體介紹活動時間、地點并分條闡述具體的活動或計劃Theactivitywasheldat_______________（具體時間）on/at______________（地點）.Inthebeginning,________________（安排一）.Afterthat,_____________(安排二).Intheend,________________(安排三).具體介紹活動時間、地點并分條闡述具體的活動或計劃表達期望Throughthisactivity,wewillhaveabetterunderstandingof______________.Ihope____________.表達期望【模板范文】DearJohn，Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtosharewithyouanactivitycalledOperaEnteringCampusinourschool.Theactivitywasheldat2:30pmonMay16ontheplayground.Inthebeginning,theheadmastermadeaspeechattheopeningceremony,inspiringusstudentstolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.Afterthat,therewasanexcitingcompetitionaboutoperaknowledge.Intheend,weenjoyedwonderfuloperaperformancesputonbysometeachersandstudentswhoaretalentedinopera.Throughthisactivity,wewillhaveabetterunderstandingofoperaandgetclosertoChinesetraditionalculture.IhopeyoucanhaveachancetocometoChinaandexperienceChinesecultureonyourown.Bestwishes!Yours,Jim（2024·湖北·統(tǒng)考一模）2024年春節(jié)即將來臨，你們學(xué)校的英文月刊發(fā)起了題為“MyNewYear’sPlans”的征文活動。請根據(jù)以下通知要求，并結(jié)合自身實際，用英文寫一篇短文。NoticeChineseNewYeariscoming!Youmayhavemanygreatthingstodo.WhatareyourNewYear’splans?Howareyougoingtoachievethem?Youcantalkaboutyourbealth,hobbies,schoolworkandsoon.Sharewithus!ENGLISHMONTHLY要求:（1）你的新年計劃至少包含通知中提到的兩項（黑體部分）；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實的姓名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)80詞左右，標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyNewYear’sPlansChineseNewYeariscoming!Ihavemanygreatthingstodointhenewyear.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyNewYear’sPlansChineseNewYeariscoming!Ihavemanygreatthingstodointhenewyear.Tobeginwith,I’mgoingtostayhealthybytakingexerciseeverydayandkeepingabalanceddiet.Inaddition,Iwilltakeupsomehobbiessuchaspaintingandsinging,whichcanmakemylifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.I’mgoingtopracticethemalot.Asfortheschoolwork,Iplantoimprovemymathgrades.I’mgoingtoreviewnotesanddomoreexercises.Lastly,IwillcelebrateChineseNewYearwithmyfamily,enjoyingsuchagreatfestival.Inaword,I’mlookingforwardtotheNewYearandI’mdeterminedtoachievealltheplans.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，介紹新年計劃有哪些；第二步，談?wù)勛约簩⑷绾螌崿F(xiàn)這些計劃；第三步，總結(jié)全文。[亮點詞匯]①stayhealthy保持健康②keepabalanceddiet保持均衡飲食③takeup開始從事[高分句型]①Inaddition,Iwilltakeupsomehobbiessuchaspaintingandsinging,whichcanmakemylifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.（which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Inaword,I’mlookingforwardtotheNewYearandI’mdeterminedtoachievealltheplans.（and連接的并列句）（2024·遼寧·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）假設(shè)你是李輝。初中生活即將結(jié)束，學(xué)校英語社團發(fā)起了畢業(yè)感言短視頻征集活動。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，為錄制視頻做準(zhǔn)備。要點如下：(1)回顧過去；(2)表達感謝；(3)展望未來。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80~100,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2)可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)發(fā)言稿中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱。Dearteachersandfriends,IamLiHui.Iamhonoredtosharesomeofmythoughtsandfeelingswithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.【答案】例文Dearteachersandfriends,IamLiHui.Iamhonoredtosharesomeofmythoughtsandfeelingswithyou.I’vebeeninthisschoolforthreeyears.Theschoolisbeautifulandmyschoollifeisreallycolourful.Inthepast,Ilearnedalotfrommyteachersandclassmatesandmademuchprogress.Ialsomadealotoffriendswhohelpedmealot.Iwanttothankourteachersandparentsfortheirsupportandhelp.Notonlydotheyteachusknowledge,butalsotheyhelpusshapeourcharacter.Iwishourschoolmorebeautifulandallofusawonderfulfuture.Thankyouforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，闡述過去的3年生活；第二步，表達對老師、同學(xué)的感謝以及表達美好祝福；第三步，最后結(jié)束文章。[亮點詞匯]①inthepast在過去②makemuchprogress取得進步③makefriends交朋友[高分句型]①Notonlydotheyteachusknowledge,butalsotheyhelpusshapeourcharacter.（部分倒裝句）（2023·河南周口·?？既＃┖幽鲜侵腥A民族和華夏文明的重要發(fā)祥地。中華文明的起源、文字的發(fā)明、城市的形成和統(tǒng)一國家的建立，都與河南有著密不可分的關(guān)系。假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Danny發(fā)郵件告訴你他想今年暑假到河南旅游，但他對河南不是很了解，想向你尋求建議。請你用英語寫一封回信，為他推薦一個城市，幫助他度過一個愉快的假期。寫作要點：1.文中須包含上圖提示的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearDanny,I’mgladtohearyouwillvisitHenanthissummervacation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearDanny,I’mgladtohearyouwillvisitHenanthissummervacation.It’sindeedagreatplacetoexploretherootsofChinesecivilization.IhighlyrecommendyouvisitthecityofLuoyang.Luoyangisfamousforitshistoricalandculturalsites.Onemust-visitattractionistheLongmenGrottoes,whichisaUNESCOWorldHeritagesite.Whenitcomestofood,Luoyangoffersawidevarietyofdeliciousdishes.Don’tmissoutonthefamousLuoyangWaterBanquet,whichconsistsof24coursesofvariousdishescookedindifferentwaysusingwater.Besides,Luoyangisknownforitstraditionalpeonyculture.ThecityholdsanannualPeonyFestival,whereyoucanadmirethebeautifulpeonyflowersinfullbloom.Lastly,Luoyanghasarichhistory.Itwasoncethecapitalofmultipledynasties,includingtheEasternZhouandTangDynasty.IhopethisrecommendationhelpsyouhaveafantasticvacationinHenan.Enjoyyourtrip!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹自己想推薦的城市——洛陽；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，從景點、美食、風(fēng)俗、歷史等角度介紹洛陽。第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達期待。[亮點詞匯]①indeed確實②traditional傳統(tǒng)的③annual一年一次的[高分句型]①Onemust-visitattractionistheLongmenGrottoes,whichisaUNESCOWorldHeritagesite.（定語從句）②Don’tmissoutonthefamousLuoyangWaterBanquet,whichconsistsof24coursesofvariousdishescookedindifferentwaysusingwater.（祈使句）（2023·浙江·模擬預(yù)測）目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是“MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminations”。請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。內(nèi)容要點如下：1.主要原因；2.個人看法；3.注意：（1）短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）短文題目與開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyOpiniononCheatinginExaminationsItisknowntousallthatsomestudentscheatinexaminationatschool.Ontheonehand,asstudents,weoftentakeexaminationsatschool,butsometimeswehavetoomanyexaminationswhicharetoodifficultforus.Ontheotherhand,someofusarelazyanddon’tworkhardatourlessons.Sowhentakingexaminations,wesometimescheatinordertogetbetterresultstopleaseourparentsandteachers.Inmyopinion,itiswrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstheschoolrules.Westudentsshouldbehonestandtrytogetgoodresultsbystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexaminations.What’smore,weshouldimproveourstudymethodsandgetwellpreparedforexaminations.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：主要采用“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作內(nèi)容包括“作弊的原因”和“對作弊的看法”，需要具體描述。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹一些學(xué)生考試作弊（已經(jīng)給出）；第二步，介紹作弊的原因；第三步，介紹對于作弊的看法。[亮點詞匯]①ontheonehand...ontheotherhand一方面……另一方面②inorderto為了③breaktheschoolrules違反校規(guī)④insteadof而不是⑤getwellpreparedfor好好做準(zhǔn)備[高分句型]①...butsometimeswehavetoomanyexaminationswhicharetoodifficultforus.（定語從句）②Inmyopinion,itiswrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.（it的固定句型）（2023·陜西西安·西安市鐵一中學(xué)?？寄M預(yù)測）俗話說“家和萬事興”。和睦的家庭能給每一位家庭成員帶來溫暖、快樂、健康、智慧和前進的力量。英語課上，你們開展了一次以“Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace?”為主題的討論，同學(xué)們都把自己的想法寫在了卡片上。假如你是王平，用英語寫一篇短文，向?？疎nglishLearning投稿。●Spendmoretimewithfamily●Sharehappinessandworries●Rememberfamily’sbirthdays●Youridea…參考詞匯：cheer...up,supporteachother,preparegifts要求：1.可選擇使用參考詞匯，亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（校名，姓名，地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）Deareditor,I’mWangPingfromClass2,Grade9.Recently,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhatwecandotomakehomeahappierplaceinourEnglishclass.Herearesomeofourideas.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Deareditor,I’mWangPingfromClass2,Grade9.Recently,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhatwecandotomakehomeahappierplaceinourEnglishclass.Herearesomeofourideas.Somesayit’sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.Theybelievefamilymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries.Whentheymeetproblems,wecandosomethingtocheerthemup.Homeisalwaysthefirstplaceforustogethelpandsupport.Othersthinkthatit’snecessarytorememberfamily’sbirthdaysandpreparesmallpresents.Thefeelingofbeinglovedcanbringusmorepleasure.Inmyopinion,showingloveforfamilyisreallyimportant.Sometimes,eventhesmallestthinglikewalkingwithfamilymakesthemhappier.Yours,WangPing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，簡單介紹自己，并引出主題（已給出）；第二步，具體介紹班里的學(xué)生的不同看法；第三步，表達自己的觀點。[亮點詞匯]①spendmoretimewithsb花更多的時間和某人在一起②cheersbup使某人振奮③inmyopinion在我看來[高分句型]①Whentheymeetproblems,wecandosomethingtocheerthemup.(when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)②Othersthinkthatit’snecessarytorememberfamily’sbirthdaysandpreparesmallpresents.(that引導(dǎo)賓語從句；it固定句型)（2023·云南昆明·昆明八中校考模擬預(yù)測）提示：在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，好習(xí)慣伴隨著你的成長和進步。播種習(xí)慣，收獲性格；播種性格，收獲命運。請你以“Goodhabitsmakeme________”為題，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)労昧?xí)慣對你學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；3.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。Goodhabitsmakeme__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GoodhabitsmakemehealthyGoodhabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluenceusalotinmanyways.Ithinkgoodhabitsmakemehealthy.Ihavesomegoodhabitssuchaseatinghealthyfoodanddoingexercise.Yearsago,Iusedtobefatandoftenfellill.Ilikedjunkfoodandnevertookanyexercise.MyhealthconditionbecamesoworryingthatIdecidedtochange.Itwashardformetogiveupbadhabitsanddevelopgoodones.However,Istartedtotrytoeathealthyfood.Ispentsomeofmysparetimeexercisingeveryday.What’smore,Ijoinedasportsclubandtookpartintheactivitiesthere.Gradually,Igothealthierandhealthier.Itisthegoodhabitsthathelpedme.Thankstomygoodhabits,nowIhaveahealthybody.Itisnoteasytokeepthem,butI’lltrymybest.Healthiswealth,afterall.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本文以“Goodhabitsmakemehealthy”為題談?wù)労昧?xí)慣對你學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，介紹好習(xí)慣的好處；第二步，介紹自己養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣的一個經(jīng)歷；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①suchas例如②usedtobe過去是③spendtimedoingsth.花費時間做某事④takepartin參加[高分句型]①MyhealthconditionbecamesoworryingthatIdecidedtochange.(so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)②Itisnoteasytokeepthem,butI’lltrymybest.(but引導(dǎo)的并列句)（2023·黑龍江綏化·模擬預(yù)測）親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，在此離別之際，恰逢學(xué)校英語報征稿，請你以“A/An__________PersoninMySchoolLife”為題，介紹一位老師或同學(xué)，描述一件發(fā)生在你們之間的、令你印象深刻的事情并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋懽饕?（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）;（2）語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整;（3）詞數(shù)不少于80詞。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AHelpfulPersoninMySchoolLifeIhavemetalotofpeopleinmyschoollife.OneofthemismygoodfriendEmma.SheisthebestfriendI’vemadeintheclass,andsheisalwaysthereformewhenIneedhelp.WhenIwasinGrade8,Ifoundmyselfgettingupseteasily.Iwasunderalotofstressandcouldn’tevenlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Emmanoticedmyproblemandspenttwohourswithmeoneday,talkingaboutherownstressandhowshewasdealingwithherdifficulties.Fromher,Ilearntthattheonlywaytoovercomedifficultiesiskeepingtryinginsteadofcomplaining.IfeltmuchmoreconfidentwhenIknewthatIcouldfightagainstmydifficultiestogetherwithEmma.“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Agoodfriendisthepersonwhoencouragesyoutobehappyandstrong.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”，描述過去事情用“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明描寫對象；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。重點介紹令你印象深刻的事情；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)全文。[亮點詞匯]①upset心煩的②stress壓力③dealwith處理④overcomedifficulties克服困難⑤complain抱怨[高分句型]①Agoodfriendisthepersonwhoencouragesyoutobehappyandstrong.（定語從句）②Fromher,Ilearntthattheonlywaytoovercomedifficultiesiskeepingtryinginsteadofcomplaining.（賓語從句）（2023·吉林松原·統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測）母親節(jié)快到了，Tony準(zhǔn)備給媽媽一個surprise。假設(shè)你是Tony，請你根據(jù)下面的提示與同學(xué)們分享你的母親節(jié)設(shè)想。內(nèi)容包括：1.somethingaboutyourmotherwhenshewasveryyoung;2.yourplansforMother’sDay;3.yourhope.作文要求：（1）不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。（2）語句連貫，詞數(shù)100左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Mother’sDayiscoming.Itremindsmeofmymotherandsomethingaboutherwhenshewasveryyoung.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文Mother’sDayiscoming.Itremindsmeofmymotherandsomethingaboutherwhenshewasveryyoung.Mymotherusedtobepoor.Shegaveupherstudiesforherbrotherandsister.Shegotupearlytohelpmygrandmotherwiththehousework.NowI’mgoingtodosomethingformymother.First,Iwillusemypocketmoneytobuyausefulbutnotexpensivegiftlikeadress.Second,Icandosomethingforher.Forexample,Icanprepareacupoftea.Whenmymothercomesbackfromwork,shecandrinkit.Third,Iwillwatchaconcertwithmymother.Thatwillmakeherhappyandrelaxed.IhopemymotherwillhaveagoodtimeonMother’sDay.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。首先介紹母親節(jié)即將到來，作者想起了關(guān)于母親很小的時候的事情；第二步，具體闡述母親節(jié)的計劃；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達自己的希望。[亮點詞匯]①remindsbof使某人想起②usedtobe曾經(jīng)是③helpsbwith幫助某人做某事④haveagoodtime玩得愉快[高分句型]①Itremindsmeofmymotherandsomethingaboutherwhenshewasveryyoung.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)②IhopemymotherwillhaveagoodtimeonMother’sDay.(省略that的賓語從句)（2023·吉林長春·校聯(lián)考模擬預(yù)測）體育運動是校園生活中的重要組成部分。假定你是李華，你校英文網(wǎng)站的體育欄目正在征集稿件，請你以“SportsandI”為題，寫一篇投稿。要點：1.你對體育運動的理解；2.個人運動的經(jīng)歷和感受；3.呼吁大家熱愛運動和生活。要求：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________