話題四假期活動分析近幾年全國有關(guān)“假期活動”的書面表達可發(fā)現(xiàn),這類話題主要從以下兩

個角度進行考查:1.陳述自己的假期活動計劃,時態(tài)為一般將來時;2.陳述自己經(jīng)歷的假期活動,包括活動后的感受和收獲,時態(tài)為一般過去時。命題探究開頭句1.Iamgoingtotraveltosomeplacesofinterestwhichcanopenmyeyes.2.Asfortravelling,I'mplanningtogotoHainan.Butwhethergoingthereornot

willdependontheweather.3.It'snecessaryforustotakeameaningfulsummervacationafterthefinalexam.4.Therearemanykindsofactivitiesforustotakepartin.亮點句型中間句1.You'llbesuretoexperiencemanynewthingswhentravelling.2.Bytravelling,wecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryandrelaxourselves.3.Sometimes,wegotothestreetstocollectrubbishorgotothehospitaltocheerup

thesickchildren.4.Besides,Ialwaysreadsomebooksduringmyholidaybecausereadingcanim-

provemywriting.5.Itookmanyphotos,atedeliciousfoodandboughtspecialgifts.結(jié)尾句1.Aboveall,Ihopeallofuscanhaveapleasant/wonderfulvacation/holiday.2.Iwillneverforgetthevacation.3.Travelcanhelpmetorefreshmymood.WhenIcomeback,Iwillbefullofener-

gyagain.4.Allofusfeltveryhappythoughweweresotired.好句積累1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅行開闊心靈。2.Traveltenthousandmilesandreadtenthousandbooks.行萬里路,讀萬卷書。3.AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大路通羅馬。4.Ifyoudon'tgototravel,missmorethanjustscenery.如果你不去旅游,錯過的不

只是風(fēng)景。5.OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero.不到長城非好漢。暑期將至,我們都應(yīng)該制訂合理的假期計劃。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示,以“My

SummerVacationPlan”為題,用英語寫一篇短文。要點提示:1.放松自己:聽音樂,看電影,鍛煉身體等;2.陪伴家人:旅行,散步,與父母交流等;3.做志愿者:看望老人,贈送禮物,為他們唱歌等;4.努力學(xué)習(xí):閱讀書籍,復(fù)習(xí)知識,為以后學(xué)習(xí)做準備等;5.個人觀點:……。典例剖析要求:1.詞數(shù)100左右(短文首句已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));2.要點提示均需涉及,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容;3.字跡工整,卷面整潔,文意連貫,語言流暢;4.不用真實姓名、校名、地名。參考詞語:relaxmyself,spendtimewith...,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,

寫作指導(dǎo)本文是篇說明文。寫作時要求圍繞要點提示描述假期計劃及具體做法,同時要

表達自己的觀點,注意過渡詞的恰當(dāng)使用及句式的多樣性,主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在

時和一般將來時,人稱主要為第一人稱。謀篇布局

范文評析MySummerVacationPlan①Withthesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.②First,I'd

liketosparesometimetorelaxmyselfbylisteningtomusic,watching

moviesaswellasexercisingtokeepfit.Besides,Iplantospendmoretime

withmydearfamily.Forexample,wecantraveltogethertosomewhere

interesting.Takingawalkandcommunicatingwithmyparentsarealso

advisablechoices.Atthesametime,I'mgoingtovolunteerinanoldpeo-

ple'shome.Iwillbuysomegiftsandsingforthem.Lastbutnotleast,it's

quiteimportantformetokeepstudyinghard.Imustpreparemyselfwell

forthechallenginglearninginseniorhighschool.IthinkreviewingwhatI

'velearnedinjuniormiddleschoolandreadingmorecanhelpmewiththat.③AsfarasI'mconcerned,thesummervacationisaprecioustimetodo

somethingmeaningful.ThereforeI'msuretomakethebestofitandmake

myplancometrue.①開頭:直入主題:我將要為暑假制訂一個計劃。引出下文。②正文:具體描述假期計劃要點及具體做法。過渡詞及句式運用多樣

且恰到好處。③結(jié)尾:表達自己的觀點。asfarasI'mconcerned的運用使文章更有深

度。亮點仿寫短語1.makeaplan制訂計劃2.sparesometimetodosth.抽出時間去做某事3.plantodosth.計劃做某事4.spendsometimewithsb.和某人一起度過一段時光5.takeawalk散步6.communicatewithsb.與某人交流7.preparefor為……做準備8.asfarasI'mconcerned依我看來仿寫1.依我看來,對于父母來說每天抽出時間與孩子進行交流是很有必要的。(asfar

asI'mconcerned,sparesometimetodosth.,communicatewithsb.)

AsfarasI'mconcerned,it'sverynecessaryforparentstosparesometimeto

communicatewiththeirchildreneveryday.

2.作為學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該做好制訂假期計劃的準備以便我們能過一個有意義的假

期。(preparefor,makeaplan)

Asstudents,weshouldprepareformakingaplanforthe