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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)為150詞左右。Eunicehadlovedmusicforaslongasshecouldremember.Whenshewasababy,shewouldclapandsingalongtothetunesonTVshowswithdelightfulenthusiasm.Whenshesawsomemusicalnoteswritteninamagazine,shecouldsingthemall.Herparentswereamazedthatshecouldreadmusicatsuchayoungage.Soherfatherdecidedtogiftherapianotonurturehertalent.Overjoyed,Euniceexcelledinherpianoplaying.Eunice’smum,aconservativelady,hasstrictrulesanduniqueinsightsintomusic.Classicalmusic,toher,isablendofwisdomandhistory.Shebelievedithadthepowertonourishthesoulanddeepenone’sunderstandingoftheworld.Incontrast,shethoughtpopmusiclackedthelastingdepthandbeautyofclassicalmusic.Hermotherdiscouragedherfromplayingthatkindofmusic.“Jazzandbluesarewickedandleadtothingslikedancing!”Hermumwouldsaywithaseriouslookonherface.AsEunicegrewolder,sheenjoyeddiversemusicfromradios,recordplayers,andstreetmusicians.Itallsoundedamazing,andhowcouldsuchwonderfulmusicpossiblybewicked?Herfather,understandingherloveformusic,encouragedhertoplayallkindsofmusicwhenhermotherwasnothome.Hekeptwatchingoutofthefrontwindowtoseeifhermotherwascomingback.“Hereshecomes!Stopplaying!”hewouldwhisperurgentlywheneverhespottedhermotherapproaching.Playingthisdiversemusicbecametheircherishedsecret.Afteryearsofstudyingherfamilyfounditdifficulttosupporthermusicaleducation.Fortunately,herpianoteacherMissMazzycametoheraidandcollecteddonationsfromthepeopleofthetown.Thegenerousneighboursreadilysupportedher,providingherwiththefundssheneeded.Toexpresshergratitude,MissMazzyarrangedforEunicetoperformaspecialconcert.Thegirlwasbothexcitedandnervous.Sheworkedespeciallyhardtopolishuptwelvepieces,includingseveralpopmusicpieces.However,shewasafraidthathermotherwouldcomeandfindouthersecretloveforpopmusicduringtheconcert.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Asshesteppedonthestage,shewassurprisedtoseehermotherinthefrontrow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterplayingallthetwelvepieces,Eunice’smotherapproachedherwithpride.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________關(guān)于Eunice的故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(兩段)第一段(沖突與突破)場景細節(jié):舞臺燈光、觀眾屏息、母親的嚴肅表情演奏策略:Eunice選擇古典與流行融合曲目,試探母親底線情感張力:母親從皺眉到腳部輕拍,內(nèi)心防線瓦解轉(zhuǎn)折點:即興創(chuàng)作爵士橋段,全場掌聲雷動第二段(和解與新生)代際對話:母親展示年輕時的爵士照片,袒露被壓抑的熱愛音樂聯(lián)結(jié):母女首次合奏爵士樂,鋼琴成為和解媒介未來展望:全額獎學金與巴黎深造機會,象征音樂打破束縛主題升華:秘密公開后的自由感,呼應前文“cherishedsecret”情感線(150字)恐懼與壓抑:Eunice登臺時的手心出汗與喉嚨發(fā)緊試探與勇氣:從古典曲目的穩(wěn)妥到爵士樂的大膽改編隱秘共鳴:母親無意識的肢體語言(腳部輕拍)暗示情感松動真相揭露:母親顫抖的手拿出泛黃照片,暴露被埋葬的青春釋放與重生:共同演奏時的默契,獎學金信件帶來的希望超越隔閡:兩代人在音樂中找到共同點,實現(xiàn)精神和解故事線(6條)Eunice在音樂會上發(fā)現(xiàn)母親,臨時調(diào)整演奏策略演奏《月光》與《Summertime》融合版,引發(fā)母親回憶母親通過肢體語言表露對爵士樂的喜愛母親展示1960年代爵士舞者照片,坦承家族壓抑史母女首次合作演奏《AutumnLeaves》,完成情感聯(lián)結(jié)獲得巴黎音樂學院全額獎學金,象征音樂打破階級壁壘主旨升華句(5句英文)"Musicisthekeythatunlocksboththepast’ssorrowsandthefuture’spossibilities.""Aparent’s‘no’mayhidetheirownunspoken‘whatif’—musiccanbridgethatgap.""Themostbeautifulharmoniesarebornnotfromuniformity,butfromthecouragetodiverge.""Secrets,whensharedthroughmelody,becomesteppingstonestofreedom.""Trueeducationhappensnotinthenotesweplay,butintheheartsweheal."寫作示范兩篇(170詞)示范一(記憶重構(gòu)型)Asshesteppedonthestage,shewassurprisedtoseehermotherinthefrontrow.Thespotlightburnedherretinas.Heropeningpiece,ClairdeLune,beganflawlessly,buthereyeskeptdartingtohermother’srigidposture.Thencametheriskypart:sheseguedintoMyFavoriteThings,weavingjazzchordsintotheclassicalmelody.Theaudiencemurmured.Hermother’sjawclenched—untilthesaxophone-inspiredimprovisation.Suddenly,Eunicenoticedhermother’sweddingringtappingthearmrestinsyncwiththebeat.Afterplayingallthetwelvepieces,Eunice’smotherapproachedherwithpride.“Ihaven’theardthattunesince1967,”shesaid,pullingafadedPolaroidfromherpurse.Itshoweda17-year-oldher,laughingatajazzclub.“Yourgrandfatherforbademefromdancing.Hesaiditwas‘unladylike.’”TearsblurredEunice’svisionashermotherpressedthephotointoherhand.“Promisemeyou’lldancefreely,”shewhispered.Thatnight,theyplayedTakeFivetogether,thepiano’skeyshummingwithdecadesofpent-uprhythm.Twoweekslater,aletterarrived:全額獎學金totheParisConservatory.Euniceframedthephotonexttoheracceptanceletter.“We’rebothdancingnow,”shetoldhermother.示范二(藝術(shù)革命型)Asshesteppedonthestage,shewassurprisedtoseehermotherinthefrontrow.Herfingershoveredoverthekeys.InsteadoftheplannedFürElise,sheplayedKillingMeSoftly—asoulfulballad.Theroomfellsilent.Hermother’seyeswidened,thennarrowed.ButasEuniceaddedaRachmaninoff-esquecrescendo,hermother’sexpressionsoftened.Bythefinalnote,theaudienceerupted,andhermother’sapplausewastheloudest.Afterplayingallthetwelvepieces,Eunice’smotherapproachedherwithpride.“You’renotjustapianist,”shesaid.“You’rearevolutionary.”Sherevealedashoeboxofvinylrecords—EllaFitzgerald,NinaSimone,BillieHoliday.“Iboughtthesewithmyallowance.Hidthemunderthefloorboards.”Eunicegasped.“Whydidn’tyoutellme?”Hermothersmiledsadly.“Iwasafraidyou’dhatemeforlying.”Thatnight,theyplayedL-O-V-Etogether,thepiano’ssoundricherthanever.Thenextday,MissMazzycalled:“TheParisschoolwantsyou.Fullride.”Eunicehuggedhermothertightly.“We’rerewritingtherules,”shesaid.參考答案Paragraph1:Asshesteppedonthestage,shewassurprisedtoseehermotherinthefrontrow.Herheartracedandshefeltscared.Shetookadeepbreath,fillingherlungswithair,andletitoutslowlytocalmhernerves.Sheglanceddownatherhands,restingonthepianokeys,andrememberedallthelonghoursshehadspentpracticing.Sheliftedhergazetomeethermother’s,whowaswatchingherwithacuriousandproudexpression
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