2025年高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作高頻熱點(diǎn)通關(guān)必備攻略

通關(guān)必過(guò)(應(yīng)用文)

項(xiàng)目考情分析話題綜述真題再現(xiàn)模擬提升

內(nèi)容考點(diǎn)分布總述構(gòu)思詞匯/金句真題詳解基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)提升練

考情分析

專題內(nèi)容卷型

給外教寫郵件，告訴學(xué)生隨機(jī)分組練口語(yǔ)的建議2023新課標(biāo)

01給關(guān)于介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就的建議2024北京

建議信給Lynn求助關(guān)于校報(bào)“排憂解難”專欄給建議的回信2024上海

對(duì)籌劃“綠色北京”社團(tuán)活動(dòng)的建議2023北京

話題綜述

>話題綜述

建議信是針對(duì)朋友、同事等寫的求助信的回復(fù)，或?qū)δ撤N不合理的應(yīng)該糾正的情況提出自己的看法和建

議。寫作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。

A話題構(gòu)思/模板

建議信通常包括三部分內(nèi)容:

1.寫信目的；

2.介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因；

3.提出建議。

>話題詞匯/金句

常用詞匯

l.gve/offersb.someadvice(on)給某人提建議

2.asksb.foradvice向某人征求意見(jiàn)

3.asfollows如下

4.inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview在我看來(lái)

5.find..,,?helpful/useful/beneficial認(rèn)為……有用

6.takepartin/participatein...參加

7.follow/take/adoptone*sadvice采納某人的建議

8.takesth.intoaccount/consideration把……考慮在內(nèi)

9.withregardto關(guān)于；就

10.putforward提出

11.inthisregard/inthisrespect在這點(diǎn)上/在這方面

12.sharesth.withsb.與某人分享某事

13.withtimegoingon隨著時(shí)間的推移

14.Befacedwith面臨

15.takesth.seriously重視；認(rèn)真對(duì)待

建議信常用句型

1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtrouble...很遺憾聽(tīng)說(shuō)你在…有困難。

2.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.這樣的問(wèn)題是彳艮正常的?？赡?/p>

下面的建議會(huì)有一些幫助。

3.1havereceivedyourlettersayingyouplanto…我已經(jīng)收至U了你的來(lái)信。信上說(shuō)。。。

4.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions

here.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)詢問(wèn)我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。

5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto..很高興收到你的來(lái)信，信上詢問(wèn)我關(guān)于

如何。。。。

6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowTmwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto…彳艮高興U攵至lj你

的電子郵件?，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在。。。，我寫信給你一些建議。

7.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.

8.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway.

9.1wouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.

10.1believethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwith

yourstudies/work!

11.Hereareafewsuggestions.

真題再現(xiàn)

>Writingl【2023?新高考I&H卷］

假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在

問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括;

1.說(shuō)明問(wèn)題;

2.提出建議

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右：

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearRyan,

FmLiHuafromClass3.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.1thinkit'snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtraining

afterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.This

canhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfor

theotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeone

whotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.

Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.

Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【解析】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生給外教寫一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練

習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：tobeginwith—>■firstofall

提高：improve—>progress

建議：suggestiontadvice

選擇：choose—>select

2句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirown

partners.

拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudents

choosetheirownpartners.

>Writing212024北京卷】

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的外國(guó)好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報(bào)的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年

新中國(guó)成立75周年，他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，

內(nèi)容包括：

(1)建議投稿內(nèi)容；

(2)就以上建議簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。

注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；

(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJim,

Ifsgreattohearyou'replanningtowriteaboutChina'sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversary

ofthefoundingofthiscountry.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourarticle.

Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina'seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlights

inthepastfewdecades.Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseit

showcasesChina'sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.Inaddition,youcanalsomentionChina's

roleinhelpingsolvingglobalissuessuchastheglobalwarming,offeringamorecomprehensiveview.

Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫。外國(guó)好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報(bào)的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中

國(guó)成立75周年，他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，要求考生給他回復(fù)郵件，就此給予他建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

很好的：great一wonderfill

成就：achievement-accomplishment

建議：suggestion一advice

止匕夕卜：Inaddition—whafsmore

2.句式拓展

句式變換

原句：It'sgreattohearyou'replanningtowriteaboutChina'sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversary

ofthefoundingofthiscountry.

拓展句：It'sgreattohearwhatyou'replanningtowriteaboutisChina'sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75th

anniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.

【點(diǎn)目青】【高分句型1]Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina?seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,which

arethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2]Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcases

China'sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.（運(yùn)用了because弓|導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）

>Writings【2023年北京卷】

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，

他發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：

⑴活動(dòng)形式；（2）活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（2）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yburs,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim

Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof"GreenBeijing^^andneedmyhelp,Iamwriting

toofferyoumysuggestions.

Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscan

participateandhaveabetterunderstandingof"GreenBeijing^^throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesby

themselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwill

allfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.

Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給好友Jim策劃的“綠色北京”社團(tuán)活動(dòng)給出一些建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：suggestion-tip

提供：offer-provide

開(kāi)展：carryout一conduct

主題：theme—lopic

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing“andneedmydhelp,Iam

writingtoofferyoumysuggestions.

拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing^^andneedmyhelp,Iamwriting

toofferyoumysuggestions.

>Writing4[2017?北京卷】

你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李明，你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)開(kāi)設(shè)了一個(gè)“排憂解難”專欄，你的校友Lynn發(fā)出

求助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)她的來(lái)信寫封回信：

寫信要求：1.提出你的建議；2.說(shuō)明你的理由

I'mahighschoolstudent.Iwanttodosomecookingbutmyparentsdon'tallowmetodoso.Howcan

changetheirmind.

DearLynn,

I'msorrytohearaboutyourworriesandIunderstandhowfrustratedyouare.Hereissomeofmyadviceon

howtoconvinceyourparentstoallowyoutocook.

Firstofall,communicateisoneofthebestwaytosolveaproblem.Youaresupposedtotalktoyourparents

honestlyinsteadofkeepingsilent.Itwouldbebeneficialtoexplaintothemthereasonswhycookingappealstoyou

andtellthemyourfeelingofsatisfactionwhenyouseethedishesmadebyyourself,whichwillmakethemempathize

withyou.Meanwhile,youcanmakeapromisethatyouareoldenoughtotakeallnecessarysafetyprecautions,

allayingtheirconcernaboutyoursafety.Furthermore,youcanhighlightthehealthylifestyle.Tolivehealthilyand

happily,cookingisabasicskillforteenagersashomemadefoodismoredeliciousandnutritiousthantakeawayfood.

Onlythenwillyouavoidarguingwithyourparentsandletyoudowhatyoulike.Ibelievepatientconversationwill

contributetotheirunderstanding.

Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpfulandyouwillenjoycookingsoon.

Warmregards,

LiMing

模擬提升

基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)

>Writingl

假定你是李華。你的新西蘭好友Jack計(jì)劃組織一個(gè)以“環(huán)保”為主題的活動(dòng)，特發(fā)郵件向你征求建議。

請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.推薦一種活動(dòng)形式；

2.說(shuō)明理由。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearJack,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJack,

I'mgladtohearyouplantoorganizeanactivitywiththethemeofenvironmentalprotection.AndI'mwilling

tooffermyadvice.

Ithinkabicyclerace,whichcanencouragepeopletotravelinagreenway,fitsinwellwiththetheme.Biking

isfamiliartoamajorityofpeople,sotheracewilldefinitelyattractmanyparticipants,contributingtospreadingthe

awarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Moreover,ifssuchagoodwaytokeepfitthatmorepeoplewillfollowthe

greenpractice.

Ihopemyideaishelpfulandthatyoureventwillbeagreatsuccess.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面屬于應(yīng)用文，新西蘭好友Jack計(jì)劃組織一個(gè)以“環(huán)?！睘橹黝}的活動(dòng)，要求考生回復(fù)一封

郵件，向他推薦一種活動(dòng)形式并說(shuō)明理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累：

①環(huán)保：environmentalprotection—environmentalconservation

②鼓勵(lì)：encourage一inspire/motivate

③綠色出行：greentraveleco-friendlytransportation/sustainablecommuting

④意識(shí)：awareness—consciousness

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：AndI'mwillingtooffermyadvice.

拓展句：AndI'mwillingtooffermyadvicewhichIhopecanbeofassistance.

【點(diǎn)目青】【高分句型1】Ithinkabicyclerace,whichcanencouragepeopletotravelinagreenway,fitsinwellwith

thetheme.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Moreover,it'ssuchagoodwaytokeepfitthatmorepeoplewillfollowthegreenpractice.（such...that

引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）

>Writing2

假定你是李華，你校交換生Mike準(zhǔn)備參加“厲害了，中國(guó)”（AmazingChina）短視頻大賽，特發(fā)郵件向

你征詢視頻創(chuàng)意。請(qǐng)給他回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.提出建議；2.闡明理由。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。

DearMike,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearMike,

Learningyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina,I'mwriting

tosharemyideaswithyou.

IfIwereyou,IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina'ssmartagriculture.Nowadays,youcan

seemodernfarmersusingcutting-edgetechnologiesanddevicesforagriculturalproduction,monitoringand

management.Thankstothis,theefficiencyisgreatlyimprovedandthecountry'sgrainsecurityisguaranteed.

Therefore,FmconvincedthatshowingtheenormouschangesinChineseagriculturewillholdmuchappealforthe

viewers.

Mayyourentrystandoutinthecompetition!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給準(zhǔn)備參加“厲害了，中國(guó)”（AmazingChina）短視頻大賽的交

換生Mike回一封郵件，就視頻創(chuàng)意提出建議并闡明理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

想法：idea一opinion

安全：security-^-safety

因此：therefore一thus

確信：convinced一sure

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Learningyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina,Tmwriting

tosharemyideaswithyou.

拓展句：BecauseIlearnyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina,

I'mwritingtosharemyideaswithyou.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IfIwereyou,IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina'ssmartagriculture.

（運(yùn)用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣）

【高分句型2】Therefore,TmconvincedthatshowingtheenormouschangesinChineseagriculturewillholdmuch

appealfortheviewers.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)）

提升練

>Writing3

假如你是一名高中生，名叫李華，你的美國(guó)同齡朋友Charles一家對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣，也與你家結(jié)

成了友好家庭。最近，他們要搬入一個(gè)新房子，Charles也有了自己的房間。應(yīng)他的請(qǐng)求，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封

信，給他一些關(guān)于房間設(shè)計(jì)的建議。

要點(diǎn)：1.你的建議;

2.你的祝福。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按照如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearCharles,

Bestregards,

LiHua

【答案】DearCharles,

HowdelightedIamtohearaboutyournewremoval!GivenyourenthusiasmforChineseculture,Isuggestthe

designanddecorationofyourroomembracingChinesestylewithelegance.

Frommyperspective,notonlycanyouhangaChinesepaintingorcalligraphytoaddaculturalatmosphere,but

alsoyoumayfurnishtheroomwithwoodenpieces,theirsimplicityanddignityrelievingthepressureofdailylife.

Additionally,usecolorsofred,goldandblack,associatedwithChineseculture,theirrichnessenhancingthewarmth

ofyourspace.Thereisnodenyingthataporcelainvasecanaddauniqueandculturaltouchtoyourspace.

Wereitpossible,youcouldcombinetheseelementstocreatearoomreflectingyourpersonaltaste.Iamsureyour

creationwillbeamasterpiece,aperfectblendofChinaandtheforeigncountries.

Eagertoseethefruitofyourendeavor!

Bestregards,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國(guó)同齡朋友Charles寫一封信，給他一些關(guān)于房間設(shè)計(jì)的

建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

高興的：delighted—>joyful

熱情：enthusiasm—>passion

優(yōu)雅：elegance一grace

此外：additionally—>whafsmore

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：HowdelightedIamtohearaboutyournewremoval!

拓展句：HowdelightedIamwhenIhearaboutyournewremoval!

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Frommyperspective,notonlycanyouhangaChinesepaintingorcalligraphytoadda

culturalatmosphere,butalsoyoumayfurnishtheroomwithwoodenpieces,theirsimplicityanddignityrelieving

thepressureofdailylife.（運(yùn)用了notonly位于句首的倒裝句式和獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）

【高分句型21Thereisnodenyingthataporcelainvasecanaddauniqueandculturaltouchtoyourspace.（運(yùn)用

了that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句）

>Writing4

假定你是李華，你校外教Christine正在籌辦校英語(yǔ)書法大賽，要求學(xué)生線上提交作品，你認(rèn)為該形式

存在