1閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事?！癇ang...!”Sarapushedthedooropen.Shethrewherschoolbagontothefloorandcalledout,“I’mhome!”Noanswer.Thehousewassilent.Itsoundedempty,butsheknewitwasn’t.Hermumanddadwereworkingupstairs.Saragotaglassoforangejuice,wentintotheconservatory（玻璃房）andsatdowninherfavouritechair.Thegardenwasstillinthedarkafternoon.Ononeside,hermum’sgardenwasneatandtidywithboringshortgrass,boringstraightflowerbedsandboringstraightpaths.Butontheotherside,Sara’sNatureGardenlookedwildandexcitingwithbigdeadsunflowersandtallgrasses.“Nobodyisinterestedinme.Mumanddadonlythinkabouttheirwork,”shethoughtsadly.Thensherecalled:Onemonthearlier,shelearnedinamagazinethatmanydogswereabandonedbecausetheirownersgotboredwiththem;Onehourearlier,shesawacutedogwaggingitstailandlickingherfriend’sface.Saraknewtodaywasspecial.Todaythingswerechanging.Shecouldn’twaitanylonger.It’stimetotalktoherparents.SoSaragotupfromherchairandclimbedallthewaytotheloft（閣樓）.“Mum,Iwantatalk.”saidSara.“Justaminute!”Hermumclickedonthekeyboard,tookoffherglassesandturnedtoherdaughter.Saracoughed,tookadeepbreath,andtoldhermumthatshewantedadog.“No,Sara.That’simpossible,”hermumsaidfirmly.Sarawenttoherfatherbutgotthesameanswer.Sherushedintoherroomangrilyandslammedthedoorshut.Later,Sara’smumknockedatthedoorandwentin.“Darling,weknowthisisimportanttoyou.Youcanhaveadogifyoutaketheresponsibility.ButlookatyourNatureGarden,yourschoolbag,yourbedroom!Whatamess!Doyouthinkyoucantakegoodcareofadog?”saidhermum.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)為150左右；請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置做答。SarahSarahwaslostinthoughtanddecidedtomakeachange.Withthecompanyofthedog,Sarahbeganabusyandhappylife.文本主旨本文講述了薩拉渴望養(yǎng)一只狗，然而父母因她生活雜亂，認為她無法承擔照顧狗的責任而拒絕了她的請求。故事圍繞薩拉如何面對這一拒絕，以及后續(xù)是否能改變父母的想法展開，體現(xiàn)了孩子的愿望與父母的考量之間的沖突，以及孩子在追求自己目標過程中的成長。詞匯積累throw...onto...把……扔到……上callout大聲呼喊beinterestedin對……感興趣abandon/??b?nd?n/v.遺棄，拋棄wag/w?ɡ/v.（狗尾巴等）擺動lick/l?k/v.舔taketheresponsibility承擔責任mess/mes/n.混亂，臟亂slam/sl?m/v.砰地關(guān)上（門、窗等）clickon點擊續(xù)寫分析銜接句：可從薩拉聽完媽媽的話后的反應(yīng)入手續(xù)寫。比如以“Saraloweredherhead,realizinghermotherwasright.”作為銜接句，承接上文媽媽指出薩拉生活雜亂不適合養(yǎng)狗的情節(jié)，自然引出薩拉的反思以及后續(xù)行動。情節(jié)合理性：薩拉想要養(yǎng)狗，在被父母拒絕后，若續(xù)寫她開始努力改變自己，將房間、花園整理干凈，以實際行動證明自己有能力照顧好狗，這樣的情節(jié)符合她渴望養(yǎng)狗的心理，也符合邏輯。例如描述她花費周末時間清理花園里的雜物，將學習用品分類整理，把房間布置得井井有條。情感鋪墊：前文薩拉渴望養(yǎng)狗的強烈愿望，以及被拒絕后的憤怒，為她后續(xù)努力爭取的行為做了情感鋪墊。讀者能夠感受到她對養(yǎng)狗這件事的執(zhí)著，也能理解她為什么會努力改變自己，從而使故事的情感發(fā)展更加連貫。情感走向故事開篇薩拉充滿期待地向父母提出養(yǎng)狗請求，卻遭到拒絕，此時情感跌入低谷。若續(xù)寫中薩拉開始努力改變，她的情感會逐漸從沮喪、憤怒轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)槌錆M希望與決心。當她通過努力最終獲得父母認可時，情感將達到喜悅的高潮，整體呈現(xiàn)從低落到高漲的變化趨勢。主題深化通過薩拉努力爭取養(yǎng)狗的過程，深化了成長需要承擔責任以及理解父母的主題。薩拉在追求養(yǎng)狗的過程中，學會了自我反思和改變，明白了只有具備承擔責任的能力，才能實現(xiàn)自己的愿望，同時也理解了父母拒絕背后的考量，展現(xiàn)了孩子在成長過程中的心理變化和思想成熟。下水文兩篇下水文一

Saraloweredherhead,realizinghermotherwasright.Shedecidedtoprovethatshecouldberesponsible.ThenextdaywasSaturday.ShegotupearlyandstartedwithherNatureGarden.Shepulledouttheweeds,trimmedtheovergrownsunflowers,andmadethepathsneat.Thensheturnedtoherroom.Shesortedoutherschoolbag,putawayhertoys,andmadeherbed.Afterawholeday'shardwork,boththegardenandherroomwereinperfectorder.

OnSunday,sheshowedherparentsthechanges.Herparentsweresurprisedandpleased."You'vedoneanexcellentjob,Sara,"herfathersaid."Wecanseeyourdetermination.Maybeit'stimetoconsidergettingyouadog."Sarajumpedwithjoy.Sheknewthatbytakingresponsibility,shecouldmakeherdreamcometrue.下水文二

Sarawasabitdisappointedbutnotdefeated.Shespenttheentireweekendcleaningup.Inthegarden,sherakedtheleaves,plantedsomenewflowers,andbuiltasmallfencearoundherspecialcorner.Insideherroom,shearrangedherbooksontheshelf,foldedherclothesneatly,andwipedthedustoffeverycorner.Whenherparentssawthebigchanges,theywereamazed.

"Sara,we'rereallyproudofyou,"hermothersaid."You'veshownthatyoucanberesponsible.Wethinkyou'rereadyforadog."Sara'seyessparkledwithexcitement.Shelearnedanimportantlesson:responsibilityisthekeytogettingwhatshewants.Fromthenon,shetookgoodcareofnotonlyherdogbutalsoeverythingaroundher.參考答案Sarahwaslostinthoughtanddecidedtomakeachange.Shewenttothebedroomfirst,whichwasterrible.Sarahquicklybegantosweepthefloor,foldtheclothes,andmadethebed.Finallythebedroommadepeople’seyeslightup.Thentherewashernaturalgarden,whichalsowasaterribleplace.ButSarahwasnotdiscouraged.Shespenttwohoursweedingandplantingnewflowers.Evenifshewasverytired,shedidnotstop.Motherwasveryhappytoseethechangeinher,anddecidedtobuySarahapuppy.Withthecompanyofthedog,Sarahbeganabusyandhappylife.Aftershewokeupinthemorning,shetookherdogforawalkinthepark.Aftercomingback,shecleanedherroomandhadbreakfastdelight