Unit7ADaytoRemember(話題寫作指導(dǎo)）【話題分析】值得記憶的一天本單元的話題是“值得記憶的一天”，要求能圍繞這一話題寫一篇有關(guān)學(xué)校郊游、周末活動或過去發(fā)生的事情的短文。在寫作時，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主，人稱主要是第一人稱。注意要交代清楚事情發(fā)生的時間、地點(diǎn)、經(jīng)過及感受。常用句型：Itwassunny/cloudy/windy/rainy...Wewentonaschooltrip...Wehadsomuchfun...Wehelped...Wepicked...Itwastiringbutinteresting.Itwasadaytoremember.【寫作實(shí)例】生活中有很多值得記憶的東西。你校英語報社正在開展以“ADaytoRemember”為主題的征文活動。請你結(jié)合以下提示，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文，參加此次活動。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動的時間、天氣情況、參加人員、地點(diǎn)；2.具體活動；3.感受...______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點(diǎn)撥】【教材典句】Todaywewentinaschooltriptoafarm!(SB,1b)Theworkseemedeasy,butittooktimetogetitright.(SB,1b)Itwastiringbutgreatfun!(SB，1b）Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.(SB,1b)【經(jīng)典范文】ADaytoRememberItwassunnylastSaturday.WewentonaschooltriptoRedStarFarm.Wehadsomuchfunthere.Ittookusonehourtogettherebybus.Whenwegotthere,thefarmershowedusaroundthefarmfirst.Thereweremanygoats,cows,ducksandchickensonthefarm.Thefarmertoldussomethingabouttheseanimals'livinghabits.IwasinterestedintheanimalsbecauseIlovedthem.Thenwehelpedthefarmerfeedchickensandducks.Afterthat,thefarmertaughtushowtomilkacow.Itseemedeasy,butittookussometimetogetitright.Finally,wehelpedthefarmerpicksomeeggs.Itwastiringbutinteresting.OnethingIlearnttoday:Keepinganimalsisn'teasy.Itneedslotsofwork.Itmademethinkweshouldvaluethetimeandworkhardforabetterfuture.Itwasadaytoremember.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】①用lastSaturday點(diǎn)明活動的時間。②用wentonaschooltrip表達(dá)上周六的活動。③first,then,after,that,finally表明活動的順序。④用“Itwastiringbut...”表達(dá)對這次活動的感受。⑤"Itwasadaytoremember.”總結(jié)全文。【同步檢測】1．假如你是李華，你校廣播站以“MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchool”為題向?qū)W生們征稿。請你寫一篇英語文章投稿，內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)習(xí)、活動、遇到的問題、這一天的感受等等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchoolDearSchoolmates,I’mLiHua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游。請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息，寫一篇題為“AnExcitingTrip”的英語短文。時間上周末參加者你和……地點(diǎn)北海公園（BeihaiPark）活動劃船、爬山、野餐（haveapicnic）、照相、做游戲……感受……要求:1.不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，表達(dá)正確；3.60詞左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。AnExcitingTripLastweekend,Iwentonatripwith_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假設(shè)上個月，你參加了學(xué)校組織的去現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場的郊游活動，請以“Aschooltriptothemodernfarm”為題，寫一篇英語短文。提示問題：(1)Whodidyougotothefarmwith?(2)Howdidyougetthere?(3)Whatdidyoudothere?(4)Howdidyoufeel?提示詞語：pickstrawberries,feedcows,tiredbutveryhappy要求：1.60詞左右；2.在提示問題和提示詞語的基礎(chǔ)上，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Aschooltriptothemodernfarm________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是Kate，現(xiàn)在就讀于北京某國際學(xué)校，上周你學(xué)校組織了一次旅行。你們游覽了北京的許多名勝古跡（placeofinterest），如長城、故宮、天安門廣場（Tian’anmenSquare)等。請你給你的同學(xué)Mike寫一封60詞左右的書信介紹一下你的這次學(xué)校旅行。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Kate5．假如你叫皮特，請根據(jù)表格中所給的信息用英語寫一則旅行日記。詞數(shù)不少于60。DateOctober2nd,TuesdayWeatherwindyPlacetheGreatWall,thePalaceMuseumFoodchicken,friedfishFeelingdelicious,happy,tiredTuesday,October2nd

Windy___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【真題鏈接】1．（23-24七年級下·河北張家口·期末）隨著社會的發(fā)展，越來越多的人走進(jìn)博物館。假如上周六（7月6日），你參觀了張家口博物館（ZhangjiakouMuseum）。請根據(jù)下面的圖示寫一篇短文，介紹你的博物館之旅。要求：1.短文須包含以上全部圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)60個左右。ATriptoZhangjiakouMuseum______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（23-24七年級下·山東德州·期末）古人云：“讀萬卷書，行萬里路?！奔偃缒闶抢钊A，本周你需要在英語角活動上向大家分享你的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)及要求寫一篇英文短文。要求：1.參考要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于80詞（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Mytripto__________LastSaturday,Itookatripto__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（23-24七年級下·山東德州·期末）假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸媽媽帶你去了北京旅游，請你根據(jù)下列表格提示寫篇英語短文，介紹一下你的旅游經(jīng)歷。行程我和爸爸、媽媽去了北京參觀了天安門廣場，國家博物館，在北海公園劃船去了老舍茶館，了解了老舍的生命歷程：吃了美味的食物，并給爺爺奶奶買了禮物。感受……提示詞：天安門廣場TiananmenSquare；國家博物館NationalMuseum；北海公園BeihaiPark劃船goboating；老舍茶館LaoSheTeahouse；駱駝祥子CamelXiangzi要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于60詞（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。MyTriptoBeijingMynameisLiMing.Lastsummervacation,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（23-24七年級下·四川廣安·期末）假如你是Lucy，去年暑假和父母一起參觀了杭州，根據(jù)下面提供的信息，以“MyLastSummerHoliday”為題，介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根據(jù)提示，寫一篇不少于60詞的小短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：第一天：Onthefirstday；西湖：TheWestLake；第四：fourth提示：1.第一天，參觀西湖，拍了許多照片。2.第二天，在湖里游泳，非常涼爽。3.第三天，野炊，食物很好吃。4.第四天，在街上散步，為朋友買了一些禮物。5.很累，但很開心。期待著下次再去。MyLastSummerHoliday_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（23-24七年級下·山東臨沂·期末）21世紀(jì)英文報正在舉辦以“MyTripto________”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，根據(jù)以下提示與要求，用英語寫一篇短文來投稿，分享自己難忘的旅行經(jīng)歷。提示:1.Whenandwheredidyougo?2.Whodidyougowith?Andhowdidyougothere?3.Whatdidyoudothere?4.Howdidyoufeelaboutyourtrip?要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.語言通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。MyTriptoBeijing____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（23-24七年級下·河北石家莊·期末）假如你是李華，今年五一節(jié)你和你的父母坐火車一起去北京游玩了。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇日記，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。日期5月1日天氣晴朗行程上午：游覽天安門廣場（Tian’anmenSquare）和故宮（thePalaceMuseum）中午：在一家餐館吃牛肉面下午：參觀名勝古跡長城感受雖然有點(diǎn)累，但是很開心。要求：1.意思連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，可適當(dāng)拓展；2.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。May1st____________________________________________________________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