推薦信

【試題探究】

假定你是李華,你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友David看完電影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜歡,寫

信想請(qǐng)你再推薦一部中國(guó)電影。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信:

1.表示高興;

2.推薦一部電影;

3.推薦的理由(至少兩條)。

注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Step1:審題布局

人稱第一人稱(I)為主

時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),一般將來(lái)時(shí)

1.說(shuō)明寫信目的

要點(diǎn)2.推薦的電影和推薦的理由

3.表達(dá)希望

Step2:巧飾亮點(diǎn)

要點(diǎn)1:我很高興知道你對(duì)中國(guó)電影《哪吒之魔童降世》感興趣。

一般表達(dá):Iamgladtoknowyou’reinterestedintheChinesefilm,NeZha.

句式升級(jí)(高級(jí)詞匯,被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)):

I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.

要點(diǎn)2:這部動(dòng)畫電影也是以中國(guó)經(jīng)典神話故事為基礎(chǔ),和《哪吒之魔童降世》有許多相似

之處。

一般表達(dá):ThisanimatedfilmisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,andhasmuchin

commonwithNeZha.

句式升級(jí)(定語(yǔ)從句):

Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommon

withNeZha.

Step3:銜接成篇

DearDavid,

I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.AndI’mperfectly

willingtorecommendanotherimpressiveChinesemovieatyourrequest.

SinceIknowanimatedfilmsareyourfavorites,youcan’tmissMonkeyKing:HeroIsBack.

Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwith

NeZha,soIthinkit’llappealtoyou.Additionally,MonkeyKingandNeZhaarebothregardedas

heroesbyChinesepeople.Throughthesetwomovies,youwillgetabetterunderstandingof

Chineseculture.

Ihopeyou’llfindthemoviewellworthseeing.

Yours,

LiHua

【句式儲(chǔ)備】

1.篇頭——開篇表意,說(shuō)明目的

①Ourschool’sapproaching100thbirthdaywillbecelebratedthisJuly.Couldyouplease

recommendastudenttoaddressattheopeningceremonyinEnglish?

我們學(xué)校將在今年七月慶祝即將到來(lái)的百年校慶。你能推薦一位學(xué)生在開幕式上用英語(yǔ)發(fā)言

嗎?

②Hearing/LearningthatyouarecomingtovisitChina,Iwouldliketorecommendseveralplaces

ofinteresttoyou.

聽說(shuō)你要來(lái)中國(guó),我想向你推薦幾個(gè)名勝古跡。

2.篇中——緊扣要點(diǎn),推薦理由

①Heisanall-roundstudentwithexcellentgradesinallsubjects.Asaboywithgreatpotential,he

isgood/skillfulatsolvingdifficultproblems.

他是一個(gè)全面的學(xué)生,各科成績(jī)優(yōu)異。作為一個(gè)很有潛力的男孩,他善于解決難題。

②Inaddition,whatmakeshimamodelstudentishispositiveattitudetowardslife.

此外,使他成為模范學(xué)生的是他積極的生活態(tài)度。

3.結(jié)尾——表達(dá)希望,盼回復(fù)

①Yourtakingmyrecommendationintoconsiderationwillbehighlyexpected.Keenlyanticipate

yourpromptreply.

希望您能考慮我的建議。熱切期待您的及時(shí)答復(fù)。

②Idohopethatyoucanfindmyrecommendationbeneficial.Lookingforwardtoyour

early/promptreply.

我希望我的推薦對(duì)你有幫助。期待你的早日/及時(shí)回復(fù)。

【拓展儲(chǔ)備】

假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Peter打算這個(gè)寒假來(lái)中國(guó)旅游,讓你推薦一個(gè)城市,你

想推薦杭州作為他旅游行程的首選。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫封信,內(nèi)容包括:

1.推薦城市;

2.推薦理由;

3.你的祝愿。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

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DearPeter,

I’mdelightedtoknowyou’recomingtoChinaforyourwinterholiday.Personally,I’dliketo

recommendthecityofHangzhoutoyou.

WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeen

ascenicspotforhundredsofyears.Besides,therearemanytouristattractionsinandaroundthe

city,suchasTiger-runningSpring,theLingyinMonasteryandSpringDawnatSuCauseway.

Mostimportantly,Hangzhouishometodeliciousfood,suchasDongpoPorkandLongjing

Shrimp.

Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmore

enjoyable.

Yours,

LiHua

【要點(diǎn)精練】

1．假定你是李華，你的交換生朋友William對(duì)學(xué)校開展的研學(xué)旅游活動(dòng)很感興趣。他來(lái)信

希望你能給他推薦一個(gè)研學(xué)城市。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.推薦研學(xué)的城市；

2.推薦理由；

3.表示祝愿。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearWilliam,

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Yours,

LiHua

2．假定你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生李華，你校將組織開展“走進(jìn)文化遺產(chǎn)”主題活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)向全校學(xué)

生征求活動(dòng)建議。請(qǐng)你給組織者寫信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.推薦活動(dòng);

2.說(shuō)明理由。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearOrganizers,

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Yourssincerely,

LiHua

3．假定你是李華，英國(guó)交換生Frank寫信給你，希望你推薦一個(gè)中國(guó)成語(yǔ)，作為鼓勵(lì)他學(xué)

習(xí)中文的座右銘。請(qǐng)你回封信，推薦成語(yǔ)“愚公移山”，內(nèi)容包括；

1.簡(jiǎn)介成語(yǔ)故事和寓意；

2.推薦理由。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

生詞：成語(yǔ)idiom;座右銘motto;愚公移山Y(jié)uGongYiShan

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4．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津，你校最近在舉行“校園之星”優(yōu)秀學(xué)生評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用

英語(yǔ)推薦你的同學(xué)王華，內(nèi)容包括：

1.人物和事跡簡(jiǎn)介；

2.你從他/她身上學(xué)到了什么。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；

2.短文題目已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Arolemodelaroundme

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5．假定你是李華，你校的英國(guó)交換生Jim在郵件中提到他想報(bào)名參加主題為“了不起的中國(guó)

人”(AmazingChinesePeople)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)短視頻大賽，向你征求創(chuàng)意。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包

括:

1．推薦拍攝人物；

2．說(shuō)明推薦理由。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右;

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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6．假定你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Peter對(duì)中文歌曲很感興趣，要求你推薦一款學(xué)習(xí)中文歌曲

的app，請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹一款app；

2.分享使用體驗(yàn)。

參考詞匯:歌詞:lyrics網(wǎng)易云音樂:NetEaseMusicQQ音樂:QQMusic

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearPeter,

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Yours,

LiHua

7．假定你是李華，你所在的社區(qū)正在進(jìn)行年度美麗樓道服務(wù)之星(ServiceStaroftheYear)評(píng)

選活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給社區(qū)負(fù)責(zé)人Owen寫信推薦員工張杰，內(nèi)容包括：

1.寫信目的；

2.推薦理由。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearOwen,

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Yourssincerely,

LiHua

8．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友David計(jì)劃在他畢業(yè)旅行時(shí)到中國(guó)來(lái)親身體驗(yàn)和感受中國(guó)

文化，請(qǐng)你用英文寫信向他推薦你眼中最具代表性的城市。

1.城市概況；

2.推薦原因。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearDavid,

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Yours,

LiHua

9．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Sam最近在準(zhǔn)備有關(guān)中國(guó)飲食文化的課堂展示，寫郵件請(qǐng)

你推薦一種中國(guó)特色美食，請(qǐng)給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.美食簡(jiǎn)介;

2.推薦理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearSam,

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Yourssincerely,

LiHua

10．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。在世界地球日即將到來(lái)之際，你校與英國(guó)友好校將在線

舉辦“綠動(dòng)校園，青春飛揚(yáng)”的主題攝影展，以此來(lái)記錄校園環(huán)?；顒?dòng)中的精彩瞬間。現(xiàn)組委

會(huì)向同學(xué)們征集照片，你打算參加此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)按照以下提示用英語(yǔ)給組委會(huì)寫一封信來(lái)推

薦你的照片：

（1）描述照片的內(nèi)容；

（2）說(shuō)明選擇該照片的理由；

（3）表達(dá)對(duì)該照片入選的愿望。

參考詞匯：綠動(dòng)校園，青春飛揚(yáng)GreenCampus,FlyingYouth

注意：

（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；

（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearSir/Madam,

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Yours,

LiJin

參考答案

1．DearWilliam,

Learningthatyouareinterestedinthestudytourbutatalossaboutwhichcitytovisit,I’dliketo

recommendGuangzhoutoyou.

Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdong,isaperfectcombinationofoldandnew.Forone

thing,itisanancientcitywithrichhistoricalsites,suchasChenClanAcademy,Xiguanand

Shameen,whereyoucanimmerseyourselfinitsprofoundhistoryandsplendidLingnanculture.

Foranother,Guangzhouenjoysahighreputationformoderncomplexes,amongwhichtheiconic

CantonToweriswhatyoucan’tmiss.EquallyimpressiveistheCantonesecuisine,whichwill

giveyouafeastforyourappetite.

I’msurethatyouwillfindGuangzhouaworthwhilecitytoexplore.Wishyouameaningful

andunforgettablestudytour!

Yours,

LiHua

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。交換生朋友William對(duì)學(xué)校開展的研學(xué)旅游活動(dòng)很

感興趣，要求考生寫信給他推薦一個(gè)研學(xué)城市。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

完美的：perfect→ideal

豐富的：rich→abundant

確信的：sure→certain

難以忘懷的：unforgettable→memorable

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdong,isaperfectcombinationofoldandnew.

拓展句：Guangzhou,whichisthecapitalcityofGuangdong,isaperfectcombinationofoldand

new.

[高分句型1]Learningthatyouareinterestedinthestudytourbutatalossaboutwhichcityto

visit,I’dliketorecommendGuangzhoutoyou.(運(yùn)用了連詞that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2]EquallyimpressiveistheCantonesecuisine,whichwillgiveyouafeastforyour

appetite.(運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

2．DearOrganizers,

I’mwritingtosharesomeideasfortheupcoming“ExploringCulturalHeritage”event.

Firstly,Iproposeorganizingvisitstolocalculturalheritagesitesforstudentstoexploreand

learn.Thiswoulddeepenourunderstandingofourcountry’srichhistoryandculture,fosteringa

senseofnationalprideandculturalidentity.Secondly,hostingthemedlecturesorworkshopsby

expertswouldofferinsightsintothevalueandsignificanceofculturalheritage,enhancingour

academicknowledgeandoveralldevelopment.Lastly,hands-onactivitiessuchastraditionalcraft

makingorfolkperformanceswouldallowustoexperiencethecharmofourtraditionalculture

firsthandandacquirepracticalskillsandknowledge.

Insummary,byincorporatingdiverseactivities,wecaneffectivelyshowcasetheallureand

importanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritanceofour

traditions.Thankyouforconsideringthesesuggestions.Lookingforwardtoasuccessfulevent!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文?？忌趯W(xué)校將組織開展“走進(jìn)文化遺產(chǎn)”主題活動(dòng)，

現(xiàn)向全校學(xué)生征求活動(dòng)建議。請(qǐng)你給組織者寫信。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

培養(yǎng)：foster→develop

獲得：acquire→obtain

提供：offer→provide

舉行：host→hold

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Insummary,byincorporatingdiverseactivities,wecaneffectivelyshowcasetheallureand

importanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritanceofour

traditions.

拓展句：Insummary,Itisbyincorporatingdiverseactivitiesthatwecaneffectivelyshowcasethe

allureandimportanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritance

ofourtraditions.

【高分句型1】Insummary,byincorporatingdiverseactivities,wecaneffectivelyshowcasethe

allureandimportanceofculturalheritagewhilepromotingadeeperappreciationandinheritance

ofourtraditions.（運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的省略）

【高分句型2】Thiswoulddeepenourunderstandingofourcountry’srichhistoryandculture,

fosteringasenseofnationalprideandculturalidentity.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

3．DearFrank,

InresponsetoyourletterinquiringaboutaChinesemotto,Istronglyrecommendtoyouthe

idiomYuGongYiShan,whichcandefinitelykeepyourwillinghearttolearningChinese!

Thisidiomactuallyoriginatesfromatouchinglegend,whichliterallytellsushowOldMan

Yuledhisfamilytoremovethetwomountainsblockingthedoorwayoftheirhouse,

accomplishingthismissionimpossiblewiththehelpofGod.Ibelievetheidiomisanidealmotto

foryoubecauseithighlightsthemoralthatifwekeeptryingandnevergiveup,wewilleventually

achieveouraim,howeverharditis,whichisauniversalvalueapplicabletolanguagelearning.

Moreover,byembracingthislegend,learnerscanimmersethemselvesinChinesecultureandgain

insightsintothebeliefsandhistoricalnarrativesthatshapeChinesesociety.

I’mfullyawarehowchallengingitisforaforeignertolearnChineseandI’mdeeply

convincedthattheunderstandingofthisidiomwillfuelyourenthusiasmforChinese.Attachedto

theletterismyhumblecalligraphyofthefourcharacters“YuGongYiShan”,which,Iguess,can

figureasareminder.

Hopeyouenjoyit!

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)交換生Frank寫信，向他推薦一個(gè)

中國(guó)成語(yǔ)，作為鼓勵(lì)他學(xué)習(xí)中文的座右銘。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

推薦：recommend→putforward

完成：accomplish→achieve

并且：morever→furthermore

激發(fā)：fuel→simulate

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Hopeyouenjoyit!

拓展句：Ihopeyoucanbefondofitandlookforwardtosharingwithyouthefeelingsafter

learningit.

【高分句型1】InresponsetoyourletterinquiringaboutaChinesemotto,Istronglyrecommend

toyoutheidiomYuGongYiShan,whichcandefinitelykeepyourwillinghearttolearning

Chinese!（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2】Thisidiomactuallyoriginatesfromatouchinglegend,whichliterallytellsushow

OldManYuledhisfamilytoremovethetwomountainsblockingthedoorwayoftheirhouse,

accomplishingthismissionimpossiblewiththehelpofGod.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，how

引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ)和狀語(yǔ)）

4．范文

Arolemodelaroundme

Whenitcomestotherolemodelaroundme,it’snobodybutWangHua.LiuWeiismy

classmate,whoisstrongandindependent.Hecomesfromapoorfamily.Whatmakesmatter

worseisthathesufferedfromadiseaseinSeniorTwo.Becauseoftheillness,heevenaskeda

three-monthsleavefromschool.Duringthattime,henotonlyfoughtagainstthediseasebutkept

onstudying.

Wheneverfacingthedifficulty,henevergivesup.LifeisnoteasyforLiuWei,buthestill

loveslife.Heisalwaysanexampleforeveryonetofollow.

AsastudentofChenguangMiddleSchool,IwantnominatemyclassmateWangHuaasthe

“CampusStar”.WangHuaisaremarkableindividualwhoconsistentlyexhibitsexceptional

qualitiesinbothacademicandpersonalaspects.

WangHuaexcelsinallsubjects,especiallyinmathematicsandscience.Heisalwaysready

tohelpotherswiththeirstudies,patientlyexplainingdifficultconceptsandencouraginghispeers

tostriveforexcellence.However,hisachievementsarenotlimitedtoacademics.Heisalso

activelyinvolvedinvariousvolunteeractivities,suchasassistingtheelderlyandparticipatingin

environmentalprotectionprojects.

WhatIhavelearnedfromWangHuaishisdedicationtolearningandhiscommitmentto

servingothers.Heisarolemodelwhoinspiresmetoworkharderandbemorecompassionate.

HispositiveattitudeandunwaveringspiritarequalitiesthatIadmireandaspiretoemulate.

Therefore,IstronglyrecommendWangHuaasthe“CampusStar”.Hisdedication,kindness,

andleadershipqualitiesmakehimadeservingcandidateforthishonor.Ibelievethathisexample

willinspireotherstofollowinhisfootstepsandstriveforexcellenceinallaspectsoftheirlives.

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語(yǔ)推薦你的同學(xué)王華，參加“校園之

星”優(yōu)秀學(xué)生評(píng)選活動(dòng)。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

熱愛：love→haveapassionfor

面對(duì)：face→inthefaceof

非凡的：remarkable→outstanding

相信：believe→holdtheviewthat

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：LifeisnoteasyforLiuWei,buthestillloveslife.

拓展句：AlthoughlifeisnoteasyforLiuWei,hestillloveslife.

[高分句型1]WhatmakesmatterworseisthathesufferedfromadiseaseinSeniorTwo.(運(yùn)用了

what引導(dǎo)主要從句)

[高分句型2]Ibelievethathisexamplewillinspireotherstofollowinhisfootstepsandstrivefor

excellenceinallaspectsoftheirlives.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)

5．DearJim,

I’mthrilledtohearyourintentiontoparticipateinthe“AmazingChinesePeople”online

shortvideocompetition.Foryourinspiration,I’dliketorecommendafigurewhotrulydeserves

tobefeatured.

MysuggestionistofocusonDr.ZhongNanshan,arenownedrespiratoryexpertandahero

inthefightagainstCOVID-19.Hisdedicationtoscience,courageinspeakingthetruth,and

relentlesseffortstoprotectpublichealthhaveearnedhimwidespreadrespectandadmiration.

ByshowcasingDr.Zhong’sachievementsandstruggles,youwillnotonlypresentan

amazingChinesepersonbutalsoconveythespiritofperseveranceandresponsibilitythatdefines

manygreatChineseindividuals.

Lookingforwardtoseeingyourcreation!

Yours,

LiHua

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給Jim回信，推薦短視頻采訪的人。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

建議：suggestion→advice

奉獻(xiàn)：dedication→devotion

參加：participatein→takepartin

關(guān)注：focuson→concentrateon

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：MysuggestionistofocusonDr.ZhongNanshan,arenownedrespiratoryexpertandahero

inthefightagainstCOVID-19.

拓展句：MysuggestionistofocusonDr.ZhongNanshan,whoisarenownedrespiratoryexpert

andaherointhefightagainstCOVID-19.

[高分句型1]Foryourinspiration,I’dliketorecommendafigurewhotrulydeservestobe

featured.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2]ByshowcasingDr.Zhong’sachievementsandstruggles,youwillnotonlypresent

anamazingChinesepersonbutalsoconveythespiritofperseveranceandresponsibilitythat

definesmanygreatChineseindividuals.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)和that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)

6．DearPeter,

I’mthrilledtoknowaboutyourinterestinChinesesongs.I’dliketorecommendanapp

calledNetEaseMusic.ThisapphasavastlibraryofChinesesongs,andeachsongisaccompanied

bylyrics,whichcanbeveryhelpfulforlearningChinese.

IfrequentlyuseNetEaseMusicmyself.Iappreciateitsuser-friendlyinterfaceand

straightforwardoperation.Moreover,itslyricsfeatureisoutstanding,withlyricsscrollinginsync

withthemusic,helpingmeunderstandthemeaningofthesongsbetter.Ibelieveyou’llenjoythis

appaswell.

Lookingforwardtohearingyourfeedback.

Yours,

LiHua

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外國(guó)朋友Peter回復(fù)一封郵件，推薦一

款學(xué)習(xí)中文歌曲的app，包含app簡(jiǎn)介和使用體驗(yàn)兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

激動(dòng)的：thrilled→excited

巨大的：vast→huge

帶有：beaccompaniedby→possess

簡(jiǎn)單的：straightforward→uncomplicated

2.句式拓展

原句子句：IfrequentlyuseNetEaseMusicmyself.Iappreciateitsuser-friendlyinterfaceand

straightforwardoperation.

拓展句：IfrequentlyuseNetEaseMusicmyselfbecauseIappreciateitsuser-friendlyinterfaceand

straightforwardoperation.

【高分句型1】ThisapphasavastlibraryofChinesesongs,andeachsongisaccompaniedby

lyrics,whichcanbeveryhelpfulforlearningChinese（.運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2】Moreover,itslyricsfeatureisoutstanding,withlyricsscrollinginsyncwiththe

music,helpingmeunderstandthemeaningofthesongsbetter.（運(yùn)用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)以及現(xiàn)在

分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

7．

IamwritingtorecommendZhangJieastheServiceStaroftheYearofthebeautiful

corridor.Ichoosehimforthefollowingreasons.

Firstofall,ZhangJie,whoseworkrangesfromcleaningthehallwaystohelpinghis

neighbors,ishard-workingandheworksfrommorningtillnight.Theworkofcleaningisdirty

andtiring.However,henevercomplainsaboutit.Besides,heisfullofresponsibility.Notonly

doeshimdotheworkthatbelongstohim,butalsohedevotestosomeextrawork,liketakingcare

ofneighbors’children.Third,heiswillingtobuildaharmoniouscommunity.Hetrieshisbestto

guardthesecurityofthecommunity.

Ihopethathecangettheaward.

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給社區(qū)負(fù)責(zé)人Owen寫信推薦員工張杰為

樓道服務(wù)之星。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

選擇：choose→select

此外：besides→inaddition

照顧：takecareof→tend

充滿：befullof→befilledwith

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Theworkofcleaningisdirtyandtiring.However,henevercomplainsaboutit.

拓展句：Thoughtheworkofcleaningisdirtyandtiring,henevercomplainsaboutit.

【高分句型1】Firstofall,ZhangJie,whoseworkrangesfromcleaningthehallwaystohelping

hisneighbors,ishard-workingandheworksfrommorningtillnight.（運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的非限

制性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2】Notonlydoeshimdotheworkthatbelongstohim,butalsohedevotestosome

extrawork,liketakingcareofneighbors’children.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝和that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)

從句，notonly…butalso…連接的并列句）

8．DearDavid,

I’mthrilledtohearaboutyourplanstovisitChinaforyourgraduationtrip!Amongthe

countlesscities,IhighlyrecommendBeijing,thecapitalofChina.

Beijing,acitywitharichhistoricalandculturalheritage,offersauniqueblendofancientand

modern.Here,youcanwitnessthemajestyoftheForbiddenCityandthetranquilityofthe

SummerPalace.Moreover,thelivelyHutongareasprovideaglimpseintotraditionalBeijinglife.

I’msureBeijingwillleavealastingimpressiononyourChinajourney.Lookforwardto

hearingaboutyouradventures!

Yours,

LiHua

【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英文寫信向David推薦自己眼中最具代

表性的中國(guó)城市。

【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累

激動(dòng)的：thrilled→excited

無(wú)數(shù)的：countless→numerous

強(qiáng)烈：highly→strongly

此外：moreover→besides

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Beijing,acitywitharichhistoricalandculturalheritage,offersauniqueblendofancient

andmodern.

拓展句：Beijing,whichisacitywitharichhistoricalandculturalheritage,offersauniqueblend

ofancientandmodern.

[高分句型1]I’msureBeijingwillleavealastingimpressiononyourChinajourney.(運(yùn)用了省

略that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2]Lookforwardtohearingaboutyouradventures!(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作賓語(yǔ))

9．DearSam,

Thankyouforyourtrust.Asforme,IwilldefinitelyrecommendSichuanhotpottoyou.

HotpotenjoysthegreatestpopularityinChina.Familiesandfriendsoftengatherarounda

bighotpot,eatingandchattingcheerfully.Thesteamingpotisusuallyfilledwithchilipeppers

withbrightredoilonthetop.

Becauseeveryoneisfreetochoosetheirfavoritefood,hotpothasbecomearepresentativeof

Chinesevaluesofopenness,equalityands