第03講讀后滿分公式：情緒描寫讀后續(xù)寫·情緒描寫知識(shí)點(diǎn)1無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句 1知識(shí)點(diǎn)2sbfelt+情緒...助力情緒描寫 3知識(shí)點(diǎn)3非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞情感或用助力情緒描寫 4知識(shí)點(diǎn)4形容詞作狀語(yǔ)助力情緒描寫 5知識(shí)點(diǎn)5獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)助力情緒描寫 6知識(shí)點(diǎn)6with+情緒名詞助力情緒描寫 6知識(shí)點(diǎn)1一無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句把沒(méi)有生命的東西，賦予生命力。用無(wú)生命的事物做主語(yǔ)，用人或行為名詞做主語(yǔ)，這種句子常常自帶擬人化的修辭色彩和生動(dòng)形象的效果，從而增加了主語(yǔ)的多樣性，使語(yǔ)言更加言簡(jiǎn)意賅，精準(zhǔn)傳神，這種句子便被稱為無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句。普通句：Hewasanxious.他很著急。無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句：Awaveofanxietyenveloped/tookholdofhim.一陣焦慮籠罩了他。同樣是表達(dá)“他很焦慮”，比起普通句式中的常見句子，無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句中這種“焦慮籠罩了他”的擬人化表達(dá)，瞬間提升了高級(jí)感！無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句高頻名詞：開心、快樂(lè)、興奮：happiness/joy/delight;excitement感激：gratitude,appreciation,形容詞：grateful滿意：satisfaction;adj.satisfied困惑：puzzlement;confusion渴望：eagerness欽佩：admiration悲傷：sadness,sorrow,遺憾悔恨：guilt,regret,羞愧：shame害怕：fear,terror,fright,panic驚恐:horror吃驚震驚：surprise；astonishment,shock,緊張焦慮：nervousness,anxiety憤怒：anger,rage,fury尷尬：embarrassed--embarrassment;失望沮喪：disappointment;depression；despair寬慰安慰：relief鼓舞：motivation;inspiration;encouragement無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句高頻動(dòng)詞：seize（抓住;侵襲）；grasp緊緊抓??；surround（圍繞著）；defeat（擊垮）；sweep（吞噬）；washover；floodover(吞噬)；envelope(包圍；籠罩)overwhelm（使難以承受）：creep（爬，慢慢襲上）swallow吞噬，wellup涌出，surgen./v.涌動(dòng)，sweepover沖；席卷；句式一：Asense/waveof+情感名詞+動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)Agreatsenseoffear/tensionslowlycreptuponme.MyfaceturnedpaleandIstoodtherewithmyheartbeatingviolently/wildly.一種恐懼感/緊張感慢慢地襲上我的心頭。我的臉色變得蒼白，我站在那里，心跳得劇烈地跳動(dòng)著。2.Gratitudesurroundedhimlikeabeamofsunlight,throwinghimintoaseaofkindnessandwarmth.他，把他扔進(jìn)了善意和溫暖的海洋。Awaveofhappinessandexcitementseized/tookholdof/sweptoverher.她內(nèi)心涌起一陣興奮。AstrongsenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews/openedthegiftbox.喜悅抓住了我。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom,andeveryonefeltwarmandhappyinthedepthsofheart.笑聲在房間里縈繞，每個(gè)人的內(nèi)心深處都感到溫暖和快樂(lè)。AsIentered,helookedupfromhisdesk,andawarmsmilespreadacrosshisface.我進(jìn)去的時(shí)候，他從桌子上抬起頭來(lái)，臉上露出了一個(gè)溫暖的微笑。【即時(shí)練】1.當(dāng)她得知測(cè)試的結(jié)果時(shí)，她感到一陣興奮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.一種突然的悲傷感淹沒(méi)了她，她忍不住哭了起來(lái)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.一想到考試失敗，他就萬(wàn)念俱灰。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________當(dāng)我的名字被宣布時(shí)，一種興奮之情涌上心頭。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識(shí)點(diǎn)2句式二：sbfeltagreatsenseof情感名詞...wellingupinmyheartAwaveofnervousnessenvelopedJimashedeliveredaspeech.當(dāng)jim發(fā)表演講時(shí)，一陣焦慮籠罩著他。Janefeltamixtureofexcitementandgrievancewellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.當(dāng)她看到遠(yuǎn)處的直升機(jī)，混雜者激動(dòng)和委屈的情緒在Jane內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌。Seeinghisdaughtersafeandsound,hefeltagreatsenseofreliefwellingupinhisheart.看到他的女兒平安無(wú)事，他感到一種極大的解脫感涌上心頭?！炯磿r(shí)練】看到他的丈夫和一個(gè)漂亮的女孩聊天，簡(jiǎn)感到一種強(qiáng)烈的嫉妒感在她的心中涌出，涌過(guò)她，把茶杯扔向女孩。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________那天我感到很平靜，以至于我一個(gè)星期都沒(méi)有使用它。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.Jimmy心里有一種巨大的悲傷涌進(jìn)來(lái)，在門口痛苦地哭了起來(lái)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識(shí)點(diǎn)3句式三：非謂語(yǔ)...,主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)...SeeingthatJimwasunwillingtogetup,hermotherfeltagreatsenseofangerwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,shoutingatJimangrily..看到吉姆不愿意起床，他的母親感到一股強(qiáng)烈的憤怒在內(nèi)心奔涌，生氣地對(duì)他喊了起來(lái)。Seizedbyasense/waveoffear/tension/shock...,Iwasunabletoutteraword.被恐懼/緊張感所抓住，我一個(gè)字也說(shuō)不出來(lái)。Envelopedbyawaveofnervousnessashedeliveredaspeech,Jimsweatedallover.吉姆發(fā)表演講時(shí)被一陣緊張所包圍，汗流浹背【即時(shí)練】他被小男孩的話深深打動(dòng)了，于是同意了男孩的要求。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.像冰一樣站著，從未想過(guò)我會(huì)陷入如此的兩難境地，我感到無(wú)比尷尬和恐慌。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.聽到這個(gè)消息時(shí)，他被一股震驚所抓住，待在原地一動(dòng)不動(dòng)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.聽到這個(gè)好消息，他高興地跳了起來(lái)，眼睛像閃閃發(fā)光的星星一樣閃閃發(fā)光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.回想起那一幕，簡(jiǎn)非常后悔，忍不住哭了起來(lái)，淚水奪眶而出。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識(shí)點(diǎn)4句式四：形容詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)Greatlysurprisedd,Ireaddiaryafterdiary.感到極度驚訝，我一篇接一篇地看著日記。Thrilled,Janequickenedpaceandsprintedtothehelicopter,knowingthatshewouldberescuedeventually.簡(jiǎn)欣喜若狂，加快了步伐，向直升機(jī)沖去，她知道自己終于獲救了。3.Scared,hestoodstillforamoment,notbelievingwhathadjusthappened.感到非常害怕，他一動(dòng)不動(dòng)站在那好一會(huì)，不敢相信剛才發(fā)生的一切。4.Oldoryoung,thepeasantsarebusywithautumnharvest.不論老少，農(nóng)民們都在忙著秋收?！炯磿r(shí)練】1.又意外又開心，他站起身來(lái)去領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.絕望地，Jane跪了下來(lái)，眼淚順著她的臉頰流了下來(lái)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.我們興奮地,迫不及待地想要和外國(guó)學(xué)生交換禮物，以表達(dá)我們彼此真摯的友誼。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.他們強(qiáng)行沖進(jìn)叔叔的臥室，發(fā)現(xiàn)那個(gè)人躺在地板上，已經(jīng)死了。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.他安然無(wú)恙地從戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)中歸來(lái)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.小偷躲在角落里，擔(dān)心被人抓住。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識(shí)點(diǎn)5句式五：身體部位+非謂語(yǔ)的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.自信而堅(jiān)定，大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)奔跑，汗水順著他的臉流下來(lái)。Toourgreatjoy,Davidcrossedthefinishlinesmoothly,hisfaceshiningwithsatisfieddelight.讓我們欣喜若狂的是，大衛(wèi)順利越過(guò)終點(diǎn)線，臉上閃耀著滿足的喜悅。Thechildren,theirfacesshiningwithjoy,rantowardsthepark.孩子們滿臉喜悅地跑向公園。Shesatalone,tearsstreamingdownherface.她獨(dú)自坐著，淚水順著臉頰留下來(lái)。5Theboss,hisvoicerising,demandedanexplanation.老板聲音提高，要求一個(gè)解釋。知識(shí)點(diǎn)6句式六：主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)...，with+情緒名詞動(dòng)作而伴隨的情感，常用下列情感類名詞：伴隨著高興、快樂(lè)、激動(dòng)：delight,joy,happiness,thrill,excitement；伴隨著傷心、悲傷：sadness,sorrow,grief；伴隨著生氣、憤怒：anger,rage；伴隨著恐懼、害怕：fear,horror,scare,terror,fright;伴隨著驚訝：surprise,astonishment,shock等。Frozenwithfear,hecouldn’tutteraword.害怕地一動(dòng)不動(dòng)，他一個(gè)字也說(shuō)不出來(lái)。Hewastongue-tiedwithanger.他因生氣而說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。Peoplearoundsmiledwithsatisfaction.周圍的人滿意地笑了。Withmyeyesfulloftears,Irushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet.我熱淚盈眶，沖出公寓，沿著街道跑?！炯磿r(shí)練】跟老師講出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉著，心跳得像打鼓一樣。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.用灼熱的目光怒視著我，他幾乎控制不住自己的怒火，聲音因憤怒而顫抖。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.覺(jué)得冷得無(wú)法忍受，精疲力竭，完全不知道該如何應(yīng)對(duì)這種可怕的情況。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.一瞬間，淚水涌上眼眶，我感動(dòng)的說(shuō)不出話。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.聽到這話，Bob感到很尷尬，扭動(dòng)并使勁揉搓他的手，似乎是想在這刺骨的冬日里取暖。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.從未想過(guò)我會(huì)陷入如此的兩難境地，我感到無(wú)比尷尬和恐慌。______________________________________________________________________________________________________