高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分技巧技巧一重視構(gòu)成句子的成分生動(dòng)形象的句子成分--主語◎用并列連詞and或or連接兩個(gè)或多個(gè)主語Touchingorpassingfoodoreatingwithyourlefthandistobeavoided.要避免接觸或傳遞食物,或者用左手吃食物〇用定語來修飾主語Playersonasportsteammayfeeldriventoplayharderinordertohelptheteamwin.球隊(duì)的參賽者可能會(huì)感到他們是在被迫為了幫助球隊(duì)獲勝更努力地參加比賽◎描述人物、地點(diǎn)用帶同位語的主語MotherTeresa,winneroftheNobelPeacePrize,dedicatedthemajorityofherlifetohelpingthepoorestofthepoorinIndia,thusgainingherthename“SaintofGutters”諾貝爾和平獎(jiǎng)獲得者特蕾莎修女一生的大部分時(shí)間都致力于幫助印度最貧窮的人，因此獲得了“排水溝圣人”的稱號(hào)。〇用帶有賓語和狀語的非謂語動(dòng)詞作主語Toplayfootballonthesoftlawninthesunnyspringisagreatexperience.陽光明媚的春天，在柔軟的草坪上踢足球是種很好的體驗(yàn)。生動(dòng)形象的句子成分--謂語〇用并列連詞連接兩個(gè)以上平行的謂語動(dòng)詞Istoppedthecar,orderedallkidsoutandtoldthemtomeetmeupahead.我停下車，命令所有孩子們都出去，告訴他們到前面接我。〇平行的謂語動(dòng)詞可以接各自的賓語Idon'twanttowakeuponedayandhavenothingbutapileofpicturesandnotes.我不希望有一天醒來，只有一堆圖片和筆記生動(dòng)形象的句子成分--賓語Obring,hand,lend,mail,offer,owe,pass,paypost,read,return,send,sell,serve,show,take，teach,tell,throw,book,buy,choose,cookdraw,award,fetch,find,fix,get,make,picksave,sing,spare,prepare等動(dòng)詞可以接雙賓語Theteachergavethestudentsasetoftests.老師給學(xué)生們做了一系列測試。Ocall,elect,choose,find,make,name,cut,beat,drive,get,lay,leave,paint,pull,push,set,tear,wish,believe,consider,feel,know,observe,prove，see,show，think等動(dòng)詞可以接復(fù)合賓語Once,Isawthestreetlampslightinguppeopletryingtohidefromtherain.有一次，我看到街燈照亮了試圖躲雨的人們。〇謂語動(dòng)詞可以帶有多個(gè)賓語Iwasbusyrecordingeveryincident,nameandplaceIcameacross.我正忙著記錄每一個(gè)事件，名字和我遇到的地方。〇用復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語Istillrecordideasandquotationsthatstrikemeinbooks,orobservationsthatareparticularlymeaningful.我仍然記錄書中使我感興趣的思想,語錄或有特殊意櫨氌屢義的觀感。生動(dòng)形象的句子成分--表語◎作表語的名詞可以接定語從句AllIrememberedofthepreviousfewdayswerethedullcharacterizationsIhadsetdowninmydiary.我所記得的前幾天的事就是我在日記里的枯煤的描述?！蜃鞅碚Z的形容詞可以接賓語從句IwassuremysonwouldlearnEnglishinacoupleofmonths.我確信我的兒子將在兩個(gè)月內(nèi)學(xué)會(huì)英語，〇作表語的名詞常接介詞短語作定語Theupperfloorisaquietzonewithoverathousandplacesforsilentreading,andplaceswhereyoucansitandworkwithyourowncomputer.樓上是一個(gè)安靜的區(qū)域,有超過一千個(gè)無聲閱讀的地方，也有你可以坐下來獨(dú)自使用自己的電腦工作的地方。生動(dòng)形象的句子成分--定語〇用不定式復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作定語Thelibraryhaslockersforstudentstostorecourseliterature.圖書館有儲(chǔ)物柜供學(xué)生存放課程文獻(xiàn):〇用介詞短語經(jīng)作后置定語Icanstillrecalltheexcitementofbeinginvitedtodancewiththemostattractiveboyattheschoolparty.我還記得在學(xué)校聚會(huì)上被邀請(qǐng)和最有魅力的男孩跳舞時(shí)的興奮。〇用過去分詞短語作后置定語It'ssuchahappy-lookinglibrary,paintedyellow,decoratedwithpalm-treestickersandshelteredfromtheFloridasunbyitsownroof.這是一個(gè)看起來很快樂的圖書館,涂成黃色,用棕櫚樹貼紙裝飾,屋頂還可以遮擋佛羅里達(dá)州的陽光。生動(dòng)形象的句子成分--狀語◎過去分詞短語作狀語,如:Facedwithpressureofstudy,seniorhighschoolstudentsshouldlearntorelaxthemselvesproperly面對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)壓力,高中生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)適當(dāng)放松自己Foundedin1900,itisoneofthemostfamousEnglishnewspapersathomeandabroad.它創(chuàng)立于1900年,是國內(nèi)外最著名的英文報(bào)紙○現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語，如:Livinginanenvironmentfulloffiercecompetition.we,agenerationborninthe9Os,arefacedwithmoredifficulties,problemsandcompetition.生活在一個(gè)充滿激烈競爭的環(huán)境中，我們出生于90年代的這代人，面臨著更多的困難、問題和競爭。Peopletendtoeatinexpensiverestaurantsandorderunusualfood,believingthatwithmoremoneyintheirpockets,itisabsolutelyreasonabletoeatwhatevertheylike.人們傾向于在昂貴的餐館吃飯，點(diǎn)不尋常的食物,認(rèn)為口袋里有更多的錢,想吃什么就吃什么是絕對(duì)合理的。◎不定式短語作狀語,如:lostopsuchuncivilizedphenomenafromhappeningagain,Ithinkmorestrictrulesshouldbemadeandcarriedout.為了防止這種不文明現(xiàn)象再次發(fā)生,我認(rèn)為應(yīng)該制定和執(zhí)行更嚴(yán)格的規(guī)則。技巧二重視使用高級(jí)詞匯用文雅的詞匯替換一般詞匯◎besupposedto替換shouldTheapplicantsshouldbeanoutgoingperson.Theapplicantsaresupposedtobeanoutgoingperson.申請(qǐng)者需要是一個(gè)外向的人。?contributeto替換behelpful/usefulMyskillincommunicationandteamworkarehelpfultomyapplicationforthejob.Myskillincommunicationandteamworkcontributetomyapplicationforthejob.我的溝通和團(tuán)隊(duì)合作能力有助于我申請(qǐng)這份工作?！騮hemajorityof替換mostMostofthestudentspreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.ThemajorityofthestudentspreferwatchingTYathometogoingtothecinema.大多數(shù)學(xué)生喜歡在家看電視而不是去電影院◎apartfrom替換and,also或exceptOurclubconsistsofpaidstaffandasmallteamofunpaidvolunteers.Apartfrompaidstaff,ourclubconsistsofasmallteamofunpaidvolunteers.除了帶薪員工外,我們的俱樂部還包括一小隊(duì)無薪志愿者。增色的高級(jí)詞匯--巧用評(píng)注、總括、銜接類副詞或短語恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用諸如meanwhile,furthermore,fortunately,generally,besides,personally,worsestill,inaddition,inaword,onthecontrary,asisknowntoall,totellyouthetruth,what'smore等評(píng)注、總括、銜接類副詞或短語,平時(shí)注意積累。如:〇恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用meanwhileToachievethegoal,we'llcallontheschooltocommunicatewitheachotherinpolitewords.Weshouldalsobehaveourselvesandobeyschoolrules.Toachievethegoal,we'llcallontheschool!tocommunicatewitheachotherimpolitewords.Meanwhile,weshouldbehaveourselvesandobeyschoolrules.為了實(shí)現(xiàn)這一目標(biāo),我們將呼吁學(xué)校用禮貌的語言相互交流。同時(shí),我們應(yīng)該遵守校規(guī)。〇怡當(dāng)運(yùn)用besides和thereforeWiththedevelopmentofeconomy,peoplecanaffordtogoabroad,Morepeoplearebecominginterestedinforeigncultures,Theyareeagertovisitothercountrieswiththeirowneyes.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,peoplecanaffordtogoabroad.Besides,morepeoplearebecominginterestedinforeigncultures.Therefore,theyareeagertovisitthemwiththeirowneyes.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展,人們有能力出國。此外,越來越多的人對(duì)外國文化感興趣。因此,他們渴望親眼見識(shí)他們?！蚯‘?dāng)運(yùn)用asaresult和worsestillSotheybecomelazyanddevelopbadstudyinghabits.Thismaykilltheircreativethinking.>Asaresult,theybecomelazyanddevelopbadstudyinghabits.Worsestill,itmaykilltheircreativethinking.結(jié)果,他們變得懶惰,養(yǎng)成了不良的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣更糟糕的是,這可能會(huì)扼殺他們的創(chuàng)造性思維◎恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用inconclusionBeingself-disciplinednotonlyhelpsusimproveourselves,butcontributestobuildingupaharmoniousandcivilizedsociety.Inconclusion,beingself-disciplinednotonlyhelpsusimproveourselves,butcontributestobuildingupaharmoniousandcivilizedsociety.總之,自律不僅有助于我們提高自己,而且有助于建立一個(gè)和諧文明的社會(huì)。◎恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用tobeginwith,what'smore和withoutdoubtAfterenteringcollege,Iintendtosetnewgoalsinmystudiesuntillsucceed.ItisnecessaryformetolearntoliveindependentlyandIshoulddolaundryandcleanupallbymyself.Tobeginwith,afterenteringcollege,IintendtosetnewgoalsinmystudiesuntilIsucceed,What'smore,itisnecessaryformetolearntoliveindependently.WithoutdoubtIshoulddolaundryandclean-upallbymyself.首先,進(jìn)入大學(xué)后,我打算在學(xué)業(yè)上設(shè)定新的目標(biāo),直到成功。更重要的是,我有必要學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活。毫無疑問,我應(yīng)該自己洗衣服和打掃衛(wèi)生。增色的高級(jí)詞匯--巧用評(píng)注、總括、銜接類副詞或短語過渡詞語將語義有機(jī)聯(lián)系起來,是銜接前后語甸之間的紐帶,使語義自然而然的由上文轉(zhuǎn)人下文。過渡詞語恰當(dāng)用在兩個(gè)內(nèi)容的接駁處,起到承上啟下的銜接作用。表示舉例(forexample，forinstance,suchas...，take...forexample等),如:Takemyselfforexample,BecauseIambusyinstudyingonweekdays,Ihavelittletimetolookaftermyparents,whichmakesmeguilty.以我自己為例。因?yàn)槲移饺彰τ趯W(xué)習(xí),幾乎沒有時(shí)間照顧父母,這讓我感到內(nèi)疚。Whatyoureceivemaybemuchdifferentfromwhatisinyourmind,forinstance,strangecolor,wrongsizeorbadquality.你收到的東西可能與你想象中的東西有很大不同,例如,奇怪的顏色、錯(cuò)誤的尺寸或糟糕的質(zhì)量表示比較(besimilarto,similarly,incontrast,comparedwith/to等),如:Luckily,shewasnotbadlyinjuredandwesenthertothenearesthospital.Comparedwiththeescapeddriver,IamproudofwhatIdid.幸運(yùn)的是,她傷勢不重,我們把她送到了最近的醫(yī)院。與逃跑的司機(jī)相比,我為自己的作法感到驕傲。Thenwhyshouldwehaveregretsforwhathappenedinthepast?Similarly,weshouldnotattachtoomuchimportancetothefuture.那么我們?yōu)槭裁匆獮檫^去發(fā)生的事情感到遺憾呢?同樣,我們也不應(yīng)過分重視未來。i表示目的(forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto等),如:具林Mostimportantly,Ifoundeverychancetospeakbravelysoastobuildupmyconfidence.最重要的是,我努力尋找每一個(gè)勇敢發(fā)言的機(jī)會(huì),以建立我的信心。Wemustattachgreatimportancetoprotectingtheenvironmentsothatwe'llhaveabetterhometowninthefuture.我們必須高度重視保護(hù)環(huán)境,以便將來有一個(gè)更好的家鄉(xiāng)。表示羅列增加(Firstly,secondly，thirdly,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand,what'smore,inaddition等),如:On(the)onehand,it'sanoccasionforpeopletoknowaboutthewesternculture;ontheotherhand,it'salsoanenjoyablechanceforfriendstogettogethertopromotetheirfriendship.一方面,這是人們了解西方文化的機(jī)會(huì);另一方面,這也是朋友們聚在一起增進(jìn)友誼的好機(jī)會(huì)表示時(shí)間順序(afterwards,immediately，atthatmoment,meanwhile,not...until等),如:Onthemorning,we'llfirstshowyouaroundourcampus.Afterwards,youwillbeledintotheauditorium,whereagroupofChinesestudentswillmeetyou.早上,我們將首先帶你參觀我們的校園。之后,你將被帶進(jìn)禮堂,一群中國學(xué)生將在那里與你見面。表示解釋說明(inthiscase,moreover,furthermore,infact,actually等),如:He,inhisbook,HaiguoTuzhi,introducedmoderntechnologiesandideastoChina.Thatopenedoureyestotheworld.Infact,heinspiresmetomajorinEnglishincollegeandtobeabridgebetweenChinaandtheworld.他在《海國圖志》一書中向中國介紹了現(xiàn)代技術(shù)和思想。這打開了我們對(duì)世界的眼界。事實(shí)上,他激勵(lì)我在大學(xué)主修英語,成為中國與世界之間的橋梁。表示概括歸納(inaword,inconclusion，inbrief,onthewhole,asweallknow,ashasbeenstated等),如:Inaword,smileisakindoflanguagebelongingtoeveryone.總之,微笑是屬于每個(gè)人的一種語言。Onthewhole,itisagoodthingtostudyabroad.However,onemustnotlosesightofthedisadvantages.總的來說,出國留學(xué)是一件好事。然而,我們不能忽視有些缺點(diǎn)。升華的句式結(jié)構(gòu)--變換句子的語態(tài)、語序◎變換語態(tài)，如:Wewillappreciateyourimpressionofourschoolastheclosingoftheinterview.Yourimpressionofourschoolwillbeappreciatedastheclosingoftheinterview.面試結(jié)束后,我們將感謝您對(duì)我們學(xué)校的印象。Thegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostopthewaterpollution.Measuresshouldbetakenbythegovernmenttostopthewaterpollution.政府應(yīng)采取措施制止水污染。Weshouldmakegooduseoftimetolearnourlessonswell.Timeshouldbemadegooduseoftolearnourlessonswell.應(yīng)該好好利用時(shí)間學(xué)好我們的課程。Weshouldpayenoughattentiontoimprovingourpronunciation.Enoughattentionshouldbepaidbyustoimprovingourpronunciation.我們應(yīng)該加以足夠注意去改善我們的發(fā)音?！蜣D(zhuǎn)換語序,如:Helittlerealizeshowimportantthismeetingis.Littledoesherealizehowimportantthismeetingis.他幾乎沒有意識(shí)到這次會(huì)議有多么重要。Wehadnosoonerreachedtheairportthantheplanetookoff.Nosoonerhadwereachedtheairportthantheplanetookoff.我們一到達(dá)機(jī)場,飛機(jī)就起飛了。Whenhereturnedhomeherealizedwhathadhappened.>Onlywhenhereturnedhomedidherealizewhathadhappened.他回家后才意識(shí)到發(fā)生了什么事。Ifounditdifficulttoworkouttheproblem,soIdecidedtoaskTomforadvice.SodifficultdidIfindittoworkouttheproblemthatIdecidedtoaskTomforadvice.我發(fā)現(xiàn)解決這個(gè)問題太難了，所以決定向湯姆請(qǐng)教。Ayoungmansatbythewindowwithamagazineinhishand.Bythewindowsatayoungmanwithamagazineinhishand.窗邊坐著一個(gè)年輕人,手里拿著一本雜志。升華的句式結(jié)構(gòu)---前置狀語、表語等句子成分◎把句子中的表語前置,以狀語的形式開頭,如:Iwassadandannoyed,buttrieditocalm(myselfdownandhadatalkwithhimlater.Thoughsadandannoyed,triedtocalmmyselfdownandlaterhadatalkwithhim.盡管傷心和煩惱,我還是努力讓自己平靜下來，后來和他談了談。sOurapartmentislarge,fully-equippedsandlocatedinabeautifulandquietneighborhood.Soourapartmentmeetsalltheirneeds.Locatedinabeautifulandquietneighborhood,ourlargefully-equippedapartmentmeetsalltheirneeds.我們的大型設(shè)備齊全的公寓位于一個(gè)美麗而安靜的社區(qū),滿足了他們的所有需求。Itisbeneficialandimportanttodevelopapositiveattitudetowardslife,Moreimportantly,itisbeneficialtodevelopapositiveattitudetowardslife.更重要的是,養(yǎng)成積極的生活態(tài)度是有益的。Thoughsomepeoplemayseemweak,theyareactuallystronginmind.Weakthoughsomepeoplemayseem,theyareactuallystronginmind.雖然有些人看起來很軟弱,但實(shí)際上他們內(nèi)心很強(qiáng)大。〇把句子中的部分主語前置,以狀語的形式開頭如口:MyclassmatesandIwilldowhatwecantomakeyourstayinChinaenjoyable.Togetherwithmyclassmates,willdowhatIcantomakeyourstayinChinaenjoyable.和我的同學(xué)們一起,我將盡我所能讓你們在中國過得愉快。升華的句式結(jié)構(gòu)--巧用同位語、插入語◎使用同位語(多用于人物、地點(diǎn)介紹),如:Mr.ShaoisourEnglishteacher.Heis1.75meterstallandweighs75kilograms.HewasborninHebeiProvinceinOctober,1981.Mr.Shao,ourEnglishteacher,is1.75meterswiththeweightof75kilograms,whowasborninHebeiProvinceinOctober,1981.邵先生,我們的英語老師,身高1.75米,體重75公斤,1981年10月出生于河北省。Guilinisafamousinternationaltouristcity.Itiswell-knownforitsbeautifulscenery.Guilin,afamousinternationaltouristcity,iswell-knownforitsbeautifulscenery.桂林是著名的國際旅游城市，以其美麗的風(fēng)景而聞名。◎使用插人語,如:Jackisagoodteacher.Heteacheswellatschool.Jackisagoodteacher;thatistosay,heteacheswellatschool.杰克是個(gè)好老師,也就是說,他在學(xué)校教得很好。Ienjoystayingwithyoungstudents,whoarealwaysenergeticandhavenewideas.Personally,lenjoystayingwithyoungstudents,whoarealwaysenergeticandhavenewideas.Asforme,lenjoystayingwithyoungstudents,whoarealwaysenergeticandhavenewideas.就我個(gè)人而言,我喜歡和年輕的學(xué)生呆在一起，他們總是精力充沛,有新的想法。升華的句式結(jié)構(gòu)--轉(zhuǎn)換成復(fù)合句轉(zhuǎn)換成狀語從句.如:Theworldisbecomingaglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant.AstheworldisbecomingaglobalvillageEnglishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant.隨著世界成為一個(gè)地球村,英語變得越來越重Themostimportantthingtosuccessliesindoingeverysimplethingwell.Whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,themostimportantthingliesindoingeverysimplethingwell.到成功的關(guān)鍵,最重要的是做好每一件簡單的事情。轉(zhuǎn)換成定語從句,如:Thehostfamilyismadeupofthreepeople.Theirflatisonlytwohundredmetersawayfromtheschool.Youwillbestudyinginthatschool.Thehostfamily,whoseflatisonlytwohundredmetersawayfromtheschoolwhereyouwillbestudying,ismadeupofthreepeople.寄宿家庭由三個(gè)人組成,他們的公寓距離你將就讀的學(xué)校只有200米。Somepeoplecouldbericherthanus.Themediahavereportedthat.->Ashasbeenreportedinthemedia,somepeoplecouldbericherthanus.正如媒體報(bào)道的那樣,有些人可能比我們更富有。使用名詞性從句,如:Iamwritingtotellyouabouthowstudentsfromdifferentgradesspendweekendswiththeirfamily.我寫信告訴你不同年級(jí)的學(xué)生如何與家人共度周末。Initially,whatI'mconcernedaboutliesinwhetherthemajorwillbesuitableforme.最初,我關(guān)心的是這個(gè)專業(yè)是否適合我。Butthemostimportantthingisthatthenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.但最重要的是,應(yīng)該控制私家車的數(shù)量升華的句式結(jié)構(gòu)--巧用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu),如:Whenthetestwasfinished,webeganourholiday.Thetestfinished,webeganourholiday.考試結(jié)束了,我們開始了假期。Ifweatherpermits,wewillgoonanoutingtothebeachtomorrow.Weatherpermitting,wewillgoonanoutingtothebeachtomorrow.如果天氣允許,我們明天將去海灘郊游。Asthemeetingwentover,everyonetriedtogohomecarlier.Themeetinggoneover,everyonetriedtogohomeearlier.會(huì)議結(jié)束了,大家都想早點(diǎn)回家。Becausetherewasnothingelsetodo,wewenthome.Therebeingnothingelsetodo,wewenthome.沒有別的事可做,我們回家了。Becauseherglasseswerebroken,shecouldn'tseethewordsontheblackboard.Herglassesbroken,shecouldn'tseethewordsontheblackboard.她的眼鏡壞了,她看不清黑板上的字。升華的句式結(jié)構(gòu)--巧用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)可以充當(dāng)狀語，表示方式，伴隨,原因,結(jié)果,也可以作定語。with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)可以與相應(yīng)的從句互換,寫作時(shí)可靈活運(yùn)用。Asthepaceofmodernlifebecomesfasterandfaster,timeisquiteprecious.Withthepaceofmodernlifebecomingfasterandfaster,timeisquiteprecious.隨著現(xiàn)代生活的節(jié)奏越來越快,時(shí)間非常寶貴。BecausemanyofChineseidiomsarewidelyusedinourdailylife,agoodknowledgeofthemcontributestobetterunderstandingbothspokenChineseandwrittenChinese.WithmanyofChineseidiomswidelyusedinourdailylife,agoodknowledgeofthemcontributestobetterunderstandingbothspokenChineseandwrittenChinese.隨著許多中國成語在我們的日常生活中廣泛使用,對(duì)它們的良好了解有助于更好地理解漢語口語和書面語。Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday，inwhichninepeoplewerekilledandalmosteightyinjured.Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.昨天發(fā)生了一起可怕的事故,9人死亡，近80人受傷。技巧三閃亮的特殊句式通過點(diǎn)綴強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、省略句、祈使句、感嘆句、反問句、諺語等來使寫作語句更美,增加得分亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)綴強(qiáng)調(diào)句,如:ItwaswiththeirhelpandsupportthatIeventuallyovercamemyshynessandbuiltupconfidence.正是在他們的幫助和支持下,我終于克服了害羞,建立了信心。Asformyseniorhighschoollife,Idohaveanunforgettableexperience.至于我的高中生活,我確實(shí)有一段難忘的經(jīng)歷。點(diǎn)綴倒裝句，如:Onlybyusingourtimemoreefficientlycanwebecomeabetterlearner.只有更有效地利用時(shí)間,我們才能成為更好的學(xué)習(xí)者。Nowasateacher,notonlydoesshehaverichteachingexperiencetoinstructallherstudentsbutalsoshehaspublishedmanybooks.現(xiàn)在作為一名教師,她不僅有豐富的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)來指導(dǎo)所有的學(xué)生,而且還出版了許多書。點(diǎn)綴省略句,如:Whilecycling,don'tforgetthetrafficlights.騎自行車時(shí),不要忘記紅綠燈。TheylearnFrenchandweEnglish.他們學(xué)法語,我們學(xué)英語。Someonehasusedmymobilephone,butIdon'tknowwho.有人用過我的手機(jī),但我不知道是誰。Afterlonghoursofwork,Mothershouldtakearestbutshewon't.長時(shí)間工作后,媽媽應(yīng)該休息,但她不會(huì)。Asoundmustbeheard,acolourseen,aflavourtasted.必須聽到聲音,看到顏色,品嘗味道。點(diǎn)綴感嘆句,如:HowhappyIamtolearnthatyourfamilywillbemyhostfamily!得知你家將成為我的寄宿家庭,我真高興!Whatapleasantsurprisetogetyouremailtoday!今天收到你的電子郵件真是一個(gè)驚喜!Howtimeflies!Wewilltakethecollegeentranceexaminationin30days.時(shí)間過得真快!我們將在30天后參加高考。點(diǎn)綴反問句，如:Personally,itisofgreatbenefittojoininthecampaignandformagoodhabitofclearingtheenvironment.Anditisessentialtostartwithourselvesandstartfromnow.Don'tyouthinkSo?就個(gè)人而言,加人這場運(yùn)動(dòng)并養(yǎng)成清理環(huán)境的良好習(xí)慣是非常有益的。必須從我們自己開始，從現(xiàn)在開始。你不這么認(rèn)為嗎?點(diǎn)綴諺語,如:Asacoinhastwosides,themobilephones,whileprovidingconvenience,causetroubletoo.正如硬幣有兩面一樣,手機(jī)在提供便利的同時(shí)也會(huì)帶來麻煩。Astheoldsayinggoes,“Yourfuturedependsonmanythings,butmostlyonyou.”正如老話所說,“你的未來取決于很多事情,但主要取決于你。”出彩的語段構(gòu)架--豐富句式搭配TheSeasonILikeBestiSpring,thesymbolofbeautyandhope,istheseasonIlikebest.Iamfondofspringbecauseittreatsmepoeticsceneryofnature.Bloomingflowersaddvividcolorstomysight.Also,thesymphonyoallkindsofinsectsandbirdsbringsaestheticharmonytome.What'smore,thegentlerainmakesspringafantasyworld.Andit'sbecausespringarouseseveryone'shopethatI'mkeenonspringmost.Look!Thefrozeniceismelting.Listen!Alllivingcreaturesarewakingup.Springpicturesaworldwherecoldanddeatharefadingawaywhilewarmthandlifearecomingback.Thus,everyoneisboundfilledwithhopeandlove.Ilovespring,whichcan'tbetooadmirableandcherished.春天是美麗和希望的象征,是我最喜歡的季節(jié)我喜歡春天,因?yàn)樗o我?guī)砹嗽娨獾淖匀痪吧?。盛開的花朵為我的視野增添了鮮艷的色彩。此外,各種昆蟲和鳥類的交響也帶來了美感更重要的是,溫柔的雨使春天成為一個(gè)夢幻的世界。因?yàn)榇禾靻酒鹆嗣總€(gè)人的希望,所以我最喜歡春天?？?冰凍的冰正在融化。聽!所有的生物都在蘇醒。春天描繪了一個(gè)世界,寒冷和死亡正在消退,而溫暖和生命正在回歸。因此,每個(gè)人都必然充滿希望和愛。我愛春天，這是一個(gè)令人敬佩和珍惜的春天。出彩的語段構(gòu)架--語意無縫銜接轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系(but，yet，however,while),如:Thereisnodoubtthatthispracticedoesgoodtotheenvironment.However,wecan'tdenythefactthatitalsobringsinconveniencetothecustomersandthereforesomecustomersdon'twelcomesuchapractice.毫無疑問,這種做法對(duì)環(huán)境有益。然而,我們不能否認(rèn),這也給客戶帶來了不便,因此一些客戶不歡迎這種做法。Inaddition,wearequick-mindedandcreativeandwecanworkefficiently.Yet,westillneedtolearnmorefromthoseexperienced.此外,我們思維敏捷,富有創(chuàng)造力,能夠高效地工作。然而,我們?nèi)匀恍枰蚪?jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的人多學(xué)習(xí)。遞進(jìn)關(guān)系(besides，moreover,inadditionfurthermore等),如:Inconclusion,breakfastisthenecessarymealforyoutoprovidethe30%ofenergyinawholeday.Moreover,itmakesanoffertodevelopthecreativethinking.總之,早餐是你提供全天30%能量所必需的一餐。此外,它還提供了發(fā)展創(chuàng)造性思維的機(jī)會(huì)Theythinkhomeworkhelpsthemreviewwhathasbeentaughtinclass.Besides,bydoingdailyhomework,theycanbetterunderstandandmemorizetheirlessons.Furthermore,theirskillsinmanagingtimecanalsobeimproved.他們認(rèn)為家庭作業(yè)有助于他們復(fù)習(xí)課堂上所教的內(nèi)容。此外,通過做家庭作業(yè),他們可以更好地理解和記憶他們的課程。并且,他們管理時(shí)間的技能也可以提高。選擇關(guān)系(or，either...or...等),如:Ihopethatyoueitherreturnmymoneyordeliveranewsetofbookstome.我希望你要么退還我的錢,要么給我送一套新書。Withsuchapenfriend,IthinkIcansharewithherourtravelingexperiences,takingcarofpets,orwhateverwehaveincommon.有了這樣一位筆友,我想我可以和她分享我們的旅行經(jīng)歷,照顧寵物,或者我們的共同點(diǎn)。因果關(guān)系(becauseof，owingto,duetothanksto;so,therefore,thus,asaresult等),如:Somepeoplerefusetohelptheoldbecausetheydon'tthinktheycangivetheoldcorrectmedicalcare'duetoalackofprofessional!skills.有些人拒絕幫助老人,因?yàn)樗麄冋J(rèn)為由于缺乏專業(yè)技能,他們無法為老人提供正確的醫(yī)療服務(wù)。Therefore,it'sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.因此,養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣對(duì)我們來說非常重要,比較關(guān)系(onthecontrary,bycomparison,comparedto等),如:Onlywhenwearestrongandhealthycanwehaveenoughenergytolearnourlessonsef-ficiently.Onthecontrary,ifwespendallofourtimeonsubjectstudy,wewillbecomeweakforlackofexercise,whichwillhaveabadeffectonourstudyinreturn.只有當(dāng)我們強(qiáng)壯和健康時(shí),我們才有足夠的精力有效地學(xué)習(xí)我們的課程。相反,如果我們把所有的時(shí)間都花在學(xué)科學(xué)習(xí)上,我們會(huì)因?yàn)槿狈﹀憻挾兊锰撊?這反過來會(huì)對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)產(chǎn)生不良影響。Comparedwiththeescapeddriver,IamproudofwhatIdid.與逃跑的司機(jī)相比,我為自己的行為感到驕傲。列舉事例(forexample,suchas，take...forexample等),如:Besidesstudies,wehaveavarietyofassociations.suchasthedramaclub,themusicclubandthereadingbarandsoon.除了學(xué)習(xí),我們還有各種各樣的社團(tuán),如戲劇俱樂部、音樂俱樂部和閱讀吧等等。However,somepeoplebehaveverybadlyinforeigncountries.Forexample,theydroplittereverywhere,aswellasspitfreelyinpublic,whichnotonlyshowsbadpersonalqualities,butalsodoesgreatharmtotheimageofthecountry.然而,有些人在國外表現(xiàn)得很糟糕。例如,他們隨地亂扔垃圾,以及在公共場所隨意吐痰,這不僅顯示了不良的個(gè)人品質(zhì)，而且對(duì)國家的形象也有很大的危害。出彩的語段構(gòu)架--段落多方位架構(gòu)敘述法(按時(shí)空排列順序構(gòu)架段落),如:Inthemorningyouwillbeshownaroundourschoolandlistentoanintroductionoftheschoolhistoryinthelecturehall.Afterlunch,there’llbeafootballmatchbetweenBritishandChinesestudentsontheplayground.Studentsfrombothofourschoolsarewelcometojo1nin.Intheevening,we’llhaveapartybytheschoollake.早上,你將被帶著參觀我們學(xué)校,并在報(bào)告廳聽取學(xué)校歷史的介紹。午飯后,英國和中國學(xué)生將在操場上進(jìn)行足球比賽。歡迎我們兩所學(xué)校的學(xué)生加人。晚上,我們將在學(xué)校湖邊舉行-個(gè)聚會(huì)。Whenyoucomeoutofyourhotel,gostraightalongtheroadandturnrightonthefirstcorner.Youwillseeahospitalonyourleft.Thenwalkalongtheroadtowardsnorth,andyoucanfindarestaurant.OntheoppositeisjustCuihuPark,Youareexpectedtoarriveatthemaingatebefore9o'clock.I'msureyoucanfinduseasily.當(dāng)你從酒店出來時(shí),沿著路一直走,在第一個(gè)拐角處右轉(zhuǎn)。你會(huì)在左邊看到一家醫(yī)院。然后沿著路向北走,你可以找到一家餐館。對(duì)面就是翠湖公園。你預(yù)計(jì)在9點(diǎn)鐘之前到達(dá)正門。我相信你很容易找到我們。列舉法(分條列舉構(gòu)架段落),如:Inmyopinion,Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly,peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon'twantto.Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors,butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly,thevotersor"eventhecompetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersforcommercialpurposes.在我看來,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)投票已經(jīng)開始對(duì)人們和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響。首先，當(dāng)被要求做他們不想做的事情時(shí),人們可能會(huì)感到被迫。其次,這種投票并不取決于競爭對(duì)手的優(yōu)勢,而是取決于他們擁有多少社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。第三,在許多情況下,選民甚至競爭對(duì)手可能被組織者利用,用于商業(yè)目的。It'snotsurprisingforthemtodoso,Foronething,withthepaceofmodernlifebecomingfasterandfaster,timeisquiteprecious.Intheireyes,itisunnecessarytotaketimetocook.Foranotherthing,homecookingfoodissimplerinkindandlessdelicious,especiallyforthosewhoareparticularaboutfood.他們這樣做并不奇怪。首先,隨著現(xiàn)代生活的節(jié)奏越來越快,時(shí)間非常寶貴。在他們看來,沒有必要花時(shí)間做飯。另一方面,家庭烹飪的食物種類更簡單,也不那么美味,尤其是對(duì)于那些對(duì)食物很講究的人來說。舉例法(通過列舉例子構(gòu)架段落),如:Actually,wecanfindsomeimpoliteandimproperbehaviorwhenwetravelathome.Forexample,sometravelersdroplitteranywhereatscenicspots,smokeinthewoodedmountainsortakephotoswhentheyarenotsupposedto.事實(shí)上,當(dāng)我們在國內(nèi)旅行時(shí),我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)一些不禮貌和不恰當(dāng)?shù)男袨椤＠?一