讀后續(xù)寫如何表達(dá)激動(dòng)背默與仿寫

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晨讀背誦區(qū)：背誦遷移舉一反三

一、晨讀素材-必背單詞

1.激動(dòng)類形容詞和副詞：

初階excited感到激動(dòng)的；exciting令人激動(dòng)的

高階thrilled感到激動(dòng)的；thrilling令人激動(dòng)的；excitedly

2.激動(dòng)類名詞和動(dòng)詞:

初階excitement激動(dòng)，excite使激動(dòng)

高階thrill激動(dòng)，興奮，exaltation得意洋洋，欣喜

二、高頻語塊

1.cheerup振奮起來

2.with/inexcitement激動(dòng)地

3.flushwithexcitement激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.conceal/hideone'sexcitement難掩激動(dòng)

5.containone'sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.toone'sexcitement/thrill令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮

9.tearsofhappinessflowingdown流下幸福的淚水

10.feelamixtureofexcitementandhappiness感覺既興奮又開心

三、佳句賞析

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。

3.Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。

4.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。

5.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。

6.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動(dòng)不已。

7.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。

8.Tearsofexcitementwelledupinhereyesassheacceptedtheflowers.當(dāng)她接過獻(xiàn)花時(shí)，激動(dòng)的淚水充滿

了她的眼睛。

9.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的

心，他感到一陣興奮。

10.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽至U這個(gè)消息，一陣激動(dòng)

的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。

11.Hearingtheexcitingnews,shebouncedupanddownwithexcitement.一聽到這個(gè)激動(dòng)人心的消息，

她高興得上蹦下跳。

12.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她

獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮得不能自已。

13.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyestwinklingwithexcitement.爸爸說下星期去露

營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。

14.Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,

dearmum."不能抑制住他的高興和激動(dòng)，他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道：媽媽，辛苦了。

15.Sighingwithrelief,thetwinshuggedeachotherandshedtearsofexcitementandjoy.這對(duì)雙胞月臺(tái)松了

一口氣，互相擁抱，留下來激動(dòng)和高興的眼淚。

測(cè)試反饋區(qū)：分級(jí)測(cè)試步步為贏

一、晚練-高頻語塊漢譯英

1.振奮起來

2.激動(dòng)地

3.激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.難掩激動(dòng)

5.抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.一陣興奮

9.流下幸福的淚水

10.感覺既興奮又開心

【參考答案】

1.cheerup振奮起來

2.with/inexcitement激動(dòng)地

3.flushwithexcitement激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.conceal/hideone'sexcitement難掩激動(dòng)

5.containone*excitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.toone飛excitement/thrill令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮

9.tearsofhappinessflowingdown流下幸福的淚水

10.feelamixtureofexcitementandhappiness感覺既興奮又開心

二、晚練?佳句賞析漢譯英

1.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。(choke)

2.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。(light)

3.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。(ripple)

4.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。(shine)

5.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動(dòng)不已。(heart)

6.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。(flutter)

7.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的心，他感到一陣興奮。(surge)

8.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí),她興奮得不能自已。(hold)

9.這對(duì)雙胞胎松了一口氣，互相擁抱，留下來激動(dòng)和高興的眼淚。(shed)

10.爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。(twinkle)

【參考答案】

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。

3.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。

4.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。

5.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動(dòng)不已。

6.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。

7.Theteacher5sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的

心，他感到一陣興奮。

8.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲

獎(jiǎng)時(shí),她興奮得不能自己。

9.Sighingwithrelief,thetwinshuggedeachotherandshedtearsofexcitementandjoy.這對(duì)雙胞月臺(tái)松了

一口氣，互相擁抱，留下來激動(dòng)和高興的眼淚。

10.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyestwinklingwithexcitement.爸爸說下星期去露

營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。

仿寫實(shí)戰(zhàn)區(qū)：模仿借鑒學(xué)以致用

一、讀后續(xù)寫情景運(yùn)用一單句

閱讀所給首句，在了解首句所設(shè)定的情境后，用一句話進(jìn)行與感動(dòng)之情相關(guān)的主題續(xù)寫。

1.Onthejourneytothelake,Mom.

2.Mominsistedthatwegocampinginthenextvillage,hereyns.

3.Whenwearrivedatthecampingplace,Momcouldn'twaittostormoutandurgedusto

putupthetent.

4.Then,Momwalkedtowardsthelake,andthencame.

5.Enjoyingthebeautifulview,Momcouldhardly.

6.Certainly,asitwasthefirsttimethatwehadhelpedfathercookfoodoutdoors,mybrotherandI

also.

7.Breathingthefreshairandsmellingthedeliciousfood,wejumpedupanddown.

【參考答案】

1.Onthejourneytothelake,awideexcitementtookholdofMom.

2.Mominsistedthatwegocampinginthenextvillage,hereyestwinklingwithexcitement.

3.Whenwearrivedatthecampingplace,Momcouldn'twaittostormoutandexcitedlyurgedustoputup

thetent.

4.Then,Momwalkedtowardsthelake,andthencameascreamofexcitement.

5.Enjoyingthebeautifulview,Momcouldhardlycontainherexcitement.

6.Certainly,asitwasthefirsttimethatwehadhelpedfathercookfoodoutdoors,mybrotherandIalsofelt

thrilled.

7.Breathingthefreshairandsmellingthedeliciousfood,wejumpedupanddownwithexcitement.

二、讀后續(xù)寫情景運(yùn)用一段落

請(qǐng)運(yùn)用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補(bǔ)充完整。

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1（媽媽激動(dòng)不已）.

Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2（抑制興奮），andwould

3（振奮起來）likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround

4（興奮地）.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5（激動(dòng)得

尖叫起來），Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6（眼

里閃著激動(dòng)的光芒），wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.

【參考答案】

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,awaveofexcitementtakingholdof

Mom.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardlycontainherexcitement,andwouldcheer

uplikeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaroundwithexcitement.Themoment

wearrivedatthecampingplace,lettingoutascreamofthrill,Momlocatedaclearingandimmediately

guidedustopitchthetent.Witheyeszlittering/twinklingwithexcitement,wesatonthegrass,enjoying

thesplendidnature.

四、情感表達(dá)語篇運(yùn)用

1.（24-25高三上?廣東廣州?開學(xué)考試）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成

一篇完整的短文。

HoldingMom'sHand

Technicallyspeaking,myMomisold-sheisinher70snow.Sheonceusedtobeawomanfulloflifeand

laughter.AllofthatchangedaftermyDadpassedawayabouttenyearsago.Althoughtheywerenotwhatyou

wouldcalla"loveydovey^^couple,Momdidtakehissuddendeathquitebadly.Tomakemattersworse,my

brotherdecidedtorelocatetoanothercity,whileMomdecidedtostaybehindwithhersister.

WhenevermyMomcomesovertostaywithmeforsometime（Ilivewithmyhusbandandhisparents）,

shealwaysdemandsconstantattentionfromme.Shegenerallygetsnostalgic（懷舊的）ofthegoodoldtimeswe

usedtospendtogetherdiscussingpets,books,cooking,orlifeingeneral.Sometimesitturnedintoacomplaining

session一"Youneversparetimeformeanymore^^or"Ihavebecomeuselesstoeveryone^^.Ialwaysusedtoretort

（反駁）with"Oh,Mom,pleasedon,tstartalloveragain^^orsometimesrudelyremark,ctHowcanyouexpectmeto

dothethingsweusedtodotogetheryearsago?Thereisnotimeforsuchthingsanymore!,9Momwouldbecome

silent,probablybecauseshehadresignedherselftothewaythingsarenow.IcouldsenseIhadhurtherbutthere

waslittleIcoulddo,orsoIthoughtatthetime.

Thenitstruckme-Ialwaystrytobenicetopeopleatwork.Idorandomactsofkindnessforstrangers.I

sometimessurpriseanoldfriendwithaphonecall.ButwhathaveIdoneformyMom?WhyisitthatIamso

reluctanttoholdherhandsinfrontofothers?IsitbecauseIamembarrassedtobelabeledas"mama'sgirl”atmy

age?Well,Iamnolongeryoungmyself.IsitbecauseIhavetakenmyMomforgrantedbecauseherdaysare

done?

Todaywasyetanotherchaoticday.Iwasoccupiedindealingwithmyownthings,gettingreadyforwork,

leavingmyMomtohaveherbreakfastallaloneatthetable.Ihadsomanythingsonmymind-thedeadlineat

work,anappointmentwithmydentist,whattocookfordinner...

注意：

⑴續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Momstaredatmesilently,withawronged(委屈的)look.

Then,allofsudden,Istoppedmyself.

【答案】

Momstaredatmesilently,withawrongedlook.Hereyes,oncefilledwithlaughterandlife,nowhelda

hintofsadnessanddisappointment.Itwasasifshewassilentlyaccusingmeofneglectingher,offorgetting

thebondweonceshared.Thesightofherlikethatpiercedmyheart,remindingmeofallthetimesIhad

beentoobusyortoopreoccupiedtogivehertheattentionshedeserved.Irealizedthenthatmyactionshad

causedherpain,andIfeltadeepsenseofregret.

Then,allofsudden,Istoppedmyself.Ihaltedinmytracks,mid-stride,asifaswitchhadflippedinside

me.So,IturnedaroundandwalkedbacktothetablewhereMomsat,Isatdownnexttoher,tookherhand

inmine,andapologizedsincerelyformyneglect."Mom,Fmsorry.IknowFvebeentoobusylatelyand

haven'tbeengivingyouthetimeandattentionyoudeserve."Mom'sfacelitupwithasmile,andIcouldsee

thesadnessinhereyesbegintofadeaway.Fromthatmomenton,Imadeaconsciousefforttospendmore

qualitytimewithher,tolistentoherstoriesandshareinherjoysandsorrows.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的父親去世，剩下母親照顧家庭，獨(dú)自老去。母親總是懷念

過去，作者對(duì)此感到不耐煩。某天作者忙碌時(shí)突然意識(shí)到自己忽視了母親，于是向母親道歉，并用行動(dòng)彌

補(bǔ)了過去的虧欠。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“媽媽默默地盯著我，一副委屈的樣子”可知，第一段可描寫母親的神情帶給作者的感

受。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“然后，突然間，我停住了”可知，第二段可描寫作者向母親道歉，并用行動(dòng)彌補(bǔ)了過

去的虧欠。

2.續(xù)寫線索：母親委屈一作者傷心一作者道歉一作者彌補(bǔ)一作者陪伴母親

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①充滿：befilledwith/befullof

②意識(shí)到：realize/beawareof

③造成：cause/contributeto

情緒類

①悲傷：sadness/sorrow

②真誠：sincerely/heartily

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Irealizedthenthatmyactionshadcausedherpain,andIfeltadeepsenseofregret.（運(yùn)用

了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Ihaltedinmytracks,mid-stride,asifaswitchhadflippedinsideme.（運(yùn)用了asif引導(dǎo)方式狀語從

句）

2.（23-24.河北石家莊.二模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整

的短文。

WhenIenteredmyfirstrodeo（牛仔競(jìng)技比賽），Iwas12yearsold.Itwasmorelikeaplaydaythanarodeo,

buttoa12-year-oldgirllikeme,IfeltlikeIwasattheNationalFinalsRodeo!

Astobarrelracing（繞桶賽），Ididn'tknowmuchaboutit,onlywhatmydadhadtoldme.ButIhadbeen

determinedtoentertheplayandwintheplayeversinceIwastoldthatmynotsomucholdercompetitivecousin

Courtneywouldbethere.ThiswasmynighttofinallyshowherthatIcouldrideahorsejustasgoodorbetter,and

doanythingelseshecoulddo.Shewasinforasurprise!

Courtneyalwaysthoughtshewasbetterthanme.Shealwayssaidherhorsewasbetterthanmine,too.

CourtneyhadaPalominohorsenamedBuck.Hewasfast,andbeautiful.MyhorsewasabigAppaloosanamed

Zipper.Hewasn'tbeautifulorflashylikeBuckbuthewaskindandwillingtopleasetheskinnylittlegirlthatfed

himsugarseverydayafteradayofriding.ThatwasthereasonIknewwecouldbeatCourtney,becausewehad

somethingshedidn't-apartnership,onewebothrespected.

CourtneyandIwereinthe12-14agegroup.AsIwatchedthemeninthearena（競(jìng)技場(chǎng)）setthethreebarrels

upintheirplaces,Ifeltnervousandalittlescaredforthefirsttimethatnight.ThoughIhadpreviouslypracticeda

lotwithZipper,andZipperracedfastandmadeturnsstably,Istillgotupsetwhenthinkingaboutracingagainst

Courtney!

Iclosedmyeyes,takingadeepbreath.Suddenly,Ifeltawarmfamiliarhandonmyshoulder.ItwasDad.He

smiledatme,saying,t6Areyouscaredornervous?Orboth?”"Both,butI'mmorescaredthatI'mgoingtomess

up,“Ireplied,truthfully.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。

“Youwon't.JusthavefaithinyourselfandZipper,“Dadsaid.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.

【滿分范文】

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper/9Dadsaid.ThafswhenIrealizedIwasnotgoing

intothatarenaalone,butwithmypartner!Zipperhadbeenpracticingjustashardasme.SoIthought,ifI

messedup,hewouldberighttheretocorrectme."Iknowwhattodo,Dad.Thankyou."Dadjustsmiled,

“Nowgowarmupandwinatrophy!”Soon,itwasmyturn.ZipperandIdidtogethersmoothlyalltheway.

Andtomygreatsurpriseandexcitement,IbeatCourtneyandwon,thoughitwasjustanarrowvictory.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.WhileZipperwasenjoyingthe

sugars,IwenttoDad.Hewassittinginhislawnchairtothesideofthearena,watchingtheridersfrom

otheragegroups.Whenhesawme,hecouldn'thidehisexcitement.UIknewyouwouldmakeit,“hesaid.I

noddedandhuggedhimtightly.ThatnightItookhomeatrophybiggerthanIwas.BothDadandIwere

proud.IknewafterthatnightIwouldneverbeabletogotositinthestandsandwatch.Iwashookedand

wantedtobethebest.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者第一次參加牛仔競(jìng)技比賽時(shí)，既緊張又害怕，害怕自己會(huì)搞

砸。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容““你不會(huì)的。只要對(duì)自己和Zipper有信心，”爸爸說。”可知，第一段可描寫作者在爸

爸的鼓舞下，贏得了比賽。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“比賽結(jié)束了，我?guī)ipper去休息了，因?yàn)樗憩F(xiàn)好我給了他糖?！笨芍?，第二段可描

寫作者找到爸爸，爸爸看到作者后很高興，并以作者為驕傲，作者從此喜歡上了比賽。

2.續(xù)寫線索：爸爸鼓勵(lì)一意識(shí)到有Zipper的陪伴一贏得比賽一帶Zipper去休息一找到爸爸一爸

爸為作者而感到自豪——喜歡上了比賽

3.詞匯激活行為類

①打敗：beat/defeat

②成功做到：makeit/succeed

③擁抱某人：hugsb./givesb.ahug

情緒類

①感謝某人：thanksb./showone'sgratitudetosb./begratefultosb.

②興奮：excitement/agitation

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]ThafswhenIrealizedIwasnotgoingintothatarenaalone,butwithmypartner!（運(yùn)用了

when引導(dǎo)的表語從句）

[高分句型2]SoIthought,ifImessedup,hewouldberighttheretocorrectme.（運(yùn)用了省略that弓|導(dǎo)的賓語從

句和if引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）

[高分句型3]Andtomygreatsurpriseandexcitement,IbeatCourtneyandwon,thoughitwasjustananow

victory.（運(yùn)用了though引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）

3.（24-25?江蘇射陽?8月月考）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整

的短文。

Inmychildhood,undertheinfluenceofmyelderbrotherandmypeersintheneighborhood,Itriedanumber

ofoutdooractivities.Ofcourse,Iwasnotsotakenbyallofthem,whetherIwasdoingthemforthefirsttimeor

continuously.However,fatehaditsownplansinstore.Youneverknowwhenanoutdooractivitywillchangemy

life.

Thenameofthisactivityis“fishing”.Abouttenyearsago,Ididn'treallyliketheideaofsittingonthebank

ofalakeorriver,spendinglonghoursunderthesun'sultravioletrays,whichcancausesunburnsandskindamage,

andanxiouslyanticipatingsomefishtobekindtotakemybait（誘餌）.Infact,Iusedtothinkofthisoutdoor

activityassomekindof"hide-and-seek-game“thatispopularwithmostyoungkids,exceptthatitwasmuch

harderbecauseIcouldseemy“prey（獵物）“onlyaftercatchingit.

However,allthatchangedwhenIpaidavisittomyauntinthecountrysideduringasummerholiday.Iwas

finallyconvincedbyoneofmycousinstoaccompanyhimtoanearbylakeinordertodosomefishingpractice

withhim.Infact,heevenassuredmethatfishwouldeatmybaits.SoIagreedandwenttothelakeexpectingto

catchsomefish.Beforethrowingmyfishinglineintothewater,mycousindidsometricksattachingsomesortof

foodtomyfishingpole.

Learningtofishinariverorlakecanbechallengingforthebeginnerslikeme.Theactofdroppingalineis

easy,butbeingasuccessfulfisherishard.ThafswhytheycallitfishingbutnotcatchingButwithpracticeand

patience,itcanbecomeeasierovertime.Patienceisessentialinlakefishing.Itmaytakesometimetofindthe

rightspotorlure（魚餌）thatwillattractfish.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.

Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!

【答案1Onepossibleversion:

Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.Hetaughtmehowtoadjustmypolebasedon