專題十五短文改錯【考綱解讀】卷名考點20172016201520142013合計課標Ⅰ課標Ⅱ課標Ⅲ課標Ⅰ課標Ⅱ課標Ⅲ課標Ⅰ課標Ⅱ課標Ⅰ課標Ⅱ課標Ⅰ課標Ⅱ動詞22424233132331名詞、數(shù)詞21011111111213連詞10131010102111形容詞11200220320013副詞21010102212113代詞02213212001014冠詞11111111111112介詞12010111121213考點內(nèi)容考生具備判斷、發(fā)現(xiàn)、糾正語境中語言使用錯誤的能力以及在語篇中綜合運用英語知識準確性的能力。分析解讀高考英語短文改錯涉及詞匯、語法、句型結(jié)構(gòu)等方面的知識和邏輯推理及綜合判斷,是一種在較高層次上考查考生對英語知識的掌握和語言綜合運用能力的測試題型。短文改錯所考查的詞類覆蓋面廣,分布合理。錯誤包括詞法、句法、語篇結(jié)構(gòu)及行文邏輯等,涉及名詞、冠詞、代詞、介詞、形容詞、副詞、連詞、動詞時態(tài)、動詞語態(tài)、非謂語動詞、主謂一致等語法知識。在短文改錯題中,占相當大比例的是動詞的形式變化,如一般現(xiàn)在時第三人稱單數(shù)、過去式、過去分詞、現(xiàn)在分詞(動名詞)及被動語態(tài)等。其他如名詞復數(shù)的變化、主謂一致、詞與詞之間的搭配、詞法、句法及語篇中的行文邏輯等方面也會交替出現(xiàn)。短文改錯以記敘文為主,題材和語言符合中學生的實際閱讀水平;句子結(jié)構(gòu)由以簡單句為主逐漸過渡到以復合句和并列句為主。學生在平時的寫作中常出現(xiàn)的錯誤是短文改錯考查的重點。【命題探究】(2017課標全國Ⅰ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。命題方法1.命題者選擇難易程度和語言材料適合高中學生的文章。2.命題者針對中英文語言的差別和學生易出錯的地方命題。3.基本上不涉及生僻的語言現(xiàn)象。精準審題通讀全文了解到本文為記敘文,介紹了作者在暑期第一次在駕校學習開車的經(jīng)歷。時態(tài)應以一般過去時為主。解題步驟1.審文體及文意。通過審文體和文意可以大致了解文章的時態(tài)及邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)。2.從詞法、句法、邏輯角度逐句修改。3.再次通讀全文復核,必要時做出一些改正。Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructorsorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.高效解題①此處表示“第18個生日”,需用序數(shù)詞,故將eighteen改為eighteenth。②序數(shù)詞前應該用定冠詞the;本句中也可用形容詞性物主代詞,表示“我的第一天”,故在firstday前加my或the。③上車之前,我認為自己已經(jīng)了解了教練的指示,但是車一發(fā)動起來,我的頭腦就一片空白了。根據(jù)語境可知前后之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而非因果關(guān)系,故改為表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的并列連詞but或者yet。④本文講的是過去的經(jīng)歷,需用一般過去時,故將goes改為went。⑤根據(jù)后面的“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”可知教練一直重復說的有多句話,故改word為words。⑥“Turningleft!”表示教練發(fā)出的命令,與前面的兩句話應該為同樣的句式(祈使句),故將Turning改為Turn。⑦本句使用了so...that...句型,so在句中修飾形容詞nervous,much多余,故刪除。⑧表示“幾分鐘之后”,需用“afewminuteslater”。⑨stop為名詞,需用形容詞修飾,故將suddenly改為sudden。⑩inthemiddleof為固定短語,意為:在……中間,故將on改為of。【答案】Inthesummerholidayfollowingmy①Q(mào)UOTEbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhard②∧the/myfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructorsorders,③QUOTEonceIstartedthecar,mymind④QUOTEblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthe⑤QUOTE,“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“⑥QUOTEleft!”Iwasso⑦muchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminutes⑧QUOTE,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoa⑨QUOTEstopjustinthemiddle⑩QUOTEtheroad.【五年高考】Correction1(2017課標全國Ⅱ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!答案Mr.andMrs.Zhang①Q(mào)UOTE/allworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemabout②QUOTEhourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyare③QUOTEinplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,④QUOTEisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetup⑤QUOTEandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsobought⑥forsomegardeningtools.⑦QUOTE,theyoftengetsomeuseful⑧QUOTEfromtheInternet.Whensummer⑨QUOTE,theywillinvitetheirstudents⑩∧topickthefreshvegetables!Correction2(2017課標全國Ⅲ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbeeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.答案WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealize①ofhowfasttimeflies.I②QUOTEgrownnotonlyphysically,③QUOTEalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowas④QUOTE,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschooland⑤QUOTEanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmein⑥∧the/thispicturearethethings⑦QUOTEwereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudying⑧QUOTEkindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthe⑨QUOTEmusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesof⑩QUOTEhighschooldays.Correction3(2016課標全國Ⅰ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbeingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.答案Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantcloseto①Q(mào)UOTEIlive.Thoughnotverybig,②buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleeven③QUOTEtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessis④QUOTE.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetables⑤QUOTEhighqualityoilare⑥QUOTEforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreams⑦∧ofbeingrichin⑧QUOTEshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthat⑨QUOTEbusinesswillgrow⑩QUOTE.Correction4(2016課標全國Ⅱ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Thesummerholidayising.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itisfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.答案Thesummerholidayising.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabout①Q(mào)UOTEtododuringtheholiday.Wecan②QUOTEbetweenstayingathomeand③QUOTEatrip.Ifwestayathome,itisfortable④QUOTEthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleabout⑤∧theworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroaden⑥QUOTEviewandgain⑦QUOTEwecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwe⑧QUOTE/cangotoplacesofinterestnearby.I⑨QUOTEthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcost⑩QUOTE,yetwecanstilllearnalot.Correction5(2016課標全國Ⅲ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidntseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,IevenfeltmyparentscouldntunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.答案Theteenage①Q(mào)UOTEfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestand②QUOTEyearsinmylife.At③thefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsby④QUOTE.However,myparentsdidntseemtothink⑤QUOTE.Theyalways⑥QUOTEmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,IevenfeltmyparentscouldntunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbe⑦QUOTEfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentby⑧QUOTEstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghome⑨QUOTEcollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowhenever⑩∧Ineedhelp.Correction6(2016四川)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。ItisMothersDaytoday.Thoughitsawesternfestival,itspopularinChinanow.Momhasafulltimejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMothersDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMomsfavoritest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMothersDay!”Momwasgratefulandmoving.答案ItisMothersDaytoday.Thoughitsawesternfestival,itspopularinChinanow.Momhasafulltimejob,①Q(mào)UOTEshehastodomostofthe②QUOTE.Sheisagreatmother.BothDad③QUOTEIplannedtodosomethingonMothersDay.We④QUOTEupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwent⑤onshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersin⑥QUOTEhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedin⑦∧thekitchen.Thedishes⑧QUOTE/whatIcookedwereMoms⑨QUOTE.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMothersDay!”Momwasgratefuland⑩QUOTE.Correction7(2016浙江)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加,刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。例如:Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospend∧theweekendwithyou.LuckilyIwasQUOTEpletelyfreethen,soIlltosay“yes”.IllarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.QUOTEFridayevening.WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,wedgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.答案WhenIwasaveryyoung①Q(mào)UOTE,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyears②QUOTE.Everytimehearrivedhomeat③∧theendoftheday,wedgreet④QUOTEatthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowe⑤QUOTEandpretendnotto⑥QUOTEus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhave⑦hadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whilethey⑧QUOTE,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptosit⑨QUOTEthetopofthefridge.Itwasboth⑩QUOTEandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.Correction8(2015課標Ⅰ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybeeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,welllivetoregretit.答案WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.I①Q(mào)UOTEIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomein②∧thecountryside.Theretheairisclean③QUOTEthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,④QUOTEthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshave⑤beenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybeeavery⑥QUOTEproblem.The⑦QUOTEwebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.⑧QUOTErareanimalsaredyingout.Wemust⑨QUOTEwaystoprotect⑩QUOTEenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,welllivetoregretit.Correction9(2015課標Ⅱ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.答案Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhis①Q(mào)UOTE.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoy②QUOTEashopwindow.Helikeditso③verymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.After④QUOTEatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfound⑤/wherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredand⑥QUOTEtocry.Awomansawhimcryingand⑦QUOTEhimtowaitoutside⑧QUOTEshop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysaw⑨∧hisparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwere⑩QUOTEworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.Correction10(2015浙江)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。例如:ItwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendQUOTEweekendwithyou.LuckilyIwasQUOTEpletelyfreethen,soIllto\say“yes”.IllarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.inQUOTEFridayevening.Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Onthelefthandsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.答案Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethree①Q(mào)UOTEoftheclassroomweremade②QUOTEglass.Ienjoyed③QUOTEclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Onthelefthandsideoftheclass,Icould④QUOTEseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroom⑤QUOTEalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaround⑥QUOTE.Fartherinthedistance,Icould⑦notenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversin⑧∧ahurryinthemorning.Thepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademe⑨QUOTElikeIwasdreaming.⑩QUOTEIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.Correction11(2015陜西)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線(),并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!答案Mysoccercoachretired①inlastweek.Iwantedtodo②QUOTEspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthe③QUOTEbiscuitsintheworld,soI④QUOTEtoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasic⑤QUOTEofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereally⑥QUOTE.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloor⑦QUOTEIwaspackingthemup.At⑧QUOTEparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjust⑨∧togetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandme⑩QUOTEthebiscuitswithhappylaughter!Correction12(2015四川)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每句不超過兩個錯誤;2.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;3.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Hi,Janice,ItsbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.Wevebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.ItsbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatimewastingactivity!Infact,Idontliketogoanymore,soImafraidIlllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace答案Hi,Janice,ItsbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywant①∧tosharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsI②QUOTEyoulasttime,Imadethreenew③QUOTEhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.Wevebeenspendingalotoftime④QUOTEinkaraokebars.ItsbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsme⑤QUOTE.AndIstartedtoseethisasatimewastingactivity!Infact,Idontliketogoanymore,⑥QUOTEImafraidIlllosetheirfriendship.⑦QUOTEdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyou⑧QUOTEme,wouldyoutalkto⑨QUOTE?Pleasehelp⑩withmeandgivemesomeadvice.GraceCorrection13(2014課標Ⅰ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!答案Nearlyfiveyears①Q(mào)UOTE,andwiththehelp②QUOTEourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—forallthese③QUOTE—we④QUOTEbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.As⑤∧aresult,theplantsaregrowing⑥QUOTE.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyand⑦QUOTE.Thereareso⑧QUOTEthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,⑨but/QUOTEwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowing⑩QUOTEtomatoesatnocost!Correction14(2014課標Ⅱ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidntneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafterschoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.答案Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.①Q(mào)UOTEarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.We②QUOTEneedtodoso③QUOTEhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretime④QUOTEafterschoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalf⑤QUOTEandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschool⑥QUOTElikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsof⑦theflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,or⑧QUOTEbythelakelistening⑨∧tomusic.Theteachersherearekindand⑩QUOTE.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.Correction15(2014浙江)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加,刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。例如:Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospend∧theweekendwithyou.LuckilyIwasQUOTEpletelyfreethen,soIlltosay“yes”.IllarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.QUOTEFridayevening.IwastakingatraintoLondonsVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspectorestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldntfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticketownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.答案IwastakingatraintoLondonsVictoriaStation.I①hadnoticedthatthecarriagewas②QUOTEandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspector③QUOTEtocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldntfindhisticket④QUOTEbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearching⑤∧fortheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfrom⑥QUOTEowner.Thepersonwhofound⑦QUOTEticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehad⑧QUOTEspokentoorevennoticedtheticketownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthe⑨QUOTEtheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothers⑩QUOTEneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.Correction16(2014遼寧)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwevebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,werehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.WevecalledseveraltimeaboutCleosearlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshesoutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5oclock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRose答案DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwevebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,werehopingtosettlesomethingthatbothers①tous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.Wevecalledseveral②QUOTEaboutCleosearlymorningbarking.Itisdifficultto③QUOTEwhyshebarkseveryminuteshesoutside.Theearlymorningbarking④QUOTEbeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.⑤QUOTE,Cleotendstobark⑥QUOTEaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshe⑦QUOTEbarkingevenbefore5oclock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhow⑧QUOTEthehousesare.Weappreciate⑨QUOTEapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigure⑩∧outagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRoseCorrection17(2013課標Ⅰ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.答案Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedto①Q(mào)UOTEmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshe②QUOTEaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfathervery③QUOTE.Hewastall,withbroad④QUOTEandabeardthatturnedfromblack⑤QUOTEgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichset⑥QUOTEapartfromothersinoursmalltown,⑦∧andhewasstrongandpowerful.In⑧afact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesaway⑨QUOTEtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhave⑩QUOTEknown.Correction18(2013課標Ⅱ)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。ThebookImreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800s.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8oclockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbeesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.答案ThebookImreading①oftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800s.②QUOTEteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,③QUOTEmightnotbeserveduntil8oclockatnight.Thiscustomsoon④QUOTEanothermealof⑤∧theday.⑥QUOTE,ithadaconnection⑦QUOTEtheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditionally⑧QUOTEfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgood⑨QUOTEwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthe⑩QUOTEintheporcelainindustry.Correction19(2013浙江)下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加,刪除或修改某個單詞。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。例如:Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospend∧theweekendwithyou.LuckilyIwasQUOTEpletelyfreethen,soIlltosay“yes”.IllarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.QUOTEFridayevening.DearDiary,HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowIllneverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.Yours,Rosemary答案DearDiary,HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350miles①farawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywe②QUOTElastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofind③QUOTEone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomy④QUOTE,myschool⑤QUOTEjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakematters⑥QUOTE,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowis⑦∧the/myfirstdayofschool.Iamawfully⑧QUOTE,butIknowIllneverfall⑨QUOTE.Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,⑩QUOTEmyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.Yours,RosemaryCorrection20(2013遼寧)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.答案Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtime①Q(mào)UOTEhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,②soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardwork③QUOTEmadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhis④.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatis⑤QUOTEotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,Ipaid⑥∧avisi