書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)期中復(fù)習(xí)

unit8-unit14書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)期中復(fù)習(xí)匯報(bào)人：話(huà)題分析本單元以“Mysteries”為話(huà)題，此類(lèi)寫(xiě)作命題通常采用“GuidedWriting”形式，根據(jù)中文或英文內(nèi)容提示寫(xiě)作；也有根據(jù)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮合理想象，描繪細(xì)節(jié)，連接成一個(gè)故事。

早上，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)Jack兩眼通紅。于是大家紛紛猜測(cè)Jack發(fā)生了什么事情，有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為他昨天晚上一直在玩手機(jī)游戲，有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為他昨晚做作業(yè)做到很晚，也有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為……，而真正的原因是他感冒了，沒(méi)有睡好。請(qǐng)以“WhathappenedtoJack?”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。實(shí)例分析

WhathappenedtoJack?引出話(huà)題各種猜想最終結(jié)果Jack’seyeswereredplayedmobilegamesallnightdidhishomeworkverylatewatchedTVthewholenightcaughtabadcold

連句成篇Thismorning,wefoundthatJack’seyeswerered.Whathappenedtohim?Weguessed.Someoftheboysthoughtthathemusthaveplayedmobilegamesallnight,becausehealwaysspentalongtimedoingthat.Butsomegirlsdidn’tagree.Theybelievedthathemusthavedonehishomeworkverylate.

OthersthoughtthathewaswatchingTVthewholenight,becausetherewasanNBAgamelastnight.ButIdidn’tagreewiththem.Hisparentswereverystrictwithhim,sohecouldn’thaveplayedgamesorwatchedTV.Then,weaskedhimduringthebreak,andhesaidhecoughtabadcold.PoorJack!

抓要點(diǎn)KeypointsMyfavoriteMusickindsofmusic（音樂(lè)類(lèi)型）why

（推薦的理由）importanceofmusic

（音樂(lè)的重要性）

MyFavoriteSongMyfavoritesongchangesdependingonhowIfeelthatday.UsuallyIlikesongsthathavegreatlyricsorrhythm.WhenI’mdownandtired,Iprefersongswhichcancheermeup,songslikeBigBigWorldaremyfirstchoicebecausetheyaredelightfulandeasytofollow.Thelyricsmaybesimple,butverycheerful,andtherhythm,too.開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題展開(kāi)表述【妙筆成篇1】WhenIsingalongwiththem,Ifeelrefreshedandrelaxed.IfI’mstressedoutoruneasy,Ilovetolistentosongsthataregentleandquiet,OurCanoninDismyfavorite,whichisperformedbytwopeople,aguitaristandasinger.Theguitarplayerisgreat,thelyricsarecomfortingandthesingersingsperfectly.Afterlisteningtoit,I’llcalmdownandgainmystrengthagain.Lifewithoutsongswillbeemptyandmeaningless.Ifyoufeellikelisteningtosomething,chooseasongthatyoulikebest.結(jié)尾綜述Mind-mappingSimplewritingDearTony,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Whenyouareeatingatthetable,it’simpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Youarenotsupposedtopointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.Inourhouse,you’resupposedtoshakehandswithmyfatherforthefirsttime.Youarenotsupposedtokisswhenyoumeetmymother.Youcansay“nihao”toherwithabigsmile.Whenyougooutwithpeople,youareexpectedtocallfirst.It’simportanttomakeplanstodosomethinginterestingorgosomewheretogether.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeet-ingyousoon!Bestwishes,LinJie明天英語(yǔ)課上的dutyreport該你發(fā)言了。請(qǐng)你以“AnUnforgettableExperience”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，給大家講述你的一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)

本文根據(jù)要求是一篇記敘文。它主要是說(shuō)明事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、起因、經(jīng)過(guò)及結(jié)果，即我們通常所說(shuō)的五個(gè)“W”（what,who,when,where,why）和一個(gè)“H”(how)。

人稱(chēng)應(yīng)是__________，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)是_______。第一人稱(chēng)過(guò)去時(shí)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)

MydayWhatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?Wheredidithappen?Why?Howdiditmakeyoufeel?Whathappened?Whendidithappen?AnunforgettableexperienceEveryonehastheirownunforgettableexperiences.SodoI.Atabout9:00a.m.

lastSaturday,Iwastakingawalkintheparknearmyhome.SuddenlyIsawabackpacklyingonabench.Ipickeditupandopenedit.Ifoundsomecash,anIDcardandanotebookwiththeowner’snameWangGangandhismobilephonenumberonit.

Then

Icalledtheownerrightaway.HewasverygladthatIhadfoundhisbackpackandaskedmetowaitforhimforawhile.

About20minuteslater,hearrived.Igavethebackpackbacktohimandhethankedmeagainandagain.

Helpingothersmakesmehappyandproud.Ithinkeveryoneshouldhelpothers.寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練Writeastoryaboutyourluckyorunluckydayandtellyourstorytoapartnerortheclass.

MyUnluckyDayIwillalwaysrememberthedate.ItwasJune7th,Sunday.Itwassunny.Itwastheunluckiestdayofmylife.

WhenIwokeupthatmorning,itwas10:00.Ihadtogetupquicklyandeatbreakfast.AfterbreakfastIdecidedtogotoanothercitytobuyacomputer.WhenIarrivedatthebusstop,IfoundIhadleftmywalletathome,soIhadtogobacktogetit.參考范文Finally,Igotonthebus.Unluckily,thebusbrokedown

ontheway.Icouldn’tbelieveIhadtowaitforfivehours.BythetimeIgottothecity,allthecomputershopshadclosed.Therefore,Ihadtogetbacktothebusstation,butthelastbushadalreadyleft.Intheend,Ihadtostayatahotelforonenight.

Whatanunluckyday!文章結(jié)構(gòu)開(kāi)頭句中間段落結(jié)尾句提出問(wèn)題+描述現(xiàn)象What'stheproblem?分析原因Whatcausedtheproblem?提出解決方法

Whatshouldwedo?呼吁大家共同努力解決問(wèn)題Let'stakeaction!

略寫(xiě)略寫(xiě)詳寫(xiě)開(kāi)頭句

Thesedays，(withtherapiddevelopmentofthesociety，)air/waterpollutionisbecomingaseriousproblem.提出問(wèn)題+描述現(xiàn)象What'stheproblem?通過(guò)對(duì)比描述現(xiàn)象

Inthepast,thereusedtobeblueskies/freshair/cleanrivers/manybeautifulwildanimals...

Butnow,skiesaregrey/airisfilledwithhaze(霧霾)/riversarefullofrubbish/thenumberofwildanimalsisgettingsmallerandsmaller...中間段落分析原因Whatcausedtheproblem?空氣污染＊Therearemoreandmorecarsontheroad.＊Manyfactoriesthatburncoalpollutairwithalotofblacksmoke.段首：段落中心句水污染＊Manypeoplethrowlitterintotheriversindailylives.＊Manyfactoriesputwasteintotherivers.中間段落分析原因Whatcausedtheproblem?食物浪費(fèi)＊Manypeoplehaven'trealizedthatthefoodisvaluable.＊Someofusalwaysordertoomanydisheswhenweeatinrestaurants.＊Manypeoplenevertakeawaytherestfoodaftereatinginreataurantsbecausetheyareafraidtolosetheirfaces.段首：段落中心句動(dòng)物瀕危＊Moreandmoreanimalsgethomelessbecauseofbadenvironmentconditions.＊Manypeopletakeriskstokillanimalsformoney.中間段落提出解決方法Howcanwesolvetheproblem?空氣污染＊Tocutdownairpollution,weshouldtakethebusorsubwayinsteadofdriving.＊Wecanreduceairpollutionbyplantingmoretrees.段首：段落中心句水污染＊Everyoneshouldhelptocleanuptherivers.＊Weshouldwritetothegovernmenttoclosedownthefactories.中間段落節(jié)約能源＊Weshouldremembertoturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroom.＊It'sagoodhabittousebothsidesofpaper.段首：段落中心句動(dòng)物瀕危＊Weshouldimprovetheenvironmenttoprovidehomesforthem.＊Weshouldaskthegovernmenttodeveloplawstostoppeoplefromkillingwildanimals.提出解決方法Howcanwesolvetheproblem?1.Let’stakeactionfromnowontomaketheenvironmentmoreandmorebeautiful！2.Weshouldworkhardertoprotectourworld.3.Sotogether，ouractionscanmakeadifferenceandleadtoabetterfuture.結(jié)尾句呼吁大家共同努力解決問(wèn)題

改善人居環(huán)境，提高生活質(zhì)量，是人們共同的愿望和應(yīng)盡的責(zé)任。請(qǐng)以“Howtokeepourcityclean”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文并給出你的建議。寫(xiě)作練兵 Howtokeepourcityclean____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ourcityusedtobeagreencity.Butnowsomepollutiongetsintotheenvironment.Soitisverynecessarytoprotecttheenvironmentnow.Buthowtokeepourcitygreen? Firstly,weshouldn’tpollutetheenvironment.Weshouldstoplitteringaround.Andweshouldseparatethewastebeforewethrowitintothebins.Secondly,it’sbettertoplantmoretreestomaketheaircleaner.Besides,weshouldsavewaterandelectricity. Inaword,ifeveryonemakesacontributiontobuildingagreencity,ourcitywill