讀后續(xù)寫之——災(zāi)難及救援name:________本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇預(yù)防自然災(zāi)害的故事。在“人與自然”主題語境下，“自然災(zāi)害與防范、安全常識與自我保護(hù)”等話題在讀后續(xù)寫中考查較為頻繁。其中常見的故事情節(jié)有兩種：戶外險情、自然災(zāi)害。其中，自然災(zāi)害通常涉及一些突發(fā)的意外災(zāi)害，面對大自然的不可抗力，主人公積極嘗試逃脫避險，同時力所能及地救助他人，在敬畏自然的同時也學(xué)會了保護(hù)自己。故事情節(jié)可包括“災(zāi)害來襲”“應(yīng)對災(zāi)害”和“劫后余生”。Ⅰ.主題語境詞匯adj.n.v.害怕感到害怕的scaredfrightenedterrified令人害怕的scaryfrighteningterrifying害怕scare、fright、fear使害怕scarefrightenfearterrify救援營救rescue幫助aid、help、assist物資supply帳篷tent庇護(hù)所shelter水電和食物water，electricityandfood幸存者survivor緩解、放松relief苦難、折磨suffering營救rescue幫助aid、help、assist幸存survive緩解relieve遭受suffer恢復(fù)恢復(fù)revival、recovery恢復(fù)revive、recoverⅡ.主題語境語塊1.表示“害怕、恐懼”的常用詞塊:①beafraid/frightened/scared/terrifiedofsth.害怕某物②beafraid/frightened/scared/terrifiedtodosth.不敢做某事③bescaredtodeath嚇得要死④quake/shakewithfear怕得發(fā)抖2.表示“悲傷、沮喪、絕望”的常用詞塊:⑤fallintodespair陷入絕望⑥cryone’sheartout悲痛欲絕⑦withasinkingheart沮喪⑧bedowninspirits情緒低落⑨abrokenspirit意志消沉話題句式災(zāi)害來臨Wavesabouttwelvemetershighcamerushingin,drowningeverything.大約12米高的海浪涌了過來，淹沒了一切。（海嘯）Icouldhearwhatsoundedlikeamillioncaralarmsringingfromtheground.我能聽到地面上好像有100萬輛汽車的警報器在響。（地震）Shelookedatthebackdoor.Waterwasflowinginunderneath.Sheturnedaroundandsawdirtywaterfountainingoutofthedrainandfillingthesink.她看了看后門，水正從下面流進(jìn)來。轉(zhuǎn)過身來，她看到骯臟的水從排水管中涌出，填滿了水槽。（洪水）面對災(zāi)害Insteadofcomingdowntheroof,thetwosisterscheeredeachotherupandtookturnstoshoutloudlytotryandattracttheirparents’attention.兩姐妹沒有從房頂上下來，而是互相鼓勵，輪流大聲喊叫，試圖引起父母的注意。Realizingthattheyweretrappedbythefloodandthatitwasimpossibleforhertodriveout,shepulledJamesontoherback,headingfortheroof.當(dāng)她意識到他們已經(jīng)被洪水困住了，自己也不可能開車出去時，她把James拉到背上，朝著屋頂走去。災(zāi)后余生Whatwesawweakenedourheart.Wedecidedtohelpthevictimsafteranarrowescape.我們看到的一切令我們心酸。死里逃生后，我們決定幫助那些受難者。NowordscandescribemyexcitementwhenIrealizedIwassomehowstillalive.Myparentshuggedmetightlyintheirarmsastearsofjoyrandownourcheekslikeriversthatwouldn’tstopflowing.當(dāng)我意識到我還活著時，我的興奮之情難以言表。父母緊緊把我抱在懷里，喜悅的淚水順著我們的臉頰流下來，像滔滔不絕的河流。Ⅲ.基于主題語境的續(xù)寫實(shí)踐(已提示語法結(jié)構(gòu))1．完成句子(1)丹尼斯正在家熟睡的時候，突然一個很大的聲音把他吵醒了。(bedoing...when...)Dennis______________soundlyathome_____________________________．(2)他從臥室的窗戶向外看去，注意到一輛翻倒的車下竄出火焰。(v.-ing作狀語；noticesth.doing；shoot)______________________________,_he_________________________fromunderanupside-downvehicle.(3)他起床，打了一個緊急電話，抓起滅火器，跑向那輛不能動的汽車。(動詞的聯(lián)動；v.-ing作狀語)He____________________________and____________thefireextinguisher,__________________________________．(4)接近那輛車，眼前的情況讓他非常震驚，一名年輕男子被卡在車內(nèi)，明顯非常疼痛。(v.-ing作狀語；where引導(dǎo)定語從句；介詞短語作狀語)_____________________________,_hewasshockedatthesituation____________________________________inthecar,_________________．(5)丹尼斯毫不猶豫地開始行動。滅火器連續(xù)噴了兩下，火被撲滅了。(介詞短語；并列句)_________________,_Dennisstartedtoact._________________fromtheextinguisherand_________________．(6)他告訴年輕人不要動，以防止他傷著他的脖子。(incase引導(dǎo)從句)Hetoldtheyoungmanto_________________．(7)不久，醫(yī)生們來了，丹尼斯感到非常欣慰。(副詞作狀語；relieve)_________________,_thedoctorsarrivedandDennis_________________．2．銜接美文將以上各句合并成小短文并背誦成文，注意使用合適的銜接過渡詞匯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IV.鞏固練習(xí)洪水閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasalongweekendinMay2018andmyfriend,GabeRosescu,andIweretakingaroadtripfrommyhomeinthecityofWeyburntovisitfriendsinNelson,BritishColumbia.Wearebothadventurous,andwecouldn’twaittogohikingandexploring.Itwasourfirsttriptogethersincewekneweachother.Ataround10:30amonThursday,May17,weweredrivingabout11mileswestofCreston,onasteepmountainroadknownastheCrowsnestHighway.Iwastextingupdatestomyfamilyandenjoyingtheview.Weweren’tawarethere’drecentlybeenfloodinginthearea.WhenIlookedupfrommyphone,Isawawaveofmudandanenormoustreerollingdownthemountain,rightinfrontofGabe’scar.Hetriedtostopthecar,butitwastoolate.IlookedatGabeandwebothwereingreatpanic.Themudslidesentourcarfallingnearly300metersdownarockycliff.Itlandedonitssideamongsometrees.Idon’tknowhowlongwewereunconscious(失去知覺的),butIwokeuptoGabe’svoicewithpain.Hewasslumped(癱倒)overthesteeringwheel,andtherewasbloodeverywhere.Outsidemypassengerwindowtherewasasteepdrop.EverytimeImoved,Iwashitwithviolentchestpain.Ihadbrokenmysternum(胸骨）,andmyrightanklewasbrokenandpracticallyturnedbackward.Gabehadbrokenhisorbitalbone,andnasalandcheekbones.Hisheadwasbadlyhurtandhisvisionwasdamaged.Butthebodyisanamazingthing,andsomehowwewerebothabletocrawl（爬）outofthatcar.IwassofocusedonoursurvivalthatIdidn’tnoticehowseriouslythecarwasdamagedorwherewewere.Wehadnophonesignal,soallwecouldthinktodowasyellforhelp.Butmychesthurttoomuchtoevenbreathe.SoGabestartedshoutingasloudashecould.Paragraph1:Wewereshockedwhenweheardsomeonecallbackafterjustafewminutes._________________Paragraph2:Fortunately,wewereslowlyrecoveringunderthecareofthemedicalstaff.___________________（遭遇洪水）文章以人物為線索，講述了“我”和朋友在拜訪另一個朋友的旅行途中，因?yàn)楹樗荒酀{沖到懸崖后，身體嚴(yán)重受傷，但是“我們”設(shè)法從車?yán)锍鰜?，并拼命呼救。Para1:Wewereshockedwhenweheardsomeonecallbackafterjustafewminutes.①we的反應(yīng)：WhileIcouldnotexpressmyexcitementaloud,I(激動地哭泣).②someone的救人過程：Abouttenminuteslater,amiddle-agedman(走近)us.Seeingoursituation,hequickly(撥打急救電話)and(拖著我們?nèi)グ踩牡胤?wherewe(等待救護(hù)車的到來).③最后，在recover之前的情況：Whenwe(被送去)thehospital,Iaccepted(手術(shù)),which,Idesperatelyhoped,wouldbeasuccess.Para2:Fortunately,wewereslowlyrecoveringunderthecareofthemedicalstaff.①recover之后we表達(dá)感激：Onthedayofdischarge,wewentto(表達(dá)我們衷心的感激)tothemiddle-agedmanwhosavedus.②感悟升華：Finally,webegantobemoregratefultolife,(珍惜)everysingleday,andtryour