第三部分寫作專題突破專題二讀后續(xù)寫第4講續(xù)寫熱門話題人與動物閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.

Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.

WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?

AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.

Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式作答。

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導：Ⅰ.梳理原文細節(jié)，理清篇章結構。Ⅱ.依據(jù)首句提示，構思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述我途經(jīng)那間擠奶房時回想起上一回拯救蜂鳥的經(jīng)歷，以及享用燒烤的過程。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述兩方面的內(nèi)容：一是蜂鳥與我之間的互動交流；二是關于人與動物關系的啟示。范文佳作：

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Istillrememberedmyfriends'promisesoIwentpasttheabandonedmilkinghousetoseeiftheyhadfixedthebrokenwindow.Tomysatisfaction，noothertinycreatureswouldmeetthistroubleanymore.AsIapproachedthefarm，Iwasgreetedbyaspicysmellofthebarbecue，urgingmetowalkfaster.Weweretotallyimmersedinthepeacefulatmosphere，enjoyingthedelicatecuisine，talkingaboutourinterestingexperiencesandsingingsongstillthesunset.Theeveningglowspreadingacrossthefarm，itwastimeforustosaygood-byesowewenttotheparkinglottogether.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Withasqueakingcall,shedivedtowardsmeandhoveredbeforemyface,lookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Thenshestoppedonmyleftshoulder.Ipattedheronthebackwhichwascoveredbycolourfulfeathers.AndItookoutmywaterbottle，tryingtogivehersomewater.Contentandjoyful，sheflewabout2metersabovetheground,turningherheadfromsidetosideasifexpressinghergratitudeforsavingherlifetomeagain.Atthatmoment，happinessandthefeelingofbeingmovedmingled,wellingupintomyheart，tearsrollingdownmycheeks.話題佳句：1.Thedogturnedaround,eyeingus,withhistailswingingupanddown.這只狗轉過身來，上下擺動著尾巴，注視著我們。2.Atfirstthebirdstuckhisheadoutofhiscagejusttotakeasipofwaterandfillhismouthwithfood.起初，這只鳥把頭探出籠子，只是為了喝一口水，往嘴里塞滿食物。3.AfraidImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.我害怕會傷害這個可愛的小生物，我不假思索，發(fā)出一聲喊聲來阻止我的馬。4.Confusedandfrightenedatmyapproach,thewolfbackedoff,pullinghardthechain.狼被我的靠近弄得既困惑又害怕，向后退卻，使勁地拉著鏈子。5.Birdsweresinging,theairwasfilledwithlaughter,andeveryonewasinthebestofmoods.鳥兒在歌唱，空氣中充滿了笑聲，每個人都沉浸在愉悅當中。6.Thewolfedgedcloser,earsupright,bodytense,andstoppedafewyardsoff,herbushytailwaggingslightly.狼慢慢靠近了，耳朵豎起，身體繃緊，在幾碼遠的地方停了下來，毛茸茸的尾巴微微擺動著。7.Atthesightofme,thedogcircledaroundme,wagginghistailandlickingmyhandscheerfully.一看到我，這只狗就圍著我轉圈，高興地搖動著尾巴舔著我的手。8.Shakingwithfear,Iapproacheditcautiouslyandsawthatitwasapigeon.Itlookedatmeinfear,tryingtoopenitswingsandstrugglingitsfeet,butapparentlypowerless.我心驚膽戰(zhàn)、小心翼翼地靠近它，發(fā)現(xiàn)是一只鴿子。它恐懼地看著我，試圖張開翅膀，雙腳在掙扎，但明顯力不從心。9.WheneverIsatatthetableeatingbiscuits,itlookedupatme,cooing(咕咕地叫)constantly.Tomyjoy,Icouldalsoreachintothecagetotouchit.WhenIgentlyfingereditshead,itplayfullypecked(啄)atme.每當我坐在桌旁吃餅干，它就看著我，不斷咕咕