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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)力150左右。［2024長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)高二月考］Myparentsworkedveryhardatensuringthateverythingseemedpleasantandpeacefulforme.IhadaverycalmchildhoodandImostlyignoredthefactthatmyeldersisterwasdifferent.Thechildpsychologisthadtermedit“Asperger’ssyndrome（阿斯伯格綜合征）".Thisdiagnosisturnedmyparents'worldupsidedown,buttheyneverletitaffectme.Onlyattheageof10,Ioftenstartedtonoticethedifferences,andbecameconsciousofmysociallifeandself-imagethatIhadcarefullycultivated.Mysister,ontheotherhand,wassociallyawkward.Shecouldnotlookpeopleintheeye.Shewouldmumble(咕噥)toherselfandrepeatoverandoverthewordsshehadjustsaidunderherbreath.She,however,wasacademicallycapableandhenceweattendedthesameprimaryschool.Despitethis,Inever,everacknowledgedinpublicthatshewasmysister.ItwastheincidentthatchangedhowIviewedmysister.Itwastheincidentthatchangedme.Beingabouttograduate,mysisterandherfellowshadtoputonaperformance,whetherinagrouporindividually.Duetoherinabilitytointegrate,mysisterwastheonlyoneleftwithoutagroup.Theschoolhadmadeitcompulsoryforeveryonetoputupanitem,somysisterhadtoperformindividually."I'llsing,"mysistertoldmyparents,somewhatconfidently.Hearingthat,Iwastakenabackandcompletelyshocked.Howcouldmysister,whowassociallyawkward,singinfrontoftheschool?IknewsoverywellthatifIallowedthistohappen,shewouldembarrassme,onewayoranother."No!"Iprotested.Myparentsshotmealookandthenturnedtomysister,saying"Goodidea!"ThatwaswhenIknewmysisterwasgoingtoperformanywayandIwasgoingtobepartoftheaudiencewatchingher.Paragraph1:Isatinthehall,waitingforherperformancetostart.Paragraph2:Finally,mysisterstartedtosing.01故事線與情感線故事線與情感線姐姐畢業(yè)前要做一次表演。姐姐提出唱歌。作者抗議，但父母支持姐姐。由于姐姐無(wú)法融入集體，她是唯一一個(gè)單獨(dú)要表演的人。作者的姐姐患有阿斯伯格綜合征，作者從不在公眾場(chǎng)合承認(rèn)她是自己的姐姐。對(duì)姐姐的疏離；對(duì)自己形象在意震驚；不理解姐姐；以自我為中心無(wú)奈02原文線索原文線索作者的姐姐患有阿斯伯格綜合征，有社交障礙，不敢直視別人的眼睛，并會(huì)一遍遍地重復(fù)說(shuō)過(guò)的話。作者從不在公共場(chǎng)合承認(rèn)她是自己的姐姐。1203續(xù)寫(xiě)思路續(xù)寫(xiě)思路0102根據(jù)續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段首句可知，作者在臺(tái)下坐著等待姐姐開(kāi)始表演。結(jié)合續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句和原文線索1，本段可描寫(xiě)姐姐登臺(tái)后、開(kāi)始表演前的情景，如姐姐結(jié)巴地進(jìn)行自我介紹及作者尷尬的心情等。根據(jù)續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句可知，續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段可描寫(xiě)姐姐表演的情況，以及觀眾和作者的反應(yīng)。根據(jù)原文線索2，結(jié)尾可描寫(xiě)作者改變了對(duì)姐姐的態(tài)度等。04參考句型參考句型Theaudiencefellsilentas[sb]steppedontothestage,thespotlightcuttingthroughthedimness.（當(dāng)某人走上舞臺(tái)，禮堂陷入寂靜，聚光燈穿透昏暗。）Whispersrippledthroughthecrowd,mixingwiththefaintrustleofprogramsinhands.（人群中泛起竊竊私語(yǔ)，夾雜著手中節(jié)目單輕微的沙沙聲。）1.描寫(xiě)場(chǎng)景與氛圍的句型參考句型[Sb]stoodthere,fingerstwistingnervouslyaroundthehemof[their]shirt,yet[their]voiceemergedsteadywhen[they]began.（某人站在那里，手指緊張地絞著衣角，但開(kāi)口時(shí)聲音卻很平穩(wěn)。）Iwatched,mybreathcatchinginmythroat,as[sb]closed[their]eyesandtookthefirststepforward.（我看著，屏住呼吸，某人閉上眼睛，邁出了第一步。）2.刻畫(huà)人物動(dòng)作與神態(tài)的句型參考句型AwaveofshamewashedovermeasIrealizedhowwrongI’dbeentodoubt[sb].（當(dāng)我意識(shí)到自己懷疑某人是多么錯(cuò)誤時(shí)，一陣羞愧涌上心頭。）WhatI’dfearedmost—embarrassment—faded,replacedbyastrange,swellingprideI’dneverfeltbefore.（我最害怕的——難堪——漸漸消散，取而代之的是一種從未有過(guò)的、強(qiáng)烈的自豪感。）3.表達(dá)內(nèi)心感受與轉(zhuǎn)折的句型參考句型Themoment[sb]opened[their]mouthtosing,everythingaroundmeseemedtofreeze.（某人開(kāi)口唱歌的那一刻，我周?chē)囊磺蟹路鸲检o止了。）Itwasn’tuntilthelastnotefadedthatIfinallyunderstood:[keyrealization].（直到最后一個(gè)音符落下，我才終于明白：[核心領(lǐng)悟]。）4.推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展的句型05范文

Isatinthehall,waitingforherperformancetostart.Thelightsdimmedandthevelvetcurtainspartedtorevealtheonlysolo—mysister.Ittookaboutawholeminuteforhertostammerouthernameandclass,andsoonmurmurswereheardintheaudience."Whyisshetakingsolong?"peoplearoundmeasked.Ishiftednervouslyinmyseat,wishingIhadbeensomewhereelse（現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）.Ifeltmyownheartstarttorace.“Nooneknowssheismysister(賓語(yǔ)從句),"Icomfortedmyself.

Finally,mysisterstartedtosing.Atfirsthervoicewasshakybutgraduallyshecomposedherself.Hertonewassopureandbeautiful,andthenoteswereflawless,whichquietedtheaudience(定語(yǔ)從句).Iwatchedinwonderandlistenedintently,guiltandshamewashingoverme（獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）.Soself-absorbedwas