1.Themosteffectivemeanstosolvethisproblemisthat______________.Inthatcase,______________.

2.Everythinghasitsowntwosides,noexceptionwithAAA.Foronething,______________.foranother,______________.

3.Myexperiencetellsmethatto______________needsathoroughandperseveringprocess,andinthisprocessyouhadbetterabidebytheprinciplesmentionedabove.

4.Onthewhole,itishightimethatwerecognizedthesignificanceof______________.

5.Asaresult,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemethodsto______________.

6.Judgingbythefigures,wecandrawaconclusionthat______________.

7.Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemof______________.Onlyinthiswaycan______________inthefuture.

8.Inmyopinion,weshouldplacemuchemphasisontheimportanceof______________.

9.But______________and______________havetheirownadvantages.Forexample,______________,while______________.Comparingthosetwo,however,Ipreferto______________.

10.Inmyopinion,______________isjustascommonas______________.If______________,itmaybeveryuseful.Whatever______________,thekeypointliesin______________.

11.Aretheiropinionscorrect?Tomymind,thefirstideaseems______________.Asforthesecondidea,______________.

12.Asapopularsayinggoes,______________.Inmyopinionwhatreallycountsisnot______________,but______________.Ibelieverthataslongas______________,wewill______________.SoIamfortheopinionthat______________.

13.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe______________,weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblems,andthenmaketherightdecision.

14.Personally,Ibelievethat______________.Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause______________.

15.Inmyopinion,allofthepeopleshouldbebraveenoughtoshowourdisapprovalandcriticismwhenconfrontedwith______________.

16.Peoplearecomingtorealizetheimportanceof______________.Theyhavebeguntotrytheirbestto______________.Webelievethat______________.

17.Allinall,wecannotlivewithout______________.Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewithproblemsthatwouldarise.

18.Whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesaying-______________.Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,you’lldefinitelybenefitalotfromit.

19.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,______________.Soit’surgentandnecessaryto______________.Ifeverymemberiswillingtocontributehimselftothesociety,itwillbebetterandbetter.

20.Itisdifficulttosaywhether______________isgoodornotingeneralasitdependsverymuchonthesituationof______________.However,fromapersonalpointofviewIfind______________.

21.Itisessentialthateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentoendthesituation.

22.Itisnodoubtthatspecialattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof______________.

23.Butboth______________and______________havedisadvantages.Forexample,______________.Whichtochoose,______________or______________?Carefulconsiderationisnecessarybeforeyoumakeyourownchoice.

24.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat______________.

25.Wemustsearchforaquickaction,becausethepresentsituationof______________isgrievous,ifallowedtoproceed,willcertainlyleadto______________.

26.Nodoubt,ifweignoretheproblem,thereiseverychancethat______________willbeputindanger.

27.Weneedtotakeasecondlookatthematterfromawiderstandpoint,otherwise,wewon’t______________.

28.Itishightimethat______________.Herearesomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetakenimmediately.29.Inconclusion,weshouldknowabouttheproblemofficate[2]ofsomekind.[4]Whydoesthiscrazeappear?

[4]Therearemainlytworeasonsbehindthisphenomenon.First,[5]itistheemploymentpressurethatforcescollegestudentstogetmorecertificates.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,alotmoregraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Howcanonemakehimselfmorecompetitive?Morecertificatesathand,maybe.Second,diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandards[6]bywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.Inordertoincreasethequalificationsforajob,thestudentscompelthemselvestorunfromoneexamtoanother.

[7]Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerational[8]whenitcomestocertificates,[9]sincecertificates[2]donotnecessarilyproveone’sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyis[10]nothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourability[10]butnotgettingacertificateofnopracticalvalue.

【亮點點評】

[1]祈使句使用恰當。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機地”。

[2]限定詞使用恰當，使文章表達更嚴謹，增強了說服力。

[3]that引導同位語從句，修飾theidea。

[4]設問句引出原因，容易引起注意。

[5]強調(diào)句型，此處是強調(diào)主語。

[6]which引導非限制性定語從句，充當介詞賓語。

[7]用于引出“我”的觀點。

[8]“當談到或提及…時”。

[9]since引導原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。

[10]“只是，僅僅”。“而不是”。

佳句臨摩

1.佳句：Youmaygettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.

臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。

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2.佳句：Diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandardsbywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.

臨摩：在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進步，其中包括健康水平的提高。

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3.佳句：Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates.

臨摩：我認為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicStudents’PursuitforFamousBrands.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1)現(xiàn)在很多大學生都喜歡追求名牌

2)產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么

3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象

Students’PursuitforFamousBrands

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行文思路

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象;分析大學生熱衷名牌的原因;闡述“我”對大學生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。

高分范文

Students’PursuitforFamousBrands

Nowadaysmanycollegestudentsliketopursuefamousbrands.Fromclothestomobilephones,evenstudyarticleslikeelectronicdictionariesandpens,they[1]areinclinedtobuyfamousbrands.[2]Moreover,manystudentsfrompoorfamiliesbeginto[3]followthisconsumptiontrendaswell.Thisphenomenonhasarousedwideattention.

[4]Thefollowingreasonscanaccountforcollegestudents’preferenceforfamousbrands.[2]Aboveall,inmanycollegestudents’eyes,afamousbrandisasymbolofsophisticationandtaste.Theyexpectotherstoadmiretheirhighclassandgoodtaste.[2]What’smore,inmodernsociety,famousbrandstosomeextentareequaltofashion,[5]whichhasagreatattractiontoyoungcollegestudents.[2]Besides,parents’spoilingtheirchildrenhelpsformtheirbadconsumptionhabit.

[2]AsfarasIamconcerned,[6]itisirrationalforcollegestudentstopursuefamousbrands.[3]Afterall,mostoffamousbrandsare[7]farbeyondtheirconsumptionability.[3]Besides,[8]itisnotfamousbrandsbutaperson’snoblecharacterthatreallymakeshimhighclass.[3]Therefore,collegestudentsshouldattachmoreimportancetocultivatingagoodcharacter[9]ratherthanpursuingfamousbrands.

【亮點點評】

[1]“有…傾向”。

[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。

[3]follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢或時尚)”

[4]用于引出原因。

[5]which引導非限制性定語從句。

[6]it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。

[7]“遠遠超出他們的消費能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。

[8]強調(diào)句型，此處是強調(diào)主語。not…but連接并列成分。

[9]“而不是”。

佳句臨摹

1.佳句：Itisirrationalforcollegestudentstopursuefamousbrands.

臨?。簩Υ髮W生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。

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2.佳句：Inmodernsociety,famousbrandstosomeextentareequaltofashion,whichhaveagreatattractiontoyoungcollegestudents.

臨?。涸谑澜缟匣蛟S沒有什么游戲像賭博

像賭博的那么有害和危險了，它經(jīng)常會導致一個人破產(chǎn)，還會玷污人的心靈。

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3.佳句：Therefore,collegestudentsshouldattachmoreimportancetocultivatingagoodcharacterratherthanpursuingfamousbrands.

臨?。汉芏嗤瑢W經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費時間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteALetterApplyingforaBankLoan.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese：

1)簡單介紹個人情況

2)說明申請助學貸款的原因、數(shù)額

3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心

ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan

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行文思路

本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學貸款;說明申請助學貸款的原因、數(shù)額;保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。

高分范文

ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan

Sep12th,2008

Towhomitmayconcern,

IamafreshmanofLianheUniversity,[1]majoringinAppliedPhysics.IamwritinginthehopethatImayobtainabankloantosupportmystudyinAppliedPhysicsforthefollowingfouryears.

Myparentsarebothlaid-offworkers,soit’s[2]beyondtheirpowertofinancemethroughthecollegeeducation.[3]Tomakemattersworse,mymotherhassuddenlyfallenillandisexpectingamajoroperation.[4]Therefore,[5]withthecollegetuitionbecomingamuchheavierburdenonmyfamily,IamcompelledtoapplyaRMB20,000banklo