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風(fēng)和雨擊打著屋子。2.It’srainingcatsanddogsoutsidenow.

現(xiàn)在外面下著傾盆大雨。3.Thewindiswhisperinginthetrees.

風(fēng)在樹林中沙沙作響。4.Thewindwhippedherhairintohereyes.

風(fēng)把她的頭發(fā)吹進(jìn)了眼睛里。5.Theneedlecoldwindpiercedhisface.

寒風(fēng)如針,刺著他的臉。6.Thewindisgettingupanditisbeingcloudy.

風(fēng)勢漸大,天空開始陰云密布。7.Thatnight,thetemperaturedroppedbelowzero.

那天晚上,溫度降到了零度以下。8.Itwasfreezingcoldoutside.外面極為寒冷。9.Wewerecaughtinthestormandgotdrenchedtotheskin.

我們遇上了暴雨,淋得渾身濕透。10.Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.

寒風(fēng)開始咆哮,像鋒利的刀子一樣刺痛了我的臉。11.Bythetimewegothome,therainhadmostlystopped.

我們到家的時候,雨已經(jīng)基本停了。12.Evenworse,thetemperaturesuddenlydropped.

更糟糕的是,氣溫突然下降。13.Theswollenriverfloodedtheroad.

上漲的河流淹沒了道路。14.Thewinddroppedandtheseaquietened.

風(fēng)勢減弱了,大海平靜了下來。15.Thebeachwasbathedinthesunshine.

海灘沐浴在陽光里。16.Moonbeamsstreamedinthroughawindow.

月光從一扇窗戶傾瀉而入。17.Iwasveryhappytohearthebirdssinginginthewoods.

聽到鳥兒在樹林里歌唱,我非常高興。18.Thesmelloftheseacalledupmemoriesofherchildhood.

大海的氣味勾起了她對童年的回憶。19.Thewaterisdeepblueandsunlightglittersonitsclearsurface.

水是深藍(lán)色的,陽光在清澈的水面上閃閃發(fā)光。20.However,thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.

然而,湖水在落日的余暉下閃亮如鏡,景色迷人。21.Therewasalmostnowind—onlytheflamesofourfireforpany.

幾乎沒有風(fēng),只有篝火的火焰和我們做伴。22.Therosegivesoutasweetsmell,whichpromisestobeaperfectday.

玫瑰花散發(fā)出香甜的味道,預(yù)示著完美的一天開始了。名詞/形容詞活用做動詞單詞活用成動詞示例bareadj.光禿禿的→vt.使露出Anne

bared

herteethinagrin.安妮露齒一笑。Thedog

bared

itsteethandgrowled.那條狗齜牙咧嘴地低吼。blindadj.失明的→vt.使眼花,使目眩Shewas

blinded

bythelightwhenshewentoutside.她出去的時候被光線照得眼花。capn.帽子→vt.用……覆蓋頂部(或端部)Themountainsinthebackgroundwere

capped

withsnow.背景中的山巒被白雪覆蓋。closetn.壁櫥→vt.把……關(guān)在房間里Upongettinghome,she

closeted

herselfawayinherroom.一回到家,她就把自己關(guān)在房間里不見任何人。cupn.杯子→vt.使(雙手)成圓狀托起She

cupped

herlittleson’sfaceinherhandsandkissedhim.她雙手捧著小兒子的臉親吻他。edgen.邊緣→v.(使)徐徐移動,慢慢移動He

edged

nervouslypastthedog.他緊張不安地從狗旁邊慢慢走過去。elbown.肘→vt.用肘推;用肘擠She

elbowed

herwaythroughthecrowd.她用手肘從人群中擠了過去。emptyadj.空的→vt.倒空,騰空They

emptied

theirpockets,butfoundnothing.他們掏空了自己的口袋,但里面什么也沒有。eyen.眼睛→vt.注視,審視Theboycouldn’thelp

eyeing

thecakeshungrily.男孩兒饑不可耐地盯著蛋糕。floodn.洪水→v.照進(jìn),(光線)充滿;(情感等)充滿,涌上心頭Morningsunshine

flooded

inthroughthewindowassheopenedhereyes.當(dāng)她睜開眼睛,清晨的陽光從窗口灑進(jìn)來。Awaveofhappiness

flooded

me.我心中涌起一股幸福的暖流。inchn.英寸→v.(使朝某方向)謹(jǐn)慎移動She

inched

herwaydelicatelyovertheroughground.她小心翼翼地在高低不平的地面上慢慢行走。narrowadj.狹窄的→v.縮小Hepressedhislipstogetherandhiseyes

narrowed.他抿緊嘴唇,眼睛瞇起來。pocketn.口袋→vt.把……放進(jìn)衣袋Shepaidforthedrinkand

pocketed

thechangewithoutcountingit.她付了飲料的錢,把找回的零錢數(shù)都沒數(shù)就裝進(jìn)了口袋。restn.休息→v.(使)倚靠,托Shewasthinkinghowtoworkoutthemathproblem,withherchin

rested

inherhands.她雙手托著下巴,在想怎么解這道數(shù)學(xué)題。Hiselbowwas

resting

onthearmofthesofa.他的胳膊肘靠在沙發(fā)的扶手上。shoulder

n.肩膀→vt.扛,背;承擔(dān)He

shouldered

hisbagandsetoffhome.他扛起包朝家走去。She

shouldered

thedoubleburdenofchildcareandfulltimework.她承擔(dān)著撫養(yǎng)孩子和做全職工作的雙重負(fù)擔(dān)。snaken.蛇→v.曲折前行Theroad

snaked

throughforestedmountains.道路在林間蜿蜒延伸。stormn.暴風(fēng)雨→vi.氣呼呼地疾走,闖Ryan

stormed

intotheoffice,demandingtoknowwherethemanagerwas.瑞安氣沖沖地闖進(jìn)辦公室,質(zhì)問經(jīng)理在哪里。具體動詞代替籠統(tǒng)動詞籠統(tǒng)動詞具體動詞動作描寫示例look/see/watch看spot看見,發(fā)現(xiàn),注意到I

spotted

acutepuppyinthebusheswhilewalkingdownthepath.走在小路上時,我發(fā)現(xiàn)灌木叢中有一只可愛的小狗。glance瞥一眼She

glanced

shylyathimandthenloweredhereyes.她害羞地瞥了他一眼,然后垂下了眼睛。scan瀏覽;細(xì)看,端詳He

scanned

throughthenewspaperoverbreakfast.他邊吃早飯,邊瀏覽報紙。She

scanned

hisfaceanxiously.她急切地端詳著他的臉。observe觀察He

observes

keenly,butsayslittle.他觀察敏銳,但言語寥寥。stare/gaze盯著看,凝視Emma

stared/gazed

athimindisbelief,shakingherhead.埃瑪一邊狐疑地盯著他看,一邊搖著頭。glare怒目而視Theoldwomandidn’tshout,just

glaring

athimsilently.老婦人沒有喊叫,只是默默地怒視著他。peek窺視,偷看She

peeked

frombehindthebedroomdoor,foundnobodyinthesittingroom,andthenslippedoutofthehouse.她從臥室門后偷看,發(fā)現(xiàn)沒人在客廳,就溜出了房子。cry哭weep流淚,哭泣She

wept

bittertearsofdisappointment.她失望得痛哭流涕。sob啜泣,抽噎Shebeganto

sob

again,buryingherfaceinthepillow.她把臉埋在枕頭里,又開始抽噎起來。say/talk說whisper耳語,低語Emilyleanedoverand

whispered

somethinginAmy’sear.埃米莉探過身去附耳跟埃米說了些什么。stammer結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說Brook.I...Ifor...Brook.I...I’veetosaysorryfor..."Bill

stammered."早上好,布魯克先生。我……我來道歉,是為……"比爾結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說。shout大聲說Thetwinsmerrily

shouted

"Happybirthday,Mom!"asshecamein.當(dāng)她進(jìn)來時,這對雙胞胎高興地喊道:"生日快樂,媽媽!"yell叫喊Thecoachstoodonthesidelines

yelling

encouragementattheplayers.教練站在場外,為運動員吶喊鼓勁。smile/

laugh笑smile微笑Hesaidnothing,merely

smiled

andwatchedthem.他什么也沒說,只是微笑地看著他們。laugh發(fā)笑,大笑Seeinghisheadstuckinthepumpkin,hisdadjustcouldn’tstophimself

laughing.看到他的頭卡在南瓜里,他的爸爸忍不住大笑起來。grin露齒而笑He

grins,delightedatthememory.想起往事,他開心地咧嘴笑起來。giggle咯咯地笑Children

giggled

atthejoke.孩子們給這笑話逗得咯咯笑。chuckle低聲輕笑She

chuckled

toherselfforhavingworntwosocksthatdidn’tmatch.她對自己穿了兩只不配對的襪子而暗自發(fā)笑。eat吃;drink喝bite咬Shegrabbedthebreadonthetable,

bit

intoit,andthenrushedouthurriedly.她抓起桌上的面包,咬了一口,然后匆匆地跑了出去。chew咀嚼,嚼(碎)Heleanedoutofthewindow

chewing

gum.他嚼著口香糖探身窗外。swallow吞下,咽下She

swallowed

hardandforcedbackhertears.她使勁咽了一下口水,強忍住了淚水。wolf大口地快吃,狼吞虎咽Thehungryboytookthesteamedbunand

wolfed

itdown.饑餓的男孩兒接過饅頭,狼吞虎咽地吃了下去。taste品嘗Shewasdisappointedanddiscouraged,forthecookiesshemade

tasted

awful.她既失望又氣餒,因為她做的餅干吃起來很糟糕。consume吃,喝,飲He

consumed

aloafofbreadandalargebottleofmilkbeforeleaving.他在離開前吃了一條面包,喝了一大瓶牛奶。hit打,擊knock敲,擊;把……打成(某種狀態(tài))Thewildanimalwas

knocked

flatbytheblow.那野獸被一拳打倒在地。beat敲打,錘砸Windroared,thunderrolledandrain

beat

againstthewindows.狂風(fēng)大作,雷聲隆隆,雨點打在窗戶上。strike打,擊He

struck

thetablewithhisfistangrily.他生氣地用拳頭打桌子。walk走;run跑wander漫步,閑逛We

wandered

backtowardsthehouseafterthepicnic.野餐后,我們溜達(dá)著回到房子里。bounce活潑興奮地走,蹦蹦跳跳地去He

bounced

acrosstheroomtogreetthem.他興奮地沖過房間去迎接他們。stamp跺著腳走,噔噔地走Angerwellingupinhim,heturnedand

stamped

outoftheroom.他勃然大怒,轉(zhuǎn)身噔噔地走出了房間。storm氣呼呼地疾走,闖,沖

Judyburstintotearsand

stormed

off.朱迪突然大哭起來,氣沖沖地走了。stagger搖搖晃晃地走,蹣跚He

staggered

tothebedandcollapsedinexhaustion.他搖搖晃晃地走到床邊,筋疲力盡地倒了下去。tiptoe踮著腳走,躡手躡腳地走She

tiptoed

totheroom,afraidofwakingupthesleepingbaby.她踮著腳走向房間,害怕吵醒睡著的嬰兒。slip悄悄疾行,溜Ididn’tnoticethecat

slipping

outofthedoorwhenIcamein.我進(jìn)來的時候,沒有注意到貓溜出了房間。jog慢跑Wewere

jogging

whilethedogswere

bounding

ahead.我們在慢跑,而狗在前面蹦蹦跳跳地跑。bound跳躍著跑rush迅速移動,沖Thelittlegirl

rushed

togreethermother,sweepingherarmswide.小女孩兒張開雙臂舞動著,沖過去迎接母親。dash猛沖Withtheshotofthestartinggun,I

dashed

outandranasfastasIcould.隨著發(fā)令槍的一聲槍響,我沖出去,以最快的速度奔跑。think想wonder琢磨He

wondered

whatheshouldsaytohertomakeherfeelbetter.他想知道該對她說些什么才能讓她感覺好點兒。reflect認(rèn)真思考,沉思Ineedtimeto

reflect

beforemakingadecision.做決定前,我需要時間認(rèn)真思考。guess猜想,認(rèn)為I

guess

hemustbereallyangryatme.我想他一定很生我的氣。imagine胡亂猜想,誤以為He’salways

imagining

thatwe’retalkingabouthimbehindhisback.他總是胡亂猜測我們在背后說他的閑話。flash突然想到,猛然想起Aterriblethought

flashed

throughmymind.一個可怕的想法閃過我的腦海。shake抖tremble(因緊張、激動、驚慌等)顫抖,哆嗦Shehasdoneherbesttokeepcalmbutfindsherself

trembling

withtension.她盡力保持鎮(zhèn)定,可還是由于緊張而抖個不停。shiver(因寒冷或恐懼而)哆嗦,顫抖I

shivered

andpulledmyscarfmoretightlyroundmyneck.我打了個寒戰(zhàn),用圍巾把脖子圍得更緊了。(2024·江蘇淮安·一模)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Christmastimeatthebookstorewasalwaysbusy.Itwasexcitingbuttiring,unfortunatelyrobbingmeofthejoyoftheseason.Thecustomerswefoundmostchallengingwerethosebuyingforothers—frustratedandunsure,oftenleadingtosharpmentsduringthisbusytime.Oneyear,Iencounteredamaninthekids’sectionwhoseemedpletelyataloss.Helookedaboutthirtyfive,holdingapieceofpaperandasmallbagfromanotherstore,whichcontainedjustcandy.Tiredandpanicked,heappearedtohavebarelybegunhisshoppingjustdaysbeforeChristmas.Iapproachedhim,askingifIcouldhelp.Whenheturnedtome,helookedlikehewasontheedgeoftears.Hedidn’treply,juststared,soIgentlytouchedhisshoulder.“Areyouokay?”Iasked.“Sorry,”hesaid,takingadeepbreath.“Ineedpresentsformynieces,mynephew,mybrotherinlaw,andmyparents.”Hepaused,strugglingtocontinue.“Idon’tknowwhattheylike,buttheyallliketoread.Ijustwanttomakesurethere’ssomethingtoopen.”Heturnedbacktotheshelves.Icouldtellhewasn’tseeinganything.Iwantedtogivehimahandandaskedhimhowoldhisniecesandnephewwere.Hehandedmethelist:twinniecesagedeightandasixyearoldnephew.AsIaskedabouttheirinterests,Inoticedhisbodyshaking.“Mysisterjustdied,”hesaid,strugglingtoholdittogether.“Cancer.ShealwaysdidChristmas,youknow?”Atthatmoment,Irealizedthatnotonlydidheneedgifts,heneededsupportaswell.IhavealwayskeptagiftcardatChristmas.Sometimes,astaffmemberreallyneededafewsecondstocalmdownafterareallybadmomentwithadifficultcustomer.Acupofcoffeeupstairswoulddothetrick.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Igavehimthegiftcardandaskedhimtoenjoyacupofcoffeetherebyhimself._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenhesawthosebooks,hewasmovedtotears._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Igavehimthegiftcardandaskedhimtoenjoyacupofcoffeetherebyhimself.Helookedatmeindisbeliefforamomentandthenaglimmerofgratitudeappearedinhiseyes.Ashemadehiswayupstairs,Iquicklygatheredsomeageappropriatebooks:storybooksfullofadventureandmagicforhisnieces,acolorfulpicturebookaboutanimalsforhisnephew.Ialsoselectedaclassicnovelforhisbrotherinlawandacollectionofbeautifulpoetryforhisparents.Withtheselectedbooksinmyhands,Inoticedthathewalkeddownstairs.Whenhesawthosebooks,hewasmovedtotears.“Youhavenoideahowmuchthismeanstome,”feelingthosebookslightly,hemurmured,hisvoicetrembling.Ismiled,hopingthatthesebookswouldbringhimsomefortandjoyduringthisdifficulttime.Hewavedgoodbyetomeandthenleftthestorewitharelaxedmindandaheartfullofwarmth.Allofasudden,IfeltmytirednessliftedoffmyheartpletelythisChristmastime.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索,講述作者在圣誕節(jié)忙碌的書店工作中,遇到一個為家人選購禮物的男子,因其姐姐剛?cè)ナ蓝恢?,作者給予他禮物卡和挑選了適合他家人的書籍。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫:①由第一段首句“我把禮品卡給了他,讓他在那里自己喝杯咖啡?!笨芍?,第一段可描寫男子對作者給予禮物卡的反應(yīng),以及作者為他挑選書籍的過程。②由第二段首句“當(dāng)他看到那些書時,他感動得流下了眼淚?!笨芍?,第二段可描寫男子看到書籍后的感動,以及他對作者的感激之情,同時表達(dá)作者自己的感受。2.續(xù)寫線索:給予禮物卡——挑選書籍——男子感動——表達(dá)感激——作者感受3.詞匯激活:行為類:①收集:gather/collect②挑選:select/choose/pickout③低語:murmur/whisper情緒類:①感激:gratitude/thankfulness/appreciation②疲勞:tiredness/fatigue【點睛】[高分句型1]Ashemadehiswayupstairs,Iquicklygatheredsomeageappropriatebooks:storybooksfullofadventureandmagicforhisnieces,acolorfulpicturebookaboutanimalsforhisnephew.(運用了從屬連詞as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)[高分句型2]Withtheselectedbooksinmyhands,Inoticedthathewalkeddownstairs.(運用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作伴隨狀語和連接詞that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型3]Ismiled,hopingthatthesebookswouldbringhimsomefortandjoyduringthisdifficulttime.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語和連接詞that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)1.(2024·安徽·一模)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。FlowersontheBusWewereaverymotley(混雜的)crowdofpeoplewhotookthebuseverydaythatsummer33yearsago.Duringtheearlymorningridefromthesuburb,wesatsleepilywithourcollarsuptoourears,acheerlessandboringcrowd.Oneofthepassengerswasasmallgreymanwhotookthebustothecentreforseniorcitizenseverymorning.Hewalkedslowlywithasadlookonhisfacewhenhe,withsomedifficulty,boardedthebusandsatdownalonebehindthedriver.Nooneeverpaidverymuchattentiontohim.ThenoneJulymorninghesaidgoodmorningtothedriverandsmiledshortsightedlydownthroughthebusbeforehesatdown.Thedrivernoddedguardedly.Therestofusweresilent.Thenextday,theoldmanboardedthebusenergetically,smiledandsaidinaloudvoice,“Andaverygoodmorningtoyouall!”Someofuslookedup,amazed,andmurmured“Goodmorning,”inreply.Thefollowingweeksweweremorealert.Ourfriendwasnowdressedinaniceoldsuitandawideoutofdatetie.Thethinhairhadbeencarefullybed.Hesaidgoodmorningtouseverydayandwegraduallybegantonodandtalktoeachother.Onemorninghehadabunchofwildflowersinhishand.Theywerealreadydangling(低垂的)alittlebecauseoftheheat.Thedriverturnedaroundsmilinglyandasked:“Haveyougotyourselfagirlfriend,Charlie?”Wenevergottoknowifhisnamereallywas“Charlie”,buthenoddedshylyandsaidyes.Theotherpassengerswhistledandclappedathim.Charliebowedandwavedtheflowersbeforehesatdownonhisseat.EverymorningafterthatCharliealwaysbroughtaflower.Someoftheregularpassengersbeganbringinghimflowersforhisdates.Everyonesmiled.Themenstartedtojokeaboutit,talktoeachother,andsharethenewspaper.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;(2)請按照如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThesummerwentbywhenonemorningCharliewasn’twaitingathisusualstop.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hearingthenews,weallremainedsilenttherestofthewaytowork.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文ThesummerwentbywhenonemorningCharliewasn’twaitingathisusualstop.Whenhewasn’ttherethenextdayandthedayafterthat,westartedwonderingifhewassickor—hopefully—onholidaysomewhere.Whenwecamenearertothecentreforseniorcitizens,oneofthepassengersaskedthedrivertowait.Weallheldourbreathswhenshewenttothedoor.Yes,thestaffsaid,theyknewwhoweweretalkingabout.Theelderlygentlemanwasfine,buthisgirlfriendhaddiedattheweekendandhehadn’tbeeningtothecentrethatweek.Hearingthenews,weallremainedsilenttherestofthewaytowork.Howcouldhesurvivethegreatloss?Couldhegetbackonhisfeetandebacktousagain?Nobodyknew.OneMonday,toeveryone’sgreatrelief,Charliewasseenagain,waitingatthestop.Heseemedtohaveshrinkedagain,stoopingabitmore,andwithoutatie.Insidethebuswasasilencesimilartothatinachurch.Eventhoughnoonehadtalkedaboutit,allthoseofus,whohehadmadesuchanimpressiononthatsummer,satwithoureyesfilledwithtearsandabunchofwildflowersinourhands.Thoseflowersonthebusdangledalittlebutshonewiththebrillianceofhumanity.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開,講述了33年前的一個夏天,作者每天和一群形形色色的人一起乘坐公交車,其中有一位老先生Charlie每天早上去老年人活動中心,他總是默默無聞,直到有一天他開始向大家問好并帶著一束野花,使得車廂內(nèi)的氛圍變得活躍起來?!驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫:①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“那個夏天過去了,一天早上,Charlie沒有在他通常的車站等著?!笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼慍harlie連續(xù)幾天沒有出現(xiàn),大家開始擔(dān)心他,后來得知他的女友去世了,所以他沒來老年人活動中心。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“聽到這個消息,我們一路上都保持著沉默。”可知,第二段可描寫大家對Charlie的擔(dān)憂和同情,以及Charlie再次出現(xiàn)時大家的反應(yīng),大家手里拿著野花,眼里含著淚水。2.續(xù)寫線索:Charlie未出現(xiàn)——大家擔(dān)心——得知Charlie女友去世——大家沉默——Charlie再次出現(xiàn)——大家手里拿著野花,眼里含淚3.詞匯激活行為類①要求:ask/require②去世:die/passaway③退縮:shrink/cower情緒類①寬慰,輕松:relief/ease/fort②身子又彎了一點:stoopabitmore/bendabitmore【點睛】[高分句型1]Whenhewasn’ttherethenextdayandthedayafterthat,westartedwonderingifhewassickor—hopefully—onholidaysomewhere.(運用了從屬連詞when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句和if引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Heseemedtohaveshrinkedagain,stoopingabitmore,andwithoutatie.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語)[高分句型3]Eventhoughnoonehadtalkedaboutit,allthoseofus,whohehadmadesuchanimpressiononthatsummer,satwithoureyesfilledwithtearsandabunchofwildflowersinourhands.(運用了eventhough引導(dǎo)讓步狀語和從句關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)2.(2024·江西景德鎮(zhèn)·一模)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IappliedforajobwithaChineseCanadianpanyinVancouver.Asyouknow,theChinesearefamousfortheirfood.Theycookdeliciousfoodandobtainasimplepleasurefromeating.So,Iwasnotsurprisedwhenmynewbossinvitedmeouttolunchtocelebratemynewjob.HesaidweweregoingtoeatinaChineserestaurantinChinatown.Iwasnervous.Iknewwewouldbeusingchopsticks,andwhileIhadtriedmanytimestomasterthetechnique,Ihadpletelyfailedineveryattempt.HowwouldIbeabletomakeagoodimpression?WouldImakeapletefoolofmyself?Thatevening,Icalledafriendandaskedhertoexplainexactlyhowtousechopsticks.Shepatientlyexplainedtheproperwayofholdingthembetweenthethumb,firstandmiddlefingers.“Itisnotthathard,”shesaid.“Thatiseasyforyoutosay,”Ireplied.“You’vebeeneatingwithchopsticksallyourlife.Itisnaturalforyou!”Ididn’tgetmuchsleepthatevening.Ikeptturningaroundinbedallnight,worryingaboutlunchthenextday.Thenextday,Icouldhardlycontainmyanxiety.Itwasdifficulttogetanyworkdoneinthemorning.Atnoon,Ileftwithmybossandtwocoworkersandheadedtotherestaurant.Wewereseatedatanexcellenttable.Mybosswroteoutthefoodorder,speakingtotheserverinChinese.Myheartwaspounding,butthenInoticedastrangething.Insteadofthecustomarychopsticks,eachofushadknives,forks,andspoons.Iwasconfusedatfirst,butthen,ithitme.MybossknewthatIwouldhavetroublewiththechopsticks.Hewantedtosavemefromembarrassment,sohehadcalledaheadandarrangedforustobeservedwithknivesandforks.Icouldn’tbelievehowkindandhelpfulhewas.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Instantly,Imadeupmymindandaskedtheservertobringmeapairofchopsticks.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Intheend,Iwasn’tembarrassedatall.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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