高頻話題03語言學(xué)習(xí)同步寫作課講義語言學(xué)習(xí)類書面表達圍繞“人與自我”：學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問題、學(xué)習(xí)方法及建議、學(xué)習(xí)體驗等展開。是中考寫作的基礎(chǔ)話題和高頻考點。（一）假設(shè)你是李華，三年的初中生活即將過去，你的外籍同學(xué)Sam在英語學(xué)習(xí)上曾幫助過你。在即將畢業(yè)之際，請你在給Sam的畢業(yè)紀念冊上用英語寫一段100詞左右的留言，要求包括以下內(nèi)容要點：1.你在學(xué)習(xí)上曾遇到的困難；2.Sam對你的幫助、建議及措施：(1)多聽多讀；(2)多看英語電影，多唱英文歌曲；(3)……(自由發(fā)揮；不少于一項內(nèi)容)3．你的收獲及對Sam的感謝和祝福。DearSam,Howtimeflies!It’stimeforustosaygoodbye._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua例文DearSam,Howtimeflies!It’stimeforustosaygoodbye.Duringthepastthreeyears,youhavegivenmesomuchhelpinEnglishthatIcan’tthankyoutoomuch.Istillrememberthreeyearsago,IhaddifficultyinlearningEnglish.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizesomanywordsandunderstandwhatpeopleweresaying.MyspokenEnglishandwrittenEnglishwerepoor,too.However,I’mluckythatImetyou,akind-hearted,smartandpatientboy.Firstly,youtaughtmetolistenandreadmore.Andtheyreallyhelpedmealot.Besides,yousuggestedthatIshouldwatchEnglishmoviesandsingclassicalEnglishsongs.Inaddition,youtoldmetoformthehabitofreadingaloudinthemorningandreadingnovelsbeforegoingtobed.Asaresult,Ifinallymadegreatprogress.Thankyouforallyourhelpandbestwishestoyou.Yourssincerely，LiHua【審題】①題材：本題是一篇便條作文；②時態(tài)：本文用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時相結(jié)合；③提示：描述自己是如何學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)的，需要遵照所給要求，適當(dāng)補充細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，陳述自己在初中三年里學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難，為后文做鋪墊；第二步，具體描述自己遇到的困難，以及是如何解決的，注意涵蓋所有材料要點，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；第三步，總結(jié)致謝。[亮點詞匯]①toomuch太多②inaddition此外③thehabitof……的習(xí)慣[高分句型]①youhavegivenmesomuchhelpinEnglishthatIcan’tthankyoutoomuch.（結(jié)果狀語從句）②Besides,yousuggestedthatIshouldwatchEnglishmoviesandsingclassicalEnglishsongs.（賓語從句）寫作框架設(shè)計寫作框架設(shè)計(2024河南)在日常學(xué)習(xí)中，有的學(xué)生喜歡獨自學(xué)習(xí)，有的則喜歡和大家一起學(xué)習(xí)。你更喜歡哪一種學(xué)習(xí)方式？?？⒄Z專欄正在以“Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup？”為題開展征文活動，請你根據(jù)寫作要求，結(jié)合自身實際，從以下兩種學(xué)習(xí)方式中任選其一，用英語寫一篇短文，陳述你的理由，向?qū)谕陡?。StudyingaloneStudyingwithagroup

solveproblemsonmyown

gethelpfromothers

keepmymindonschoolwork

shareideaswithgroupmembers寫作要求：1.文中須包含所選學(xué)習(xí)方式的要點提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?Somestudentsliketostudyalone.Othersenjoystudyingwithagroup._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題】人稱：______________時態(tài)：______________【列綱】【參考范文】Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?Somestudentsliketostudyalone.Othersenjoystudyingwithagroup.①Asforme,Ilikestudyingalonebetter.②Firstly,studyingalonehelpsmelearntosolveproblemsonmyown.Mostofthetime,Ineedtothinkhardaboutthemallbymyself.Somythinkingabilityisimprovedatthesametime.③Secondly,whenIstudyalone,IcankeepmymindonwhatI'mdoing.Withaclearhead,Iamabletofinishmyhomeworkquickly.④Inthisway,Iwillgraduallydevelopagoodlearninghabit.Ithinkstudyingaloneisreallyagoodwayanditwillbenefitmealotinmylife.加分亮點①句以asforme作為開頭，自然而然地引出作者所喜歡的學(xué)習(xí)方式，邏輯流暢合理；②句使用動名詞作主語，說明作者喜歡獨自學(xué)習(xí)的第一個理由，使文章表達更為豐富；③句使用when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，具體說明獨自學(xué)習(xí)的其他益處，使文章內(nèi)容具體充實；④句以介詞短語inthisway作為開頭，展望獨自學(xué)習(xí)會給作者帶來的影響，使文章邏輯更為嚴密完整。詞匯積累詞匯積累學(xué)習(xí)方面的困難:1.challenge挑戰(zhàn)2.grammar語法3.understand理解4.fail失??；未能(做到)5.hard/difficult困難的6.upset苦惱的7.readingspeed閱讀速度8.bepoorat/weakin不擅長……9.be/getstressedout心力交瘁10.beafraidof害怕……11.makemistakes犯錯誤12.havetrouble/problemsdoingsth.做某事有困難學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問題(DifficultiesinLearning)me.WhatgEnglishisveryimportant.Butit'stoodifficultforme.Whatareyourproblems?Listening:Ican'tunderstandspokenEnglish.◆Speaking:①Iamalwaystooshy/afraidtospeakEnglishinfrontofothers.②Ican'tpronouncesomewordsintherightway.◆Reading:①Ireadveryslowly.②Ican'tunderstandwhatthearticlesareabout.◆Writing:①Ioftenforgetwordseasily.②Ioftenmakemistakesingrammar.③Ialsohavedifficulty/troubleinmakingsentences.學(xué)習(xí)方法與策略:1.method方法2.skill技能；技巧3.suggestion建議4.prepare準備5.discuss討論6.repeat重復(fù)7.review復(fù)習(xí)8.practice練習(xí)9.mindmap思維導(dǎo)圖10.takenotes做筆記11.makeaplan制訂計劃12.thesecretto……的秘訣13.writedown寫下；記下14.lookup查閱15.takepartin/joinin參加16.behelpfulto對……有用17.followone'sadvice采納某人的建議18.asksb.forhelp向某人尋求幫助19.payattentionto注意學(xué)習(xí)方法及建議(LearningMethodsandAdvice)How

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English?IlearnEnglishbylisteningtotapes.Listening:Listentotapes聽磁帶listentoEnglishsongs聽英文歌Speaking:discussinEnglish用英語討論giveaspeechon/about…做一個關(guān)于……的演講Reading:readnewspapers讀報紙readnovels讀小說Writing:keepadiary寫日記takenotes記筆記writeemailsinEnglish用英語寫郵件Are

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learnwisely聰明地學(xué)習(xí)payattentionto注意；關(guān)注previewbeforeclass課前預(yù)習(xí)

reviewafterclass課后復(fù)習(xí)workingroups小組合作

drawmindmaps畫思維導(dǎo)圖correctmistakes糾正錯誤makestudyplans制定學(xué)習(xí)計劃makestudycards制作學(xué)習(xí)卡片

writedownkeywords寫下關(guān)鍵詞developgoodhabits養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣

finishhomeworkontime按時完成作業(yè)lookthroughyournotes瀏覽你的筆記

repeatasmuchaspossible盡可能多地重復(fù)askteachersforhelp向老師們尋求幫助

checktheanswerscarefully仔細檢查答案感悟與收獲:1.exam考試2.ability能力3.grade年級；成績等級4.experience經(jīng)歷；經(jīng)驗5.memorize/remember記住6.pass通過7.improve改進；提高8.confident自信的9.successfully成功地10.haveabetterunderstandingof對……有更好的理解11.begoodat擅長12.developthegoodhabitof養(yǎng)成……的好習(xí)慣13.makeprogress取得進步句式積累句式積累學(xué)習(xí)方面的困難Ifinditdifficulttogetthemeaningwhilelisteningtothedialogue.我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在聽對話的時候很難理解意思。Iwasafraidtoaskquestionsbecauseofmypoorpronunciation.因為我的發(fā)音不好，所以我不敢提問。MyhandwritingissobadthatInevergethighgradesinwriting.我的字寫得不好看，以至于我從來沒有在寫作上得過高分。學(xué)習(xí)方法與策略ThemoreyouspeakEnglish,thebetteryourspokenEnglishwillbe.你英語說得越多，你的英語口語就會越好。Youshouldtakenotessothatyoucanreviewwhatyouhavelearnedinclass.你應(yīng)該記筆記，這樣你就可以復(fù)習(xí)你在課堂上學(xué)到的東西。It'susefultoreviewwordsandarticlesbylisteningtoatapeandrepeatingoutloud.通過聽錄音帶和大聲復(fù)述來復(fù)習(xí)單詞和文章是很有用的。Ithinkstudyingaloneisreallyagoodwayanditwillbenefitmealot.我認為獨自學(xué)習(xí)確實是一個很好的方式，它會使我受益匪淺。感悟與收獲1.WiththehelpofJohn,Ihavemadegreatprogressinplayingping-pong.在約翰的幫助下，我在打乒乓球上有了很大的進步。OneofthemostimportantthingsIhavelearnedishowtomakebetteruseoftheputer.我學(xué)到的最重要的事情之一就是如何更好地利用電腦。Thesewayscannotonlyimprovemylisteningandspeakingskills,butalsodevelopmyreadingability.這些方法不僅可以提高我的聽說技能，還可以培養(yǎng)我的閱讀能力。Ilearnedalessonthatteamworkplaysanimportantroleinachievingsuccess.我吸取了一個教訓(xùn)，即團隊合作在取得成功中起著重要的作用。Can

you

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methods?Practicemakesperfect.Judyadvisedmetoreadthetextaloudinthemorning.Reading

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inmyEnglishlearning.TeacherssuggestwatchingEnglishmoviesasmanyaspossible．WhenIdoEnglishreading,it

remindsmehowwordsarespelledcorrectly.Everynightbeforebed,

Imakealistof

theimportanttaskstofinishforthenextday.Whetherwecanhaveagreatsuccessornotdependsonourlearninghabits.Onlybygoingovertheknowledgeandputtingitintopracticecanyou

trulymasterwhatyou'velearned.諺語積累諺語積累1.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母。2.Knowledgeispower.知識就是力量。3.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。4.Thereisagoldenhouseinthebook.書中自有屋。5.Agoodbookisagoodfriend.好書如摯友。6.Nomanisbornwiseorlearned.人非生而知之。7.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.學(xué)無坦途。8.Neverputofftilltomorrowwhatyoucandotoday.今日事，今日畢。9.Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老。10.Learningwithoutthinkingleadstoconfusion；thinkingwithoutlearningendsindanger.則罔，思而不學(xué)則殆。變式提升訓(xùn)練變式提升訓(xùn)練【期中真題鏈接】（1）“九層之臺，起于累土”，大目標(biāo)的實現(xiàn)都是從最基本的小事開始。假設(shè)你是李華，你打算向?qū)W校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，分享你的目標(biāo)，描述你為實現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)所做的努力。請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖用英語寫一篇短文。要求：1.可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息；2.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實校名、地名和考生的真實姓名；3.語句連貫，書寫工整，詞數(shù)70左右。參考信息：目標(biāo)goal(n.)Everyonehashisgoal,largeorsmall.Asforme,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2）英語是中學(xué)階段的一門重要課程。但是，有的同學(xué)因?qū)W習(xí)方法不當(dāng)而學(xué)習(xí)效果不佳；有的同學(xué)因畏懼困難而放棄了英語學(xué)習(xí)……針對這些現(xiàn)象，《學(xué)生英文報》展開了“怎樣學(xué)好英語”的討論。請你以“HowtoLearnEnglishWell?”為題，談?wù)勀銓τ⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)的看法和學(xué)好英語的一些建議。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80~100；2.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確，邏輯清晰。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（3）假如你的同學(xué)Mark在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到了困難，請你給他提出一些建議。請以“HowtolearnEnglish”為題寫一篇短文，70詞左右，標(biāo)題、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtolearnEnglishHowcanyoulearnEnglishwell?Herearemysuggestions._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyou.（4）假設(shè)你是李華，英語學(xué)習(xí)成績優(yōu)異。昨天你的筆友劉強給你發(fā)來電子郵件，向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好英語。請你結(jié)合下面的要點提示，給他回一封電子郵件。要點提示：1.通過課堂做筆記和大聲朗讀；2.多說英語；3.多聽英文歌曲；4.多看英語電影；5.多交一些來自于說英語的國家的朋友。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右，電子郵件的格式，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearLiuQiang,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Here’ssomeadviceaboutEnglishlearningforyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopemyadvicewillhelpyoulearnEnglishwell.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua（5）親愛的同學(xué)，隨著“雙減”政策的落地，面對輕松的學(xué)業(yè)負擔(dān)和課余生活，如何成為一個好的學(xué)習(xí)者至關(guān)重要。請根據(jù)以下信息，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh吧！詞數(shù)80左右。developgoodhabitsHowtoBeaGoodLearner？finishhomeworkefficientlymakefulluseofthetime…注意事項：1.必須包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)。2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名和校名。HowtoBeaGoodLearner?Asweknow,thepolicyof“doublelighteningtheburden”hasbeencarriedout._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（6）假如你叫李平，前不久你和來自英國的一位中學(xué)生湯姆起討論了一個話題：TheWaystoLearnEnglishBetter。現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)他和你的觀點，給外籍老師蘇姍寫一篇關(guān)于這次討論的匯報材料。注意：1.開頭已寫好，可根據(jù)討論主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的他的觀點和你自己的至少三個觀點；3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。DearSusan,

RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionaboutthewaystolearnEnglishbetterwithTom,astudentfromBritain.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（7）假如你叫張娜，在光明中學(xué)讀書，在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中你遇到了一些問題，想得到王老師的幫助并想給英語老師提一些建議，以幫助自己學(xué)好英語。下面表格中只給了簡單的提示，請你結(jié)合自己的實際情況給英語老師寫一封求助信，內(nèi)容如下：學(xué)習(xí)英語時遇到的問題向英語老師提出的建議1.生詞多，記憶有難度；2.課文長，難弄懂；3.……1.介紹一些學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法；2.教課文時讀慢一些；3.……要求：1.包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)：不少于80詞，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Wang,MynameisZhangNa.I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,ZhangNa（8）親愛的初三同學(xué)，經(jīng)過兩年多的初中學(xué)習(xí)，你一定在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面有很大收獲和成長，請你結(jié)合以下提示，以“HowtoLearnEnglish”為題寫一篇英文短文，把你的英語學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗介紹給初一初二的同學(xué)們。提示：(1)WhyshouldyoulearnEnglish?(2)Whatisyouradvicetothem?要求：(1)短文須包含提示中的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名等信息。(3)詞數(shù)80詞左右。（題目和開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（9）目前很多學(xué)生整體部忙于學(xué)習(xí)，成卻不理想。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自身實際，寫一篇關(guān)于“怎樣提高學(xué)習(xí)效率”的短文。學(xué)習(xí)方法1.listentotheteacher2.takesnotes3.reviewintime4.correctmistakes...體育鍛煉1.exercise...其他方面1.makegooduseoftime2.asksb.forhelp...要求：(1)短文應(yīng)條理清楚，行文連，段落分明，100詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：(2)短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、學(xué)校、地名等信息。(3)短文應(yīng)括全部信息，可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。HowtoImproveOurStudyEfficiencyAgreatnumberofstudentscan’tfinishtheirtasks,whichleadstobadresultsandmakesthemlessinterestedintheirstudies.Howcanwesolvetheproblem?Herearesomesuggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfyoufollowtheadvicethatIhavementionedabove,youwillbesuccessful.（10）假如你是李明，你的朋友李華向你請教學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法，你準備給出一些建議。請根據(jù)以下中文提示，給李華發(fā)一封郵件，要求80詞左右，郵件開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要點如下：1.讀英文報紙，培養(yǎng)良好語感；2.看英文電影，了解西方文化；3.結(jié)交一個外國網(wǎng)友，并與之交流；4.堅持寫英文日記，學(xué)好語法；5.補充一兩點個人想法。參考詞匯：developv.培養(yǎng)sensen.感覺epaln.網(wǎng)友DearLiHua,

IknowthatyouhavesomeproblemslearningEnglish.Don’tworry.I’llgiveyousomeadvice.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ihopeitwillhelpyou.Yourssincerely,LiMing【中考真題鏈接】（2024·廣東·中考真題）假設(shè)你叫李明，你校交換生Ethan在閱讀中國古詩詞的過程中遇到了困難，他通過學(xué)校廣播節(jié)目尋找共讀伙伴。請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，用英文寫一封郵件，表示愿意成為他的共讀伙伴，并提供幫助。注意：（1）可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息。（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實校名和考生的真實姓名。（3）語句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。作文開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上。DearEthan,I’velearnedfromtheschoolradioprogramthatyouhavedifficultyinreadingancientChinesepoemsandneedareadingbuddy.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes,LiMing____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2022·廣西·中考真題）在豐富多彩的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定積累了很多學(xué)習(xí)方法和經(jīng)驗吧！現(xiàn)?？⑽膶谝浴癓earningtolearn”為主題征稿。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。寫作要點：1.一個科目名稱；2.此科目的學(xué)習(xí)方法（至少兩個）；3.此科目的學(xué)習(xí)感受或期望。寫作要求：1.將標(biāo)題和首句補充完整；2.包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透露個人信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右。Methodsoflearning________Herearemymethodsoflearning____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2022·河南·中考真題）閱讀是英語學(xué)習(xí)的重要途徑。請你結(jié)合下面圖示信息，以“HowreadingimprovesmyEnglish”為題，根據(jù)寫作要求，用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校校刊的英語專欄投稿。寫作要求：1)文中須包含上圖提示的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3)詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：improve提高HowreadingimprovesmyEnglishReadingplaysanimportantroleinmyEnglishlearning._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________