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第二節(jié)(滿分25分)

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Inaworldwherenegativityoftenseemstodominatetheheadlines,it’seasytooverlookthesmallactsofkindnessthatcanmakeasignificantdifferenceinsomeone’sday.Irecentlyexperiencedthisfirsthandduringaparticularlychallengingweek.

Ihadaharddayatwork,myweekdidn’tgowellandproblemsjustkeptpoppingupeverywhere.Thingsbrokeorquit,unexpectedbillscameinandIwasstrugglingtocopewithallthestress.Thenanunexpectedruntothestorepoppedup,whenallIwantedtodowasgohomeandwell,IfeltlikeIwasattheboilingpoint.

Imadethetripacrosstowntothestore,eventhoughIonlyneededafewthings,andfoundtheparkinglotpacked.Toaddtoit,thepersonnexttowhereIwasgoingtoparkseemedtothinkhiscarwasentitledtoTWOparkingspots,whichbotheredmewhenitwasasmallvehicleanditparkedonthemiddlelineoftwospaces,clearlytakingthemboth.IfinallyparkedandthenrealizedIhadleftmypurse,withmydebitcard(借記卡),checkbook,etc.,athomethatday.Thankfully,Ihadasmallamountofcash,soIgrabbeditandmycoupon(優(yōu)惠券)bookandwentinside,thinkingthatwiththecoupons,Iwouldevenhavesomecashleftover.Thestorewasreallybusy,butIjustwentandfoundthefewthingsIneededandgotinoneofthefewlanesopen,andpreparedtowait.

Iwaitedandwaited.Meanwhile,myimpatiencegrew.Afterastressfulday,allIwantedtodowasgohome,butIwasstuckinthecheckoutline.ThelineIjoinedseemedtocrawlatasnail’space.Mystresslevelswererising.IwasshiftingrestlesslywhilewaitinginlinewhenIspottedanoldladystandingbehindme.Itseemedthatshesensedmyanxietybecauseshecastakindsmile.Awkwardlyreturningasmile,Ikeptwaiting.Afterwhatseemedlikeanage,itwasmyturnandIgottothefront.

注意：

(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.

第二節(jié)(滿分25分)

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Inaworldwherenegativityoftenseemstodominatetheheadlines(定從),it’seasytooverlookthesmallactsofkindness(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做主語(yǔ))thatcanmakeasignificantdifferenceinsomeone’sday(定從).Irecentlyexperiencedthisfirsthandduringaparticularlychallengingweek.

Ihadaharddayatwork,myweekdidn’tgowellandproblemsjustkeptpoppingupeverywhere.Thingsbrokeorquit,unexpectedbillscameinandIwasstrugglingtocopewithallthestress(a,bandc).Thenanunexpectedruntothestorepoppedup,whenallIwantedtodo(定從)wasgohomeandwell(狀從),IfeltlikeIwasattheboilingpoint(賓從).

Imadethetripacrosstowntothestore,eventhoughIonlyneededafewthings,andfoundtheparkinglotpacked(讓步狀從).Toaddtoit,thepersonnexttowhereIwasgoingtopark(定從)seemedtothinkhiscarwasentitledtoTWOparkingspots(賓從),whichbotheredme(定從)whenitwasasmallvehicleanditparkedonthemiddlelineoftwospaces(狀從),clearlytakingthemboth(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做方式狀語(yǔ)).IfinallyparkedandthenrealizedIhadleftmypurse,withmydebitcard(借記卡),checkbook,etc.,athomethatday(賓從).Thankfully,Ihadasmallamountofcash,soIgrabbeditandmycoupon(優(yōu)惠券)bookandwentinside,thinkingthatwiththecoupons,Iwouldevenhavesomecashleftover(賓從).Thestorewasreallybusy,butIjustwentandfoundthefewthingsIneeded(定從)andgotinoneofthefewlanesopen,andpreparedtowait.

Iwaitedandwaited.Meanwhile,myimpatiencegrew.Afterastressfulday,allIwantedtodo(定從)wasgohome,butIwasstuckinthecheckoutline.ThelineIjoined(定從)seemedtocrawlatasnail’space.Mystresslevelswererising.Iwasshiftingrestlesslywhilewaitinginline(狀從)whenIspottedanoldladystandingbehindme(狀從).Itseemedthatshesensedmyanxiety(表從)becauseshecastakindsmile(狀從).Awkwardlyreturningasmile(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),Ikeptwaiting.Afterwhatseemedlikeanage,itwasmyturnandIgottothefront.

注意：

(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.

1.讀后續(xù)寫的分類分析

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句

類型分析本篇屬于“情感轉(zhuǎn)折型"的讀后續(xù)寫。本文主要圍繞主人公經(jīng)歷的一天，從壓力累積到情緒崩潰，再到偶然遇到一位善意的老人的微笑，情感發(fā)生了變化。

思路構(gòu)思續(xù)寫時(shí)需要聚焦主人公情感的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，尤其是在遇到老人的微笑后心境的變化。在接下來的段落里，需通過情感的遞進(jìn)與外部事件（如老人的舉動(dòng)）相結(jié)合，強(qiáng)化主人公的情感轉(zhuǎn)變與感悟。

布局與框架1.第一段：描述主人公的無助與壓力感。

2.第二段：通過老人的微笑引發(fā)情感的改變，進(jìn)而推進(jìn)故事的發(fā)展。

承接原文事項(xiàng)1.保持原文的情感基調(diào)——壓力與無奈。

2.強(qiáng)調(diào)突如其來的意外善意（老人微笑）。需強(qiáng)調(diào)主人公的壓力情緒到遇到意外的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。

整體注意事項(xiàng)1.保持語(yǔ)境連貫，關(guān)注細(xì)節(jié)描寫；

2.強(qiáng)調(diào)情感的轉(zhuǎn)折——由焦慮轉(zhuǎn)為溫暖；

3.需要展現(xiàn)主人公的內(nèi)心世界。語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)單卻具有情感深度，展現(xiàn)人物的內(nèi)心變化與外部事件的呼應(yīng)。

巧妙設(shè)計(jì)內(nèi)容1.借由老人的善意舉動(dòng)，展現(xiàn)人與人之間的溫暖與關(guān)愛；

2.最終通過主人公的內(nèi)心獨(dú)白或感悟，圓滿故事。老人微笑后，主人公回想自己生活中的壓力，并感受到人際關(guān)系中的關(guān)愛，拋開負(fù)面情緒，找回希望。

2.故事山模式（StoryMountain）分析

思維導(dǎo)圖（StoryMountain）

引入：主人公經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)極其糟糕的日子，所有的負(fù)面情緒開始積累。

事件：工作上的不順，意外的停車問題，忘記帶錢包等。

沖突：主人公在商店排隊(duì)結(jié)賬時(shí)焦慮和無助感加劇。

事件：排隊(duì)等待時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，壓力不斷累積。

高潮：老人微笑的善意觸動(dòng)了主人公的內(nèi)心，情感發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折。

事件：老人的微笑帶來了溫暖的情感轉(zhuǎn)折。

解決：主人公從壓力中解脫，感受到了周圍的善意與關(guān)愛。

事件：主人公恢復(fù)冷靜，重新獲得希望。

3.伏筆與沖突點(diǎn)分析

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句

人物刻畫主人公經(jīng)歷了一天的挫折和情感低谷，形成了心態(tài)的變化?！癟hingsbrokeorquit,unexpectedbillscameinandIwasstrugglingtocopewithallthestress.”

情感層次從焦慮和無助，到遇到意外的善意后，情感得到緩解并發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折?！癐tseemedthatshesensedmyanxietybecauseshecastakindsmile."

關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點(diǎn)老人的微笑是觸發(fā)情感轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)。“Afterwhatseemedlikeanage,itwasmyturnandIgottothefront.”

情感轉(zhuǎn)折從焦慮的情緒轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閮?nèi)心的溫暖和感激。“Awkwardlyreturningasmile,Ikeptwaiting."

4.動(dòng)作、心理、環(huán)境描寫的英文例句推薦

動(dòng)作描寫：

Shegrabbedhercashquicklyandrushedinside.

Sheshiftedrestlesslywhilewaitinginline.

Jadescannedthestore,tryingtofindtheshortestqueue.

Herfingerstrembledasshereachedforthecouponbook.

Sheclenchedherfists,tryingtocalmhernerves.

Shesighedheavilyasthequeueseemedendless.

Sheturnedtolookatthepersoninfrontofherinline,wonderingiftheywereasfrustrated.

Shefinallysteppedforwardtothecounter,heartracing.

心理描寫：

Jadefeltherheartsinkwitheverypassingsecond.

Shethought,"WillIevermakeithomeintime"

Thethoughtofmorestresspushedhertotheedge.

Foramoment,shewonderedifanyonewouldunderstandherfrustration.

Hermindwasracing,herpatiencerunningthin.

Sheclosedhereyesbriefly,hopingforsomerelief.

Jadefeltawaveofhelplessnesswashoverher.

Butthesmilefromtheelderlyladymadeherfeelstrangelyatease.

環(huán)境描寫：

Thestorewaspacked,everyaislefilledwithhurriedcustomers.

Thecheckoutlineseemedtostretchforever,withonlyoneregisteropen.

Thefluorescentlightsaboveflickeredintermittently.

Thenoiseofcartsclatteringandpeopletalkingfilledthespace.

Outside,thesunwassetting,castingawarmglowovertheparkinglot.

Theairfeltstuffyandwarm,astheheatfromsomanypeoplefilledtheroom.

Thecoolbreezeoutsidewasasharpcontrasttothecrowdedstore.

Theshelveswerelinedwithproducts,mostofthemonsale.

5.高級(jí)替換詞及短語(yǔ)推薦

場(chǎng)景替換詞例句

焦慮anxious,worried,stressed,uneasy,troubledShefeltanxiousastheminutestickedby.

無助helpless,powerless,defeated,overwhelmedJadefeltcompletelyhelplesswhenherpatiencewasrunningout.

微笑smile,grin,beam,flashasmile,showasmileTheoldladyflashedawarmsmilethatmadeJadefeelinstantlybetter.

擁擠crowded,packed,congested,jammed,bustlingThestorewaspackedwithcustomers,makingithardtomovefreely.

壓力stress,pressure,tension,strain,anxietyShecouldn’tbearthetensionanymore,feelingasthoughthepressurewasgoingtobursther.

6.高中語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象分析

語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象搭配與語(yǔ)法點(diǎn)例句

動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)shiftrestlessly,grabquickly,sighheavily,glanceat"Sheshiftedrestlesslywhilewaitinginline."

虛擬語(yǔ)氣if+主語(yǔ)+had+過去分詞"Ifshehadnotreceivedthesmile,shewouldhaveleftinfrustration."

感嘆句Whatarelief,Howsweet,Whatamoment"WhatareliefitwaswhenIfeltherkindness."

從句賓語(yǔ)從句：Shefeltthat…

狀語(yǔ)從句：Althoughitwascrowded,she…

定語(yǔ)從句：Thestore,whichwascrowded,wasnoisy."Althoughitwascrowded,Jadekeptwaiting."

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Version1

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.Theelderlylady’ssmilehadaprofoundimpactonme.Atthatmoment,Ifeltanoverwhelmingsenseofcalmwashoverme,asthoughhergesturehadbrokenthroughthewallofstressandfrustration(狀從)Ihadbuiltup(定從).Itwasasiftheentireuniversehadpausedforabriefsecond(表從),allowingmetobreatheandreflect(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)).IcouldnolongerfocusontheinconveniencesIhadfacedearlierintheday(定從).Instead,Ifoundmyselfthinkingaboutthekindnessofstrangersandhowsuchsmall,seeminglyinsignificantmomentscanalterourperspectiveontheworld(賓從).ThenoiseinthestorefadedintothebackgroundasItriedtograspthefullsignificanceofthesmile(狀從).

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.Iturnedaroundandfoundthesameelderlylady,holdingoutasmall,crumpledbill(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做伴隨動(dòng)作)withagentlesmile(介詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)).“Youdon’tneedtoworryaboutit,”shesaidsoftly.Atfirst,Iwastoostunnedtorespond.Ilookedatherindisbelief,wonderingwhyastrangerwouldofferhelpwithouthesitation(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做伴隨動(dòng)作+賓從).Slowly,Irealizedthatitwasn’tjustthemoney,buttheactofkindnessitselfthattouchedmedeeply(賓從+強(qiáng)調(diào)句).Myinitialskepticismgavewaytoafeelingofimmensegratitude.Ithankedherwithallmyheart,realizingthatinaworldfilledwithchallenges(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做后置定語(yǔ)),itwasthekindnessofothersthatcouldturnatoughdayaround(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做伴隨動(dòng)作+賓從+強(qiáng)調(diào)句).

亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法與詞匯分析：

加分語(yǔ)法點(diǎn)：

虛擬語(yǔ)氣：Ifshehadnotsmiled,Iwouldhavefeltevenmorestressed.

情態(tài)動(dòng)詞：Shecouldnothaveknownhowmuchhersmilemeanttome.

倒裝句：NeverhadIfeltsomovedbysuchasimplegesture.

情緒描寫：

詞匯：calm,overwhelmingsense,breathe,reflection,disbelief,immensegratitude.

替換選項(xiàng)：peaceful(calm),deepappreciation(immensegratitude).

動(dòng)作描寫：

詞匯：patonmyshoulder,holdingout,stunnedtorespond,offeredhelp,gaveway.

替換選項(xiàng)：extend,handover,pause.

Version2

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.Themomenttheoldladysmiledatme(狀從),everythingseemedtoslowdown.Hersmile,sowarmandgenuine(adj做補(bǔ)語(yǔ)),cutthroughthechaosaroundme.Inthatfleetingsecond,Ifeltasifthepressureoftheworldhadliftedfrommyshoulders(表從).IhadbeensoconsumedbymyfrustrationsthatIhadforgottenhoweasyitwastooverlookthekindness(賓從+賓從)thatsurroundsus(定從).Ipaused,staringattheelderlywomanforamoment,feelingawaveofreliefwashoverme(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Itwasagentlereminderthatsometimes,allittakes(定從)isasmallactofkindness(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)tobrightensomeone’sdayandchangethecourseoftheiremotions(目的狀語(yǔ)).

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.Turningaround(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),Isawtheelderlyladystandingthere,herfaceradiantwithkindness(獨(dú)立主格).ShehandedmetheexactamountIneeded(定從)andsimplysaid,“Ihopethishelps(賓從)."Icouldn’thelpbutfeelamixofsurpriseandappreciation.Itwasahumblingexperiencetoreceivesuchgenerosityfromastranger(todo做后置定語(yǔ)).Ithankedherprofusely,feelingadeepsenseofwarmthfillmychest(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).AsIleftthestore(狀從),Icouldn’tstopthinkingabouttheimpactthissmallinteractionhadonme(定從).Itmademerealizethatthereisstillgoodintheworld,andthatit’softenthelittlethingsthatmatterthemost(定從).

亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法與詞匯分析：

加分語(yǔ)法點(diǎn)：

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：Hersmile,sowarmandgenuine,cuttingthroughthechaos.

定語(yǔ)從句：Theelderlylady,whohadasmilethatcouldlightuptheroom,stoodbesideme.

虛擬語(yǔ)氣：HadIknownaboutherkindnessearlier,Iwouldhavebeenlessstressed.

情緒描寫：

詞匯：relief,surprise,humblingexperience,warmth,deepsense.

替換選項(xiàng)：comfort(relief),overwhelmingjoy(warmth).

動(dòng)作描寫：

詞匯：turnedaround,handedme,filledmychest,couldn’tstopthinking.

替換選項(xiàng)：passed,reachedout,pondered.

Version3

Paragraph1:However,thingsdidn’tgoasIhadexpected.Theoldlady’ssmilewaslikeabreathoffreshairinthemidstofmystormoffrustration.IhadbeensoabsorbedinmyownworriesthatIfailedtonoticethesimplejoysinlife.Hersmilewasareminderthatnomatterhowdifficultadaymayseem,kindnesscanstillfinditswaythrough.Ifeltashiftinmyattitudeasthesmiledissolvedmyangerandanxiety(狀從).ItwasasifIhadbeengivenagift,notintheformofmaterialthings,butintheformofcompassion(表從).Ismiledback,suddenlyfeelinglighter(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),asthoughtheworldhadbecomealittlebrighter(狀從).

Paragraph2:IwasabouttogobackformorecashwhenIfeltapatonmyshoulder.Iturnedaroundtoseetheelderlyladystandingbehindme,holdingoutafewbills(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).“Youdon’tneedtoworry,”shesaidkindly.Herwordsweresimple,yettheycarriedsomuchmeaning.Ilookedather,astonishedatthekindnessofastranger(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做主語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)).Withoutthinking,Iacceptedthemoney,gratefulforhergenerosity(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做主語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)).AsIleftthestore(狀從),Icouldn’thelpbutfeelarenewedsenseofhope.Itwasareminderthat,despitethestrugglesweface,therearealwayspeoplewhocareandarewi