2025年小學(xué)英語畢業(yè)考試模擬試卷（英語寫作思路拓展）寫作提升訓(xùn)練試題型考試時(shí)間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______Part1:ApplicationWritingDearLily,Iwasveryhappytohearfromyoulastweek.Howareyoudoing?Yourpenpal,Tom,iscomingtovisityounextmonth.Ithinkit'sagreatopportunityforyoutomakemorefriends.Asyouknow,IhaveagoodfriendnamedWangWei.Heisverykindandhelpful.HealwayshelpsmewithmystudieswhenIhaveproblems.Helikesplayingbasketballverymuchandoftenplayswithusafterschool.Heisalsointerestedindrawingandoftendrawsbeautifulpictures.Ithinkyouwilllikehimverymuchbecauseheisveryfriendly.Ihopeyoucanmakemorefriendsthere.Pleasewritebackandtellmemoreaboutyourtrip.Bestwishes,LiHuaPart2:PictureDescriptionLookatthepicturecarefullyandwriteashortpassage(about60words)describingwhatyousee.Part3:TopicWritingManystudentshavehobbies.Whatisyourhobby?Pleasewriteashortpassage(about60words)tellingusaboutyourhobby.Youcanwriteaboutwhyyoulikeitandwhatyoudointhishobby.試卷答案Part1:ApplicationWriting[無標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案，以下為參考范文及解析思路]范文示例:DearTom,Thankyouforyourletterandyourkindadviceaboutmakingfriends.Iamdoingwell,thanks.IamveryexcitedaboutTomvisitingnextmonth.Itwillbegreattohaveapenpalfromanothercountry.YouintroducedmetoWangWei.Ithinkhesoundslikeagreatperson!It'snicethathehelpsyouwithstudiesandlovessportsanddrawing.Iamsurewewillgetalongwell.Heseemsfriendlyandinteresting.Ilookforwardtomeetinghimandmakingmorefriendstoo.Hopeyouhaveawonderfultimevisitingme.Pleasewritebacksoonandtellmemoreaboutyourselfandyourschool.Bestwishes,Lily解析思路:1.審題:看到是應(yīng)用文寫作，內(nèi)容是回信。需要感謝對方來信，回應(yīng)對方關(guān)于交朋友的建議，表達(dá)對Tom來訪的興奮，并介紹自己通過信中提到的WangWei來拓展社交圈。2.結(jié)構(gòu):首先感謝來信和建議。其次，表達(dá)自己目前的狀況和對Tom來訪的期待。然后，針對信中提到的WangWei，表達(dá)對其優(yōu)點(diǎn)的認(rèn)可，并說明自己期待與其見面。最后，再次表達(dá)對Tom來訪的期待，并請求對方繼續(xù)分享信息。3.語言:使用禮貌、友好的語氣。運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯表達(dá)情感（excited,great,nice,friendly,interesting,wonderful）。運(yùn)用基本句型（Iamdoingwell,thanks.Ithink...,Iamsure...,Ilookforwardto...）。4.內(nèi)容:涵蓋了感謝、回應(yīng)建議、表達(dá)期待、介紹他人（通過對方介紹）、表達(dá)個(gè)人感受（getalongwell,lookforwardto）等要點(diǎn)。Part2:PictureDescription[無標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案，以下為參考范文及解析思路]范文示例:Thisisaninterestingpicture.Wecanseealittleboyandalittlegirlinthepark.TheyarewearingT-shirtsandshorts.Theboyisplayingfootballnearatree.Helooksveryhappy.Thegirlissittingonthegrass,lookingatabookinherhands.Sheseemstobereadingastory.Therearesometreesandasmallpondinthebackground.Theweatherlookssunny.It'sanicedayforthemtoplayinthepark.解析思路:1.審題:看到是看圖寫話，需要根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述。沒有具體要求描述對象或事件，所以需要自己觀察并概括。2.觀察:識別圖片中的主要人物（男孩、女孩）、地點(diǎn)（公園）、人物活動（踢足球、看書）、穿著、背景元素（樹、池塘、天氣）。3.結(jié)構(gòu):先總體描述圖片（interestingpicture）。然后分別描述主要人物及其活動。接著描述背景環(huán)境和天氣。最后可以進(jìn)行總結(jié)，點(diǎn)明這是一個(gè)愉快的場景。4.語言:使用描述性詞匯（interesting,little,T-shirts,shorts,happily,sitting,reading,beautifultrees,smallpond,sunny,niceday）。運(yùn)用簡單句和并列句來組織句子（Heisplaying...Sheissitting...Thereare...）。注意時(shí)態(tài)（描述當(dāng)前情景用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）。5.內(nèi)容:描述了人物、活動、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境、天氣等關(guān)鍵信息，使畫面內(nèi)容清晰、完整。Part3:TopicWriting[無標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案，以下為參考范文及解析思路]范文示例:Myhobbyisplayingthepiano.Istartedlearningitthreeyearsago.Ilikeplayingthepianobecauseit'sveryinterestingandcanmakebeautifulmusic.Afterschool,Iusuallypracticeforaboutonehour.MyparentsandfriendsoftenlistentomeplayandsayIplaywell.IfeelveryhappyandrelaxedwhenIplay.IhopeIcanplaymoredifficultpiecesinthefuture.解析思路:1.審題:看到是話題寫作，主題是“愛好”。需要寫自己的愛好是什么，為什么喜歡，以及如何進(jìn)行這項(xiàng)愛好。2.結(jié)構(gòu):先直接點(diǎn)明自己的愛好（Myhobbyis...）。然后說明開始這項(xiàng)愛好的時(shí)間（Istarted...）。接著解釋喜歡這項(xiàng)愛好的原因（because...）。然后描述進(jìn)行這項(xiàng)愛好的具體方式或習(xí)慣（Afterschool...）?？梢约尤胨朔磻?yīng)或自己的感受（Myparents...Ifeel...）。最后可以表達(dá)未來的期望。3.語言:使用表達(dá)愛好的句型（Myhobbyis...）。運(yùn)用原因狀語從句（because...