PAGE1Unit6PlanforYourself單元寫作精練寫作主題識寫作主題識本單元的主要話題是“自我規(guī)劃”，談?wù)搶τ谧约夯蛩宋磥淼穆殬I(yè)和理想生活的打算，或者對新年或新學(xué)期的決心，寫此類文章時(shí)，文體多為記敘文，人稱多用第一人稱，使用一般將來時(shí)begoingtodo的句型結(jié)構(gòu)。敘述要條理清晰、邏輯清楚。先描述未來的職業(yè)和理想生活，再描述打算采取的行動。結(jié)尾要談一談自己對于實(shí)現(xiàn)理想的決心或希望。相關(guān)話題寫作素材有：詞匯engineer,designer,director,painter,lawyer,resolution,goal,promise,achieve,keep,improve,develop,master,learn,healthy,balanced,quit,form,短語takemeasures/stepstodosth.（采取措施做某事）takeupahobby(培養(yǎng)一種愛好)getintothehabitofdoingsth.（養(yǎng)成做某事的習(xí)慣）inorderto/soasto（為了）overcomechallenges（克服挑戰(zhàn)）lookforwardto（期待）Setagoalofdoingsth.（樹立目標(biāo)做某事）Makeupone'smindtodosth.（下定決心做某事）stickto（堅(jiān)持）improveone'srelationshipswith…（改善……和……的關(guān)系）getgoodgrades（取得好成績）makeaweeklyplan（制定周計(jì)劃）句型①AstheNewYearcomes,Idecideto...（新年到來，我決定……）②Oneofmyresolutionsisto...,because...（我的一個(gè)決心是……，因?yàn)椤跿omakeitcometrue,Iwill...（為了實(shí)現(xiàn)它，我會……）④Ithinkthatbydoing...,Ican...（我認(rèn)為通過……，我能……）名言①Agoodbeginningishalfdone.（良好的開端是成功的一半。）②Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.（行動勝于言語。）③Ayear'splanstartswithspring.(一年之計(jì)在于春。)④Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.(有志者事竟成。)⑤Littlebylittle,onegoesfar.(千里之行，始于足下。)寫作寫作步驟懂一、Before-writing1.Writedownthethingsyouwanttoimproveandyourresolutions.Toimprove...Myresolution1.2.3.思考方向：從3個(gè)核心維度發(fā)散思路，確定2-3個(gè)具體決心：1、個(gè)人成長（學(xué)習(xí)、技能、興趣）2、生活習(xí)慣（健康、作息、時(shí)間管理）3、人際關(guān)系（家人、朋友、溝通）2.搭建寫作框架Beginning用一句話點(diǎn)明新年的意義，引出決心TheNewYearbringsachancetostartfresh,andI’vemadesomeresolutionstobecomebetter.Body逐個(gè)介紹決心，每個(gè)決心需包含：1.

具體內(nèi)容（是什么決心）2.

制定原因（為什么選這個(gè)決心）3.

實(shí)施計(jì)劃（如何實(shí)現(xiàn)）①M(fèi)yfirstresolutionisaboutimprovingeatmorevegetablesandfruit.../...getmoreexercise...②Mysecondresolutionis...,becausetakeupthesamehobby.../careaboutmyparents.../spendmoretimewith...③Mylastresolutionisaboutdothehomeworkontime.../readmore/asktheteacherorclassmateforhelpif...④Iplantospend40minutesreviewingmathnoteseveryevening,soIcanimprovemygradesinthefinalexam.⑤Ithinkthatbydoing...,Ican...Ending表達(dá)堅(jiān)持的信心或?qū)π履甑钠诖?。Iknowitwon’tbeeasy,butI’lltrymybesttokeepthesepromises.Iamsuremyresolutionscancometrue./Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.IamsureIcankeepmyresolutionsthrough...二、While-writing(初稿寫作）學(xué)生根據(jù)列好的提綱開始撰寫作文草稿，盡量使用新學(xué)的詞匯和句型，注意正確使用連接詞和begoingto句型。三、Post-writing（完成終稿）同伴互評：交換初稿，標(biāo)注亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)，檢查每個(gè)決心是否有具體細(xì)節(jié)支撐，避免籠統(tǒng)（比如把“鍛煉身體”細(xì)化為“每周跑步3次，每次30分鐘”），提出補(bǔ)充建議。教師點(diǎn)評：選取典型作文展示。最后同學(xué)對自己的作文進(jìn)行修改，包括補(bǔ)充或刪減內(nèi)容、調(diào)整句子結(jié)構(gòu)、糾正語法錯(cuò)誤、替換平淡詞匯等，然后完成終稿。寫作寫作真題賞“一艘沒有目標(biāo)的船，任何方向的風(fēng)都是逆風(fēng)”。提前做好規(guī)劃并嚴(yán)格實(shí)施對每個(gè)人來說都非常重要。新的一年即將來到，學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備舉辦一次迎新英文演講比賽，請以“MyNewYear’sResolutions”為題，根據(jù)下方思維導(dǎo)圖的內(nèi)容寫一篇演講稿。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.自我介紹；2.根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖介紹你的新年規(guī)劃，包含所有要點(diǎn)；3.制定計(jì)劃的重要性。寫作要求：1.書寫工整，語句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyNewYear’sResolutionsAnewyeariscoming.Itisagoodtimetomakeresolutions.Myfirstresolutionisaboutmyphysicalhealth.Swimmingisagoodwaytoexercise.Thisyear,Iwilltakeupswimming.Ofcourse,Ialsowanttoeathealthyfood.Iwillalsotrymybesttohelpmyparentsdosomehousework.Next,IpromisemyselfthatIwillbemorehard-workingatschoolthanbeforebecauseIwanttogetbettergrades.Then,Iwillmakearesolutionthathastodowithmyhobby.Ilovewritingverymuch.Lastyear,Iwroteabout30shortstories.Thisyear,Iplantotrymybesttofinishanovel.Mydreamjobistobeawriter.Atlast,Ipromisetokeepallthoseresolutionsalthoughitisdifficultforme.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”為主；③提示：要求根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖介紹你的新年規(guī)劃，學(xué)生不要遺漏思維導(dǎo)圖中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致，注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹生活方面的決心；第二步，介紹學(xué)習(xí)上的決心；第三步，介紹自己夢想中的工作。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takeupdoingsth.開始做某事②getbettergrades取得更好的成績③plantodosth.計(jì)劃做某事④tryone’sbesttodosth.盡某人的努力做某事[高分句型]①Next,IpromisemyselfthatIwillbemorehard-workingatschoolthanbeforebecauseIwanttogetbettergrades.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句、because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）②Ipromisetokeepallthoseresolutionsalthoughitisdifficultforme.（although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）題型通關(guān)題型通關(guān)練1．你的理想與熱情，是你航行的舵和帆。每個(gè)人都有自己的夢想，你夢想中的未來工作是什么樣的？請以“MyDreamJob”為題，介紹你未來想要從事的工作及其原因，并談?wù)劄榱宋磥淼睦硐牍ぷ鳎銓⒆瞿男?zhǔn)備。提示問題：Whatisyourdreamjob?Whydoyouwanttodothisjob?Whatwillyoudotoprepareforyourdreamjob?MyDreamJobRichorpoor,youngorold,wealldreamaboutourfuturejobs.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyDreamJobRichorpoor,youngorold,wealldreamaboutourfuturejobs.Forme,mydreamjobistobecomeasuccessfulwriter.WritinghasalwaysbeenapassionofminesinceIwasyoung.Ilovehowwordscanbeusedtoexpressemotions,ideas,andstories.Itfascinatesmehowasimplecombinationofletterscancreatesomethingsopowerfulandmeaningful.Toachievemydreamjob,IknowthatIneedtoworkhardandbededicated.IneedtoreadandwriteasmuchasIcan,andconstantlyimprovemyskills.Ialsoneedtobeopentocriticismandfeedback,andlearnfrommymistakes.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出“我夢想的工作”話題；第二步，具體介紹工作名稱、選擇這份工作的原因、如何準(zhǔn)備做好工作；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)全文。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①passion熱情②meaningful有意義的③needtodosth.需要做某事[高分句型]Toachievemydreamjob,IknowthatIneedtoworkhardandbededicated.(that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)2．隨著新年的鐘聲響起，每個(gè)人都懷揣著一份美好的新年愿望和堅(jiān)定的新年決心。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖提示，用英語給你的美國筆友Lily寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀愕男履隂Q心。詞數(shù)80左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名和校名。DearLily,Howtimeflies!Ihavemanyresolutionsforthenewyear._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearLily,Howtimeflies!Ihavemanyresolutionsforthenewyear.Firstly,I’mdeterminedtoimprovemyhealth.Iplantoexerciseregularlyandhaveahealthierdiet.Ibelievethatahealthybodycanmakeushaveahappylife.Secondly,IwilldomorereadingbecauseIcanlearnalotfrombooks.Iwilllearntomakebetteruseofmytime.Iwilltrymybesttokeepbalancebetweenstudyandentertainment.Lastly,Iwilldosomevolunteerworkinmyfreetime.Iplantohelptheoldandcleanupourcityparks.IwishIcankeeptheseresolutions.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹你的新年決心，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖詳細(xì)介紹自己的新年決心；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①plantodosth.計(jì)劃做某事②makebetteruseof更好地利用③trymybest盡我最大的努力④cleanup清理[高分句型]①Ibelievethatahealthybodycanmakeushaveahappylife.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)②IwilldomorereadingbecauseIcanlearnalotfrombooks.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)3．假如你是王建，請根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容和所給提示，給你的筆友John回復(fù)一封郵件，并表達(dá)收到來信很開心。DearWangJian,Iamluckytobeyourpenpal.I’mveryinterestedindesigningandbuildingthings.SoIwanttobeanengineerinthefuture.Whataboutyourdreamjob?Tellmethereasonsandhowyouwillmakeyourdreamcometrue.Bytheway,whatwillyoudothissummerholiday?Tellmeyourplans.Waitforyourreply.Yours,John寫作要求：(1)短文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)詞數(shù)：70詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。DearJohn,How’severythinggoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,WangJian【答案】例文：DearJohn,How’severythinggoing?I’msogladtoreceiveyourletter!It’sgreattoknowyouwanttobeanengineer.MydreamistobeateacherbecauseIlovesharingknowledgewithothers.Toachievethis,Iwillstudyhardandimprovemycommunicationskills.Thissummer,Iplantovisitmygrandparentsinthecountrysideandlearntocook.MaybeIcaneventeachthemsomeEnglish!Whataboutyoursummerplans?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,WangJian【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)；③提示：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已給出，考生需涵蓋夢想職業(yè)、實(shí)現(xiàn)方式及暑假計(jì)劃，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，注意語言流暢和邏輯連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，問候，并回應(yīng)對方收到信的感受。第二步，描述自己的職業(yè)理想及原因，并簡述實(shí)現(xiàn)的方式。第三步，介紹自己的暑假計(jì)劃，并反問對方計(jì)劃以保持互動。第四步，結(jié)尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begladtodo很高興做某事②communicationskills溝通能力③lookingforwardto期待[高分句型]①M(fèi)ydreamistobeateacherbecauseIlovesharingknowledgewithothers.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）②Toachievethis,Iwillstudyhardandimprovemycommunicationskills.（不定式作目的狀語）4．假如你是李華，你的好朋友Peter前不久給你來信，告訴你他在學(xué)習(xí)、生活中遇到的以下4個(gè)問題。請你用英語寫一封回信，就Peter遇到的問題，給他提供一些合理建議，能簡單說明理由更好。Peter’sproblemsHecan’tgetonwellwithhisparents.Hehasnofriends.Heoftenhasacold.Hegetstoomuchstressfromhisschoolwork.要求：1.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.不包括所給開頭以及結(jié)尾，詞數(shù)不少于80詞。DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearaboutyourproblems.It’snormalforteenagerstomeettheseproblemsinlife.Hereismyadviceforyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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