讀后續(xù)寫

continuationwriting2025-2026學(xué)年高考一輪專題復(fù)習(xí)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasdeepintothenightmanyyearsago.Therainjustcamepouringdownoutside.Anelderlymanandhiswifeenteredthelobby(大廳)ofasmallhotelinPhiladelphia,USA.Tryingtogetoutoftherain,thecoupleapproachedthefrontdeskhopingtogetaroomtostayinforthenight.“Couldyoupossiblygiveusaroomhere?”thehusbandasked.Theclerk,afriendlyyoungmanwithawinningsmile,lookedatthecoupleandexplainedthattherewerethreeconferencesinthetown.“Allofourroomsaretaken,”theclerksaid.“ButIcan'tsendanicecouplelikeyououtintotherainatoneo'clockatnight.Wouldyouperhapsbewillingtosleepinmyroom?It'snotexactlyasuite,butitwillbegoodenoughtomakeyoucomfortableforthenight.”Whenthecoupledeclined,theyoungmanpressedon.“Don'tworryaboutme.I'llmakeit,”theclerktoldthem.Sothecoupleagreed.Ashepaidhisbillthenextmorning,theelderlymansaidtotheclerk,“Youarethekindofmanagerwhoshouldbethebossofthebesthotel.MaybesomedayI'llbuildoneforyou.”Theclerklookedatthemandsmiled.Thethreeofthemhadagoodlaugh.Astheydroveaway,theelderlycoupleagreedthatthehelpfulclerkwasindeedexceptional,asfindingpeoplewhoarebothfriendlyandhelpfulisn'teasy.Threeyearspassed.Theclerkhadalmostforgottenthethingwhenhereceivedaletterfromtheelderlyman.Itrecalledthatstormynight,whenheofferedhiskindhelptotheelderlycouple.Intheenvelope,therewasaround-triptickettoNewYork,andaletteraskingtheyoungmantopaythemavisit.Theyoungmandecidedtosetoutimmediately.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago?”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman.Youmustbejoking,”theyoungmansaid.step1讀懂大意，理清脈絡(luò)Readforinfromationwhenwherewhowhatonarainynightinthelobbyofasmallhotelanoldcouple,ayounghotelclerkOnarainynight,theclerkofferedtheoldcouplehisownroom.Step2深度文本解析ReadforplotsA.Threeyearslater,theclerkreceivedaletterfromtheelderlyman,askingtheyoungmantopaythemavisit.B.Anoldcoupleaskedforaroominthehotelfortherainynight.C.Theyoungmandecidedtosetoutimmediately.D.Uponleavingthehotel,theoldmanpromisedtobuildanewhotelfortheclerk.E.Asthehotelwasfull,theclerkofferedthecouplehisownroom.①BeginningPlot:

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深度文本解析Readforcharacters3.分析人物特點(diǎn)：theclerk:

shouldbethebossofthebesthotel

helpful,exceptional,thoughtfultheoldcouple:keeptheirpromises(committed)

generous,enthusiasticafriendlyyoungmanniceStep3確認(rèn)主題Readfortheme主題：

人與社會(huì)---（陌生人關(guān)系-助人為樂(lè)）“我”幫別人------別人幫“我”主題要點(diǎn)：help,kindness,love,asmallact,makeadifference

Step1）：認(rèn)真剖析首句，構(gòu)思段落內(nèi)容考慮與上文的融洽銜接與續(xù)寫第二段開頭的呼應(yīng)與銜接Para1Para2Step4構(gòu)思續(xù)寫Step4.1構(gòu)思續(xù)寫兩段主要情節(jié)Para.1“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago?”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman.Para.2“Youmustbejoking,”theyoungmansaid.思路提示：1.theyoungman想起來(lái)多年前那個(gè)老人對(duì)他說(shuō)過(guò)的話了嗎？2.通過(guò)第二段老人對(duì)那個(gè)年輕人說(shuō)了什么？Step4.2確定后續(xù)故事的大致走向

銜接發(fā)展

銜接發(fā)展階段結(jié)果

老人重提當(dāng)年的承諾Para2首句“Youmustbejoking,”theyoungmansaid.Para1首句“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago?”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman.階段結(jié)果

老人實(shí)現(xiàn)了自己的承諾，年輕人接受了對(duì)方的善意1定首段第一句(根據(jù)第一段首句)2定首段最后一句（根據(jù)第二段開頭）3定第二段第一句（根據(jù)第二段開頭）4定第二段最后一句5定情感升華Step4.3“五定法”展開“劇情”Step4.4五步法開展劇情Para.1“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago?”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman.定首段第1句話（根據(jù)第一段首句）1）Howdidtheyoungmanfeel？（action?words?facialexpression?）Hefeltandjustlookedattheelderlyman,hishead.confusedinsurpriseshakingPara.2“Youmustbejoking,”theyoungmansaid.定首段最后一句話（根據(jù)第二段開頭）2)Whatwouldtheelderlymansay？(words?view?)“Itobuildahotelforyou.Youare”and.I’msureyouwill

inthefuture.I

you.promisesokindsohelpful

makeagoodbosstrustPara.2“Youmustbejoking,”theyoungmansaid.定第二段第一句（根據(jù)第二段開頭）Howdidtheelderlymanrespond?(words?action?facialexpression?)I’m,”saidtheelderlymanseriouswithabigsmileonhisface.定第二段最后一句話（故事結(jié)局）whatbecameoftheyoungclerk?Howmightthestoryend?Theyoungclerkofthehotel.定情感升華(本文是助人為樂(lè)，善舉--得到回報(bào)--繼續(xù)傳遞愛(ài)心)Hehadneverexpectedhissmallactofkindnesswouldpayoff,andhewasdeterminedtokeeppassingonhiskindness.becamethefirstmanagerStep5確定每段的具體情節(jié)Para.1：“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago?”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman.Para.2“Youmustbejoking,”theyoungmansaid.

發(fā)出者與上個(gè)情節(jié)銜接點(diǎn)動(dòng)作情緒微情節(jié)1微情節(jié)2微情節(jié)3theyoungman記不得了看著老人，搖頭告訴他困惑，驚訝theoldman重提當(dāng)年的承諾堅(jiān)定的theoldman當(dāng)年對(duì)年輕人的感覺(jué)說(shuō)出看法信任發(fā)出者與上個(gè)情節(jié)銜接點(diǎn)動(dòng)作情緒微情節(jié)1微情節(jié)2微情節(jié)3微情節(jié)4theoldman認(rèn)真的態(tài)度微笑開心theoldman證明自己是認(rèn)真的給他看開心theyoungman接受老者善意管理酒店意外驚喜theyoungman當(dāng)時(shí)感想沒(méi)有預(yù)料到，傳遞愛(ài)心意外，決心Step6增加內(nèi)容，細(xì)節(jié)，連句成篇(58細(xì)節(jié)法)“Doyoustillremembermypromiseyearsago?”theelderlymansaidtotheyoungman.whenheheardthis,hefeltconfused.Hecouldn’tevenremembertheelderlymanatfirstsight,nottomentionhispromise.Hejustlookedattheelderlymaninsurprise,shakinghishead.“Well”theelderlymanwenton,”Ipromisedtobuildahotelforyou.YouaresokindandsohelpfulthatI’msureyouwillmakeagoodbossinthefuture.Ihavefirmtrustinyou.”發(fā)出者與上個(gè)情節(jié)銜接點(diǎn)動(dòng)情緒微情節(jié)1theyoungman記不得了看著老人，搖頭困惑，驚訝微情節(jié)2theoldman重提當(dāng)年的承諾告訴他堅(jiān)定的微情節(jié)3theoldman當(dāng)年對(duì)年輕人的感覺(jué)說(shuō)出看法信任