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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ourschool’s“HelpOthers”eventwasdrawingnear,andourteamhadbeenassigned(分配)thetaskoforganizingafundraisingcampaign(籌款活動(dòng)).Wehadaweektoplanandcarryoutourstrategy,andeveryonewantedtoplayameaningfulpart.Onthefirstdayofourplanningweek,ourteamleader,Emily,broughtustogethertodiscussourroles.Sheassigneddifferenttaskstoeachteammemberbasedonourstrengthsandinterests.Iwasassignedtheroleofconnectingwithlocalbusinessesforfundraising,ataskIfeltconfidentinpleting.Astheweekprogressedweworkedtirelessly.Oneafternoon,whilewewerecreatingpromotional(宣傳的)materials,Jacob,oneofourteammates,cametouswithatiredlookonhisface.Heexplainedthathehadbeenfeelingunwellforthepastfewdaysandwasworriedaboutfallingbehindonhistasks.WorriedaboutJacob’swellbeing,weencouragedhimtotakesometimeoffandrestandtoldhimthatwewouldsupporthiminanywaywecould.Jacobfinallyagreed,understandingthatheneededtotakecareofhimself.WithJacobabsent,werealizedthathistasks,includingcreatingpromotionalmaterials,wereleftunfinished.Weknewthatifwedidn’tstepintohelp,ourcampaignwouldfail.Tosolvethisproblem,wecametogetherasateamandthoughtofwaystosupportJacobandkeepourcampaignontrack.Sarah,withherartisticskills,volunteeredtotakeoverthedesignofthepromotionalmaterials,whileMarkofferedtohelpwiththecontentcreation.Emily,ourteamleader,steppedintomanagethewholeteam,makingsurethateverythingstayedorganizedandonschedule.Wetriedourbesttomakeourcampaignsuccessful.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Lateintothenight,wecametogetherinSarah’slivingroom.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thefollowingday,whenJacobreturnedtoourteam,hewassurprisedattheprogresswehadmadeinhisabsence___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析?角色:________________________________________________________________2.視角:第______人稱?3.時(shí)空線:from學(xué)?!癏elpOthers”活動(dòng)分配籌款任務(wù)→________________________→深夜在Sarah家協(xié)作、次日J(rèn)acob回歸及活動(dòng)開(kāi)展?4.可能的線索?Whattaskwas“我”assignedinthefundraisingcampaign?:________________________?WhydidJacobtaketimeofffromtheteam?:________________________?HowdidtheteamdealwithJacob’sunfinishedtasks?:________________________?WhatdidtheteamdolateintothenightatSarah’slivingroom?:________________________?HowdidJacobreactwhenhesawtheteam’sprogress?:________________________?Whatwastheresultofthefundraisingcampaign?:________________________?5.情節(jié)線:學(xué)校分配籌款任務(wù),團(tuán)隊(duì)分工→_________________________→團(tuán)隊(duì)成員補(bǔ)位協(xié)作→(續(xù)寫(xiě))____________________________→Jacob回歸感動(dòng),團(tuán)隊(duì)成功開(kāi)展活動(dòng),籌款超目標(biāo)。?6.情感線:團(tuán)隊(duì):積極投入(初期分工)→___________________(Jacob生病時(shí))→_________________________(補(bǔ)位協(xié)作時(shí))→_____________________________(深夜工作時(shí))→___________________________(續(xù)寫(xiě),活動(dòng)成功后)?Jacob:擔(dān)憂(生病時(shí))→__________________________(回歸看到成果時(shí))?7.綜合以上信息,用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個(gè))?中文:__________________?英文:________________________?句式:___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.主題(本文屬于人與他人):________________________?情節(jié)構(gòu)造?第一段提示句:Lateintothenight,wecametogetherinSarah’slivingroom.?銜接句1———對(duì)“cametogether”提問(wèn)“團(tuán)隊(duì)成員在Sarah家的狀態(tài)和分工是怎樣的?”:Whatweretheteammembers’statesanddivisionsoflaboratSarah’shome??過(guò)渡句推演:銜接1→←銜接2?銜接句2———對(duì)“workinglate”提問(wèn)“團(tuán)隊(duì)工作時(shí)的氛圍和最終成果如何?”:Whatwastheatmospherewhentheteamworkedlateandwhatwasthefinalresult??第二段提示句:Thefollowingday,whenJacobreturnedtoourteam,hewassurprisedattheprogresswehadmadeinhisabsence.?銜接句3———對(duì)“surprised”提問(wèn)“Jacob看到成果后的具體反應(yīng)和團(tuán)隊(duì)的回應(yīng)是什么?”:WhatwasJacob’sspecificreactionafterseeingtheprogressandtheteam’sresponse??過(guò)渡句推演:銜接3→←主題?主題:________________________?段落構(gòu)思?第一段:Lateintothenight,wecametogetherinSarah’slivingroom.?→①_________________________→②________________________________→③_________________________________________________英文:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:Thefollowingday,whenJacobreturnedtoourteam,hewassurprisedattheprogresswehadmadeinhisabsence.?→④________________________________→⑤__________________________________→⑥___________________________________?英文:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析?1.角色:“我”(團(tuán)隊(duì)成員,負(fù)責(zé)聯(lián)系本地企業(yè)籌款)、Emily(團(tuán)隊(duì)leader,統(tǒng)籌組織、管理團(tuán)隊(duì))、Jacob(團(tuán)隊(duì)成員,因生病暫離,原負(fù)責(zé)宣傳材料制作)、Sarah(團(tuán)隊(duì)成員,有藝術(shù)天賦,接手宣傳材料設(shè)計(jì))、Mark(團(tuán)隊(duì)成員,協(xié)助宣傳內(nèi)容創(chuàng)作)?2.視角:第一人稱?3.時(shí)空線:from學(xué)?!癏elpOthers”活動(dòng)分配籌款任務(wù)→團(tuán)隊(duì)規(guī)劃周分工、Jacob生病暫離、成員補(bǔ)位協(xié)作→深夜在Sarah家協(xié)作、次日J(rèn)acob回歸及活動(dòng)開(kāi)展?4.可能的線索?Whattaskwas“我”assignedinthefundraisingcampaign?:“我”wasassignedtoconnectwithlocalbusinessesforfundraising.?WhydidJacobtaketimeofffromtheteam?:Hehadbeenfeelingunwellforafewdaysandwasworriedaboutfallingbehind,sotheteamencouragedhimtorest.?HowdidtheteamdealwithJacob’sunfinishedtasks?:Sarahtookoverthedesignofpromotionalmaterialswithherartisticskills;Markhelpedwithcontentcreation;Emilymanagedthewholeteamtokeepthingsorganized.?WhatdidtheteamdolateintothenightatSarah’slivingroom?:Theyworkedtogethertofinishthepromotionalmaterials—Sarahcoloredposters,Markpolishedcontent,Emilycheckedtasks,and“我”madehotchocolate.?HowdidJacobreactwhenhesawtheteam’sprogress?:Hewassurprised,disbelief,andthengratefulwithtearsinhiseyes.?Whatwastheresultofthefundraisingcampaign?:Theyraisedtwicetheirtarget,thankstoteamwork.?5.情節(jié)線:學(xué)校分配籌款任務(wù),團(tuán)隊(duì)分工→Jacob生病暫離,任務(wù)擱置→團(tuán)隊(duì)成員補(bǔ)位協(xié)作→(續(xù)寫(xiě))深夜共同完成宣傳材料→Jacob回歸感動(dòng),團(tuán)隊(duì)成功開(kāi)展活動(dòng),籌款超目標(biāo)。?6.情感線:團(tuán)隊(duì):積極投入(初期分工)→(Jacob生病時(shí))→(補(bǔ)位協(xié)作時(shí))→(深夜工作時(shí))→(續(xù)寫(xiě),活動(dòng)成功后)?Jacob:擔(dān)憂(生病時(shí))→______(回歸看到成果時(shí))?(答案:團(tuán)隊(duì):擔(dān)憂(Jacob生病時(shí))→堅(jiān)定、團(tuán)結(jié)(補(bǔ)位協(xié)作時(shí))→疲憊卻自豪(深夜工作時(shí))→喜悅、成就感(活動(dòng)成功后);Jacob:感動(dòng)、感激(回歸看到成果時(shí)))?7.綜合以上信息,用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個(gè))?中文:學(xué)?!爸恕被顒?dòng)中,“我”所在團(tuán)隊(duì)負(fù)責(zé)籌款,成員Jacob因病暫離,任務(wù)擱置。團(tuán)隊(duì)成員主動(dòng)補(bǔ)位,深夜協(xié)作完成宣傳材料,Jacob回歸后深受感動(dòng)。最終團(tuán)隊(duì)成功開(kāi)展活動(dòng),籌款金額翻倍,彰顯了teamwork的力量。?英文:Intheschool’s"HelpOthers"event,theteam"I"wasinwasresponsibleforfundraising.MemberJacobhadtotakeleaveduetoillness,leavinghistasksunfinished.Teammemberstookoverhiswork,collaboratedlateatnighttofinishpromotionalmaterials,andJacobwasdeeplymovedwhenhereturned.Finally,theteamsuccessfullylaunchedthecampaignandraisedtwicethetarget,showingthepowerofteamwork.?materials...team...wewerecreatingpromotionalmaterials...;WhenJacobreturnedtoourteam...);直接引語(yǔ)(“Didyoualldothisforme?”;“We’reateam—yourworkisourwork.”);現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)(WorriedaboutJacob’wellbeing...wellbeing...;WithJacobabsent...);條件狀語(yǔ)從句(Weknewthatifwedidn’tstepintohelp,ourcampaignwouldfail.)?9.主題(本文屬于人與他人):團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的重要性;在他人遇到困難時(shí)主動(dòng)伸出援手,共同面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)才能實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)?情節(jié)構(gòu)造?第一段提示句:Lateintothenight,wecametogetherinSarah’slivingroom.?銜接句1———對(duì)“cametogether”提問(wèn)“團(tuán)隊(duì)成員在Sarah家的狀態(tài)和分工是怎樣的?”:Whatweretheteammembers’statesanddivisionsoflaboratSarah’shome??過(guò)渡句推演:銜接1→←銜接2?銜接句2———對(duì)“workinglate”提問(wèn)“團(tuán)隊(duì)工作時(shí)的氛圍和最終成果如何?”:Whatwastheatmospherewhentheteamworkedlateandwhatwasthefinalresult??(答案:過(guò)渡句推演:銜接1→團(tuán)隊(duì)成員各司其職、默契協(xié)作完成宣傳材料←銜接2)第二段提示句:Thefollowingday,whenJacobreturnedtoourteam,hewassurprisedattheprogresswehadmadeinhisabsence.?銜接句3———對(duì)“surprised”提問(wèn)“Jacob看到成果后的具體反應(yīng)和團(tuán)隊(duì)的回應(yīng)是什么?”:WhatwasJacob’sspecificreactionafterseeingtheprogressandtheteam’sresponse??過(guò)渡句推演:銜接3→←主題?主題:Teamworkandmutualhelpenableateamtooveredifficultiesandachievesuccess?(答案:過(guò)渡句推演:銜接3→團(tuán)隊(duì)共同開(kāi)展活動(dòng)并取得籌款成功,印證團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的力量←主題)?段落構(gòu)思?第一段:Lateintothenight,wecametogetherinSarah’slivingroom.?→①描繪房間環(huán)境與成員初始狀態(tài),體現(xiàn)協(xié)作氛圍→②具體描寫(xiě)各成員分工(Sarah設(shè)計(jì)、Mark寫(xiě)內(nèi)容、Emily統(tǒng)籌、“我”服務(wù))→③展現(xiàn)工作中的小互動(dòng)與最終完成材料的自豪;?英文:Lateintothenight,wecametogetherinSarah’slivingroom.Warmtablelamplightfilledtheroom,andpromotionalposterswerespreadalloverthecoffeetable.Sarahheldcolorfulmarkers,carefullyaddingdetailstotheposters,whileMarksatwithhislaptop,revisingthecampaigncontenttomakeitmoreattractive.Emilyheldatasklist,checkingeachite

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