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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。FourteenyearoldNathanranasmallstandsellingcolorfulphonecasesattheannualmunitySummerCarnival(嘉年華).Whileyoungerkidscrowdedaroundotherattractions,hefocusedonhismodestbusiness.Hisrealambition,however,laybeyondthis:hedreamedofowninga3Dprinter.Withit,hecoulddesignandcreateuniquephonecaseshimself,transforminghissmallsummerjobintoaproperonlinebusiness.Oneafternoon,a10yearoldgirlnamedMichelestoppedbyandboughtonephonecaseforhermom.Astheytalked,Nathansharedhisdreamofhavinga3Dprinter.?“Withthatprinter,Icanprintanythinginanyform,”Nathansaid.“Anythinginanyform?”Michele’seyeslitupwithsuddenexcitement.“Onceyougetit,couldyoupleasemakealegformypetduckTim?Becausehewasmissingone,”Michelesaidhopefully.“That’sacoolproject,”Nathanreplied.Hethoughtforaminute.“I’llmakehimone,butitwon’tbereadynow.Ihavetosaveupsomeofthemoneymyselftobuythe3Dprinter.”“HowluckyTimis!Youaresokind!”Michelesaidhappily,unabletocontainherexcitement.Beforeleaving,MicheleexchangedphonenumberswithNathan.Theydiscoveredthattheylivedinthesameneighborhood,whichmeantNathancouldeasilygetclosetotheduckandmeasurethesizeofitsleginpersontoensurethatasuitableprosthetic(假體的)legcouldbemade.Hepromisedtoreachoutassoonashecouldaffordaprinter.Thatevening,NathantoldhisfamilyaboutMicheleandhispromise.Hisparentspraisedhiskindnessandinitiative.Theyagreedtooffersomefinancialsupporttobuytheprinterbutalsoemphasizedtheimportanceofhisowneffort.“We’reproudyou’reearningthisyourself,Nathan,”hisfathersaid.“Savingyourshareshowsrealmitment.”Nathannoddedfirmly,feelingmoredeterminedthanever.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Nathanworkedveryhardforthe3Dprinter.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________However,creatingthelegmodelwasnoteasy.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1.角色___________________________________________________________________________2.視角第________人稱3.時空線attheannualmunitySummerCarnival______________thateveningatNathan'shome4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來WhatdidNathandoattheSummerCarnival?:______________________________________________WhatwasNathan'srealambition?:____________________________________________WhatdidMicheleaskNathantodoforherafterhegotthe3Dprinter?:_______________________WhatdidNathanandMichelediscoverbeforesheleft?:___________________________________HowdidNathan'sparentsrespondtohispromisetoMichele?:_______________________WhatsupportdidNathan'sparentsofferhimtobuythe3Dprinter?:__________________________________________________WhydidNathanneedtomeasureTim'sleginperson?:___________________WhatdidNathan'sfatherthinkofhissavingmoneybyhimself?:_______________________________________HowdidNathanfeelaftertalkingwithhisparents?:____________________________________________________5.情節(jié)線Nathan在社區(qū)嘉年華賣手機殼,懷揣買3D打印機的夢想?!鷂__________________________________→____________________________________→________________________________→(續(xù)寫)Nathan為買3D打印機努力工作。→然而,制作鴨子的腿模型并不容易。6.情感線Nathan:focused→_____________→_______________→(續(xù)寫)___________________→(續(xù)寫)7.綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個)中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式賓語從句:________________________________________________________________非謂語:________________________________________________________________感嘆句:________________________________________________________________同位語:________________________________________________________________比喻:________________________________________________________________夸張:________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與他人______________________________________________________________________情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:Nathanworkedveryhardforthe3Dprinter.銜接句1———對前面的"hispromisetoMichele"提問“Nathan為實現(xiàn)承諾做了哪些具體努力?”:WhatspecificeffortsdidNathanmaketokeephispromise?過渡句推演:銜接1→?←銜接2銜接句2———對"workedveryhard"提問“努力后取得了什么進展?”:Whatprogressdidhemakeafterworkinghard?第二段提示句:However,creatingthelegmodelwasnoteasy.銜接3———對"noteasy"提問“制作過程中遇到了什么具體困難?”:Whatspecificdifficultiesdidheencounterintheproductionprocess?過渡句推演:銜接3→?←主題主題:_________________________________段落構(gòu)思第一段:Nathan為買3D打印機努力工作。①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:然而,制作鴨子的腿模型并不容易。④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案1.角色Nathan(14歲,在嘉年華賣手機殼,夢想擁有3D打印機)、Michele(10歲女孩,想買鴨子假體腿)、Nathan'sparents(Nathan的父母,支持兒子)、Tim(Michele的寵物鴨,缺一條腿)2.視角第三人稱3.時空線attheannualmunitySummerCarnivalMichelestoppingbyNathan'sstandandtalkingwithhimthateveningatNathan'shome4.請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來WhatdidNathandoattheSummerCarnival?:Heranasmallstandsellingcolorfulphonecases.WhatwasNathan'srealambition?:Hedreamedofowninga3Dprintertodesignuniquephonecasesandturnhissummerjobintoanonlinebusiness.WhatdidMicheleaskNathantodoforherafterhegotthe3Dprinter?:SheaskedhimtomakeaprostheticlegforherpetduckTim.WhatdidNathanandMichelediscoverbeforesheleft?:Theylivedinthesameneighborhood.HowdidNathan'sparentsrespondtohispromisetoMichele?:Theypraisedhiskindnessandinitiative.WhatsupportdidNathan'sparentsofferhimtobuythe3Dprinter?:Theyagreedtooffersomefinancialsupport.WhydidNathanneedtomeasureTim'sleginperson?:Toensurethatasuitableprostheticlegcouldbemade.WhatdidNathan'sfatherthinkofhissavingmoneybyhimself?:HethoughtsavinghisshareshowedrealmitmentandwasproudofNathan.HowdidNathanfeelaftertalkingwithhisparents?:Hefeltmoredeterminedthanever.5.情節(jié)線Nathan在社區(qū)嘉年華賣手機殼,懷揣買3D打印機的夢想?!鶰ichele來買手機殼,得知Nathan的夢想后請求他為寵物鴨做假體腿,兩人互留聯(lián)系方式并發(fā)現(xiàn)住同一社區(qū)→Nathan晚上告訴家人此事,父母表揚他并愿提供部分資金支持,強調(diào)他自身努力的重要性→(續(xù)寫)Nathan為買3D打印機努力工作?!欢?,制作鴨子的腿模型并不容易。6.情感線Nathan:focused→enthusiastic(分享夢想時)→determined(承諾Michele后)→hardworking(為買打印機努力時,續(xù)寫)→persistent(克服制作模型困難時,續(xù)寫)7.綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意中文:14歲的Nathan在社區(qū)嘉年華賣手機殼,夢想擁有3D打印機來拓展業(yè)務。10歲女孩Michele來買手機殼時,請求他日后用3D打印機為自己缺腿的寵物鴨Tim做假體腿,兩人發(fā)現(xiàn)住同一社區(qū)。Nathan晚上告知家人此事,父母表揚他的善良,愿提供部分資金支持買打印機,同時強調(diào)他自身努力的重要性,Nathan因此更堅定。英文:FourteenyearoldNathanranastandsellingphonecasesatthemunitySummerCarnivalanddreamedofowninga3Dprintertoexpandhisbusiness.When10yearoldMichelecametobuyaphonecase,sheaskedhimtomakeaprostheticlegforherpetduckTimwiththe3Dprinterlater,andtheyfoundtheylivedinthesameneighborhood.Nathantoldhisfamilyaboutitthatnight,andhisparentspraisedhiskindness,agreedtooffersomefinancialsupportfortheprinterwhileemphasizingtheimportanceofhisownefforts,whichmadeNathanmoredetermined.8.句式賓語從句:Hepromisedtoreachoutassoonashecouldaffordaprinter.非謂語:Whileyoungerkidscrowdedaroundotherattractions,hefocusedonhismodestbusiness.感嘆句:HowluckyTimis!同位語:Hisrealambition,however,laybeyondthis:hedreamedofowninga3Dprinter.比喻:Michele’seyeslitupwithsuddenexcitement.(此處“l(fā)itup”將眼神比作燈光,體現(xiàn)興奮)夸張:Michelesaidhappily,unabletocontainherexcitement.(“unabletocontain”夸張表現(xiàn)興奮程度)9.本文屬于人與他人Nathan與Michele之間的善意互動(承諾幫忙做假體腿)、Nathan與父母之間的支持與引導(父母支持買打印機并強調(diào)努力的重要性)情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:Nathanworkedveryhardforthe3Dprinter.銜接句1———對前面的"hispromisetoMichele"提問“Nathan為實現(xiàn)承諾做了哪些具體努力?”:WhatspecificeffortsdidNathanmaketokeephispromise?過渡句推演:銜接1→Howdidtheseeffortshelphimgetclosertobuyingthe3Dprinter?←銜接2銜接句2———對"workedveryhard"提問“努力后取得了什么進展?”:Whatprogressdidhemakeafterworkinghard?第二段提示句:However,creatingthelegmodelwasnoteasy.銜接3———對"noteasy"提問“制作過程中遇到了什么具體困難?”:Whatspecificdifficultiesdidheencounterintheproductionprocess?過渡句推演:銜接3→Howdidhesolvethesedifficultiestopletetheprostheticleg?←主題主題:Nathan為實現(xiàn)對Michele的承諾,努力賺錢買3D打印機,雖制作鴨子假體腿遇到困難但最終克服。段落構(gòu)思第一段:Nathan為買3D打印機努力工作。①Hearrivedatthecarnivalearliereverymorningtosetuphisstandandstayedlatetoattractmorecustomers.②Heevendesignedsimplepatternsonsomephonecasesbyhandtomakethemmoreattractive,andthesalesofhisphonecasesincreasedalot.③Afteramonthofhardwork,hesavedenoughmoneytoaddtohisparents'supportandfinallyboughtthe3Dprinterhehadbeendreamingof.英文:Hearrivedatthecarnivalearliereverymorningtosetuphisstandand
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