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閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Itwasacoolfallmorning,andthesunwasjuststartingtorise,castingawarmlighttothequietneighborhood.ForAlex,thehighschooljuniorwithadeeppassionforscience,wasfilledwithbothexcitementandnervousness.Todaymarkedthefinalpresentationofhisscienceproject,whichhehadbeenworkingonformonths.Thetopicwasrenewableenergy,andAlexhadbuiltamodelofasolarpoweredcar.Hehopeditwouldhelphimwintheregionalsciencefair.

Alexcheckedhisbagonelasttime:notes,sides,andthemodelcar.Justashewasabouttoleave,hisyoungerbrotherAxcameintotheroomwithbig,sorrylookingeyes.Inhishand,heheldabrokenpieceofthecar'ssolarpanel.“I'mreallysorry,Alex!”Axsaidinaveryquietvoice,hisheaddownbecausehefeltguilty.“Iwasjustsocurious.Iwantedtoseehowitworked,andIdidn'tmeantobreakit.”

Alex'seyesopenedwideinshock,andhisheartfeltlikeitdroppedtothebottomofhisstomach.Thepresentationwasinafewhours,andtherewasn'ttimetofixit.Hethoughtaboutexplainingwhathappened,buthewasworrieditwouldsoundlikeanexcuseandmakehimlesslikelytowin.Hecouldputabatteryinthecarandactlikenothingwaswrong.Butwhenhethoughtaboutit,hefeltunfortable.Hewasproudofbeinghonest,andtheideaofcheating,evenalittlebit,madehimfeelsick.

Ashewalkedtoschool,hisstepswereslowandheavy.Hethoughtaboutallthelatenighthourshespentworkingathisworkbench,howfrustratedhewaswhenthecircuitsdidn'twork,andhowhappyhewaswhenthecarfinallymovedusingsolarpower.Hisdreamsofwinningthepetitionandbeingrecognizedforhishardworkseemedtobegoingaway.Butthenherememberedthetalksatthedinnertablealongtimeago,whenhisparentstoldhimhowimportantitwastobehonest,responsible,andkeeptrying.Theirwordskeptplayinginhismind.Bythetimehegottotheschoolgates,adeterminedlookwasonhisface.Heknewexactlywhathehadtodo.

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請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Alexstoodinfrontoftheclassandjudges,feelingnervous.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Laterthatday,Alexreceivedanemailfromthesciencefairorganization.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析角色:_____________________________視角:第________人稱時空線:fromAlex’shome______________theschool(presentationsite)請在文章中將可能的線索都找出來。WhatwasAlex’sscienceprojectabout?:______________________________________________WhywasAlexexcitedandnervousonthatfallmorning?:____________________________________________WhathappenedtothemodelcarbeforeAlexlefthome?:_______________________WhattwochoicesdidAlexfaceafterthecarwasbroken?:___________________________________WhydidAlexfeelunfortableaboutputtingabatteryinthecar?:_______________________WhatdidAlex’sparentsteachhimatthedinnertable?:__________________________________________________HowdidAlexfeelwhenwalkingtoschool?:___________________WhatlookwasonAlex’sfacewhenhegottotheschoolgates?:_______________________________________情節(jié)線:秋日早晨,熱愛科學(xué)的Alex因即將展示耗時數(shù)月的太陽能汽車模型而既興奮又緊張,他希望借此贏得地區(qū)科學(xué)博覽會?!鲩T前,弟弟Ax不慎弄壞了汽車的太陽能板,且無法及時修復(fù)→___________________________________→____________________________________→(續(xù)寫)Alex站在全班同學(xué)和評委面前,感到很緊張。那天晚些時候,Alex收到了科學(xué)博覽會組織方的郵件。情感線:Alex:excited&nervous→→→(續(xù)寫)→(續(xù)寫)7.綜合以上信息,請用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個)中文:_________________________________________________________________英文:_____________________________________________________________________8.句式:賓語從句;非謂語;感嘆句;同位語;完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與自我、人與他人:_______________________________________情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:Alexstoodinfrontoftheclassandjudges,feelingnervous.銜接句1———對前面的"Alex’sdeterminedlook"提問“Alex到底決定怎么做?”:WhatexactlydidAlexdecidetodo?過渡句推演:銜接1→?←銜接2銜接句2———對"theaudience’sreaction"提問“同學(xué)和評委聽到Alex的話后有什么反應(yīng)?”:HowdidtheclassandjudgesreacttoAlex’swords?第二段提示句:Laterthatday,Alexreceivedanemailfromthesciencefairorganization.銜接3———對"theemailcontent"提問“郵件中提到了什么結(jié)果或消息?”:Whatresultormessagewasmentionedintheemail?過渡句推演:銜接3→?←主題主題:_________________________________段落構(gòu)思第一段:Alex站在全班同學(xué)和評委面前,感到很緊張?!賍_________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:那天晚些時候,Alex收到了科學(xué)博覽會組織方的郵件?!躝_________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析角色:Alex(主角,熱愛科學(xué)的高中生)、Ax(Alex的弟弟)、classmates(同學(xué))、judges(評委)、Alex’sparents(亞歷克斯的父母)視角:第三人稱3.時空線:fromAlex’shomeonthewaytoschool

theschool(presentationsite)4.線索答案:WhatwasAlex’sscienceprojectabout?:Renewableenergy.Hebuiltamodelofasolarpoweredcar.WhywasAlexexcitedandnervousonthatfallmorning?:Todaywasthefinalpresentationofhisscienceprojecthe’dworkedonformonths,andhehopedtowintheregionalsciencefair.WhathappenedtothemodelcarbeforeAlexlefthome?:HisyoungerbrotherAxaccidentallybrokethecar’ssolarpaneloutofcuriosity.WhattwochoicesdidAlexfaceafterthecarwasbroken?:Hecouldeitherexplainwhathappenedtothejudgesorputabatteryinthecarandpretendnothingwaswrong.WhydidAlexfeelunfortableaboutputtingabatteryinthecar?:Hewasproudofbeinghonest,andtheideaofcheatingevenalittlebitmadehimfeelsick.WhatdidAlex’sparentsteachhimatthedinnertable?:Theytaughthimthatitwasimportanttobehonest,responsible,andkeeptrying.HowdidAlexfeelwhenwalkingtoschool?:Hefeltsadandfrustrated,ashisdreamsofwinningthepetitionseemedtofade.WhatlookwasonAlex’sfacewhenhegottotheschoolgates?:Adeterminedlook.5.情節(jié)線:秋日早晨,熱愛科學(xué)的Alex因即將展示耗時數(shù)月的太陽能汽車模型而既興奮又緊張,他希望借此贏得地區(qū)科學(xué)博覽會。→出門前,弟弟Ax不慎弄壞了汽車的太陽能板,且無法及時修復(fù)→Alex陷入兩難,糾結(jié)于解釋真相或作弊蒙混,途中想起父母的誠信教誨→到達學(xué)校時Alex已下定決心,準(zhǔn)備按內(nèi)心的選擇完成展示→(續(xù)寫)Alex站在全班同學(xué)和評委面前,感到很緊張。那天晚些時候,Alex收到了科學(xué)博覽會組織方的郵件。6.情感線:Alex:excited&nervous→shocked&frustrated→dilemma&unfortable→determined(續(xù)寫前)→relieved&proud(續(xù)寫)→grateful&joyful(續(xù)寫)7.文章大意:中文:熱愛科學(xué)的高中生Alex耗時數(shù)月制作了太陽能汽車模型,希望在地區(qū)科學(xué)博覽會上獲獎。展示當(dāng)天早晨,弟弟Ax因好奇不慎弄壞了模型的太陽能板,且無法及時修復(fù)。Alex一度糾結(jié)于作弊或坦白,途中回憶起父母教導(dǎo)的誠信之道,最終下定決心堅守誠實。他懷著緊張的心情來到學(xué)校,準(zhǔn)備在評委和同學(xué)面前完成展示。英文:HighschoolstudentAlex,whoispassionateaboutscience,spentmonthsbuildingasolarpoweredcarmodel,hopingtowintheregionalsciencefair.Onthemorningofthepresentation,hisyoungerbrotherAxaccidentallybrokethemodel’ssolarpaneloutofcuriosity,andtherewasnotimetofixit.Alexwastornbetweencheatingortellingthetruth.Onhiswaytoschool,herememberedhisparents’teachingsabouthonestyandfinallymadeuphismindtosticktothetruth.Hearrivedatschoolwithanervousmood,readytogivethepresentationinfrontofthejudgesandclassmates.8.句式示例:賓語從句:Hehopeditwouldhelphimwintheregionalsciencefair./Hisparentstoldhimhowimportantitwastobehonest.非謂語:Havingworkedontheprojectformonths,Alexfeltconfidentabouthispresentation.感嘆句:WhatavaluablelessonabouthonestyAlexlearnedfromthisexperience!同位語:Alex,ahighschooljuniorwithadeeppassionforscience,builtamodelofasolarpoweredcar.完全倒裝:InfrontoftheclassandjudgesstoodAlex,holdingthebrokenmodelcarfirmly.比喻:Hisheartfeltlikeitdroppedtothebottomofhisstomachwhenhesawthebrokensolarpanel.夸張:Thelatenighthourshespentontheprojectseemedendless,buteveryeffortwasworthitforhisdream.9.本文屬于人與自我、人與他人:堅守誠信的選擇讓人收獲成長,親情的教誨是人生路上的重要指引情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:Alexstoodinfrontoftheclassandjudges,feelingnervous.銜接句1———對前面的"Alex’sdeterminedlook"提問“Alex到底決定怎么做?”:WhatexactlydidAlexdecidetodo?Iwasstunned,thenstammeredoutmygratitude.IexplainedI’dfearedruiningmycollegebookfund,andshechuckledsoftly,sayinghonestymatteredmorethanascratch.過渡句推演:銜接1→?←銜接2銜接句2———對"theaudience’sreaction"提問“同學(xué)和評委聽到Alex的話后有什么反應(yīng)?”:HowdidtheclassandjudgesreacttoAlex’swords?Mrs.Gablesaidshe’dhandletherepairherselfandrefusedmypayment.Sheaddedshewasproudofmyintegrity,especiallychoosingresponsibilityoverescape.Wechattedbriefly,andshewishedmewellincollege.第二段提示句:Laterthatday,Alexreceivedanemailfromthesciencefairorganization.銜接3———對"theemailcontent"提問“郵件中提到了什么結(jié)果或消息?”:Whatresultormessagewasmentionedintheemail?過渡句推演:銜接3→?←主題Thepackagecontainedanewcollegenotebookandahandwrittennote.Thenotepraisedmyhonesty,sayingitwasa“preciousgift”thananygoodgrade,andenclosedasmallgiftcardformybookfund.主題:誠信是比比賽勝負更珍貴的品質(zhì),堅守本心的選擇終將帶來正向反饋第一段:Alex站在全班同學(xué)和評委面前,感到很緊張。→①他舉起

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