首尾呼應(yīng)公式首尾呼應(yīng)，形成閉環(huán)。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾在內(nèi)容上要有密切的關(guān)系，對(duì)同一情況做出解釋、說明，使文章渾然一體，更有突顯文章主旨大意的作用。描寫公式公式①銜接語，主人公＋(gradually/eventually／suddenly)realized/felt/learned/couldn'thelpbutthinkthat＋銜接原文首段伏筆…[······，主人公（漸漸／終于／突然）意識(shí)到／感覺到／明白／不禁想…］例：感悟母愛：Followingthat,Igraduallylearnedthatmother'sloveispriceless,whichnothingcanmatch.在那之后，我逐漸明白了母愛是無價(jià)的，沒有什么能與之相比。公式②銜接語，itstruck/hit/occurredto/dawnedon＋主人公＋that＋呼應(yīng)原文首段...[······，主人公突然想到／開始明白…］例：團(tuán)隊(duì)合作：Whenthepetitionwasover，ithitMarkthatthekeytotheirsuccesswasteamwork,asemphasizedintheirinitialtrainingsession.比賽結(jié)束后，Mark突然意識(shí)到，他們成功的關(guān)鍵是團(tuán)隊(duì)合作，正如在最初的訓(xùn)練階段所強(qiáng)調(diào)的那樣。★常用銜接語有：followingthat,of...ually,atthesightof...,despite＋名詞，doing...doing...,with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，when／as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。續(xù)寫微練：根據(jù)文章開頭內(nèi)容，參考公式①和公式②，補(bǔ)全以下片段。注意首尾呼應(yīng)，形成閉環(huán)。語段一Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymotherloving,sweet,yetabsentmindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.1．在那之后，我終于明白了心不在焉又健忘的母親使我的童年充滿了愛、驚喜和娛樂活動(dòng)。［公式①］______________,Ieventuallylearnedthat_________filledmychildhoodwith___________________.2．盡管母親心不在焉又健忘，但我逐漸明白了：她一直用愛、驚喜和娛樂活動(dòng)來編織我的童年。［公式②］________________________________,itgraduallydawnedonmethatshealwayswovemychildhoodwith______________________.語段二Mymotherbelievedinusingthingsup.Lastyear,ourcornfieldhadabadharvestbecausebirdsfeastedonthecrops.ItwasprobablythenthatMom'sfrugality（節(jié)儉）becameevenmoreextraordinary.Shebegankeepingeverythingthatseemeduselessintheattic（閣樓）——wornoutclothes,oldsheets,brokenumbrellas,andsomeotherolditems.Mom'sfavoritesayingwas"wastenot,wantnot”.MybrotherJoshandIweren'tsurewhatthatmeantuntilthe“AffairoftheScarecrow（稻草人）”，which,asitlaterbecameknown,leftalastingimpressiononus.3．通過制作稻草人，我終于明白了媽媽最愛的“儉以防匱”這句諺語大有學(xué)問。［公式①］_______________________,Ieventuallyrealizedthat_________________________________________.4．隨后，我突然想到節(jié)儉就是把那些舊東西留著它們并非無用。［公式②］_____________________,itstruckmethat________________________________.參考答案：1.Followingthat;myabsentmindedandforgetfulmother;love,surprisesandamusements2.DespiteMom'sbeingabsentmindedandforgetful;love,surprisesandamusements3.Bycraftingascarecrow;Mom'sfavoritesaying“wastenot,wantnot”—isfullofknowledge4.Followingthat;frugalityesfromkeepingolditems—theyarenotuseless點(diǎn)題收尾公式結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題使文章更加有力度和層次感，是提升文章質(zhì)量的重要手法之一。這種方式可以增強(qiáng)文章的整體效果，使文章在收尾時(shí)更加有力和圓滿，給讀者留下深刻的印象。描寫公式公式①(Whenever/When)Lookingbackon/Thinkingof+theexperience/journey/...，主人公＋always/still...［（無論何時(shí)／當(dāng)）回首／想到那段經(jīng)歷／旅程／…，主人公總是／仍然…······］★時(shí)間狀語從句（省略形式）／非謂語動(dòng)詞承接前文所述故事，主干部分用來點(diǎn)明主題。這種結(jié)尾使主旨表達(dá)清晰而凝練。例：Andnow,whenlookingbackonthatexperience,Edurnestillfeelsthatitwasthatexperiencethattransformedherintoanaturelovingbeing.現(xiàn)在，當(dāng)回顧那段經(jīng)歷時(shí)，Edurne仍然覺得正是那段經(jīng)歷把她變成了一個(gè)熱愛自然的人。公式②銜接語，（形容詞＋）無靈主語＋sounded／echoed/rang/lingered(+inone'sears/head/mind/...).［…,······…(在耳邊／腦中／…)回響。］例：Sincethen,myfather'splainbutencouragingwordshavealwaysechoedinmymind,guidingthewayofmylife.從那時(shí)起，父親那些平淡卻鼓勵(lì)的話一直在我的腦海中回響，指引著我的人生道路。公式③銜接語，（形容詞＋）無靈主語＋有靈動(dòng)詞（tell,remind等）＋主人公＋that...[·····…,····…告訴／提醒主人公······…］例：Thespecialexperienceremindedmethatpanyisthemostimportantfortheelderly.這次特殊的經(jīng)歷提醒我，陪伴對(duì)老年人來說是最重要的。續(xù)寫微練：根據(jù)以下情節(jié)，續(xù)寫結(jié)尾，注意在收尾時(shí)點(diǎn)題。語段一So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethinginwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis."Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.Afewweekslater,therecamethenews.Iwonfirstplace!1．當(dāng)回顧那場寫作比賽，我仍然覺得正是老師的鼓勵(lì)讓我堅(jiān)持寫作。［公式①］______________________________________________________2．許多年過去了，但老師的鼓勵(lì)仍然縈繞在我的腦海里。［公式②_______________________________________________________3．這次寫作比賽讓我懂得，老師的鼓勵(lì)對(duì)我的寫作至關(guān)重要。［公式③］_______________________________________________________語段二EmilyandZoehadbeenbestfriendssincesecondgrade.Theybelievednothingcouldebetweenthem.ButwhenthenewgirlDaisyarrived,Zoestartedspendingtimewithher,leavingEmilyconfusedandhurt.Weekspassed.EmilyandZoewereassignedtothesamegrouponaclasscampingtrip.Theirconversationsweren'tlikebefore.Onarainyday,Emilydiscoveredthathertentwasleaking.WithZoe'shelp,Emilyfinallyfixedit.4．回顧下雨的那天，Emily覺得真正的友誼如同她們共同修補(bǔ)的帳篷，能經(jīng)受人生的風(fēng)雨。［公式①］_________________________________________________________5．自那以后，雨點(diǎn)敲打在她們共同修補(bǔ)的帳篷上的聲音，一直在她腦海中回蕩。［公式②］_________________________________________________________6.那次經(jīng)歷讓Emily明白，朋友間需要敞開心扉的溝通，關(guān)系方能更緊密。［公式③］__________________________________________________________參考答案：1.Whenlookingbackonthatwritingcontest,Istillfeelthatitwastheteacher'sencouragementthathelpedmekeewriting.2.Thoughmanyyearshavewornon,theteacher'sencouragementstilllingersinmymind.3.Thewritingcontesttaughtmethattheteacher'sencouragementwascrucialtomywriting.4.Lookingbackonthatrainyday,Emilyrealizedthattruefriendship,liketh