上海英語高考書信類作文寫作指導(dǎo)1.

投訴信：（1）寫作結(jié)構(gòu)指導(dǎo)：開頭：稱呼。第一段：表明寫作意圖。開門見山地說明意圖．信的開頭要交代事由。第二段：就意圖展開。投訴產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)，可看重對(duì)比反差．即產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)應(yīng)該如何或在廣告中被宣傳成什么效果．而實(shí)際并非如此。（投訴產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)特點(diǎn)／列舉建議或解決措施／表明觀點(diǎn)的理由…）第三段：提出要求及解決辦法。提出要求，希望對(duì)方考慮你的想法。結(jié)尾；結(jié)束語和署名。（2）常用句型①

Iamwritingtocomplainabout…

我寫信投訴…②

Iamdisappointedtofindthatthingswerequitetheopposite.

我很失望地發(fā)現(xiàn)情況完全相反。③

SinceIhavesufferedalotbothphysicallyandpsychologically,Idemandthatyourefundthecostandsolvetheproblemsassoonaspossible.

我的身心皆遭受傷害，因此我堅(jiān)決要求你們退還所有費(fèi)用并盡快解決此問題。④

Ifyoudonotdothis,Iwillcomplaintotheconsumercouncilandresorttolaw.

如果你們不按我的要求去做，我將會(huì)向消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)投訴并訴諸法律。2.

申請(qǐng)信：（1）寫作結(jié)構(gòu)指導(dǎo)第一段：表明自己對(duì)某個(gè)工作或職位感興趣，并提出申請(qǐng)。第二段：介紹相關(guān)的個(gè)人信息，主要包括你具備了什么樣的素質(zhì)來勝任這份工作和你為什么想得到這份工作。第三段：提出要求，希望對(duì)方考慮你的申請(qǐng)。

（2）常用句型①

Inanswertoyouradvertisement.Iwishtoapplyfor…

看到你們的招聘廣告，我希望申請(qǐng)…②

Youradvertisementoffersamosttemptingjobtoayoungmanjustoutofcollege.你們的招聘廣告提供了一份十分吸引剛出校門的年輕人的工作。③

I'dliketoapplyforthepositionadvertisedin…

我想申請(qǐng)?jiān)凇峡堑倪@一職位。④

I’mratherkeenon…

我對(duì)……很感興趣。⑤

I'vebeen…since…

自從……以來，我一直在……⑥

Ihavetheeducationandtheexperiencethatfitwellwithyouradvertisedposition.我所受的教育和經(jīng)歷適合你們招聘的職位。⑦

Ihaveapersonalitythatischeerfulandoptimistic.我的個(gè)性開朗又樂觀。⑧

IdidwellatschoolandIhavegotimpressivelettersofrecommendationfrommyprofessors.我在校學(xué)習(xí)很好并且有教授肯定的推薦信。⑨Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.如果您能考慮我的申請(qǐng)，我將不勝感激。我期待您的回信。⑩Iamavailablefortheinterviewatyourconvenience.Pleasecontactmeattheaboveaddressorcallme.

在您方便之時(shí)我隨時(shí)恭候你的面試。請(qǐng)按照上述地址聯(lián)系或者給我電話。3.

邀請(qǐng)信：（1）概述：邀請(qǐng)信包括宴會(huì)，舞會(huì)，晚餐，婚禮等等各種邀請(qǐng)信件，形式上大體分為兩種：一種為正規(guī)格式亦稱為請(qǐng)柬，一種為非正式格式，即一般的邀請(qǐng)信。雖然一般邀請(qǐng)信在形式上不如請(qǐng)柬那樣正規(guī)，但是要求敘事一定要清楚、明白。（2）常用句型①寫作目的：發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)Itgivesmethegreatestpleasuretoinviteyouto……It’smypleasure/agreathonorformetoinviteyouto…I’mwritingtoinviteyouto…I’dliketoinviteyouto…②說明事由及活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間：WillyouandMrs.SmithgivethepleasureofdiningwithusattheBeijingHotelonSunday,October

10th,ateighto’clock?TherewillbeadinnerpartytobeheldattheBeijingHotelonSunday,October

10th,ateighto’clock.WillyouandMrs.Smithcomeandjoinus?IhopethatyouhavenopreviousengagementandcanjoinusfortheEnglishEveningat7:00p.m.onFebruary1st.③表示期待和感謝：Idohopethatyouwillbeabletocome.Weshouldbeverypleasedifyoucouldhonoruswithyourcompany.Weshouldbeverygratefulifyoucould….Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.4.

求助信：（1）概述：主要涉及學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)或生活上的各種問題或困惑，寫求助信應(yīng)注意清楚描述所遇到的困難，表達(dá)清楚所希望得到的幫助，語言得體，語氣誠(chéng)懇禮貌。

（2）常用句型①寫作目的：求助I’mwritingtoaskfor/getsomehelp.I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucangivemehelp.I’msorrythatIhavetoaskyoutodomeafavor,withthehopethatyouwillbekindtohelpme.SorrytobotheryoubutIreallygetsomeproblemsrecently.I’mwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor.②描述困難ButIhavemetsomedifficultieswith/in……Butunfortunately,I’mencounteringdifficultyin…Facedwith/Facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.Ifacethechoicebetween…and…It’sreallyhardformetodecide/dealwith…Ineedyourhelpbecause……③表達(dá)希望得到的幫助Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.IamsurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress.Canyoumanagetogivemesomeconstructiveguidance?④列舉困難：first,besides,also,what’smore,atthesametime,inthemeanwhile,inaddition,...⑤請(qǐng)求系列幫助：so,thus,however,but,inorderthat,sothat…⑥情感詞匯：sorry,bother,beg,wouldyoulike….unfortunately,unluckily,especially,sincerely,badly,hopefully5.

咨詢信：常用句型：①寫信目的Iamahighschoolstudentandplanningtostudyinyouruniversitythissummer.IamaChinesestudentwhowishestostudyatyouruniversity.I’mwritingtoaskif…②介紹背景&詢問詳情Iamwritingatthesuggestionofafriendwhograduatedfromyouruniversitylastyearandhaswarmlyrecommendedittome.Iwillhavegraduatedfromhighschoolbytheendofthistermandwishtocontinuemystudyatyouruniversity.Myplanistostartmycoursefromthenextterm,andIwouldbegratefulifit’ssokindofyoutogivemesomeessentialinformation.Couldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyour…?Wouldyoupleasesendmeanapplicationformandothermaterialsnecessaryformyapplication?Wouldyoupleasesendmealltheinformationandtheformsassoonaspossible?Thankyouverymuch.IwouldbemuchobligedtoyouifyouletmeknowtheproceduresIhavetogothrough.③表示謝意，期盼回復(fù)Sorrytobotheryou,yourkindhelpwouldbegreatlyappreciated.Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyoucangivemeareply.6.

建議信：常用句型：①寫信目的IhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyouplantohaveavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.Irecommendthat……IamwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoestablishawebsiteofourownto

attractmoreclients.I'msorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsinmakingfriends.

Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...

However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.

Herearesometipstohelpyou./Hereareafewsuggestions.

Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.

②提出建議I’dliketosuggestthat……MayIsuggestthat……Inmyopinion……Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadviseyouof……IfIwereyou,Iwould……First(ly),whynot...?Ifyoudothis,...

Secondly,youshould/can...Then/Thatway,...

Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaif...Bydoingthis,...

Lastbutnotleast...

③希望采納建議，并表示謝意Thankyouforyourattention.Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.

Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheabove.

Ihopewhat'smentionedabovemightbehelpful...

Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you'llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.

Ibelieve,withyourdetermination,youcanmanagetoovercomethesedifficulties.

7.

感謝信：（1）概述：感謝信是用于致謝他人的饋贈(zèng)、款待、幫助、以及對(duì)慰問信和祝賀信的回復(fù)。信件主要寫明感謝他人的理由，要感情真摯，措辭得體。

（2）常用詞匯:

v.thank,appreciate;owe

欠債,感激

n.thanks,gratitude,appreciation;

adj.thankful,grateful,appreciative,

thanksb.for…

appreciateone’sdoing…

begrateful/thankfultosb.for…

convey/express/extendmythanks/gratitude/appreciationfor…

owesb.alotfor…習(xí)作練習(xí)Guidedwriting1Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositioninabout120words,accordingtothetopicgiven.請(qǐng)寫一封信告訴你的外國(guó)好友David關(guān)于你校修建工程計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括這項(xiàng)工程目的、具體工程規(guī)劃等，可以適當(dāng)合理發(fā)揮。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文：DearDavid,Iwouldliketotellyouthatourschoolhasworkedoutanewprogram.Thepurposesoftheprogramaretomakeourschoolmorebeautiful,tomaketheaircleanerandfresher,andtoturnourschoolintoabetterplaceforustostudyandlivein.Accordingtotheprogram,wewillplantdifferentkindsoftreesandflowersinandaroundourschool.Abotanicalgardenwillbebuiltforustovisitandlearnbotanicalknowledgeoutsideofclass.Besides,wearetobuildasmallgardeninwhichwecantakearestanddosomereading.What'smore,somestatuesoffamouspeoplewillbesetuptoencourageustoworkharder.Don'tyouthinkitisawonderfulprogram?Guidedwriting2(上海高考真題)Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.學(xué)校英語報(bào)正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋）中挑選一個(gè)納入該報(bào)。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程飛，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：1.

你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；2.

你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(參考范文)DearEditor,Wordcomesthatourschool’sEnglishnewspaperisgoingtohaveachangeonitscontent.Asahardcorefanofit,I’mwritingtovoicesomeofmyopinionstowardsourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.Inmypointofview,amonghealth,entertainmentandculture,Iwouldchoose“entertainment”tobetheonetobeeliminated.Notonlyisthistopicfarfromourstudylife,butalsoitmaydistractourattentionfromlearning.Wearealreadylivinginaworldthatiscrammedwithuselessinformation,andthere’snoneedtoaddsomemore.Instead,Isuggestthatsomeinterestingstoriescanbeputtothetopicof"culture",whicharesuretoservequitetheequalfunctionofthetopicofentertainment.Intermsofthecolumntobeadded,whatIhighlyrecommendisthereaders’feedback.It’scrucialfortheeditortoknowthereactionofthereaderstothenewspaper.OnlyinthiswaycanthenewspapercarrysomethingofgreatvaluetostudentsandasaresultI’mfullyconvincedthatitwillgainmorepopularityamongstudents.Giventheadvicementionedabove,IacutelyhopethatourEnglishpapercanachievegreatersuccessandIwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucantakemyadviceintoseriousaccount.Yours,ChengfeiGuidedwriting3（松江一模）Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你校學(xué)生會(huì)主席Simon在征集明年高中畢業(yè)典禮的活動(dòng)方案，作為高三的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你給他寫封信，信的內(nèi)空必須包括以下兩個(gè)方面：1、闡述你活動(dòng)方案的主題和內(nèi)容；2、談?wù)勀阍O(shè)計(jì)該方案的理由。（信中不能提到真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（參考范文）DearSimon,Knowingthatyouarecollectingvariousideasofholdingthegraduationceremonyofourhighschoolstudents,I’mwritingtodevotemyeffortstothepotentialplan.Inmyperspective,theactivityshouldbebasedondreamandmemory,whichwillnotonlyfocusonthebrightprospectofthegraduatesbutalsotouchontheenjoyable