讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)5：內(nèi)心的秘密閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。long.Mylyhascollectedbottlesfromsunuptosundownallyearlong.Mymotherleavesatdawntocans.Andcans.Andwhenshereturns12hourslater,IhelpherpulltheshoppingcartthesixlongblockstotherecyclingcenterthroughBushwick.AlthoughBushwick.Althoughthiscenterhasbeenlikemysecondhomeforthepastyears,Ihavekeptitmostlyasecret.Icouldn'tbeartheideaofmyfriendsknowingourfamilysurvivedonotherpeople'sgarbage.Whatiftheylaughedatme?Ifeltguiltyforbeingembarrassed,butIcouldn'thelpit.EventhoughIhadalotoffriendsandwasasocialbutterfly,Iwasnotreadytotrustsomeoneelse.Theninthesummerbeforemysenioryear,Itookacollegeessaycourse.Theessaypromptwas:“Recallatimewhenyoufacedachallenge,setbacksorfailure.Howdiditaffectyou?Andwhatdidyouearnfromthisexperience?”Ichosetowriteabouttheimpactmyneighborhood'sgentrification(貴族化)hadonme,andhowthatledmetovolunteerwithofficialsinmymunitywhoweretryingtofindit.Attheend,therewasjustonesentenceaboutcancollecting.Onedayafterclass,myteacheraskedmetodiscussmydraft.“Yourstoryhaspotential.However,itisnotaboutpersonalgrowth.Howaboutyoutellingmeaboutthecancollecting?"SoIwasfacedwithsharingmysecret.Buthewasmyteacher,andItrustedhimsoIrewrotetheessay.Twodayslater,Ifoundoutwewereexpectedtoreadouressayloudafterlunch!Howcouldthatbe?IhavekeptthesecretforsomanyyearsandreadingmyessayintheclassmeantthatallIhaddonewasinvain.Iwasashamedformypeerstoknow.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。AsIheadedtothecafeteria,Imetupwithafriend,Mason,whoIalwayshadlunchwith.Whenwegotbacktoclass,Ifeltreadytoreadmydraftoutaloud.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：內(nèi)心的秘密檢測(cè)版Paragraph1:AsIheadedtothecafeteria,Imetupwithafriend,Mason,whoIalwayshadlunchwith.當(dāng)我去食堂時(shí)，我遇到了平時(shí)總是一起吃午飯朋友，梅森。然而，我只是走過(guò)他并沒(méi)有和他打招呼，因?yàn)槲也幌牒腿魏稳苏f(shuō)話(huà)。,Ijustpassedanddidn’tbecause.然后，我選擇獨(dú)自坐著吃午飯，等待著下午的黑暗時(shí)刻。Then,Ichoseto,intheafternoon.過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，梅森手里拿著飯朝我走來(lái)，像往常一樣坐在我旁邊。,Masonandsatnexttome.他問(wèn)我發(fā)生了什么事，我不得不把多年來(lái)一直隱藏在我心底的秘密告訴他。HeandIhadtothathadbeenhiddenformanyyears.令我出乎意料的是，他不僅沒(méi)有嘲笑我，而且還鼓勵(lì)我講我的故事。,henotonlybutalso.Paragraph2:Whenwegotbacktoclass,Ifeltreadytoreadmydraftoutaloud.當(dāng)我們回到課堂上時(shí)，我覺(jué)得自己已經(jīng)準(zhǔn)備好要大聲朗讀我的草稿了我站在講臺(tái)上，深吸了一口氣，鼓起勇氣，開(kāi)始讀。,,andbegantoreadit.說(shuō)實(shí)話(huà)，我還是感到有點(diǎn)焦慮，因?yàn)槲也恢榔渌麑W(xué)生在知道了我的故事后是否會(huì)看不起我。,IbecauseIdidn’tknowafterknowingmystory.讓我松了一口氣的是，我一讀完后，他們就熱烈地為我的表演和故事鼓掌。,theyandstoryI.一個(gè)學(xué)生歡呼道，“你是一個(gè)幫助父母謀生的超級(jí)男孩。”O(jiān)neofastudentcheers,”Youareasuperboy”只有在那一刻我才意識(shí)到?jīng)]有人會(huì)嘲笑我，我不應(yīng)該為我的家人和我自己感到羞恥。thatnoonewouldlaughatmeand.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：內(nèi)心的秘密校對(duì)版Paragraph1:AsIheadedtothecafeteria,Imetupwithafriend,Mason,whoIalwayshadlunchwith.當(dāng)我去食堂時(shí)，我遇到了平時(shí)總是一起吃午飯朋友，梅森。然而，我只是走過(guò)他并沒(méi)有和他打招呼，因?yàn)槲也幌牒腿魏稳苏f(shuō)話(huà)。However,Ijustpassedanddidn’tgreethimbecauseIdidn’twanttotalktoanyone.然后，我選擇獨(dú)自坐著吃午飯，等待著下午的黑暗時(shí)刻。Then,Ichosetositalonetohavelunch,waitingthedarkmomentintheafternoon.過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，梅森手里拿著飯朝我走來(lái)，像往常一樣坐在我旁邊。Afterawhile,Masonwalkedtowardsmewithhismealsinhishandsandsatnexttomeasusual.他問(wèn)我發(fā)生了什么事，我不得不把多年來(lái)一直隱藏在我心底的秘密告訴他。HeaskedmewhathadhappenedandIhadtotellhimthesecretthathadbeenhiddenatthebottomofmyheartformanyyears.令我出乎意料的是，他不僅沒(méi)有嘲笑我，而且還鼓勵(lì)我講我的故事。Beyondmyexpectation,henotonlydidn’tlaughatmebutalsoencouragedmetotellmystory.Paragraph2:Whenwegotbacktoclass,Ifeltreadytoreadmydraftoutaloud.當(dāng)我們回到課堂上時(shí)，我覺(jué)得自己已經(jīng)準(zhǔn)備好要大聲朗讀我的草稿了我站在講臺(tái)上，深吸了一口氣，鼓起勇氣，開(kāi)始讀。Standingontheplatform,Itookadeepbreath,gatheredmycourageandbegantoreadit.說(shuō)實(shí)話(huà)，我還是感到有點(diǎn)焦慮，因?yàn)槲也恢榔渌麑W(xué)生在知道了我的故事后是否會(huì)看不起我。Tobehonest,IstillfeltabitanxiousbecauseIdidn’tknowwhetherotherstudentswouldlookdownonmeafterknowingmystory.讓我松了一口氣的是，我一讀完后，他們就熱烈地為我的表演和故事鼓掌。Tomyrelief,theyclappedwarmlyformyperformanceandstorythemomentIfinishedreading.一個(gè)學(xué)生歡呼道，“你是一個(gè)幫助父母謀生的超級(jí)男孩?！監(jiān)neofstudentscheers,”Youareasuperboywhohelpsparentstomakealiving”只有在那一刻我才意識(shí)到?jīng)]有人會(huì)嘲笑我，我不應(yīng)該為我的家人和我自己感到羞恥。OnlyatthatmomentdidIrealizethatnoonewouldlaughatmeandIshouldn’tbeashamedofmyfamilyandmyself.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：內(nèi)心的秘密參考范文Paragraph1:當(dāng)我去食堂時(shí)，我遇到了平時(shí)總是一起吃午飯朋友，梅森。然而，我只是走過(guò)他并沒(méi)有和他打招呼，因?yàn)槲也幌牒腿魏稳苏f(shuō)話(huà)。然后，我選擇獨(dú)自坐著吃完午飯，等待著下午的黑暗時(shí)刻。過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，梅森手里拿著飯朝我走來(lái)，像往常一樣坐在我旁邊。他問(wèn)我發(fā)生了什么事，我不得不把多年來(lái)一直隱藏在我心底的秘密告訴他。令我出乎意料的是，他不僅沒(méi)有嘲笑我，而且還鼓勵(lì)我講我的故事。AsIheadedtothecafeteria,Imetupwithafriend,Mason,whoIalwayshadlunchwith.However,Ijustpassedanddidn’tgreethimbecauseIdidn’twanttotalktoanyone.Then,Ichosetositalonetohavelunch,waitingthedarkmomentintheafternoon.Afterawhile,Masonwalkedtowardsmewithhismealsinhishandsandsatnexttomeasusual.HeaskedmewhathadhappenedandIhadtotellhimthesecretthathadbeenhiddenatthebottomofmyheartformanyyears.Beyondmyexpectation,henotonlydidn’tlaughat