Whatkindoflettersorcardshaveyoureceived?Doyouknowwhatathank-youemailis?Importanceandpurposeofthank-youemailsWhydowewritethank-youemails?Whyaretheyimportant?Thank-youemailsareagreatwaytoexpressgratitude.Theyhelpusbuildstrongrelationships.

Writingathank-youemailEric’steacherhassuggestedanoutlineandsomeusefulexpressionsforathank-youemail.Addmoreusefulexpressionsifyoucan.GreetingandopeningClosingandsignatureBodyoftheemailStructureofathank-youemailImagineyouareEric.YouhavejustcomebackfromBeijing.Now,youwanttowriteathank-youemailtoyourhostfamily.Whatshouldyouincludeintheemail?Lookatthetextsonpages69and73,andthendiscussingroups.Brainstorming1.Whatareyoumostgratefulfor?(e.g.beingwonderfulhosts,showingyouaround)2.Whatwasthemostenjoyablepartofthetrip?(e.g.food/placesofinterest)3.WhathaveyoulearntaboutChinesehistoryandculture?4.WhathaveyoudonesinceyoureturnedtotheUK?5.WhatdoyoumissmostaboutBeijing?ContentUsefulexpressionsGreetingsandbeginningoftheemailIhopeyouarewell.Howareyou?I’mwritingtothankyoufor___________Yourappreciationandgratitude?Thingsyouaregratefulfor?Thingsyouenjoyedmostaboutthetrip?ThingsyoulearntduringyourstayinBeijing(e.g.Chinesehistory,Chineseculture)Itwassokindofyouto...Iamgratefulthat...Ithasbeenafantasticexperiencetolearn...Ifeltlikepartofthefamily.Istillrememberthedaywhen..._______________Yourlifeandfeelingsafterthetrip?ThingsyouhavedonesinceyoureturnedtoLondon?ThingsyoumissaboutBeijingIhavetoldmyfriendsabout...ThethingImissmostis...Idohopethat________________Endingandsigningoff?BestwishestothehostfamilyKeepintouch!Yours,Bestwishes,___________________wecanmeetagainsoonyourkindnessduringmystayinBeijingEricWemadedumplingstogetherStep1PlanMakeanoutlineofthethank-youemail.

Step2Write文體：人稱：時(shí)態(tài)：寫作要點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)/一般過去時(shí)/現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)表達(dá)感謝1.開頭常用語1.Ihopeyouarewell.Howareyou?I'mwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksforyourhospitalityduringmystayinBeijing.?2.Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingthislettertoshowmygratitudetoyoufortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourinBeijing.2.中間常用語A表達(dá)感激的事?1.IamgratefulthatyouhelpedmewithmyChinesepronunciationeveryday,whichmadeabigdifferencetomylanguagelearning.?2.Ireallyappreciateitthatyoutookmetoseethelocaltraditionaloperashow.Itwasanunforgettableexperience.(句子積累）B旅行中最喜歡的事?1.ThethingIenjoyedmostaboutthetripwasthefamilydinnerwehadduringtheMid-AutumnFestival.Makingandeatingmooncakestogetherwassomuchfun.?2.IstillrememberthedaywhenwewenthikinginthemountainsnearBeijing.Thebeautifulsceneryandfreshairwereamazing,andIhadagreattimewithyou.?C學(xué)到的知識?1.IthasbeenafantasticexperiencetolearnaboutthelonghistoryoftheGreatWallfromyou.Yourstoriesmadeitcomealive.?2.I'velearnedalotaboutChinesefamilyvaluesduringmystaywithyou.Ifeellikepartofthefamily.?D回國后的情況?1.IhavetoldmyfriendsallabouttheinterestingBeijinghutongswewalkedthrough.Theywerereallyinterested.?2.SinceIreturnedtoLondon,I'vebeentryingtocooksomesimpleChinesedisheslikeyoutaughtme,buttheynevertasteasgoodasyours.?E表達(dá)想念?1.ThethingImissmostisoureveningtalksafterdinner.Wesharedsomanyinterestingideasandstories.?2.WhatImissalotisthefriendlysmilesonyourfaceseverymorning.結(jié)尾常用語?IdohopethatyoucanvisitLondonsomeday.Iwouldlovetobeyourguideandshowyouaroundmycity.?Keepintouch!Ihopetohearfromyousoonandknowhowyouaredoing.?Bestwishestoyourfamily.Mayallyourdreamscometrue.Basicstructureofhowtowriteathank-youemail010302Part1Thebeginning(thepurposeofwritingathank-youletter)Part21.Describesomethingyouaregratefulfor.somethingyouenjoymost.somethingyouhavelearnt.2.YourlifeandfeelingsafterthetripPart3(Bestwishestothehostfamily)ThebodyTheendingHowiseverything?Ihopeyouarewell.I’mwritingtothankyouforyourkindnessduringmystayinBeijing.Youwerewonderfulhosts,andIamsogratefulthatyoutookcareofme.Youmademefeelpartofthefamily!Ireallyenjoyedtheamazingfamilydinners,andIlearntsomuchaboutChineseculturefromyou.IstillrememberthedaywevisitedtheGreatWall.Itwasoneofthebestdaysinmylife!IreallymissallthedeliciousfoodinBeijing,especiallyyourhome-cookeddumplings.SinceIreturnedtoLondon,Ihaven’thadanygoodChinesefood.IwishIcangobacktoChinaagainsoon.Itwasanunforgettableexperience.IdohopethatyoucancomeandvisitLondonsometimetoo!Check

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reviseDimensionsCriteriaScoresStructureIpresentedtheinformationinaclearandlogicalway.ContentIusedappropriateexpressionsforgreetingsandsign-offs.IusedappropriatevocabularytodescribeEric'sexperiencesandfeelingsaboutthetrip.LanguageIusedthewordsandexpressionsIlearntinthisunit.Iusedcorrectspelling,grammarandpunctuation.Thesubjectsandverb