閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，便之構成一篇完整的短文。

Underaflalwirnerlight,fourwomenrodetheirbicycles1上集人物,innorthernColorado's

RooseveltNationalForest.TheyarecompetitivecyclistswhoknowtherouteWCIL0B”景信息，*加沖突

?）.Mostofthemrideforateamcalledit去分鐘做后［定語）RecycledCyclesRacing,basedoutof

Seattle過去分例做后置定語）.Astheymadetheirwayalongawidesictionofthepath.Wolfledtheway（此

WilliamsrodealoneinthemiddleandBergereancTiet/ibroughtuptherearmB9人的*在文

交代克畢，.

Suddenly,Tietzsawtwolargeanimalsemergefromthewoodsoffto（herightjustafter

Bcrgcrcpassed.Shedidn'tseeclearly,socouldn'tidentifywhatthetwoanimalswere.

Nosoonerhadtheyidentified【heanimalsthantheterriblethinghappened＜N“、岡?！薄卮ǖ寡b.The

firstone）ranquicklyacrossthepathinfrontofBergere,andthenrushedtotheleftand

disappeared.Thesecondfollowed,butinthelastinstantitstopped.Itmi^hthavebeendistracted

byihemovemeniofBergere'sbicycle,jumpedatBergere'sback,andpulledhertotheground

withteethandclaws由孑＞＜昉偉粗Tietzletantascaryscream,“Ohmy,theyare

Wolfturnedaroundquickly.Herfirstreactionwastoputasmuchdistanceaspossible

betweenherselfandthescaryanimal斜.掩男人的）.Butquickly,shepusheddownherfearandrushed

tohelpBergere”災同酎國人物心JS，.Williamsandotherfriendsallcametohelp.Theypulledthe

animalawayfromBergere'sneck.

“Call911,"yelledWolf,Tietzimmediatelycalledbuttherewasnoresponse.For15minutes,

thewomenwerehitting,kicking,punching,andscreaming功名包動作串，.Finally,thecougarreleased

Bcrgcrc,anditmightturnonanyorallofthem.Bcrgcrcstretchedout,andshewastiredand

injured-butbreathingandawake."HELLO?THISIS911.STATEYOUREMERGENCY,"Tlie

voiceofthe911callcentercamethroughTietz'sphone,whichwaslyingontheground.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridingtowardthem,thewomenrealizeditwas

theirteammateCaswell.

Paragraph2:Bergerespentfivedaysinthehospital.

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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Underaflatwinterlight,fourwomenrodetheirbicyclesinnorthernColorado'sRoosevelt

NationalForest,Theyarecompetitivecyclistswhoknow（heroutewell.Mostofthemridefora

teamcalledRecycledCyclesRacing,basedoutofSeattle.Astheymadetheirwayalongawide

sectionofthepath.Wolfledtheway,Williamsrodealoneinthemiddle.andBergereandTietz

broughtuptherear（殿后）.

Suddenly,Tietzsawtwolargeanimalsemergefromthewoodsofftotherightjustafter

Bergerepassed.Shedidn'tseeclearly,socouldn'tidentifywhatthetwoanimalswere.

Nosoonerhadtheyidentifiedtheanimalsthantheterriblethinghappened.Thefirstoneran

quicklyacrossthepathinfrontofBergere,andthenrushedto（heleftanddisappeared.Thesecond

followed,butinthelastinstantitstopped.Itmighthavebeendistractedbythemovementof

Bergere'sbicycle,jumpedalBergere'sback,andpulledherto（hegroundwithteethandclaw$（爪

子），Tietzletoutascaryscream,uOhmy,theyarecougars（美洲獅）

Wolfturnedaroundquickly.Herfirstreactionwastoputasmuchdistanceaspossible

betweenherselfandthescaryanimal,Butquickly,shepusheddownherfearandrushedtohelp

Bergere.Williamsandotherfriendsallcametohelp.TheypulledtheanimalawayfromBergere's

neck.

“Call911,"yelledWolf,Tietziminediatelycalledbuttherewasnoresponse.For15minuies,

thewomenwerehitting,kicking,punching,andscreaming.Finally,thecougarreleasedBergere,

anditmightturnonanyorallofthem.Bergerestretchedout,andshewastiredandinjured-but

breathingandawake.UUELLO?THISIS911.STATEYOUREMERGENCY,“Thevoiceofthe

911callcentercamethroughTietz'sphone,whichwaslyingontheground.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridingtowardthem,thewomenrealizeditwas

theirteammateCaswell.

Paragraph2:Bergerespentfivedaysinthehospital.

1.文章分類及續(xù)寫思路分析

文章類型：遇險救險/生存類（野外遭遇野生動物襲擊）

續(xù)寫構思思路：

?主題延續(xù)：強調(diào)團隊合作、勇氣與生存意志。

?情感基調(diào)：緊張T救援T希望T反思。

框架布局：

?第一段：引入新救援力量（Caswell）,增強團隊希望，銜接911通話。

?第二段：結局（Bergere康復），升華主題（團隊精神/對自然的敬畏）。

實施要點:

?保持動作描寫的連貫性（如救援、溝通）。

?通過心理描寫體現(xiàn)人物從恐懼到冷靜的轉(zhuǎn)變。

?環(huán)境描寫需簡短，突出緊迫感（如天色、森林）。

承接原文事項：

?必須包含：911接通的狀態(tài)、Cawwell的出現(xiàn)方或、Rergere的傷勢處理。

?沿用原文關鍵詞（如“cougars""scrcarrT“RecyclcdCyclesRacing''）。

巧妙設計技巧：

讓Caswell攜帶急救設備，增強合理性。通過對話體現(xiàn)團隊分工（如一人指揮，一人安撫

Bergere）。

2.故事山模式與原文分析

1.故事山模式：

開端：駒■行團隊進入森林（平靜）。

發(fā)展：美洲獅突襲Bergere（沖突爆發(fā)）。

高潮：團隊合作驅(qū)趕美洲獅（緊張對抗）。

回落：911接通，Caswell到來（希望出現(xiàn)）。

結局：Bergere送醫(yī)（問題解決）。

銜接點與關鍵分析：

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應句

“Herfirstreactionwastoput...Butquickly,

人物刻畫Wolf從恐懼到勇敢的轉(zhuǎn)變

shepusheddownherfear...^^

“Tietzletoutascaiyscream..."/“They

情感層次從驚慌（尖叫）到團結（合力救援）

pulledtheanimalaway...”

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應句

關鍵情節(jié)“Thesecondfollowed,but...jumpedat

美洲獅第二次攻擊Bergere

點Bergere*sback...^^

短句、動詞突出緊迫感（hit,kick,“For15minutes,thewomenwerehitting,

語言特色

punch）kicking,punching..

“Bergerestretchedout,tiredand

心理描寫B(tài)ergere的虛弱但清醒

injured一butbreathingandawake.”

“pulledtheanimalawayfromBergere's

動作描寫團隊對抗美洲獅的細節(jié)

neck”

冬季森林的平坦光線（暗示潛在危

環(huán)境描寫“Underaflatwinterlight../*

險）

德含主題人類在自然危機中的互助與脆弱全篇對抗美洲獅的團隊協(xié)作

美洲獅可能轉(zhuǎn)向攻擊其他人（未完

伏筆/沖突*4itmightturnonanyorallofthem''

全解決）

電話無信號T最終接通（科技依賴

穩(wěn)含線索“noresponse"->"HELLO?THISIS911..J5

的局限性）

解決方案：

團隊協(xié)作：通過多人合力驅(qū)趕美洲獅。

外部救援：Caswell到來與911接通提供醫(yī)療支持。

3.推薦英文例句及翻譯

動作描寫（突出緊張感和團隊協(xié)作）

1.“Wolfwhippedaround,herheartpoundingasshesprintedbacktowardBergcre.',

（沃爾夫猛地轉(zhuǎn)身，心跳加速,朝伯格沖去。）

2.“Tietzlungedforward,swingingherbackpackwildlyatthecougar.0

（蒂茨向前猛沖，瘋狂地用背包砸向美洲獅。）

3.nWilliamsgrabbedarockandhurleditatthesnarlingbeast.”

（威廉姆斯抓起一塊石頭，朝咆哮的野獸猛擲過去,）

4."Bewerewrithedontheground,gaspingforbreathasthecougar'sclawsdugintoher

shoulder.',

（伯格在地上痛告地扭動，美洲獅的爪子刺入她的肩膀，地大口喘氣。）

5."Thewomencircledthecougar,shoutingandstompingtoscareitoff.”

（女人們圍住美洲獅，大聲喊叫并跺腳試圖嚇跑它。）

6."Caswellskiddedtoastop,hereyeswideningatthechaosbeforeher."

（卡斯威爾猛地剎住車，眼前的混亂讓她瞪大了眼指。）

7.“Thecougarrecoiledmomentarily,itsearsflatteningagainstitshead.”

（美洲獅短暫退綿，耳朵緊貼頭部c）

8.HBergere,sfingerstrembledassheclutchedherbleedingarm."

（伯格的手指鼓抖著，緊緊抓住流血的手臂。）

9.“Wolfyankedthefirst-aidkitopen,herhandsshakingbutdetermined.M

（沃爾夫猛地拉開急救包，雙手顫抖但堅定。）

10.“Thecougarfinallyturnedtailandvanishedintotheundergrowth.**

（美洲獅最終掉頭逃竄，消失在灌木叢中。）

心理描寫（體現(xiàn)恐懼、決心、希望）

1."AwaveofterrorcrashedoverTietz,freezingherinplaceforasplitsecond.0

（一陣恐懼席卷蒂茨，讓她瞬間僵在原地。）

2."Wolf'smindraced—shouldsherunorfight?Butshecouldn'tabandonBergere.1*

（沃爾夫的思緒飛速運轉(zhuǎn)——是該逃跑還是戰(zhàn)斗？但她不能丟下伯格。）

3."Bergere^visionblurred,butsheclungtoconsciousness,refusingtopassout.”

（伯格的視線模糊，但她緊緊抓住意識，拒絕昏過去。）

4."Williams'stomachtwistedwithdread,butsheforcedherselftostepcloser.0

（威廉姆斯的胃因恐懼而抽搐，但她強迫自己靠近.）

5.“Forafleetingmoment,Tietzwonderedifthiswashowitwouldend—here,inthe

woods.*'

（一瞬間，蒂茨想，這是否就是結局——在這片森林里。）

6."Caswell'sarrivalsentasurgeofhopethroughthegroup."

（卡斯威爾的到來讓團隊燃起希望。）

7.nBergere,sthoughtsdriftedtoherfamily—shehadtosurvive,nomatterwhat."

（伯格的思緒飄向家人——她必須活下去，無論如何。）

8."Wolf'sfearmorphedintofiercedetermination-shewouldn'tletthecougarwin.”

（沃爾夫的恐懼轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閳远ǖ臎Q心——她不會讓美洲獅得逞。）

9.**Thc911operator'svoicewasalifelineinthechaos.**

（911接線員的聲音在混亂中如同一根救命稻草。）

10.“Astheambulancesirengrewlouder,reliefwashedoverthemlikeatide.”

（救護車的警笛聲漸近，如潮水般的寬翱席卷了他汨c）

環(huán)境描寫（渲染緊張氛圍）

“Theforestloomedaroundthem,itsshadowsdeepeningasduskapproached.n

（森林在他們周圍聳立，暮色漸濃，陰影加深。）

“Acoldwindrustledtheleaves,carryinganeeriesilencebetweentheirpanickedshouts.*'

（冷風吹動樹葉，在他們驚慌的叫喊之間帶來詭異的寂錚。）

"Thefadingwinterlightcastlong,jaggedshadowsacrossthetrail.1'

（漸暗的冬日光線在小徑上投下參差不齊的長影。）

“Thecougar'sgrowlechoedthroughthetrees,sendingchillsdowntheirspines.**

（美洲獅的咆喏在樹林間回蕩，讓他們羿背發(fā)涼。）

“Thegroundwasslickwithfrost,makingeverysteptreacherous.',

（地面因霜凍而濕滑，每一步都充滿危險。）

“Thedistanthowlofacoyoteaddedtothesenseofisolation.1'

（遠處郊狼的嚎叫加深了孤獨感。）

“Thescentofpineanddampearthmingledwiththemetallictangofblood.n

（松樹和潮濕泥土的氣味與血液的鐵銹味混合。）

“Theundergrowthcrackledominously,asifhidingmoreunseenthreats."

（灌木叢發(fā)出不祥的沙沙聲，仿佛隱藏著更多未知的威脅。）

"Thefirststarsblinkedintoview,indifferenttotheirstrugglebelow."

（最初的星星閃爍出現(xiàn)，對下方的掙扎漠不關心。）

“Theambulance'sflashinglightsslicedthroughthedarknesslikeabeacon.H

（救護車的閃光燈如燈塔般劃破黑暗。）

高級替換詞（分類場景）

1.恐懼/緊張

?Basic:scared—>Advanced:petrified（石化般的恐懼）/terrified（極度驚恐）

?Basic:afraid—>Advanced:apprehensive（憂慮的）/dread-filled（充滿恐懼的）

?Basic:ncnous—>Advanced:jittery（神經(jīng)質(zhì)的）/onedge（緊張不安的）

2.決心/勇氣

?Basic:brave—>/Advanced:resolute（堅定的）/undaunted（無畏的）

?Basic:strong—Advanced:tenacious（頑強的）/steadfast（堅定不移的）

3.動作/戰(zhàn)斗

?Basic:hit—>Advanced:pummel（連續(xù)猛擊）/Ihrash（猛烈擊打）

?Basic:run—?Advanced:bolt（狂奔）/sprint（沖刺）

4.環(huán)境/氛圍

?Basic:dark—>Advanced:murky（昏暗的）/foreboding（不祥的）

?Basic:quiet—>Advanced:hushed（寂靜的）/eerie（詭異的）

5.受傷/疼痛

Basic:hurt—>Advanced:agonized（極度痛苦的）/Ihrobbing（抽痛的）

Basic:bleeding—?Advanced:gushing（涌出的）/seeping（滲出的）

4.固定搭配，詞法解析及語料積累

"letoutascream"（發(fā)出尖叫）

■近義：utteredacry/shrieked

■反義：fellsilent

■例句：

■"Tietzleioutablood-curdlingscreamwhenthecougarauacked."

■"Thesuddennoisemadeherletoutastartledyelp."

“pusheddownfear”（壓下恐懼）

■近義：suppressed（error/steeledherself

■反義：succumbedtopanic

■例句：

■"Wolfpusheddownherfearandchargedforward."

■"Despitehertremblinghands,shepusheddownfearandacted."

'?broughtuptherear”（殿后）

■近義：trailedbehind/tookthelastposition

■反義：ledtheway

■例句：

■"BcrgcrcandTietzbroughtuptherear,chattingcasuallybeforetheattack."

■"Inmilitaryformations,theslowestsoldiersoftenbringuptherear."

"skiddedtoastop”（急剎車）

近義:haltedabruptly/screechedtoastandstill

■反義：acceleratedaway

■例句：

■"Caswell'sbikeskiddedtoastop,kickingupgravel.'1

■"Thecarskiddedtoastopjustinchesfromthepedestrian."

Uclungtoconsciousness**（保持清醒）

■近義：foughttostayawake/resistedblackingout

■反義：succumbedtounconsciousness

?例句：

■"Bergcreclungtoconsciousnessdespitethescaringpain."

■"Afterthecrash,heclungtoconsciousnessuntilhelparrived."

可積累的生詞短語

"emergefrom"（從...出現(xiàn)）

詞性：phrasalverb近義：comeoutof/stepoutfrom反義：disappearinto

例句：

“Thecougarsemergedfromthewoodswithoutwarning.**

“Thesunemergedfrombehindtheclouds,bathingtheforestinlight.'1

“umon"（突然攻擊）

詞性：phrasalverb近義：lashoutat/attack反義：retreatfrom

例句：

"Thecougarmightturnontheothersifprovoked.M

“Evenafriendlydogcanturnonitsownerifscared.',

"stretchout”（伸展/躺下）

詞性：phrasalverb近義：liedown/extend反義：curlup

例句：

*'Bergerestretchedoutontheground,exhausted.',

*'Hestretchedouthisinjuredlegwithagrimace."

"callthrough',（電話接通）

詞性：phrasalverb近義：getaconnection/reach反義：dropthecall

例句：

“The911operator'svoicefinallycalledthroughthestatic.**

"Itriedcalling,butthesignalwouldn'tgothrough.*'

nturntail”（逃跑）

詞性：idiom近義：flee/retreat反義：standground

例句：

“Thecougarturnedtailandvanishedintothetrees."

“Whenthepolicearrived,thethievesturnedtailandran.*'

5.PossibleVersions（4）

Version1（借鑒董老師）

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridinntowardthem,thewomenrealizedit

wastheirteammateCaswell.Instantly,hopeflickeredin〔heireyes.Wolfwavedfrantically

whileWilliamscalledouttoCaswell,hervoiceshakingzio>.Understandingtheurgency4在分

何做件隨動作）,CaswellthrewherbikeasideanddashedtoBcrgcrc'sside.BloodcoveredBe/ere'$

sleeve,andhereyesfhuteredweak/y.Caswellkneltdown,unzippedherpack,andpulledouta

bandagerollandantisepticwipes動作?描外."You'regoingtobeokay,“shesaidsteadily,asshe

Dressedgauzeagainst【heworstwound，米捶語瓏”匯1.Tietzrelayedupdatedpositiontotheemergency

rescuer.Thewomenworkedlikeclockwork—onecomforted,onetreated,andanotherscannedthe

woodsfordanger.4Thoughthecougarhaddisapnearedinto[heforest,itsterrorstillclungto

theair.Momentslater,thefainthumofanapproachingvehiclegrewlouder,尢又主語句>.They

exchangedglancesfilledwithexhaustionandrelief過去分網(wǎng)出工定加.Rescuehadarrived-extjust

intheformofmedics,butinthecouragethey'dshowntogether.

Paragraph2:Ber-crespentfivedaysinthehospital.Duringthosefivedays,Bergere

remainedundercloseobservation,receivingstitchesandphysicaltherapy儂分》做就小.Her

bodyached,butherhear]feltfull.Herteammatesvisitedwithsmiles,snacks,andshared

storiesthatfilledthesterileroomwithlaughter."Irememberthewayyouheldmyhand,"she

（oldTietz,hereyeswellineup，肽立立格，."Thatmeanteverything;,Themedialabeledthemheroes,

butthewomenshrueeedoffpraise.Tothem,theyhadonlydonewhatfriendshipdemanded.

Afterherrelease,Bergerewroteareflectionfbralocalcyclingmagazine,emphasizinKthe

importanceofeinerqencYreadinessandqrouDsupporta^分叫做件陵動件）.Aweeklater,sheancher

teammatesreturnedtothetrail——nottoerasethememory,buttoreclaimit.蓬進疆耳）Astheirlires

spunovertheearth,shewhisperedtoherself,"Thisisnotfearanymore.Thisisstrengthon

wheels."

Version2

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridin?towardthem,thewomenrealizedit

wastheirteammateCaswell.Wolfsvoicecrackedassheyelled、”Caswell!Overhere!”Caswell

pedaledfaster,thenleaptoffherbike動作率描寫，場景動作，whenshesawthebloodiedscene.Withoui

askingquestions,shedroppedbesideBergereandcheckedherpulse."It'sfaint,butthere,“she

said、herhandsalreadyunrollingapressurebandage獨立主格，.Williamsremovedherjacketlo

supportBcrgcrc'shead,whilecalled911again,cleadincforurzencv<iiui分叫做HH0件□Though

theirhandsshook,theyworkedinharmony-steady,focused,drivenbyinstinctandcare<Mj并列i.

I'hecougarhadvanished,butthethreatstillechoedintheirminds環(huán)地推月.Caswelllookecinto

Bergere'spalefaceandwhispered,“Staywithus,okay?”Afewlenseminutespassedbeforeihe

distinctcrunchoftiresongravelsignaledthearrivalofhelp.Anofficerrushedover,andthegroup

steppedaside、thairfaceshuteyesfierce，0立士林14人**?,Inihnifr（、7門iforesttheyhadheld

on—forBergereandforeachother.

Paragraph2:Bergerespentfivedaysinthehospital.Thosefivedaysbroughthealin?

notiustforherbody、butalsoforthebondbetweenthewomenHerteammatescookturns

visiting,readingaloudfromc、clinBblocs,andplacingsillystickersonherbed均作*并列，,The

uainwassh（in）、bi"lauehlerdullediisedge環(huán)電軸其>.“Youwereallincredible,“Bergerewhispered

oneevening,eyesdampa立士格人物彩“Yousavedmylife/'Thehospitalstaff,movedbythe

group'sdedication，過去分詞”閏狀語）,calledthem“ararekindoffamily壞見於常i.“Whenshewas

finallydischarged,thefirst:hingBergeredidwastextherteammates:uReadyforaride?^^That

weekend,undergreyskiesandbriskair,theycycledtogetheragain—thistimeslower,mvre

mindful,andinfinitelycloseiM并列乜Thescarsonherarmswouldfade,butthememor、of

coura叫connection,andsurvivalwaspermanent.Thevdidn'tiustrideasateam—the,

rodeassurvivors，w造譽為、vhohadfacedthewildandstayedwhole.

Version3

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridinglovardthsm,thewomenrealizedit

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