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2026屆高考英語(yǔ)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)
讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練課讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)課讀后續(xù)寫講評(píng)課微技能訓(xùn)練課第七檔:22-25(1)續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的質(zhì)量、續(xù)寫的完整性以及與原文情境的融洽度。(2)所使用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性、恰當(dāng)性和多樣性。(3)上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。各檔評(píng)分呈現(xiàn)的是學(xué)生的續(xù)寫故事在內(nèi)容與融洽度,詞匯與語(yǔ)法,銜接與連貫性等方面寫作能力的遞減第五檔:15-17第四檔:11-14第三檔:6-10第二檔:1-5閱卷時(shí),評(píng)卷老師關(guān)注的主要有以下三個(gè)方面:第六檔:18-21第一檔:01.明確續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的敘述意圖/主題。
以已給閱讀材料的敘述意圖和主題為中心。2.厘清已給短文的故事要素及人物情感變化講故事的黃金拋物線原則:首先設(shè)定情景,而后進(jìn)入話題,而后引發(fā)沖突,而后進(jìn)入高潮,最終解決問(wèn)題。3.研讀段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)呼應(yīng)情節(jié)挖掘故事新沖突、確定解決方案
4.合理構(gòu)思后續(xù)故事的發(fā)展。讀后續(xù)寫,需要重點(diǎn)考慮5點(diǎn)?梳理沖突升級(jí)和對(duì)應(yīng)的解決方案4.合理構(gòu)思后續(xù)故事的發(fā)展。
以表現(xiàn)社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀為準(zhǔn)繩。
高考命題要求和命題原則:優(yōu)化情境設(shè)計(jì),增強(qiáng)試題開(kāi)放性、靈活性,充分發(fā)揮高考命題的育人功能和積極導(dǎo)向作用。5.落實(shí)好銜接句子與句子2個(gè)段落之間讀后續(xù)寫,需要重點(diǎn)考慮5點(diǎn)交叉式詞匯的呼應(yīng)、發(fā)展與過(guò)渡?Mind–mapconfirmedGivenDoor1GivenDoor2??GSGS
列大綱:兩段12句法
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8)9)10)11)12)思考:12句話中,有哪幾句是固定內(nèi)容?
列大綱:兩段12句法1)固定
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結(jié)局/升華主旨續(xù)寫首段首句續(xù)寫二段首句承接首段首句3Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.
Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.
Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.
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thankstomyteacherIwontheprizelaughedoutloudagainIexpressedmythanksIwashappy
IshareditwithmyteahcerMyteacherwashappyIattendedthetheawardpresentationCongratulatedme
IknewhislaughIlovewritingkeptwritingandsucceeded3讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練課讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)課讀后續(xù)寫講評(píng)課微技能訓(xùn)練課AstorywhenwherewhowhatwhyRead
forelementsmywife,I,thedriverduringThanksgivingNewYorkCityanexperienceinNewYorkCitytogetavanTheyneededavantosendthemtoHarlemMainidea?Read
forthemeLoveWarmthKindnessHelpTip:
Useaplotmountaintounderstandthestorybetter.PlotmountainBeginningDevelopmentEndingClimaxReadforplotsandfeelings?BeforewemadeaplanWhenwemadeaplanAfterwemadeaplanWantedtogetavanbuyfoodforthepoorStuckinahotelclimaxInvainTakeachanceinthestreetReadforplotsandfeelings?excitedsaddisappointedhopefulendingRitual?Para.1Wetriedstoppingvansastheyweredrivingdownthestreet.
Para.2Eventuallyavandroveupandthedriversaidyes.①Nodriveragreedtohelpus.②③④Q1:Howwouldthecouplereacttothedriver'sagreement?Q2:Whatwouldtheydoforthepeopleinneed?Q3:Howwouldthecouplefeelintheend?
Orwhatwouldtheylearnintheend?…Q-AstrategyQ1:Whatdidthecoupledoonthestreet?Q2:Howwouldthedriversreacttothecouple'sbehavior?Q3:Howwouldthecouple/thewifefeel?…InferthedevelopmentAssessingstudents’workAssessingstudents’work讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練課讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)課讀后續(xù)寫講評(píng)課微技能訓(xùn)練課However,regardlessofourwavinghands,thevansmerelykeptdrivingwithoutaglimpseatus.Theriverofvansranawayinfrontofusbutnoonewouldliketostopandlistentous.(韓樹緯)Buttoourdisappointment,allofthedriversrefusedtolendthevans.(黃新惠)Thecarontheroaddrivesofast,blowingourhairaway.(闞祿穎)
Yetthedriverseither
gaveacoldshouldertoourcrazily-wavinghands,or
spedpastus,drowningourhopeinthedeafeningroarofengines.情節(jié)構(gòu)建+句式整合Para1Drivingontheroadsofast,thedriversevendidn’tnoticeus,withmercilesschillywindblowingourhairaway.
Fingersnumbedbythechillywind,throatchokedbydustyair,wefeltsolonelyinthecrowdedstreetsurroundedbysomanycold-heartedpokerfaces.Wefoundourselvesontheedgeofgivingup,untilitsuddenlydawnedonmethattheverydespairIwasexperiencingwaslessthanwhatsomeonestruggledfor.Throughourjointefforts,wesucceeded.Adriverwasconvincedbyus.(彭俊燁)Wedecidedtocontinuestoppingvanswhichtheyweredrivingdownthestreet.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.(林碩)Wemadeaposterandthenputitonthesideoftheroad.Wethoughtthattheremustbeadriverwhowaskindwantedtohelp.(高瑞璟)Wewenttothestreet,lookingatthevanwithdetermination.Intheend,wemadeit!(李佳玉)情節(jié)構(gòu)建Para1最后一句的有效銜接Weheldtheboard,waitingbythestreetforawarm-hearteddriver.Thenearly-extinguishedsparksofhopewereinstantlyrekindled,encouragingustogoonwiththesearchforavanthatcoulddeliverthegoodwill.Wedidn’twanttogiveupregardlessofhowexhaustedwewere.(闞祿穎)
Igraspedmywife’shandandcomfortedher,givingenergyandconfidence.(黃新惠)Butthesevansweregoingsofastthatononenoticedus.ThenIsawaboardonthegroundandhelditup.(馮碩)Iencouragedherandwetriedinotherways.Wemadeaposterandthenputitonthesideoftheroad.Wethoughtthattheremustbeadriverwhowaskindwantedtohelp.(高瑞璟)情節(jié)構(gòu)建+句式整合Para1添加情節(jié)Theweatherwascoldandthevansweregettinglessandless.Wetrieditagainatlastwithoutgreathope.(姜淑婷)Despitethechillywind/Eventhoughitwasextremelyfreezingcoldoutside,wedidn’twanttogiveitupanddecidedtotryonceagain.Mywifewastiredanddisappointedandaskedmewhetherwehadtheopportunitytogetavan.句式整合Tired,coldanddisappointed,mywifeaskedmewhetherwehadtheopportunitytogetavan.(張德好)Withsinceregratitude,wewentshoppingandboughtmanythingsthatpeopleneeded.(黃新惠)Wecouldn’thelphuggingeachotherandthankedthedriverfromthebottomofmyheart.(姜淑婷)Awaveofhappinesssweptoverus.Wecouldhardlyfindanywordstoexpressmyheartfeltthanks.(闞祿穎)情節(jié)構(gòu)建(para2第一句有效銜接)Showeringhiminastringofthanks,weimmediately
setouttopurchasefood,andthen
headedforHarlem.Thesocietywillbecomemoreharmoniousandbeautiful.Aslongasweallcontributekindness.(耿嘉怡)句式整合Onlyifweallcontributekindnesswillthesocietybecomemoreharmoniousandabetterplacetolivein.Tomysurprise,wefoundthatthevandriverlivedthere,wewereverygratefultothedriverandthankedhimagain.(高瑞璟)Thedriversaidwithasmile,“IwasgivenfoodandanotejustwhenIwaslittle.”……………
亓儷錦Tothedriver’ssurprise,wedrovetohisneighborhood.Whatimpressedmemostwasthatwewerehelpedbypeoplewewantedtohelp.(王躍樺)情節(jié)構(gòu)建(para2添加情節(jié))Beautifulendings
Itwasnoexaggerationtoutterthattheunforgettableexperiencewaslikeaneverlastingflower,bloomingintheriverofmymind.……..韓樹緯BydoingmyThanksgivingritual,ourlivesweredecoratedbeautifully.…….周蕊Now,mywifeandIstillcreatedthisritualonThanksgivingDay,andwelearnthetruthofThanksgivingwastobethankfulandgenerous.…….張凌Appreciation
Beautifulendings
Afterthat,wealwayssticktoourThanksgivingritualtogiveloveandwarmth.……..林碩Unknowingly,thewarmthisspreadinginthiscity.…….王靖雯Afterdoingthis,wereallyrealizedthemeaningofThanksgiving,whichcangaingoodluckbyhelpingothers.…….王躍樺Appreciation
Beautifulendings
Miracleslikethishappeneveryday—eveninacitywhere“therearenovans.”……..VivienThroughthisspecialexperience,wefeltwarmthandloveintheblankandglamorouscity.…….WendyIwhisperedtothedriver,“Imadetheirday,butyouhavedecoratedandlightenedupmyThanksgivingwithwarmkindness.”…….Amand
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