Unit6WisdomcountsWriting（滬教版2024）八年級上Learningobjectives0LeadinPre-writing2While-writingPost-writing4SummaryAssessment6Homework1357Bytheendofthelesson,Iwillbeableto...123masterthethree-partstructureofawisdomshortstory;describeancientwisdomstorycharacters’actionsandfeelingsindetail;explainlessonsfromancientwisdomstoriesandtellacompleteone.00LearningobjectivesTheschoolshortstorycompetitioniscallingalltalentedwriters!Pleasewriteastoryandsendittous.Winningstorieswillbeincludedinthisyear'sstorybook.WritingashortstoryaboutwisdomSCOOP1.Setting3.Ohno!(theproblem)5.ProblemSolved4.OrderofEvents2.CharactersTheschoolshortstorycompetitioniscallingalltalentedwriters!Pleasewriteastoryandsendittous.Winningstorieswillbeincludedinthisyear'sstorybook.Thinkandshare.Whatmakesagoodstory?What'stheSCOOP?Leadin01SCOOPWhat'stheSCOOP?1.SettingTellsWHENandWHERE3.Ohno!(theproblem)WhatisthePROBLEMinthestory?5.ProblemSolvedHowistheproblemsolvedorfixed?4.OrderofEventsTellthestoryINORDER2.CharactersWHOisinthestory?Lookandsay.Leadin01Afterthewar,oneoftheGreeksoldiersintheTrojanHorsewroteastoryabouthisexperience.Readthestoryandseehowheorganizedhisstory.WritingashortstoryaboutwisdomLookandfill.Itwasanotherhotanddrysummer.Aftertenyearsoffighting,wewerestilltryingtocapturethecityofTroy.Weweretiredofwar,andwemissedhome.Whatcouldwedo?Oneofusfinallyhadacleveridea.Thatday,webuiltahugewoodenhorse,andsomebravesoldiersandIhidinsideit.Thenourfriendsputthehorseoutsidethemaingateinthemiddleofthenight.Thenextmorning,alltheotherGreeksoldierswentonboardtheirshipsandpretendedtosailaway.Soon,wecouldheartheTrojansshoutingoutside:“TheGreekshavegone!Wehavewonthewar!”Thentheypulledthehorseintothecity.Wewaitedquietlyfortherightmoment.Thatnight,theTrojansdrankanddancedtocelebratetheirvictory.Thentheyallwenttosleep.Atmidnight,weclimbedoutofthehorseandopenedthegate.OursoldiersenteredTroy.TheTrojancaptaincriedwhenwecapturedhim,butalltheGreekswereofcoursehappy.Now,wecouldfinallygohome!SCOOP1.Setting3.Ohno!(theproblem)5.ProblemSolved4.OrderofEvents2.CharactersPre-writing02WritingashortstoryaboutwisdomLookandfill.Itwasanotherhotanddrysummer.Aftertenyearsoffighting,wewerestilltryingtocapturethecityofTroy.Weweretiredofwar,andwemissedhome.Whatcouldwedo?Oneofusfinallyhadacleveridea.Thatday,webuiltahugewoodenhorse,andsomebravesoldiersandIhidinsideit.Thenourfriendsputthehorseoutsidethemaingateinthemiddleofthenight.Thenextmorning,alltheotherGreeksoldierswentonboardtheirshipsandpretendedtosailaway.Soon,wecouldheartheTrojansshoutingoutside:“TheGreekshavegone!Wehavewonthewar!”Thentheypulledthehorseintothecity.Wewaitedquietlyfortherightmoment.Thatnight,theTrojansdrankanddancedtocelebratetheirvictory.Thentheyallwenttosleep.Atmidnight,weclimbedoutofthehorseandopenedthegate.OursoldiersenteredTroy.TheTrojancaptaincriedwhenwecapturedhim,butalltheGreekswereofcoursehappy.Now,wecouldfinallygohome!SCOOP1.Setting3.Ohno!(theproblem)5.ProblemSolved4.OrderofEvents2.CharactersHotdrysummer,Troy,aftertenyears’fightingGreeksoldiers,Trojans,TrojancaptainCouldn’tcaptureTroy,tiredofwar,missedhomeBuiltwoodenhorse→hidinside→placedoutsideTroy→pretendedtosailaway→Trojanstookhorsein→climbedoutatmidnight→openedgate→enteredTroyCapturedTroy,wenthomePre-writing02SCOOP1.Setting3.Ohno!(theproblem)5.ProblemSolved4.OrderofEvents2.CharactersHotdrysummer,Troy,aftertenyears’fightingGreeksoldiers,Trojans,TrojancaptainCouldn’tcaptureTroy,tiredofwar,missedhomeBuiltwoodenhorse→hidinside→placedoutsideTroy→pretendedtosailaway→Trojanstookhorsein→climbedoutatmidnight→openedgate→enteredTroyCapturedTroy,wenthomeWritingashortstoryaboutwisdomLookandfill.Part1:Settingthescenetime,place,weather,character(s)(appearance,clothes,feelings,etc.)Paris2:DevelopingthestoryWhathappenedatthebeginning,inthemiddle,andattheend?(Puttheeventsintimeorder.)Part3:EndingthestoryWhatdidthecharacter(s)doattheendofthestory,andhowdidtheyfeel?Pre-writing02

Paris1:Settingthescenetime,place,weather,character(s)(appearance,clothes,feelings,etc.)Paris2:DevelopingthestoryWhathappenedatthebeginning,inthemiddle,andattheend?(Puttheeventsintimeorder.)Part3:EndingthestoryWhatdidthecharacter(s)doattheendofthestory,andhowdidtheyfeel?Itwasanotherhotanddrysummer.Aftertenyearsoffighting,wewerestilltryingtocapturethecityofTroy.Weweretiredofwar,andwemissedhome.Whatcouldwedo?Oneofusfinallyhadacleveridea.Thatday,webuiltahugewoodenhorse,andsomebravesoldiersandIhidinsideit.Thenourfriendsputthehorseoutsidethemaingateinthemiddleofthenight.Thenextmorning,alltheotherGreeksoldierswentonboardtheirshipsandpretendedtosailaway.Soon,wecouldheartheTrojansshoutingoutside:“TheGreekshavegone!Wehavewonthewar!”Thentheypulledthehorseintothecity.Wewaitedquietlyfortherightmoment.Thatnight,theTrojansdrankanddancedtocelebratetheirvictory.Thentheyallwenttosleep.Atmidnight,weclimbedoutofthehorseandopenedthegate.OursoldiersenteredTroy.TheTrojancaptaincriedwhenwecapturedhim,butalltheGreekswereofcoursehappy.Now,wecouldfinallygohome!Readandanalyzetheoutline.Pre-writing02PartKeyInformationSceneSetting________:Ahotanddrysummer;________:OutsideandinsidethecityofTroy;____________:Greeksoldiers,Trojans;____________:Greeksoldiersweretiredandhomesick,whileTrojanswereoff-guardStoryDevelopment________:TheGreeksthoughofaplanofhidinginthewoodenhorse.Theybuiltthehorseandsomesoldiershidinside.Therestpretendedtosailaway.

________:TheTrojansthoughttheyhadwon,pulledthehorseintothecity,andcelebrated.Thentheyfellasleep.

________:TheGreeksoldiersinsidethehorseclimbedout,openedthegate,andtheGreekarmyrushedintoTroy.StoryEnding________:Happyandreadytogohome;________:TheTrojancaptainwascapturedandcried.

Readandfillinthechart.TimeLocationCharactersCharacterStatesBeginningMiddleEndGreeksTrojansPre-writing02Itwasanotherhotanddrysummer.Aftertenyearsoffighting,wewerestilltryingtocapturethecityofTroy.Weweretiredofwar,andwemissedhome.Whatcouldwedo?Oneofusfinallyhadacleveridea.Thatday,webuiltahugewoodenhorse,andsomebravesoldiersandIhidinsideit.Thenourfriendsputthehorseoutsidethemaingateinthemiddleofthenight.Thenextmorning,alltheotherGreeksoldierswentonboardtheirshipsandpretendedtosailaway.Soon,wecouldheartheTrojansshoutingoutside:“TheGreekshavegone!Wehavewonthewar!”Thentheypulledthehorseintothecity.Wewaitedquietlyfortherightmoment.Thatnight,theTrojansdrankanddancedtocelebratetheirvictory.Thentheyallwenttosleep.Atmidnight,weclimbedoutofthehorseandopenedthegate.OursoldiersenteredTroy.TheTrojancaptaincriedwhenwecapturedhim,butalltheGreekswereofcoursehappy.Now,wecouldfinallygohome!third-personnarrativefirst-personnarrativeWhowastellingthestory?canshowmultipleviewpointsorsettings;lesspersonalfeelspersonalandimmediate;limitedtowhatthenarratorknowsorseesPre-writing02Lookandlearn-Aboutthelanguage.Itwasanotherhotanddrysummer.Aftertenyearsoffighting,wewerestilltryingtocapturethecityofTroy.Weweretiredofwar,andwemissedhome.Whatcouldwedo?Oneofusfinallyhadacleveridea.Thatday,webuiltahugewoodenhorse,andsomebravesoldiersandIhidinsideit.Thenourfriendsputthehorseoutsidethemaingateinthemiddleofthenight.Thenextmorning,alltheotherGreeksoldierswentonboardtheirshipsandpretendedtosailaway.Soon,wecouldheartheTrojansshoutingoutside:“TheGreekshavegone!Wehavewonthewar!”Thentheypulledthehorseintothecity.Wewaitedquietlyfortherightmoment.Thatnight,theTrojansdrankanddancedtocelebratetheirvictory.Thentheyallwenttosleep.Atmidnight,weclimbedoutofthehorseandopenedthegate.OursoldiersenteredTroy.TheTrojancaptaincriedwhenwecapturedhim,butalltheGreekswereofcoursehappy.Now,wecouldfinallygohome!TheTrojancaptain’swords/actionsTheGreeksoldier’sfeelings/actionsLookandlearn-Aboutthelanguage.Pre-writing02Howwerethecharacters’actions,feelingsandthoughtsdescribed?Amanusesacleverstrategytowinaseriesofhorseraces.Whatstoriesaboutwisdomdoyouknow?Guesswhatthefollowingstoriesare.WritingashortstoryaboutwisdomGuessinggame.DuringabattleontheYangtzeRiver,ageneralusesfiretodefeatamuchmorepowerfulenemy.Totricktheenemy,ageneralleavesthegatestothecityopen.Theenemyleaderthinksthisisatrapandordershisarmytoleave.Pre-writing02Step1

PlanPlanyourstorybasedonthethreepartsinExercise2Writeafamousstoryaboutwisdom.While-writing03PartKeyInformationSceneSetting________:___________________________________________________:_______________________________________________________:_______________________________________________________:___________________________________________StoryDevelopment______________:___________________________________________

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______________:___________________________________________StoryEnding______________:___________________________________________________:___________________________________________TimeLocationCharactersCharacterStatesBeginningMiddleEndCharacter1Character1Step2WriteWritethestory.Makesuretoincludedetaileddescriptionsofthecharacter’sactions,feelingsandcomments__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2Writeafamousstoryaboutwisdom.While-writing03Step3CheckandreviseTick(√)theboxestocheckyourwriting,andthenreviseit.While-writing03Findandwrite.Iincludedthethreeparts,suchas_______________,inmystory.Iprovideddetaileddescriptionsofthecharacter’sactions,feelingsandcomments.IusedthewordsandexpressionsIlearntinthisunit.Iusedcorrectspelling,grammarandpunctuation.LongagoinancientChina,thestrongStateofWeisendmanysoldierstoattacktheStateofZhao.Wei’ssoldierssurroundZhao’scapitaltightly.Zhaoisingreatdanger.ThekingofZhaoquicklysendpeopletotheStateofQiforhelp.SunBinwasawisemanfromQi.Hethinkhardandhaveagoodplan,“IfwefightWei’sarmynearZhao,we’lllosemanysoldiers.Let’sattackWei’scapitalinstead—Wei’sarmywillhavetogobacktosaveit!”?Qi’sarmydidwhatSunBinsaid.WhenWei’ssoldiersheardtheircapitalwasindanger,theyhurriedbackatonceandleftZhao.Atlast,Zhaowassafe.?Thisfamousplaniscalled“SurroundWeitosaveZhao”.Ittellus:sometimesweneedtousewisdom,notjustforce,tosolvehardproblems.Readandcorrect.Post-writing04sent

surroundedwassentthoughttellsLonglongagointheThreeKingdomsperiod,ZhouYuhasbeenjealousofZhugeLiang’swisdom.HegiveZhugeLiangahardtask:tomake100,000arrowsinjustthreedays.ZhugeLiangagreeandsaidhecandoit.Heaskedhissoldierstopreparemanystrawboats.Onthethirdnight,whenthefogwasverythick,ZhugeLiangtaketheboatstotheenemy’scamp.Theenemysoldiers,thinkingtheyarebeingattacked,shootlotsofarrowsattheboats.Whentheboatscameback,ZhugeLianghadgotmorethan100,000arrows.ZhouYuissurprisedandsay,“ZhugeLiangisreallyclever!”Readandcorrect.Post-writing04was

gaveagreedtookwereshotsaidGradeandshareElements要素Level檔次Content內(nèi)容(6分)要點齊全,切合題意適當發(fā)揮Accuracy準確性(6分)語法，大小寫，拼寫等格式錯誤語言使用恰當,豐富Fluency流暢性(3分)分段，書寫，銜接，過渡互評總分Showit.Post-writing04Thewordswehavelearned一、根據(jù)首字母或中文提示完成單詞。TheGreekstriedtoc___________thecityofTroy.Theymadeahugew___________horse.Thesoldiersh___________insidethehorse.

TheTrojanscelebratedtheirv___________.

TheGreeksoldierspretendedtos___________awayintheirships.

Weshouldalwaystellthetruthandneverp___________tobesomeoneelse.

Summary05aptureoodenidictoryailretendThephraseswehavelearned二、英漢翻譯。上船_______________ (2)假