Unit2Schoollife單元主題寫作一、話題分析本單元的話題是“學(xué)校生活”。此類話題常見的寫作角度涉及：①校園設(shè)施與環(huán)境；②介紹學(xué)習(xí)與活動(dòng)；③寫改善學(xué)校生活的建議信。寫這類文章時(shí)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以描述及表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)為主。二、佳句積累開頭句1.Iamwriting(thisletter)tomakesuggestionsonhowtoimprove/make...中間句2.First,I’dsuggestthatourschoolofferstudentsmorechancestopracticehands-onabilities.3.First,Iwouldliketosuggestthatourschoolshouldprovidemore...,sowecantakepartin...4.Second,Ithinkweshouldhavemore...becauseitisagreatwayforusto...5.What’smore,wecansetup/hold/organizemoreactivitiestohelpstudentsdeveloptheirtalentsandexpressthemselvescreatively.6.Moreover,weneedmorecomputersinthelibrarysothatitiseasierforustosearchonline.7.Moreover,itwouldbeagoodideatostartaschoolclubforstudentswholovescience,suchas...結(jié)尾句8.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionshelpfulandconsidermakingchangestoschoolactivities.9.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsusefulandimprovetheschoolinsomeoftheseways.名言警句1.Schoolisaforetasteoflife.學(xué)校是人生的預(yù)演。2.Teachersaretheengineersofthehumansoul.教師是人類靈魂的工程師。3.Schoolisaplacewhereyoulearnnotonlyaboutsubjectsbutalsoaboutyourselfandtheworldaroundyou.學(xué)校是一個(gè)你不僅可以學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)科知識(shí)，還能了解自己和周圍世界的地方。三、寫作任務(wù)假定你是李華，你校校報(bào)正在征集關(guān)于如何讓校園生活更有趣的稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一封建議信給班主任張老師投稿。如何讓校園生活更有趣戶外活動(dòng)徒步、露營(yíng)等；好處：親近自然、增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)、培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作興趣俱樂部攝影、書法等俱樂部；好處：興趣相投者交流互學(xué)文化交流活動(dòng)邀請(qǐng)外校或外國(guó)學(xué)生；好處：拓寬文化視野要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于90；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________建議信引出話題具體描述總結(jié)概括表明寫信意圖禮貌提出自己的建議，并說(shuō)明原因做總結(jié)，表達(dá)希望【思路點(diǎn)撥】【范文賞析】DearMrZhang,I’mwritingthislettertogivesomesuggestionsonhowtomakeourschoollifemoreinteresting.First,I’dsuggestourschoolorganizemoreoutdooractivities,likehikingandcamping.1Theseactivitiescanhelpusgetclosertonature.Also,theycanmakeusstrongerandteachushowtoworkwellinateam.Second,Ithinkit’sagoodideatostartmoreinterestclubs.1Forexample,wecouldhaveaphoto-takingcluborahandwritingclub.Studentswholikethesamethingscanjointheseclubs.2

Theycansharewhattheyknowandlearnfromoneanother.3What’smore,weshouldholdculturalexchangeactivitiesregularly.Wecaninvitestudentsfromotherschoolsorevenfromothercountries.Thiscanhelpuslearnaboutdifferentculturesandopenoureyes.Ihopeyou’llfindmysuggestionsusefulandmakeourschoollifemorecolorful.1Yourssincerely,LiHua亮點(diǎn)詞匯getclosertonature親近大自然workwellinateam善于團(tuán)隊(duì)合作openone’seyes使某人長(zhǎng)見識(shí)what’smore而且，另外高分句型1含省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句2含who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句3含what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句假如你是Alice，你校正在開展一項(xiàng)關(guān)于改善學(xué)校生活的征文活動(dòng)，邀請(qǐng)你校學(xué)生投稿。請(qǐng)你就如何改善學(xué)校的環(huán)境，給負(fù)責(zé)此次活動(dòng)的王老師寫一封90詞左右的建議信，表達(dá)自己的想法。四、寫作實(shí)踐要點(diǎn)：1.多種花草樹木，使校園更美；2.增加垃圾箱，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生保持清潔；3.組織一月一次的清潔日，大家一起打掃學(xué)校。DearMrWang,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamwritingtomakesuggestionsonhowtoimproveourschoolenvironment.First,Iwouldliketosuggestthatourschoolshouldplantmoretreesandflowersaroundthecampus.Thiswillmakeourschoolmorebeautifulandhelpusrelaxduringbreaks.Second,Ithinkweshouldaddmorerubbishbinsinthehallwaysandplayground.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,AliceThiswillencouragestudentstokeeptheschoolcl