浙江省溫州市新力量20242025學(xué)年高二下學(xué)期6月期末英語試題閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Jimandhismotherwerevisitingthesupermarketfortheirweeklyshoppingwhenhefoundaleatherwallet.Hepickeditupcuriouslyandfoundtherewasacoffeebeanpatternonthesurface,whichremindedhimofhisownexperienceworkingparttimeatacoffeeshopduringcollege.Besidesthat,hefoundasignificantamountof`cashandabusinesscardwithaphonenumberonit.Jimhadtoleratedapoorlifealongwithhismother.Eachmealwastheresultofhismother'shardwork.Jimhadbeenstrugglingwithunemploymentwhileactivelysearchingforajob(狀語從句壓縮)(交代人物的矛盾點，增加戲劇性).ShouldIkeepthewallet?"hewondered,thethoughtoffinancialreliefcrossinghismind(獨立主格刻畫人物).“Icouldsurelyusethemoney."Yet,awaveofguiltwashedoverhim.“ButMotherwouldbeannoyedifsheknew,”hethought,holdingthewallettightly(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作).Noticinghishesitation(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作),Jim'smotheraskedwhatwaswrong.Hetoldheraboutthewalletandhisinternalstruggle.Withagentlebutfirmvoice,sheremindedhimofthevalues.“Wedon'tkeepwhatisn'tours,Jim.” Jim'sfaceturnedredwithamixofemotions."Wehavebillswithoutsteadyine,andthiscouldbeaturningpoint,"heresponded.Hismotheracknowledgedtheirdifficultiesbutencouragedhimtothinkabouttherightthingtodo,saying(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作),“Returningit(動名詞短語做主語)couldbringyouunexpectedgoodluck(伏筆所在).”Finally,withresolve,Jimdecidedtocallthenumberonthebusinesscard.Theownerwasanelderlymanwhowasverygratefulwhenhemetthemtotakethewalletback.HeexplainedthatthemoneyinsidewaspreparedforhissonAndrew,whichwascrucialforhisnewbusinessacoffeeshophewasplanningtoopen.AsJimwalkedaway,hefeltasenseoffulfillmentfromdoingtherightthing,buthecontinuedtoworryabouthisownjobsearchandfinancialsituation.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Afewdayslater,Jimreceivedanunexpectedcall.Paragraph2:Jimwaspromoted(被提升)tomanagerofAndrew'scoffeeshopsoon.浙江省溫州市新力量20242025學(xué)年高二下學(xué)期6月期末英語試題閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Jimandhismotherwerevisitingthesupermarketfortheirweeklyshoppingwhenhefoundaleatherwallet.Hlepickeditupcuriouslyandfoundtherewasacoffeebeanpatternonthesurface,whichremindedhimofhisownexperienceworkingparttimeatacoffeeshopduringcollege.Besidesthat,hefoundasignificantamountof`cashandabusinesscardwithaphonenumberonit.Jimhadtoleratedapoorlifealongwithhismother.Eachmealwastheresultofhismother'shardwork.Jimhadjob.Shouldglingwithunemploymentwhileactivelysearchingforajob.ShouldIkeepthewallet?"hewondered,thethoughtoffinancialreliefcrossinghismind.“Icouldsurelyusethemoney."Yet,awaveofguiltwashedoverhim.“ButMotherwouldbeannoyedifsheknew,’hethought,holdingthewallettightly.Noticinghishesitation,Jim'smotheraskedwhatwaswrong.Hetoldheraboutthewalletandhisinternalstruggle.Withagentlebutfirmvoice,sheremindedhimofthevalues.“Wedon'tkeepwhatisn'tours,Jim.” Jim'sfaceturnedredwithamixofemotions.“"Wehavebillswithoutsteadyine,andthiscouldbeaturningpoint,"heresponded.Hismotheracknowledged(v.承認)theirdifficultiesbutencouragedhimtothinkabouttherightthingtodo,saying,“Returningitcouldbringyouunexpectedgoodluck.”Finally,withresolve,Jimdecidedtocallthenumberonthebusinesscard.Theownerwasanelderlymanwhowasverygratefulwhenhemetthemtotakethewalletback,HeexplainedthatthemoneyinsidewaspreparedforhissonAndrew,whichwascrucial(adj至關(guān)重要的)forhisnewbusinessacoffeeshophewasplanningtoopen.AsJimwalkedaway,hefeltasenseoffulfillment(n.成就感)fromdoingtherightthing,buthecontinuedtoworryabouthisownjobsearchandfinancialsituation.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Afewdayslater,Jimreceivedanunexpectedcall.Paragraph2:Jimwaspromoted(被提升)tomanagerofAndrew'scoffeeshopsoon.

1.文章分類與續(xù)寫思路分析文章類型：道德選擇型讀后續(xù)寫（主角面臨金錢誘惑與道德抉擇，最終選擇歸還錢包，后續(xù)可能因善行獲得回報）。續(xù)寫構(gòu)思：布局：第一段（接電話）：延續(xù)“善有善報”主題，電話內(nèi)容應(yīng)與錢包歸還的善行直接相關(guān)（如老人或Andrew提供工作機會）。第二段（晉升經(jīng)理）：體現(xiàn)Jim因誠信和咖啡店兼職經(jīng)驗獲得認可，解決失業(yè)困境，呼應(yīng)母親“意外好運”的預(yù)言?？蚣芴釤挘憾温浜诵氖录楦修D(zhuǎn)折銜接原文要素第一段接到電話，獲得工作機會從擔(dān)憂到希望老人提及兒子開咖啡店第二段晉升經(jīng)理，生活改善成就感與感恩Jim的咖啡店兼職經(jīng)歷實施要點：銜接原文：需提到“咖啡店”“老人兒子Andrew”“母親的話”等關(guān)鍵信息。設(shè)計巧妙點：將Jim的咖啡店經(jīng)驗與Andrew的新店需求結(jié)合，體現(xiàn)因果邏輯。續(xù)寫注意事項：事項類型具體內(nèi)容承接原文1.需提到“businesscard”“coffeeshop”“elderlyman”等關(guān)鍵詞；2.延續(xù)Jim的心理描寫（如對失業(yè)的擔(dān)憂）。整體注意事項1.保持語言風(fēng)格一致（口語化、心理描寫）；2.結(jié)局需積極，符合高考價值觀導(dǎo)向。巧妙設(shè)計1.讓Andrew的咖啡店與Jim的技能匹配；2.用母親的話“unexpectedgoodluck”作為伏筆回收。2.故事山模式與原文分析階段原文內(nèi)容續(xù)寫方向開端Jim撿到錢包，內(nèi)心掙扎。/發(fā)展母親勸導(dǎo)，Jim歸還錢包。/高潮老人透露錢用于兒子咖啡店。電話提供工作（新高潮）回落Jim感到成就但仍擔(dān)憂經(jīng)濟。晉升經(jīng)理解決困境（結(jié)局）銜接點與關(guān)鍵分析：分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句人物刻畫Jim：貧困但善良；母親：價值觀堅定。“Wedon'tkeepwhatisn'tours,Jim.”情感層次從貪婪→愧疚→堅定→成就感?！癮waveofguiltwashedoverhim”/“feltasenseoffulfillment”關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點歸還錢包是轉(zhuǎn)折點。number...withresolve,Jimdecidedtocallthenumber...”語言特色心理描寫為主，動作描寫輔助。thought...ed,thethought...crossinghismind”/“holdingthewallettightly”關(guān)鍵詞分析“coffeeshop”“businesscard”“unexpectedgoodluck”為伏筆。pattern...of...pattern...remindedhimof...parttimeatacoffeeshop”心理描寫直接展示內(nèi)心矛盾。“ShouldIkeepthewallet?”動作描寫體現(xiàn)緊張情緒。“Jim'sfaceturnedred”環(huán)境描寫無顯著環(huán)境描寫。/隱含主題善行終有回報，誠信勝過短期利益。母親的話“unexpectedgoodluck”情感轉(zhuǎn)折猶豫→羞愧→堅定→擔(dān)憂→希望?！癮mixofemotions”→“feltasenseoffulfillment”伏筆與沖突伏筆：咖啡店經(jīng)歷、老人兒子開店；沖突：經(jīng)濟困難vs道德選擇。money...money...wascrucialforhisnewbusiness—acoffeeshop”隱含線索Jim的咖啡店經(jīng)驗與Andrew需求匹配?！皉emindedhimofhisownexperience...atacoffeeshop”解決方案通過歸還錢包獲得工作機會，解決失業(yè)。需在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)（電話邀約）。續(xù)寫段落示范（符合分析框架）Paragraph1:Afewdayslater,Jimreceivedanunexpectedcall.Thevoiceonthephonewaswarmyetfamiliar—itwasAndrew,theelderlyman’sson.“Jim,yourhonestymovedmyfatherdeeply,”Andrewsaid,explainingthathiscoffeeshopneededsomeonewithbothintegrityandexperience.Jim’sheartracedasmemoriesofhiscollegeparttimejobflashedthroughhismind.“Couldyoueforaninterviewtomorrow?”Andrewasked.Hangingup,Jimglancedathismother,herearlierwordsechoing:“Returningitcouldbringyouunexpectedgoodluck.”Paragraph2:JimwaspromotedtomanagerofAndrew'scoffeeshopsoon.HisdedicationandpriorskillsimpressedAndrew,whooftenjoked,“Thatwalletbroughtmemorethanmoney—itbroughttherightperson.”ThefinancialstabilityallowedJimandhismothertobreatheeasier.Oneevening,asJimarrangedcoffeebeansintheshop,thefamiliarbeanpatternonacustomer’swalletcaughthiseye.Smiling,hehandeditbackwithouthesitation,knowingnowthatgooddeedstrulycircleback.（注：續(xù)寫緊扣“咖啡店”“錢包”“母親預(yù)言”等伏筆，情感從擔(dān)憂→希望→成就，符合故事山結(jié)構(gòu)和價值觀要求。）3.動作、心理、環(huán)境描寫例句及翻譯動作描寫（ActionDescriptions）Hepickeditupcuriously.（他好奇地撿起它。）Holdingthewallettightly,hehesitated.（他緊緊攥著錢包，猶豫不決。）Hisfingerstrembledashedialedthenumber.（撥號碼時，他的手指微微發(fā)抖。）Shepattedhisshoulderreassuringly.（她安慰地拍了拍他的肩膀。）Hehandedthewalletbackwithasmile.（他微笑著歸還了錢包。）Jim’sfaceturnedredwithembarrassment.（吉姆的臉因?qū)擂味鴿q紅。）Theelderlymanreachedouttoshakehishand.（老人伸出手和他握手。）Hesigheddeeplybeforemakingthecall.（他深深嘆了口氣，然后撥通了電話。）Shenoddedinapproval.（她贊許地點了點頭。）Jimclenchedhisfists,strugglingwiththedecision.（吉姆攥緊拳頭，內(nèi)心掙扎。）心理描寫（PsychologicalDescriptions）Awaveofguiltwashedoverhim.（一陣愧疚感涌上心頭。）Hewonderedifkeepingthemoneywasworthit.（他在想，留下這筆錢是否值得。）Thethoughtoffinancialreliefcrossedhismind.（經(jīng)濟壓力緩解的念頭閃過他的腦海。）Hefeltasenseoffulfillmentafterdoingtherightthing.（做了正確的事后，他感到一種滿足感。）Doubtgnawedathimasheconsideredhisoptions.（他在權(quán)衡選擇時，疑慮啃噬著他的心。）Hisconscienceprickedhim.（他的良心在刺痛他。）Amixofemotionsswirledinsidehim.（復(fù)雜的情緒在他內(nèi)心翻涌。）Hecouldn’tshakeoffthefeelingofunease.（他無法擺脫不安的感覺。）Relieffloodedthroughhimwhentheownerthankedhim.（當失主感謝他時，他感到一陣釋然。）Hopeflickeredinhischest.（希望在他心中閃爍。）環(huán)境描寫（EnvironmentalDescriptions）Thesupermarketbuzzedwithshoppers.（超市里擠滿了購物者，嘈雜喧鬧。）Thedimlightinginthestorecastlongshadows.（店里昏暗的燈光投下長長的影子。）Thearomaoffreshcoffeebeansfilledtheair.（新鮮的咖啡豆香氣彌漫在空氣中。）Raintappedgentlyagainstthewindow.（雨輕輕敲打著窗戶。）Thestreetlightsflickeredintheeveninggloom.（街燈在暮色中閃爍。）Achillywindsweptthroughtheemptystreet.（一陣冷風(fēng)掃過空蕩蕩的街道。）Thehumofconversationfilledthecoffeeshop.（咖啡店里充滿了交談的嗡嗡聲。）Goldensunlightstreamedthroughtheblinds.（金色的陽光透過百葉窗照射進來。）Theclatterofdishesechoedfromthekitchen.（廚房里傳來餐具碰撞的聲響。）Thescentofleatherlingeredintheair.（空氣中殘留著皮革的氣味。）4.高級替換詞&分類語料1.金錢/財富相關(guān)Basic:

money→

Advanced:

funds,savings,finances,wealth,cash例句:Hestruggledwithhis

finances

afterlosinghisjob.The

funds

inthewalletcouldsolvehisproblems.2.猶豫/糾結(jié)相關(guān)Basic:

hesitate→

Advanced:

waver,deliberate,vacillate,falter,ponder例句:He

wavered

betweenkeepingthemoneyandreturningit.After

deliberating,hedecidedtocalltheowner.3.道德/正直相關(guān)Basic:

honesty→

Advanced:

integrity,righteousness,virtue,morality,uprightness例句:His

integrity

preventedhimfromkeepingthewallet.Shevalued

morality

overshorttermgain.4.情緒/感受相關(guān)Basic:

happy→

Advanced:

elated,overjoyed,content,gratified,euphoric例句:Hefelt

gratified

afterdoingtherightthing.Shewas

overjoyed

whenshegotthejoboffer.5.工作/職業(yè)相關(guān)Basic:

job→

Advanced:

occupation,profession,career,employment,vocation例句:Hehadbeensearchingfor

employment

formonths.Hisnew

vocation

atthecoffeeshopsuitedhimwell.5.常見搭配&詞法解析固定搭配（Collocations）Strugglewithunemployment（與失業(yè)作斗爭）Awaveofguilt（一陣愧疚感）Financialrelief（經(jīng)濟壓力緩解）Makeadecision（做決定）Senseoffulfillment（滿足感）Turnanewleaf（翻開新篇章）Facedifficulties（面對困難）Unexpectedgoodluck（意外的好運）詞法解析（LexicalAnalysis）Significant(adj.)

=important,considerable反義詞:

insignificant例句:Thewalletcontaineda

significant

amountofcash.Hiscontributionwas

insignificant

inthegrandscheme.Crucial(adj.)

=critical,vital反義詞:

trivial例句:Themoneywas

crucial

forAndrew’sbusiness.Themistakewas

trivial

andeasilyfixed.Acknowledge(v.)

=admit,recognize反義詞:

deny例句:She

acknowledged

theirfinancialstruggles.He

denied

takingthemoney.

PossibleVersions(4)Version1Paragraph1:Afewdayslater,Jimreceivedanunexpectedcall.Tohissurprise,itwasAndrew—theelderlyman'sson.Withafriendlytone,AndrewsaidhehadheardaboutJim’shonestyfromhisfatherandwasdeeplytouched.“Peoplelikeyouarerarethesedays,”headded.HementionedhewasshortofstaffforhisnewcoffeeshopandaskedwhetherJimwouldbeinterestedingivingitatry.Theofferseemedalmosttoogoodtobetrue,butJim,bothexcitedandgrateful(adj短語做主語補語),acceptedwithouthesitation.DeterminednottoletAndrewdown(過去分詞做adj主語補語),Jimpouredhisheartintotheworkfromdayone.Herearrangedthelayoutoftheshopforbettercustomerflow,remendedafewnewdrinks,andtreatedeverycustomerwithgenuinecare(動作串并列).Slowly,theshopbegantoseemoreregularcustomers,andJimregainedasenseofconfidencehehadn’tfeltinalongtime.Paragraph2:JimwaspromotedtomanagerofAndrew'scoffeeshopsoon.AndrewhadbeenobservingJim’sperformancesilentlyandwasimpressedbyhisdedicationandabilitytobringwarmthtotheworkplace.UnderJim’smanagement,theshopnotonlysawasteadyriseininebutalsoearnedglowingreviewsfromcustomers.Jimmadesureeveryemployeefeltvaluedandcreatedapositiveworkingenvironment.Oneevening,ashelockeduptheshopandlookedattheglowingsignboard,Jimrecalledhishesitationbackwhenhefirstpickedupthewallet.Hismother’swordsechoedagaininhismind,remindinghimthatdoingtherightthing(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作),evenwhenit’shard,alwaysbringslight.Now,notonlydidhehaveastablejob,butalsoarenewedbeliefinhimself,builtonhonesty,effort,andhope(過去分詞做后置定語).Version2Paragraph1:Afewdayslater,Jimreceivedanunexpectedcall.ThecallcamefromAndrew,whointroducedhimselfastheownerofthecoffeeshopJimhadindirectlyhelped.HesaidheadmiredJim’ssenseofresponsibilityandwonderedifJimwouldbewillingtojointheteam.“Weneedsomeonetrustworthylikeyou,”hesaidsincerely.Jimwasoverwhelmed—hehadbeenstrugglingtofindajobforweeks.Withoutmuchhesitation,heagreed.Onhisfirstday,Jimarrivedearly,carefullycleanedthecounters,andgreetedeachcustomerwithasmile(動詞并列).Heevenhelpeddesignasimpleloyaltycardsystem,drawingfrom(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作)whathe’dlearnedduringcollege.Andrewnoticedhisquietinitiativeandworkethic.Thoughthedayswerelongandtiring,Jimfelthopefulagain—hewasfinallypartofsomethingmeaningful.Paragraph2:JimwaspromotedtomanagerofAndrew'scoffeeshopsoon.Onerainyafternoon,AndrewhandedJimanametagwiththeword“Manager”onitandsaid,“You’vemorethanearnedthis.”Jimhelditforasecond,feelingtheweightofresponsibility—butalsoofpride(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作)Hisconsistenteffort,patience,andproblemsolvingskills(名詞并列)graduallyearnedAndrew’sfulltrust.WithJimincharge,theshopbegantorunmoresmoothly,andcustomersoftenreturnedjusttochatwithhim.Hetrainednewstaff,handledplaintswithcalmprofessionalism,andkeptthinkingofwaystoimprove(動詞短語并列)..Lookingback(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作),herealizedthatasingleactofhonestyhadnotonlyhelpedsomeoneelse,buthadalsorewrittenhisownstory,justashismotherhadbelieveditwould.語言表達與寫作亮點參考類別范文亮點表達同義/替換建議地道搭配pouredhisheartintothework；earnedglowingreviews；handleplaintswithcalmprofessionalismdevotedhimselfto；wonconsistentpraise；resolveissuespatiently高中語法點非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)：Determinednottolet...虛擬條件句：Ifhehadn’treturnedthatwallet,noneofthiswould’vehappened.強調(diào)句、倒裝、it作形式主語等情緒描寫overwhelmed,hesitant,grateful,hopeful,pride,renewedbeliefthrilled→elated；grateful→appreciative；pride→senseofachievement動作描寫arrivedearly,cleanedthecounters,trainedstaff,handledplaintsopenedearly,restockedshelves,offeredhelp佳句積累“You’vemorethanearnedthis.”“Asingleactofhonestyhadrewrittenhisownstory.”“Thisismorethanajob—it’swhoyouare.”“Integritylitthepathwheneverythingelsewasdark.”Version3Paragraph1:Afewdayslater,Jimreceivedanunexpectedcall.ItwasAndrew,whoexplainedhisfatherhadtoldhimeverythingaboutthewallet.“Irespectyourhonesty,”hesaid.“We’rehiring.Wouldyouliketoeinforaninterview?”Jimhesitatedforamoment,butthenagreed.Theinterviewwentsmoothly,thankstohispreviousparttimeexperience.However,startingfromthelowestposition(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做主語)wastough—Jimhadtocleanspills,memorizedozensofdrinks,anddealwithimpatientcustomers(動作串并列).Still,hestayedmitted.Hisperseverancedidn’tgounnoticed.Andrewoftensawhimstayinglatetohelpothers.Afterclosingoneevening,Andrewapproachedhim,smiling(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作).“I’vebeenwatchingyou.Let’stalkaboutyourfuture.”Paragraph2:JimwaspromotedtomanagerofAndrew'scoffeeshopsoon.Hispromotionwasn’tjustareward,butarecognitionofhisintegrityandhardwork.Jimintroducedweeklytrainingsessionsandredesignedthecustomerloyaltysystem.Underhisguidance,theshop’srevenuesteadilyincreased.Morethanthat,hebecamearolemodelfortheyoungerstaff.Sometimes,suggestedbyhismother(過去分詞短語做原因狀語),Jimstillthoughtofthatmomentwhenthewalletwasinhishandandthewordsfromhismother.Choosinghonesty(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做主語)hadseemedfoolishthen,butnow,heknewitwasthebestdecisionhehadevermade.Lifehadn’tsuddenlybeeeasy,butithadbeemeaningful.Thesmileonhismother’sfacesaiditall.語言亮點分析類別示例表達同義/升級詞匯/短語地道搭配staymitted