UNIT3寫作能力提升練假如你校有幾位來自美國(guó)的交換生，他們打算周末步行去濱湖公園。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示為他們寫出前往路線，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹公園的情況。提示:1.路線見下圖；2.公園環(huán)境優(yōu)美，人們可以去公園游泳、野餐。要求:80~100詞。［審題指導(dǎo)］1.體裁：說明文2.人稱：以第二、三人稱為主3.時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主［思路點(diǎn)撥］BinhuParkisnotfarfromhere.It’seasytogetthere.Justgostraightandturnrightatthefirstcorner.Walkalongtheroadandturnleftwhenyoufindahospital.BinhuParkisdownthestreetonyourright.Acrossfromtheparkisarestaurant.Theparkisreallyagoodplacetohavefun.It’sbeautifulwithmanytreesandflowers.Youcanswim,playgamesandhaveapicnicthere.It’sveryrelaxing.YoumayalsogetachancetopracticeChinese.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourselves.［精彩范文］1.本文思路清晰，采用了三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，即開篇引出話題，之后描述路線，最后對(duì)公園進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)介及評(píng)價(jià)。2.連接詞運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，尤其是and,when的運(yùn)用為作文增彩。3.正確運(yùn)用一些短語，比如：farfrom,gostraight,turnright,turnleft，acrossfrom，havefun，haveapicnic，enjoyyourselves等使文章更加豐富精彩。4.文中時(shí)間狀語從句、賓語從句以及句式It’seasyto...,It’sbeautifulwith...等的運(yùn)用成為文章的加分點(diǎn)。高分點(diǎn)評(píng)：下面句子均有1、2處錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)找出并改正。1.LilywassinginginthemusicroomwhenIwaspassingby.________________________________________________2.Itiseasyformefindthebookstore.______________________________________________LilywassinginginthemusicroomwhenIpassedby.Itiseasyformetofindthebookstore.3.I’mlookingforwardtohearfromyou.______________________________________4.Hedoesn’tknowwhattimewillthemeetingstarts._____________________________________________5.Thetrainstationisclosedtothepostoffice._______________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Hedoesn'tknowwhattimethemeetingwillstart.Thetrainstationisclosetothepostoffice.假如你是李華，你了解到今年暑期意大利佛羅倫薩美術(shù)學(xué)院將會(huì)舉辦線上美術(shù)訓(xùn)練營(yíng)，為了申請(qǐng)?jiān)撜n程，請(qǐng)你用英語寫一封郵件向?qū)Ψ降闹鞴芾蠋熢儐栒n程的相關(guān)信息。內(nèi)容包括:1.課程時(shí)間；2.授課老師信息；

3.活動(dòng)介紹；4.考核方式。要求:80~100詞（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSir/Madam,Iknowfromyourwebsitethatyouwillorganizeanonlinearttrainingcampthissummer,soI’mwritingtoI’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【思路分析】首段點(diǎn)題——表達(dá)申請(qǐng)?jiān)撚?xùn)練營(yíng)課程的目的，以便引起下文。第二段具體詢問課程時(shí)間、授課老師信息、有無活動(dòng)以及考核方式等。最后表達(dá)期望盡快收到對(duì)方的回信。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSir/Madam，Iknowfromyourwebsitethatyouwillorganizeanonlinearttrainingcampthissummer,soI'mwritingtoaskforsomeinformationaboutthecamp.Firstly,asabigfanofart,I'mveryexcitedabouttheevent,socouldyoupleasesendmethescheduleofthecourse?ThenI'mabletoplanmytimeproperlyandgetreadyforit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Secondly,wouldyoumindprovidingsomeinformationabouttheteachersorartistswhoaregoingtogivethecourse?Thirdly,mayIknow