21世紀(jì)教育網(wǎng)精品試卷·第2頁（共2頁）【2024年中考英語真題滿分作文精選】熱點(diǎn)話題01個(gè)人情況類（一）（2024·江蘇蘇州·中考真題）你校EnglishReadingClub正在組織一次英文小說讀書分享會(huì)，本周閱讀內(nèi)容為Auggie’sStory（閱讀D篇）。請(qǐng)從以下兩個(gè)標(biāo)題中任選一個(gè)，寫一篇英文讀后感。選擇一：以Sometimespeoplesurpriseus為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對(duì)這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。選擇二：以Troubleisafriend為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對(duì)這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；2．請(qǐng)先填寫你所選的標(biāo)題，再寫文章；3．照抄閱讀語篇不得分；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。Title:____________AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）（2024·天津·中考真題）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的筆友Peter用英文寫一封郵件，向他講述你班同學(xué)王紅所做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?。?）上周四，王紅在回家途中看到一位上年紀(jì)的盲人在街角徘徊。（2）王紅與老人交流后，主動(dòng)幫他過馬路。（3）路上的司機(jī)都停下車耐心等候。（4）王紅將老人帶到馬路對(duì)面并向他告別。（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：盲人

blindman

徘徊

wander要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearPeter,Itistwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua（三）（2024·四川達(dá)州·中考真題）贈(zèng)人玫瑰手有余香。幫助別人自己會(huì)感到快樂，得到別人的幫助更是一種幸運(yùn)。假設(shè)你校正舉辦以“我身邊的好人好事”為主題的英語征文比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“AnUnforgettableDay”為題用英語寫一篇記敘文。內(nèi)容提示：1.時(shí)間

2.地點(diǎn)

3.人物

4.事件

5.感受寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。3.不少于90詞（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。AnUnforgettableDay________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）（2024·四川自貢·中考真題）學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在舉辦主題為“改變我的一個(gè)人”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合初中三年的經(jīng)歷，以“APersonWhoChangesMeaLot”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡(jiǎn)介(外貌，性格等)；2.他/她改變你的事件。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.短文標(biāo)題已寫好。APersonWhoChangesMeaLot________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）（2024·吉林長春·中考真題）每個(gè)人都有自己的閃光點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)以“MyShiningPoint”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。要求：（1）講述一個(gè)自己的故事；（2）你的感悟；（3）適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，行文連貫；（4）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（六）（2024·內(nèi)蒙古赤峰·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李華，今年端午節(jié)期間，你學(xué)習(xí)了包粽子（zongzi）。請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下表格內(nèi)容提示，給你的朋友Peter寫一封英文電子郵件，分享你學(xué)習(xí)包粽子的經(jīng)歷。HowIlearned…HowImadeIngredients&Tools●rice,beans,dates(棗)…●leaf(leaves),string(細(xì)繩),potStepswash...keep…inthewaterforhoursmakeaconeshape(圓錐體)with…put…intotheconetie…boil…overlowheat…HowIfelt…要求：1.必須包含表格中所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。DearPeter,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareaninterestingexperiencewithyou.DuringtheDragonBoatFestivalthisyear,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua（七）（2024·吉林·中考真題）當(dāng)我們遇到自己無法解決的問題或煩惱時(shí)，應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)積極向他人尋求幫助。請(qǐng)以“AskingforHelp”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：（1）積極應(yīng)對(duì)問題或煩惱的必要性；（2）尋求幫助的益處；（3）結(jié)合生活經(jīng)歷，簡(jiǎn)述你或他人尋求幫助的一個(gè)事例；（4）提供尋求幫助的方法(至少兩個(gè))。寫作要求：（1）語言流暢，層次清晰，內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）詞數(shù)90—100，開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（3）書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；（4）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生姓名和學(xué)校名稱。AskingforHelpTheremightbesomeproblemsorworriesinlife._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（八）（2024·河南·中考真題）在日常學(xué)習(xí)中，有的學(xué)生喜歡獨(dú)自學(xué)習(xí)，有的則喜歡和大家一起學(xué)習(xí)。你更喜歡哪一種學(xué)習(xí)方式？?？⒄Z專欄正在以“Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?”為題開展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要求，結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，從以下兩種學(xué)習(xí)方式中任選其一，用英語寫一篇短文，陳述你的理由，向?qū)谕陡?。StudyingaloneStudyingwithagroupsolveproblemsonmyowngethelpfromotherskeepmymindonschoolworkshareideaswithgroupmembers寫作要求：1．文中須包含所選學(xué)習(xí)方式的要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3．詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Studyingaloneorstudyingwithagroup?Somestudentsliketostudyalone.Othersenjoystudyingwithagroup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（九）（2024·云南·中考真題）你校?？⒄Z專欄正在開展以“GettingClosetoNature”為題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)谕陡?，敘述一次你接近自然的?jīng)歷及感悟（如郊游、研學(xué)、勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐等），或談?wù)劷咏匀坏暮锰?。要求?.根據(jù)所給題目，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于80；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十）（2024·山東濱州·中考真題）生活中有很多值得我們珍惜的東西，如時(shí)間、健康、親人、生命等。假設(shè)你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在開展以“珍惜”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷用英語寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.你珍惜什么；2.描述你的一次經(jīng)歷；3.談?wù)勥@次經(jīng)歷帶給你的收獲。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名；3.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Therearemanyimportantthingsthatareworthvaluinginourdailylives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十一）（2024·吉林長春·中考真題）新西蘭某中學(xué)現(xiàn)招募志愿者，為其參加“漢語橋”(ChineseBridge)中文演講比賽的選手進(jìn)行線上輔導(dǎo)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語寫一封不少于40詞的自薦信。要點(diǎn)：（1）表達(dá)意愿；（2）說明優(yōu)勢(shì)。要求：要點(diǎn)齊全；表述通順；簡(jiǎn)潔得體。DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（十二）（2024·山東臨沂·中考真題）假定你是李平，請(qǐng)根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容，用英語給Eric回復(fù)。HiLiPing,Youmentionedyourdreamjobinyourlastletter.I’mreallyinterestedinit.Whydidyouchooseit?What/Whoinfluencedyoutomakethedecision?Tellmeyourexperience,please.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon!Eric要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。DearEric,Thanksforyoure-mail.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing（十三）（2024·黑龍江·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李雷，請(qǐng)寫一篇邀請(qǐng)函。邀請(qǐng)你的好朋友John本周日晚六點(diǎn)來參加你的生日派對(duì)，你家住在新華路25號(hào)，在派對(duì)上你們將會(huì)唱歌、做游戲、吃美食。注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則不得分。DearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十四）（2024·貴州·中考真題）成長的道路上，我們努力改變以提升自我。假如你是李華，你校英語廣播站正在開展主題為“TheChangeMadeMe...”（改變讓我……）的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)參考圖文信息，積極投稿。要求：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；2.內(nèi)容積極向上，不少于80詞；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十五）（2024·安徽·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李輝，上周你在學(xué)校舉行的“消防安全日”活動(dòng)中學(xué)會(huì)了滅火器的使用方法。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下圖信息，寫一篇英語短文，給校英文報(bào)投稿。要點(diǎn):1.活動(dòng)目的；2.滅火器的使用方法；3.你的體會(huì)。注意:1.短文須包含上述要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)80~100（首句已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Lastweek,ourschoolcarriedoutFireSafetyDayactivities.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2024年中考英語真題滿分作文精選】熱點(diǎn)話題01個(gè)人情況類（一）（2024·江蘇蘇州·中考真題）你校EnglishReadingClub正在組織一次英文小說讀書分享會(huì)，本周閱讀內(nèi)容為Auggie’sStory（閱讀D篇）。請(qǐng)從以下兩個(gè)標(biāo)題中任選一個(gè)，寫一篇英文讀后感。選擇一：以Sometimespeoplesurpriseus為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對(duì)這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。選擇二：以Troubleisafriend為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對(duì)這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；2．請(qǐng)先填寫你所選的標(biāo)題，再寫文章；3．照抄閱讀語篇不得分；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。Title:____________AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Title:TroubleisafriendAfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.AndIthinktroubleisafriend.Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.InmyEnglishstudylastyear,mygrammarwasverybad.Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.Butthankstothehelpofmydeskmate,shehelpedmemakeagrammarstudyscheduleandhelpedmewithgrammareveryweek.AndIspentanhourstudyinggrammareveryday.Intheend,mygrammarimprovedgreatly.Inmyopinion,troubleisbad,butitsometimesmakesusbetter.Itremindsusnottogiveupwhenfacingdifficultiesandtofacethembravely.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：選擇一個(gè)話題完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，請(qǐng)先填寫你所選的標(biāo)題并介紹你對(duì)這句話的理解；第二步，結(jié)合實(shí)際生活舉例說明；第三步，最后表達(dá)你得到的啟發(fā)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thanksto多虧②helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事③inmyopinion在我看來[高分句型]①Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.（表語從句，讓步狀語從句）②Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.（原因狀語從句）（二）（2024·天津·中考真題）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的筆友Peter用英文寫一封郵件，向他講述你班同學(xué)王紅所做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?。?）上周四，王紅在回家途中看到一位上年紀(jì)的盲人在街角徘徊。（2）王紅與老人交流后，主動(dòng)幫他過馬路。（3）路上的司機(jī)都停下車耐心等候。（4）王紅將老人帶到馬路對(duì)面并向他告別。（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：盲人

blindman

徘徊

wander要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearPeter,Itistwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,Itistwoweekssinceyouwrotetome.I’mwritingtotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmateWangHong.LastThursday,WangHongsawanelderlyblindmanwanderingaroundthestreetcorneronherwayhome.WangHongofferedtohelphimcrosstheroadaftercommunicatingwiththeoldman.Whentheycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.WangHongtooktheoldmanacrosstheroadandsaidgoodbyetohim.IthinkWangHongisreallyaverywarm-heartedandkindgirl.Ishouldlearnfromherandtrymybesttohelpothers.Whatdoyouthinkofthestory?Waitingforyourreply!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：以“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，具體介紹王紅所做的好事；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①onherwayhome在她回家的路上②offertodosth主動(dòng)提出做某事③communicatewith溝通④learnfrom向某人學(xué)習(xí)[高分句型]①Whentheycrossedtheroad,thedriversontheroadstoppedtheircarsandwaitedpatiently.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②IthinkWangHongisreallyaverywarm-heartedandkindgirl.（省略that的賓語從句）（三）（2024·四川達(dá)州·中考真題）贈(zèng)人玫瑰手有余香。幫助別人自己會(huì)感到快樂，得到別人的幫助更是一種幸運(yùn)。假設(shè)你校正舉辦以“我身邊的好人好事”為主題的英語征文比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“AnUnforgettableDay”為題用英語寫一篇記敘文。內(nèi)容提示：1.時(shí)間

2.地點(diǎn)

3.人物

4.事件

5.感受寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。3.不少于90詞（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。AnUnforgettableDay________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableDayAsthesayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”Inourdailylife,wewillmeetwithalotoftrouble.Soitisnecessaryforustohelpthosewhoareintrouble.Here’smyunforgettabledayofhelpingothers.MyclassmateJasonwasilllastweek.Hehadtobeinhospital,soItriedmybesttohelphim.YesterdaywasSaturday,andmyclassmatesandIwenttoseehimtogether.Wegavehimsomeflowers,becausefreshandbeautifulflowerscouldmakehimfeelgoodandhappy.What’smore,JasonaskedmesomequestionsaboutstudyandIbroughthimmynotebooks.Iwaspatienttoanswerhisquestionsallthetime.Ihopehecanbebettersoon.Ilikehelpingothers.Firstly,helpingothersmakesmehappy.Secondly,helpingothersisalsohelpingmyself.Allinall,ahelpfulpersoniswelcomedeverywhere.Iwilltrymybesttohelpothersinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求以“AnUnforgettableDay”為題，根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，具體介紹那天的經(jīng)歷；第三步，表達(dá)感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①introuble處困難中②What’smore此外③allthetime一直[高分句型]①Soitisnecessaryforustohelpthosewhoareintrouble.（who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Wegavehimsomeflowers,becausefreshandbeautifulflowerscouldmakehimfeelgoodandhappy.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）（四）（2024·四川自貢·中考真題）學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在舉辦主題為“改變我的一個(gè)人”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合初中三年的經(jīng)歷，以“APersonWhoChangesMeaLot”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡(jiǎn)介(外貌，性格等)；2.他/她改變你的事件。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.短文標(biāo)題已寫好。APersonWhoChangesMeaLot____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文APersonWhoChangesMeaLotInthepastthreeyears,myEnglishteacherMrsXuhaveplayedanimportantroleinmylife.Shechangesmealot.Sheisofmediumheight.Shealwayshasasmileonherface.Sheiskindtous.WhenIwasaseventh-gradestudent,IwasweakinEnglish.IwasafraidofspeakingEnglishinfrontoftheclassmates.OurschoolheldanEnglishspeechcompetition.SheencouragedmetotakepartinitandgavemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Shegavemethestrengthtoovercomethedifficulty.Withherhelp,Ifinishedthespeechsuccessfullyandwonthethirdplace.Fromthenon,IbecameinterestedinEnglishandmadegreatprogress.Thanktoher,IrealizethatIshouldfacethedifficultiesbravely.AslongasIworkhard,Iwillsucceed.【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)”；

③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。

[寫作步驟]

第一步，介紹改變自己的人是誰；

第二步，介紹她對(duì)自己的影響。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①playarolein在……中扮演角色

②beofmediumheight中等身材③beweakin不擅長④beafraidofdoingsth害怕做某事⑤takepartin參加[高分句型]①SheencouragedmetotakepartinitandgavemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.（疑問詞+動(dòng)詞不定式結(jié)構(gòu)）②AslongasIworkhard,Iwillsucceed.（條件狀語從句）（五）（2024·吉林長春·中考真題）每個(gè)人都有自己的閃光點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)以“MyShiningPoint”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。要求：（1）講述一個(gè)自己的故事；（2）你的感悟；（3）適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，行文連貫；（4）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyShiningPointImeetmanyexcellentpeopleeverydayandatthesametimeIalsofindmyselfreallygood.Icanseetheworldwithkindeyes.IthinkIdon’tliketocomplain.Ifinditimportanttohaveapositiveattitude.Lastmonth,IwaschosentoplayaroleinanEnglishshow.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizethelinesinashorttime.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.SoImadeanefforttopractice.Finally,Imadeitandreceivedhighpraise.Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)；③提示：以“MyShiningPoint”為題并結(jié)合提示進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，簡(jiǎn)要說明自己有哪些閃光點(diǎn)；第二步，講述一個(gè)自己的故事；第三步，介紹自己的感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①atthesametime同時(shí)②playarolein在……中扮演角色③regard…as把……當(dāng)作[高分句型]①However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.(which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)②Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)（六）（2024·內(nèi)蒙古赤峰·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李華，今年端午節(jié)期間，你學(xué)習(xí)了包粽子（zongzi）。請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下表格內(nèi)容提示，給你的朋友Peter寫一封英文電子郵件，分享你學(xué)習(xí)包粽子的經(jīng)歷。HowIlearned…HowImadeIngredients&Tools●rice,beans,dates(棗)…●leaf(leaves),string(細(xì)繩),potStepswash...keep…inthewaterforhoursmakeaconeshape(圓錐體)with…put…intotheconetie…boil…overlowheat…HowIfelt…要求：1.必須包含表格中所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。DearPeter,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareaninterestingexperiencewithyou.DuringtheDragonBoatFestivalthisyear,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________