2026屆新高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)2025年全國(guó)I卷讀后續(xù)寫

一塊道歉餅干的和解魔法Studentscanworkoutanoutlinebasedontheanalysisofthesampletextandcompletethewriting.Studentscanrealisethesignificanceofthestory--“understandingandforgiveness”.Studentscan

accumulate(積累)

usefulexpressionandapplythemproperly.Teachingobjectives213LeadinDoyouhavesiblings(兄弟；姐妹)?Howdoyousettleaconflictwithyoursiblings?Pre-writing：readtheoriginalstory2025年新高考I卷

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

Pre-writing：analyzethestory2025年新高考I卷

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

1.圈出主要角色Pre-writing：analyzethetext

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

1.圈出主要角色2.了解故事開(kāi)端Pre-writing：analyzethetext

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

2.了解故事開(kāi)端3.梳理文章主線3.梳理文章主線(conflict-solution)Conflict1(Para2)MybrotherchosetobringhisdogTobyhecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.Solution1

IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Conflict2(Para4)Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse.Solution2

Mybrotherdecidedtoleave.Conflict3(Para5)Solution3

Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycame—“Notachance.”Conflict4

(Para6)Solution4

MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,Iresisted.情節(jié)線+情感線

【雙線并行】3.梳理文章主線(conflict-solution)Conflict1

MybrotherchosetobringhisdogTobyhecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.Solution1

IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Conflict2

Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse.Solution2

Mybrotherdecidedtoleave.Conflict3

Solution3

Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycame—“Notachance.”Conflict4

Solution4

MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,Iresisted.Happy;expectantAwkwardConcerned;worriedStubborn情節(jié)線+情感線

【雙線并行】未解決的矛盾，也是最大的矛盾Conflict5(para6)Myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Solution5Guilty;understanding情節(jié)線+情感線

【雙線并行】續(xù)寫套路——十句五定法(續(xù)寫詞數(shù)150詞左右，我們可以兩個(gè)段落共續(xù)寫10句，每段續(xù)寫5句，每句15詞左右，這其中有5句可以按照套路基本確定寫作內(nèi)容)Para1Para2句1句6句2句7句3句8句4句9句5句10（銜接到Para1首句）（銜接Para2句首句）（過(guò)渡到Para2首句）（故事結(jié)局、正能量）主旨升華細(xì)節(jié)描寫細(xì)節(jié)描寫Thinktoplanyourplot.Para1:I

realized

itwasmewhowasatfault.Para2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.Whatwasmyfault?WhatdidIdecidedtodoafterIrealizedmyfault?Whatdidmywifesuggest?WhatpreparationdidmywifeandImake?Tip:Infertheplotbymakingquestions(what...how...why...)Whatwasmyfeeling?Whatwasmybrother’sreaction?WhatdidIdoandsay?Whatwastheending?WhatlessondidIlearn?MyhomeI;

MywifeMybrother’shomeI;MybrotherTobbyWhile-writing：writethestoryPara1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.1.我是如此的自私以至于我只關(guān)注了孩子們的安全，完全忽略了哥哥的感受。

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2.內(nèi)疚又羞愧，我獨(dú)自坐在后院的長(zhǎng)椅上，雙手掩面哭泣。

.3.盡管我很后悔，我卻不知道做什么來(lái)彌補(bǔ)我的錯(cuò)誤。.4.意識(shí)到我的困惑和難過(guò)，我的妻子主動(dòng)做了一些餅干作為禮物給我哥哥。.5.

受到妻子鼓勵(lì)，我增強(qiáng)了道歉的決心，前往哥哥家。

.While-writing：writethestoryPara2:Withthebiscuits

mywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybtother’sdoor.6.我深呼一口氣，鼓起勇氣敲門，心在胸口緊張地怦怦跳。

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7.過(guò)了一會(huì)，門開(kāi)了，哥哥出現(xiàn)，Toby激動(dòng)地跳向前，搖著尾巴。(wagtail)

.8.我抓住機(jī)會(huì)遞上餅干，表達(dá)我真誠(chéng)的道歉和深深的遺憾，聲音略微顫抖。.

9.令我驚訝的是，哥哥走近我并且溫柔地拍拍我的肩膀，與我緊緊相擁。.10.這次寶貴的經(jīng)歷深深根植在我的心里，這會(huì)經(jīng)常提醒我理解和愛(ài)的力量。

.While-writing：writethestoryPara1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.1.我是如此的自私以至于我只關(guān)注了孩子們的安全，完全忽略了哥哥的感受。

.

2.內(nèi)疚又羞愧，我獨(dú)自坐在后院的長(zhǎng)椅上，雙手掩面哭泣。

.3.盡管我很后悔，我卻不知道做什么來(lái)彌補(bǔ)我的錯(cuò)誤。.4.意識(shí)到我的困惑和難過(guò)，我的妻子主動(dòng)做了一些餅干作為禮物給我哥哥。.5.

受到妻子鼓勵(lì)，我增強(qiáng)了道歉的決心，前往哥哥家。

.SoselfishwasIthatIonlyfocusedonthechildren’ssafety,completelyignoringmybrother’sfeeling.

Guiltyandashamed,Isataloneonthebenchinthebackyard,sobbingwithmyfaceinmyhands.RegretfulasIwas,Iwastotallyatalosswhattodotomakeupformymistake.Sensingmyconfusionandgrief,mywifeofferedtocooksomebiscuitsasagiftformybrother.

Encouragedbymywife,Istrengthenedmydeterminationtoapologizeandheadedformybrother’shouse.While-writing：writethestoryPara2:Withthebiscuits

mywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybtother’sdoor.6.我深呼一口氣，鼓起勇氣敲門，心在胸口緊張地怦怦跳。

.

7.過(guò)了一會(huì)，門開(kāi)了，哥哥出現(xiàn)，Toby激動(dòng)地跳向前，搖著尾巴。(wagtail)

.8.我抓住機(jī)會(huì)遞上餅干，表達(dá)我真誠(chéng)的道歉和深深的遺憾，聲音略微顫抖。.

9.令我驚訝的是，哥哥走近我并且溫柔地拍拍我的肩膀，與我緊緊相擁。.10.這次